2022届高考书面表达写作指导之观点议论篇-课件.ppt

1、首 页末 页观点议论篇单词单词solution n. 解决方法 harmful adj. 有害的advantage n. 优势 disadvantage n. 不利因素doubt n. 怀疑 value vt. 重视 & n. 价值equal adj. 平等的 possibility n. 可能性limited adj. 有限的 obviously adv. 显而易见地confidence n. 自信 opposite adj. 对立的condition n. 条件 cause n. 原因 & vt. 引起短语短语have difficulty (in) doing sth. 做某事有困难in

2、 my opinion 就我看来agree with sb. 同意某人be beneficial to 对有好处have a preference for 偏爱in a sense 从某种意义上seize the opportunity 抓住机遇一、话题词汇一、话题词汇Step 1 素材累积素材累积首 页末 页开头引人入胜开头引人入胜1. As an old saying goes, a friend in need is a friend indeed. 俗话说,患难见真情。2. Last Monday, students in our class had a heated discussi

3、on on whether we should make friends on the Internet. 上周一,我们班的同学就我们是否应该在网上交友进行了一次热烈的讨论。3. It goes without saying that time is money. 时间就是金钱,这是一个不言而喻的事实。 篇中精编细织篇中精编细织1. Personally, I am for the second point of view. 就个人而言,我赞同第二种观点。2. A person cant live alone without others assistance. 没了他人的扶持帮助,一个人不可

4、能独自生存。3. Understanding is the most important communication between parents and children. 在父母与孩子沟通方面,理解是最重要的。二、话题句型二、话题句型首 页末 页收尾简练到位收尾简练到位1. Without hard work and perseverance, one can hardly achieve his goals. 没有努力和持之以恒,一个人是不大可能实现目标的。2. In a word, as students, we must put study in the first place.

5、总之,作为学生,我们应该把学习放在首位。3. Without knowledge, a man is only good for nothing no matter in modern times or in the future. 无论是现在还是将来,一个缺乏知识的人什么都适应不了。首 页末 页. 在我看来,他们所说的也有道理。_2.有些乐于靠近大自然的人选择居住在农村。_3. 现代社会里,多数人似乎没有手机就不能活了。_三、仿写练习三、仿写练习 From my point of view, what they said is reasonable as well. Those who lo

6、ve to get close to the nature choose to live in the countryside. In modern times, it seems that most people cannot live without mobile phones.首 页末 页Step 2 遣词造句遣词造句一、句型讲堂一、句型讲堂否定句否定句在英语中,表示否定意义的句子被称为否定句。 否定是修辞的一种重要形式。 否定句常见的形式有直接否定、间接否定、全部否定、部分否定、双重否定等。This is more than you can understand!用 more than

7、 表示含蓄否定Neither of us came here before!用 neither 表示全部否定Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.否定的主语+否定的表语:双重否定表示强烈的肯定语气首 页末 页二、强化训练二、强化训练(一一) 单句改错。下列每个句子中均有一处错误单句改错。下列每个句子中均有一处错误,请找出并修改。请找出并修改。1. Thats anything but truth.2. The juice is too sweet to drinking.3. No one agree with him.4. No cigarette

8、 are harmless.5. I have no interest in both of the book._true_ drink_agrees_is_books首 页末 页(二二) 写作必备。请将下列中文句子译为英文。写作必备。请将下列中文句子译为英文。1. 这个小山村的风光实在是太美了。 (感叹) _2. 电脑游戏对我没有什么吸引力。 (attract)_3. 作为年轻的一代,我们应该勇于迎接一切挑战。 (challenge)_4. 不管发生什么,他总是对未来持乐观态度。 (be optimistic about)_5. 我不愿意参加这场比赛的理由如下。 (as follows)_

9、What beautiful scenery the small mountain village has!Computer games have few attractions for me.As the young generation, we should be brave enough to meet all the challenges.No matter what happens, he is always optimistic about the future. The reasons why I am unwilling to take part in the competit

10、ion are as follows.首 页末 页三、短文改错三、短文改错以下短文共有10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 Recently we had made a discussion about what to create a nice environment of campus. First all, we should use proper words, behave politely and thought for others. If we want to live and study happy,we should respect

11、teachers, unite other students and help each other. We should also treat and understand others with more patience. Besides, we should keep our schoolyard clean, that helps to make our body health. Finally, we need to make efforts to create a family environment full of love and the warmth. Apart from

12、 communicating with our parents,we can also help them do what we can. _ have_which_ how _ healthy _ think _ happily of首 页末 页 In my opinions, environment protection depends on the efforts making by everyone. 剖析剖析第一处:hadhave。 考查动词的时态。 根据时间状语 recently 可知,这里使用现在完成时,故had 改为 have。第二处:whathow。 考查疑问词。 根据句意可

13、知,最近我们讨论了如何创造一个好的校园环境,故 what 改为 how。第三处:First 后加 of。 考查介词。 first of all 是固定短语,意为“首先”, 故 first 后加 of。第四处:thoughtthink。 考查情态动词。 情态动词should 后面加动词原形 think,故 thought 改为think。第五处:happyhappily。 考查副词。 副词修饰动词study, 故 happy 改为 happily。_opinion made首 页末 页第六处:thatwhich。 考查定语从句。 这是一个非限制性定语从句, 故 that 改为 which。第七处

14、:healthhealthy。 考查形容词。 形容词作宾语补足语,故 health 改为 healthy第八处:warmth 前的 the 去掉。 考查冠词。 warmth是一个抽象名词,所以这里不使用冠词,故the 去掉。第九处:opinionsopinion。 考查名词的单复数。 in my opinion 是一个固定短语,意为“在我看来”,故 opinions 改为 opinion。第十处:makingmade。 考查非谓语动词。 efforts 跟make 之间是被动关系,这里使用过去分词作定语,故 making 改为 made。首 页末 页Step 3 谋篇布局谋篇布局一、案例展示一

15、、案例展示英语高考原创题英语高考原创题书面表达书面表达 假设你是李华,现在越来越多的人进行网上购物,网购有优势也有弊端。 请你写一篇短文谈谈你对网上购物的看法。 要点如下: 1. 网购的优势; 2. 网购的弊端; 3. 你对网购的态度。 注意:1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_首 页末 页二、审题立意二、审题立意审题定位审题定位1. 文体:议论文2. 主题:对一种现象进行议论3. 要点:网购优势+网购弊端+自己的态度4. 要求:词数 100 左右,增加细节以使文章充实、连贯5. 人称:第三人称为主6. 时态:一般现在时为主技技巧巧点点拨拨1. 根据要点的多寡以

16、及要点间关系的密切程度和逻辑关系划分段落,确定段落间要点的分布,以使文章段落结构及段内句间结构清晰。2. 适时地采用倒装句、强调句、带非谓语的复合句等来强化情感的表达。3. 鉴于文体需要,关系密切的要点,可使用非谓语结构或者复合句来表达,以突出其间关系的紧密性。4. 注意语句间的衔接,适当使用过渡性词语或独立结构。首 页末 页要点整合要点整合1. 描述网购的优点:列举上网购物带来的好处。2. 描述网购的缺点:列举上网购物的不足之处。3. 陈述自己的观点:全面看待这个问题,有好处,有缺点,但好处远远多于缺点。框框架架构构建建第一段:许多人喜欢网购,网购正变得更加流行。 一般来说,它的优点如下:网

17、购不仅方便而且可以节省很多时间,我们可以用这些时间做其他更重要的事。第二段:然而,网购的消极面也是比较明显的,这招来了很多批评。 缺点之一就是我们对我们买的物品的质量无把握。 还有就是有些人在网购时被人骗。第三段:从上面的分析来看,网购的好处要远远多于缺点。 因此,它还会越来越流行。 因此,网购爱好将使生活更加精彩和有意义。 据报道,网店更多了,越来越少的人去超市买东西了。首 页末 页斟词酌句1. 陈述网购的优点:Nowadays many people prefer to shop online,which is becoming more popular. Generally speaki

18、ng, its advantages can be seen as follows.Not only is it convenient for us to shop online but also it helps save much time, with which we can do more other important things.2. 陈述网购的缺点:However, its negative aspects are also apparent, leaving a great deal of criticism.One of the disadvantages is that

19、we are not sure whether the goods we buy are of good quality.Whats worse, as is often the case, some buyers are cheated while shopping online.3. 表达作者的观点:Through the above analysis, I am convinced that the positive aspects of shopping online far outweigh the negative ones, which will strengthen its p

20、opularity.Therefore, with this trend developing, shopping online will make our life more colorful and meaningful.As is reported in the newspapers, more online shops have been opened and fewer and fewer people buy what they need in the local supermarkets.首 页末 页三、妙笔生花三、妙笔生花 丰富的词汇和多样的句型,是从众多作文中脱颖而出的关键。

21、积累高级词汇,学会运用多种句型,你的作文才能出类拔萃。词汇与短语词汇与短语prefer to do sth. 更喜欢做某事 generally speaking 一般来说it is convenient to do sth. 做某事方便 a great deal of criticism 大量批评be of good quality 优质 be convinced that 相信outweigh 超过 strengthen its popularity 使越来越流行with this trend developing 随着这种潮流发展make ones life more colorful a

22、nd meaningful 使某人的生活更加多彩和有意义句型与表达句型与表达Nowadays many people prefer to shop online,which is becoming more popular.句中 which 引导非限制性定语从句, to shop online 为不定式作宾语。首 页末 页Not only is it convenient for us to shop online but also it helps save much time, with which we can do more other important things.not onl

23、ybut also引导倒装句,起到强调作用,with which 引导非限制性定语从句。One of the disadvantages is that we are not sure whether the goods we buy are of good quality.that 引导表语从句,whether 引导宾语从句。Through the above analysis, I am convinced that the positive aspects of shopping online far outweigh the negative ones, which will stre

24、ngthen its popularity.that 引导宾语从句,which 引导非限制性定语从句。As is reported in the newspapers, more online shops have been opened and fewer and fewer people buy what they need in the local supermarkets.as 引导非限制性定语从句,放在句首,what 引导宾语从句。首 页末 页四、写作达人四、写作达人首 页末 页四、写作达人四、写作达人首 页末 页首 页末 页Step 4 经典再现经典再现一、考题回放一、考题回放湖南

25、省醴陵二中湖南省醴陵二中 、醴醴陵四中、醴醴陵四中20172018 学年学年 目前中学生中,家长陪读之风盛行,有的家长甚至不惜辞职或者请长假。 你们班上就这一话题进行了讨论。 请根据以下要点介绍讨论的结果并简要阐述自己的观点。 注意:1. 可以适当增加细节,以使行 文连贯; 2. 词数 100 左右。_ 首 页末 页二、思路点拨二、思路点拨 本篇书面表达要求同学们介绍讨论的结果并简要阐述自己的观点,属于观点议论文。 根据题目要求,可把文章分为三大部分。 首先开篇要介绍班上所讨论的话题,引出下文,此部分应略写,不宜过长;然后分别叙述两种不同的观点及其原因,此部分可以分为两段叙述,应灵活运用英语知

26、识,采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来;最后要阐述自己的观点及理由,此部分不应和题目给出的要点完全重复,要采用适当的表达观点的连接词和过渡词,以使行文连贯。 写作时还要注意时态、语态,结构上主次分明,详略得当。ieconomic pressure 经济压力 mental stress 精神压力accompany sb. 陪伴某人 quit the job 辞职in favor of sth. 支持某事 whats more 另外in addition 此外 on the other hand 另一方面首 页末 页ieconomic pressure 经济压力 mental stress

27、精神压力accompany sb. 陪伴某人 quit the job 辞职in favor of sth. 支持某事 whats more 另外in addition 此外 on the other hand 另一方面as far as Im concerned就我而言 I dont agree with the idea that我 不同意这个观点have a heated discussion about sth. 关于某事进行了一次热烈的讨论opinions about sth. are different 关于某事的观点不一致X% of them think(that)他们中 X%的

28、人认为The other X% of them are against the idea that他们中另外 X%的人不同意这个观点三、词句锦囊三、词句锦囊首 页末 页四、补充完整四、补充完整 The other day our class had a heated discussion about whether it was necessary for parents to accompany their children on their studying at school. As for the question, there were two different opinions.

29、 38% of the students were in favor of the idea that parents should accompany their children on their studying. 1._ (那是因为父母可以做家务活,比如做可口的饭菜、为他们洗衣服), which allowed students to have more time to study and have a good rest.On the other hand, 62% of the students were against the former viewpoint. In their

30、 opinion, parents quitting theirjobs to accompany students would add economic pressure to the family. Besides, students would be under great mentalstress. In addition, there would be no chance for them to develop their independence.As far as I am concerned, I support the latter opinion. In the long

31、run,2._(学生不仅要学习好,还要学会独立生活). That is because parents can do housework such as making delicious dinner and washing clothes for them not only should students study well but also learn to live independently首 页末 页 3._ (只有学会如何独立生活,学生才能有机会成长). Only by learning how to live independently can students have th

32、e chance to growStep 5 佳作研习佳作研习一、作文典范一、作文典范佳作研读佳作研读 Praising kids is favorable to their development. Im partly for it, but I dont think it wise to tell kids that theyre smart. Instead, they should be praised to be hardworking.The kids told they are smart are more likely to rely on their intelligence

33、 and discount the importance of effort, for which theyll easily develop a fear of failure and do everything to avoid the risk of making mistakes. However, those who are told they are doing well because they work hard will be brave enough to try increasingly difficult problems. Whenever they make mis

34、takes, heyllwork even harder to learn from them.whenever 状语从句状语从句定语从句定语从句+宾语从句宾语从句+原因状语从句原因状语从句+adj. enough to do sth.并列句并列句+think 复合结构复合结构+宾语从句宾语从句+for过去分词作定语过去分词作定语+be likely to+intelligence+discount +非限制性定语从句非限制性定语从句+不定式作状语不定式作状语 Every word is sending children a message. So remember,do acclaim th

35、eir efforts and attitudes, rather than justdo 强调谓语动词强调谓语动词+rather than首 页末 页习题示例习题示例 很多人认为表扬孩子有利于孩子的成长,但是应该表扬孩子聪明,还是该表扬孩子勤奋?请你写一篇短文发表自己的观点。 词数 100左右。 _首 页末 页一、作文典范一、作文典范研习以上范文美句研习以上范文美句,将下列句子译为英文。将下列句子译为英文。我们不该歧视他们,反而应该多帮助、照顾他们。2.每次英国下雪,我们都会感到惊讶。3. 一般认为,积蓄点钱以备将来之用是明智的。4. 他十分大度地祝贺他的继任者做出的决定。5. 但愿她能离开

36、,不要再来烦我们了。_ Every time it snows in Britain, we are taken by surprise. We shouldnt look down upon them; instead, we should try to help them more and take care of them. Its generally thought wise to save some money for the future. He was generous enough to congratulate his successor on his decision. T

37、his book is intended for the general readers rather than the students.首 页末 页Step 6 仿真模拟仿真模拟 假设你是李华,上周你们班的同学就“学校是否应该分快慢班 这一话题进行了热烈的讨论。 以下是讨论的结果。 请你根据以下的内容写一篇短文: 1. 赞成:学生能按需讨论并解决问题;能根据学生的程度安排教学,教学更高效 2. 反对:在慢班的学生感觉不被重视;班中缺乏学习榜样的影响 3. 你的看法。 注意:1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。Task 1Task 2 英 语 中 有 一 句

38、谚 语:“Practice makes perfect。 假定你是李华,请你根据你对这句话的理解以及个人经验讲述实践在平时的学习生活中的重要性。注意: 1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。首 页末 页 Recently, our class had a heated discussion on whether students should be grouped according to their academic performance. Opinions are divided. Some of us are in favo

39、r of the idea, thinking thatstudents with the similar learning performance are more likely to exchange their ideas and discuss their problemswith each other. Whats more, its easier for teachers to make lesson plans in a more effective way. However, quite a few of us hold the oppositeview. In their o

40、pinion, grouping students can bring lots of bad effects to those who are poor in study. Because of their poor academic performance, they feel they areless important and looked down upon by the teachers.Worse still, it also does harm to their development because they lack learning role models. In my

41、point of view, I am for the opinion of grouping the students as it can help them develop better in the futureTask 1首 页末 页 Every proverb brings people some wisdom. So does the one “Practice makes perfect”, which means the more efforts you put into practising, the more skillful you will become. Memori

42、es rushed to my mind when I saw this sentence. Born short and weak, I always did bad in PE, let alone swimming. However, swimming test was a must. Therefore, I had to face the reality. First, I watched lots of videos on swimming skills. Then, with the help of my mother, I overcame my fear and practi

43、sed swimming every morning. Gradually, I was able to “float” on the water. I kept on. With constant efforts and practice, I managed to pass the test. As you can see, this is the power of constant practice. We may fail on the first or second or even third attempt, but remember: keep practising, and success is in front of you.Task 2