八年级英语上期末期末专项复习写作训练-教学PPT课件.pptx

1、期末专项复习写作训练A.常见题型：常见题型：talk in your group 1 1、根据、根据汉语汉语提示完成作文。提示完成作文。 2 2、根据、根据表格表格提示完成作文。提示完成作文。 3 3、根据、根据图片图片提示完成作文。提示完成作文。 要求：写一篇要求：写一篇60-60-8080字左右字左右的英语作文。的英语作文。B.写作策略写作策略: :please, remember!审审 列列 整整 连连 美美草稿纸草稿纸 抄抄试卷试卷 Introduce your friend 假如假如Lily是是你最好的朋友，请你从以下几个方你最好的朋友，请你从以下几个方面向大家介绍她：面向大家介绍她

2、：（1）和你一样高；大眼睛黑头发。和你一样高；大眼睛黑头发。（2）与你爱好相同，都喜欢运动；每周锻炼三次；与你爱好相同，都喜欢运动；每周锻炼三次；有时上网；喜欢看英文电影。有时上网；喜欢看英文电影。（3）乐于助人，帮你）乐于助人，帮你学数学。学数学。（4）聪明，）聪明，在校学习努力，在校学习努力，成绩好。应向她学习。成绩好。应向她学习。认真认真审题审题，分析背景分析背景,找出文章要表达找出文章要表达的中心。的中心。写作第一步写作第一步英语书面表达写作技巧英语书面表达写作技巧 Introduce your friend 假如假如Lily是是你最好的朋友，请你从以下几个方面你最好的朋友，请你从以下

3、几个方面向大家介绍她：向大家介绍她：（1）和你一样高；大眼睛黑头发。和你一样高；大眼睛黑头发。（2）与你爱好相同，都喜欢运动；每周锻炼三次；与你爱好相同，都喜欢运动；每周锻炼三次；有时上网；喜欢看英文电影。有时上网；喜欢看英文电影。（3）乐于助人，帮你）乐于助人，帮你学数学。学数学。（4）聪明，在校学习努力，）聪明，在校学习努力，成绩好。成绩好。应向她学习。应向她学习。英语书面表达写作技巧审审文章背景文章背景 人称：人称：第三人称第三人称sheshe“简单描述简单描述”一般现在时一般现在时 用用核心词汇或短语核心词汇或短语列出列出文章要点。文章要点。列列写作第二步英语书面表达写作技巧英语书面表

4、达写作技巧 Introduce your friend 假如假如Lily是是你你最好的朋友最好的朋友，请你从以下几个方面，请你从以下几个方面向大家介绍她：向大家介绍她：（1）和你一样高和你一样高；大眼睛黑头发大眼睛黑头发。（2）与你爱好相同与你爱好相同，都喜欢运动都喜欢运动； 每周锻炼三次每周锻炼三次；有时；有时上网上网； 喜欢看英文电影喜欢看英文电影。英语书面表达写作技巧列列best friendas tall as me, big eyes,black hairhave the same hobby as me,both like doing sports,exercise three t

5、imes a week, use the Internet,enjoy/like watching English movies Introduce your friend 假如假如Lily是是你最好的朋友，请你从以下几个方面你最好的朋友，请你从以下几个方面向大家介绍她：向大家介绍她：（1）和你一样高；大眼睛黑头发。）和你一样高；大眼睛黑头发。（2）与你爱好相同，都喜欢运动；每周锻炼三次；）与你爱好相同，都喜欢运动；每周锻炼三次； 有时上网；喜欢看英文电影。有时上网；喜欢看英文电影。（3）乐于助人乐于助人，帮你帮你学数学学数学。（4）聪明聪明，在校学习努力在校学习努力，成绩好成绩好。应向她学习

6、应向她学习。英语书面表达写作技巧列列be ready to help others, help me with mathclever/smart,get/have good grades,work/study hard at school, learn from her将列出的将列出的核心词汇或短语核心词汇或短语整理整理成句子成句子,使使结构完整，结构完整，符合表达习惯符合表达习惯。写作第三步写作第三步英语书面表达写作技巧英语书面表达写作技巧她她 她有她有 Lily is my best friend.She is as tall as me. She has big eyes and bla

7、ck hair. 整整她她 我们我们 并且并且我们我们我们我们一起一起我们都我们都She has the same hobby as me, we both like doing and we exercise three times a week.sports,We sometimes use the internet together.We both like watching English movies. (0)Lily是是我最好的朋友。我最好的朋友。(1) 和我和我一样高，一样高， 大眼睛黑头发。大眼睛黑头发。(2) 与我与我爱好相同，爱好相同， 都喜欢运动，都喜欢运动， 每周每周锻

8、炼三次。锻炼三次。 有时有时 上网，上网， 喜欢看英文喜欢看英文电影。电影。整整她她She is ready to help others. she often helps me with math. she always gets good grades. She is very smart and she studies hard at school.I should learn from her.她经常她经常她很她很并且并且她她她她我我(3) 乐于助人，乐于助人， 帮我学数学。帮我学数学。(4) 聪明，聪明， 在校学习努力，在校学习努力， 成绩好。成绩好。 应向她学习。应向她学习。 连连

9、 恰当运用恰当运用关联关联词句，使得文词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。写作第四步：写作第四步：英语书面表达写作技巧英语书面表达写作技巧1.表示并列或递进表示并列或递进: and, bothand; not onlybut also, neithernor;2.表示条件表示条件: if3.表示顺序表示顺序: first , next，then, finally; 4.表示因果表示因果: because, so;5.表示选择表示选择: or, eitheror;6.表示解释表示解释: for example, such as;7.表示转折表示转折: but,

10、 however, Lily is my best friend. She is as tall as me. She has big eyes and black hair. She has the same hobby as me. we both like doing sports. and we exercise three times a week. We sometimes use the internet together. we both like watching English movies. She is ready to help others. she often h

11、elps me with math. She is very smart and she studies hard at school. she always gets good grades. I should learn from her.连连Whats more,美美 修改词句，美化美化文章。在有把握的情况下改变句式或添加语句，展示自己的语言功底。写作第五步：写作第五步：英语书面表达写作技巧英语书面表达写作技巧Lily is my best friend. She is as tall as me. She has big eyes and black hair. She has the

12、 same hobby as me. we both like doing sports. and we exercise three times a week. We sometimes use the internet together. Whats more, we both like watching English movies. She is ready to help others. she often helps me with math. She is very smart and she studies hard at school. Though she sometime

13、s goes online，she always gets good grades. I should learn from her.美美适当发挥She is not only friendly but also ready to help others. (转变表达方式)将草稿认真将草稿认真抄写抄写到答题纸上，到答题纸上，一定注意一定注意书写的注意事项书写的注意事项。写作第六步写作第六步英语书面表达写作技巧英语书面表达写作技巧Lily is my best friend. She is as tall as me. She has big eyes and black hair. She h

14、as the same hobby as me. we both like doing sports. and we exercise three times a week. We sometimes use the internet together. Whats more, we both like watching English movies. She is not only friendly but also ready to help others. she often helps me with math. She is very smart and she studies hard at school. Though she sometimes goes online，she always gets good grades. I should learn from her.抄抄注意书写注意书写Summary书面表达写作技巧列整连美草稿纸答题纸抄抄 pay attention to your handwriting!