2022届高考英语书面表达写作复习指导之祝贺篇-课件.ppt

1、首 页末 页祝贺篇单词单词congratulation n. 祝贺 prize n. 奖品proud adj. 骄傲的 success n. 成功achieve v. 实现 deserve v. 值得effort n. 努力 diligent adj. 勤奋的brilliant adj. 闪耀的;杰出的 reward v. & n. 奖赏;回报admiration n. 赞美,钦佩 pride n. 自豪短语短语express ones congratulations on表达某人对的祝贺be proud of sb. 为某人骄傲achieve ones goal/ aim 实现某人的目标fu

2、lfill ones dreams 实现某人的梦想How happy I am to hear that 很高兴得知一、话题词汇一、话题词汇Step 1 素材累积素材累积首 页末 页开头引人入胜开头引人入胜1. I have learned with delight that you won first prize in the English Speech Contest and Im writing to express my deepest congratulations to you.我很高兴得知你在英语演讲比赛中获得第一名。 我写信是向你传达最诚挚的祝贺。2. I am very e

3、xcited and inspired by the good news thatand I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations on得知这个好消息,我很激动也很振奋。 我写信对表达我最诚挚的祝贺。3. Good news travels fast! It was delightful for me to hear thatI would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on好事传千里! 我很高兴听到。 我想向你传达最热烈的祝贺。篇中精编细织篇中精编细织1. As yo

4、ur close friend, I just want you to know how lucky I am to be able to share your pride and how pleased I am at your success.作为你的密友,我只想让你知道能分享你的骄傲我有多幸运,能分享你的成功我有多喜悦。二、话题句型二、话题句型首 页末 页2. I have been witnessing your progress with admiration all the years, and I know more than anyone else how much effor

5、t you have put in.这些年以来,我一直怀着钦佩之情见证着你的进步,我比任何人都清楚你付出了多少努力。3. I understand for sure that it isthat leads you to the current success. is a reward, which you richly deserve.我很清楚是使你获得现在的成功。 是你理应获得的奖赏。收尾简练到位收尾简练到位1. Judging from your current success/ achievement, I am confident that you willin the future

6、.从你当前的成功/ 成就来看,我相信你将来会2. I believe this position will be a new beginning, and a chance for you to embrace a fuller life and pave the way for a brilliant future career.我相信这个职位将会是一个新的开始,也是一个机会,让你拥抱更充实的生活,为未来的辉煌事业铺平道路。首 页末 页3. Sincere congratulations to you again! I wish you greater success in the year

7、s ahead.再次向你表达真诚的祝贺。 我祝愿你在未来的岁月中取得更大的成功。首 页末 页1. 得知你被哈佛大学录取这个好消息,我很激动也很振奋。 我写信对你的成功表达我最诚挚的祝贺。_2. 我很清楚是你的勤奋和卓越的能力使你获得现在的成功。 这份荣誉是你理应获得的奖赏。_3. 从你当前的成功来看,我相信在不久的将来你会实现梦想。_三、仿写练习三、仿写练习 I am very excited and inspired by the good news that you are admitted to Harvard University and I am writing to offer m

8、y sincerest congratulations on your success. I understand for sure that it is your hard work and excellent ability that lead you to the current success.This honor is a reward, which you richly deserve. Judging from your current success, I am confident that you will achieve your dream in the near fut

9、ure.首 页末 页Step 2 遣词造句遣词造句一、句型讲堂一、句型讲堂状语从句状语从句(二二)1.原因状语从句原因状语从句常用从属连词 as, because, in that, now that, since, when 等引导。She doesnt want to bother you as she knows you are pretty tired.2. 方式状语从句方式状语从句表示动作进行的的方式或样子,常由从属连词 as, as if, as though, like, asso等引导。He treated me as if I were his son._ _ _ _ 主语主

10、语 谓语谓语 宾语宾语 充当句中的状语充当句中的状语_ _ _ _主语主语 谓语谓语 宾语宾语 充当句中的状语充当句中的状语首 页末 页二、强化训练二、强化训练(一一) 单句改错。下列每个句子中均有一处错误单句改错。下列每个句子中均有一处错误,请找出并修改。请找出并修改。1. The teacher hopes that we can correct our attitude like Tom do.2. Since you dont like the movie, you can go shopping to me.3. You had better take a taxi as its r

11、aining heavy.4. Now that you agree me, I will get it done at once.5. He did exactly as he was telling._does_with_heavilywith_told首 页末 页(二二) 写作必备。请将下列中文句子译为英文。写作必备。请将下列中文句子译为英文。1.曾经有一段时间我讨厌上学。 (there be a time when)_2.你没有必要买这本书。 (there is no need)_3. 他赶走了那只老鼠,真的很勇敢! (It is adj. of sb. to)_4. 直到昨天晚上他才

12、回来。 (not until)_5.很遗憾我不能参加这次聚会。 (its a pity)_ There was a time when I hated going to school.There is no need for you to buy the bookIt is really brave of him to expel the mouse away.Not until last night did he come back. / He didnt come back until last night. Its a pity that I am not able to attend

13、the party.首 页末 页三、短文改错三、短文改错以下短文共有10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。Dear Anna, I am very glad to learn that you had won first prize in your schools English writing contest. And I am writing to offer my congratulations in your excellent performance. Its a real encouragement to see your efforts r

14、ewarding. How I admire your writing skills! I have been learning English for several year and I have little trouble in listening, speaking and reading. Therefore, I find it hard to write the good composition. Although Ive put a lot of efforts into it, but I just cant find a way out. I feel stressed

15、out. I would _have_ a_ on_However_rewarded_years首 页末 页appreciate if you could give me some specific advices on it. Looking forward to your earlier reply. Yours, Li Hua 剖析剖析第一处:hadhave。 考查动词的时态。 此处强调的是现在的结果,所以应该使用现在完成时,故 had 改为 have。第二处:inon。 考查介词。 congratulations 后常常跟介词 on, 故 in 改为 on。第三处:rewardingr

16、ewarded。 考 查 非 谓 语 动 词。efforts 与 reward 之间是被动关系,所以此处使用过去分词作宾语补足语,故 rewarding 改为 rewarded。 it_ advice_ early首 页末 页第四处:yearyears。 考查名词的单复数。 名词前面有 several 修饰,所以使用复数,故 year 改为years。第五处:ThereforeHowever。 考查副词。 前一句说到在听、说和读方面没有什么问题,后一句提到发现写一篇好作文很难,所以前后两句是转折关系,因此这里使用副词 However,故Therefore 改为 However。第六处:thea

17、。 考查冠词。 根据句意可知,李华发现写一篇好作文很难,所以使用不定冠词 a,故 the 改为 a。第七处:but 去掉。 考查连词。 although 和 but 不能同时出现在一句话中,故 but 去掉。第八处:在 if 前加 it。 考 查 固 定 句 型。 I would appreciate it if you could是一个固定句型,意为“如果你能够,我将不胜感激”,故appreciate 后加 it。第九处:advicesadvice。 考查名词的单复数。 advice是不可数名词,没有复数形式,故 advices 改为 advice。第十处:earlierearly。 考查形

18、容词。 根据句意可知,希望早日收到回信,故 earlier 改为 early。首 页末 页Step 3 谋篇布局谋篇布局一、案例展示一、案例展示英语高考原创题英语高考原创题书面表达书面表达 假定你是李华,近日与你一起参加全国中学生英语演讲比赛的同学David 获得了一等奖。 请根据所给提示给 David 写一封信,要点如下: 1. 告诉他获奖的消息并表示祝贺; 2. 回顾你们刻苦训练的过程; 3. 表示感谢并向他学习。注意:1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。DearDavid,_ All the best! Yours, L

19、i Hua首 页末 页二、审题立意二、审题立意审题定位审题定位1. 文体:祝贺信2. 主题:祝贺同学获奖3. 要点:传达消息并祝贺+回顾刻苦训练过程+感谢并向他学习4. 要求:词数 100 左右,适当增加细节以使文章充实、连贯5. 人称:第一、第二人称为主6. 时态:一般现在时和过去时为主,现在完成时和将来时为辅技技巧巧点点拨拨1. 根据要点的多寡以及要点间关系的密切程度和逻辑关系划分段落。 一般分为三段较合适。2. 适时地采用倒装句、强调句、虚拟语气等来强化情感的表达。3. 尽量不使用简单句型来表达。 可使用非谓语结构、独立主格结构、被动句型或者复合句来表达,以体现英语文章的句子多样性。4.

20、 注意语句间的衔接,使用体现句子之间的逻辑关系的过渡性词语。首 页末 页要点整合要点整合1. 祝贺:传达消息,表示祝贺。2. 回顾刻苦训练过程:每天早上大声朗读,互相指出错误,互相鼓励。3. 感谢并向他学习:感谢他传授了很多知识,学习他刻苦学习的态度和精神。框框架架构构建建第一段:告知对方在全国高中生英语演讲比赛中获得一等奖,对对方的获奖表示祝贺。第二段: 成功都是来自努力奋斗,回顾以前早起练习说英语,互相指出练习中出现的错误,英语不断进步的过程。第三段:对于对方的帮助表示感谢,这将对将来的事业有益。首 页末 页斟词酌句1. 传达消息+祝贺:I am writing to tell you t

21、hrilling news that you have won first prize in the National High School English Speaking Contest.I would like to tell you a piece of good news that you have won first prize in the National High School English Speaking Contest.Id like to offer my congratulations on your success.2. 回顾刻苦训练过程:As is well

22、-known, success comes from diligence and intelligence.It was in the early morning that you practiced reading English aloud till you could speak English as fluently as Americans did.Whats more, when I found a mistake in your English, immediately, you repaid with appreciation.Not only did you make you

23、r English improved every day but also you encouraged me to practise more.3. 感谢+学习:With my English improved a lot, I hope you can accept my gratitude.I have learned a lot from you, which will benefit my career in the future.I will always remember your great spirit in learning Engish and learn from yo

24、u.首 页末 页三、妙笔生花三、妙笔生花 丰富的词汇和多样的句型,是从众多作文中脱颖而出的关键。积累高级词汇,学会运用多种句型,你的作文才能出类拔萃。词汇与短语词汇与短语thrilling news 激动人心的消息 as is well-known 众所周知benefit my career 对我的事业有帮助 diligence and intelligence 勤奋和智慧first prize 一等奖 whats more 此外repay with appreciation 用感激来回报 accept my gratitude 接受我的感激句型与表达句型与表达I am writing to

25、tell you thrilling news that you have won first prize in the National High School English Speaking Contest.句中 that 引导同位语从句,是高水平的句子。As is well-known, success comes from diligence and intelligence.as 引导的非限制性定语从句。首 页末 页It was in the early morning that you practiced reading English aloud till you could

26、speak English as fluently as Americans did.强调 in the early morning, 强调句型起到增强情感的作用。Not only did you make your English improved every day but also you encouraged me to practise more.由 not onlybut also引导的倒装句。With my English improved a lot, I hope you can accept my gratitude.with 结构作状语放在句首。首 页末 页四、写作达人四

27、、写作达人首 页末 页首 页末 页Step 4 经典再现经典再现一、考题回放一、考题回放201 6 洛阳 高 三卷 假定你是李华,得知你的美国笔友 Eric 获得了汉语桥世界大学生中文演讲比赛一等奖。 你为他感到骄傲,并给他写一封祝贺信,要点如下: 1. 表示祝贺; 2. 分享快乐; 3. 寄予希望。注意:1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Eric,_ Yours, Li Hua首 页末 页二、思路点拨二、思路点拨 本文要求写一封祝贺信。 内容要点都已给出,但各部分的内容都需要考生发挥补充。 为了保证内容的完整无

28、缺,写作思路“三步走”:(1)写信的目的和表示祝贺;(2)对喜讯进行积极的评价(包括肯定被祝贺人过去的努力和优点,这部分很容易被考生忽略);(3)表达衷心的祝福及未来的希望。 此外,考生还要注意语气要真诚、自然、亲切动人。三、词句锦囊三、词句锦囊offer ones sincerest congratulations to sb. 向某人表达最真诚的祝贺 win first prize 获得一等奖 speech contest 演讲比赛 reward 奖励 deserve 值得 share ones pride 分享某人的骄傲make greater progress 取得更大的进步 obta

29、in a bright future 获得光明的未来at last 最后 communicate with 与交流首 页末 页四、补充完整四、补充完整Dear Eric, I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations to you on your winning first prize of “Chinese Bridge” World College Students Chinese Speech Contest. I know you have worked so hard in the past years that 1._ (这是

30、你非常值得的奖赏). I just want you to know how lucky I am to be able to share your pride and 2. _ (对于你的成功我有多么喜悦). 3._ (我相信你会取得更大的进步) in your study and obtain a bright future in your life. At last, I hope to see you and communicate with each other soon. Yours, Li Hua it is a reward you fully deserve how plea

31、sed I am at your success I am sure you will make greater progressStep 5 佳作研习佳作研习一、作文典范一、作文典范佳作研读佳作研读Dear Peter, I am very excited to tell you that you have been awarded first prize in the Chinese speech contest hosted by my city. Congratulate you on the great success! But I know it was not easily ac

32、hieved. Only after you made great efforts did it turn natural. You specifically devoted a week to travelling around the city, looking carefully to find out beauties of it and its peoples life, and describing them from unique angles. You just began as a Chinese learner when invited to take part. Howe

33、ver, in order to make a perfect speech, you practised speaking Chinese every day. The past three 承上启下承上启下+achieve+被动语态被动语态倒装句倒装句+make effortsdevoteto+并列分词作介词宾语并列分词作介词宾语状语从句省略状语从句省略in order to 状语状语 months saw how you got close to the city and how hard you studied Chinese. Your speech was credible and

34、 unquestionable, and you fully deserve the title! I found youve really fallen in love with the city. So do you take it into consideration to work and live here? Sincere congratulations to you again! Yours, Li Hua非生命名词作非生命名词作 see 的主语的主语+get close to+宾语从句宾语从句首 页末 页习题示例习题示例 假定你是李华,在得知你的美国朋友 Peter获得了你市举

35、办的中文演讲比赛一等奖后,给他写一封信,告诉他这个消息并表示祝贺。 具体内容如下: 1. 表示祝贺; 2. 演讲的成功来自他的努力和对这座城市的爱; 3. 建议来该市工作生活。注意:1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 可 以 适 当 增 加 细 节, 以 使 行 文连贯; 3. 开头语和结束语已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Peter, I am very excited to tell you that you have been awarded first prize in the Chinese speech contest hosted by my city._ Sincere cong

36、ratulations to you again!Yours,Li Hua首 页末 页一、作文典范一、作文典范研习以上范文美句研习以上范文美句,将下列句子译为英文。将下列句子译为英文。 法律只有在通过后才生效。2. 那 5 个人走进房间,好奇地四处张望着。3. 要是好好读一下的话,这本书肯定会带给你许多思考。4. 为了能让人听见,安妮提高了嗓门。5. 世界历史所见证的眼泪比欢笑多。_ The five people entered the room, looking around curiously.Only after it is passed will the law take effec

37、t. If well read, the book will give you much to think. Anne raised her voice in order to be heard. The world history has seen more tears than laughter.首 页末 页Step 6 仿真模拟仿真模拟 假定你是李华,你的美国朋友 Jim 参加了由围棋委员会举办的围棋人机大战且打败了人工智能程序 Blaster 获得第一名。 请根据以下内容要点给 Jim 写一封电子邮件向他表示祝贺。 1. 对他表示祝贺; 2. 肯定他付出的努力; 3. 对他的祝福。注意

38、:1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考词汇:围棋 go chessTask 1Task 2 假定你是李华,你的美国朋友 Elaine 告知你她竞演学校的灰姑娘话剧角色,得到了灰姑娘这个角色,将代表学校参加市里组织的“英语文化节”话剧比赛。 请你给 Elaine 回一封邮件,要点包括: 1. 对她表示祝贺; 2. 你对此事的看法; 3. 对她的祝福,并表示你会去现场看比赛给她加油。注意:1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。首 页末 页Dear Jim, Im much delighted to know that you won f

39、irst prize in the go chess competition between human and machine organized by the go chess committee, defeating the artificial intelligence program Blaster. Id like to express my congratulations on your success. You have shown great interest in go chess and kept on practicing it every day since chil

40、dhood. As the saying goes, “Everything comes to him who waits”. Finally, you succeeded! Besides, you are always diligent and perceptive, which is vital for go chesslearning. Moreover, it was your hard work that made it possible for you to achieve your goal. Therefore, you deserve it. I wish you grea

41、ter success in the future. Sincere congratulations to you again! Yours, Li HuaTask 1首 页末 页Dear Elaine, I have learned with delight that you will star in the play Cinderella and take part in the Drama Competition held by our city in English Cultural Festival. Id like to extend to you my utmost congra

42、tulations. You dont know how excited I was when I heard the good news. As your best friend, Im so proud of you. It is known that Cinderella plays an important role in the play. Starring in such a role, youll meet great challenges. However, Im convinced that you will give the performance excellently because not only are you fond of acting, but you never give in to difficulties when faced with them. Besides, Ill watch the play and cheer for you on the scene. May you succeed in the competition. Yours, Li HuaTask 2