2022届高考英语书面表达复习写作指导之求助篇-课件.ppt

1、首 页末 页感谢篇单词单词difficulty n. 困难 seek v. 寻求problem n. 问题 assist v. 帮助face v. 面对 eager adj. 渴望的helpless adj. 无助的 instruction n. 指导upset v. & n. 困扰 guidance n. 指导confused adj. 困惑的 anxious adj. 焦急的短语短语offer some guidance 提供一些指导encounter a problem 遇到一个问题be faced with problems/ difficulties 面对问题/ 困难have dif

2、ficulty/ trouble (in) doing sth郾 在某方面有困难give sb. a hand/ do sb. a favor 给某人帮助ask sb. for help/ turn to sb. for help 向某人寻求帮助一、话题词汇一、话题词汇Step 1 素材累积素材累积首 页末 页开头引人入胜开头引人入胜1. Recently, I have difficulty in., which bothers me a lot. Therefore, I have no choice but to turn to you for help. 最近,我在方面有困难,这很困扰

3、我。 因此,我别无选择,只能向你求助。2. Unfortunately, I find it quite hard to., so I am writing to ask you to do me a favor. 不幸的是,我发现做很难,所以我写信是想寻求你的帮助。3. Im sorry to bother you, but I meet some difficulties and Im writing this letter to seek your help.很抱歉打扰你,但我遇到些困难,写信是想寻求你的帮助。篇中精编细织篇中精编细织1. Faced with so many diffi

4、culties, Im at a loss and Im anxious to get your help. Would you please offer me some advice on.?面对如此多的困难,我不知所措,非常渴望得到你的帮助。 你能给我一些关于的建议吗?二、话题句型二、话题句型首 页末 页2. What bothers me most is that its difficult for me to. 最困扰我的是我很难3. I am eager to., but I dont know how, which makes me upset, so I long to get

5、your timely help. 我渴望,但我不知道怎么做,这使我很烦恼。 所以我渴望得到你及时的帮助。收尾简练到位收尾简练到位1. I would appreciate it if you could do me a favor and spare some time for. 如果你能花点时间帮助我,我将不胜感激。2. I will be extremely grateful if you could offer me a hand. 如果你能帮我,我会非常感激。3. Thank you for your kind consideration and I look forward to

6、receiving your earliest reply. 谢谢你的关照,期待尽早收到你的回复。首 页末 页1.最近,我在与同学友好相处方面很困难,这个问题让我很困扰。_2.最令我困扰的是我无法将我的注意力集中在学习上。_3. 如果你能花点时间帮我修改简历,我将不胜感激。_三、仿写练习三、仿写练习 Recently, I have difficulty in getting along well with my classmates, which bothers me a lot. What bothers me most is that its difficult for me to co

7、ncentrate on my study. I would appreciate it if you could do me a special favor and spare some time for polishing my resume up.首 页末 页Step 2 遣词造句遣词造句一、句型讲堂一、句型讲堂定语从句定语从句1.限制性定语从句限制性定语从句与先行词关系密切。 在一个限制性定语从句中,如果去掉从句,主句的意思就没法表达完整了,它是先行词在意义上不可缺少的定语。 主句和从句之间不需要用逗号隔开。 引导限制性定语从句的关系词有关系代词 that, who, whom, wh

8、ose, which, as 以及关系副词 when,where, why 等。The boy who wears a pair of glasses is my cousin. 2. 非限制性定语从句非限制性定语从句与主句关系没那么密切。 在一个非限制性定语从句中,如果去掉从句,主句还是完整的一个句子,从句只是作为附加说明。 从句和主句之间多有逗号隔开。 非限制性定语从句一般不用 that 引导,且句中的关系词不可省略。The book, which is a gift from my classmate, is interesting._ _ _ _ _主语主语(先行词先行词) 关系代词关

9、系代词 充当定语充当定语,修饰修饰 the boy 系动词系动词 表语表语_ _ _ _ _主语主语 先行词先行词 关系代词关系代词 充当定语充当定语,修饰修饰 the book 系动词系动词 表语表语首 页末 页二、强化训练二、强化训练(一一) 单句改错。下列每个句子中均有一处错误单句改错。下列每个句子中均有一处错误,请找出并修改。请找出并修改。The man who lives next door sell eggs in the market.2. Mary, with whom I watch movie last night, was a sports lover.3. This i

10、s the city which I used to stay.4. Tom was absent from class again, which made his teacher anger.5. The room who window faces south is the most beautiful._sells_watched_Where / in _angry_whose首 页末 页(二二) 写作必备。请将下列中文句子译为英文。写作必备。请将下列中文句子译为英文。 多亏了你的热心帮忙,我顺利到达了目的地。 (thanks to) _2.他的家庭太贫困了,根本付不起学费。 (too.t

11、o.)_3.这篇文章是根据唐代历史写的。 (base.on)_4.他决定留在中国,不去美国。 (rather than)_5. 从那以后,他就不再是我们的好朋友了。 (no longer)_ Thanks to your kind help, I got to the destination smoothly.His family is too poor to afford the tuition.This article is based on the history of Tang Dynasty.He decided to stay in China rather than go to

12、America. Since then, he was no longer our good friend.首 页末 页三、短文改错三、短文改错以下短文共有10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。Dear Mr. Smith, Im Li Hua, a Chinese student taken writing course in your International English School during the summer vacation. Im writing to ask for the help. I came here last mon

13、thand find the courses interested. But I have difficulty in note鄄taking and I have no idea ofhow make a sentence. Especial, how to polish the passage and make it fluent. Im anxious to get help from you. I have no class on Tuesday mornings but Friday afternoons. Please let me know which days is okay

14、with you. You may emailed me. Here is my email address: _taking_Especially_the/ your/ some_with to_email_found_and_day_intereting首 页末 页lihua3453. com. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua剖析剖析第一处:taken寅taking。考 查 非 谓 语 动 词。 因 为 a Chinese student 与 take 之间是主动关系,所以 这里应该使用现在分词作定语,故 taken 改为 taki

15、ng。第二处:help 前的 the 去掉,或改为 your/ some。 考查冠词。 此处 help 为泛指,不能用定冠词,故 help 前的 the 去掉,或改为 your/ some。第三处:find寅found。考查动词的时态。 由 last month 可知,这里使用一般过去时,故 find 改为 found。第四处:interested寅interesting。考查形容词。 courses是物,用以鄄ing 形式结尾的形容词修饰 the courses,故 interested 改为 interesting。第五处:in寅with。考查介词。 have difficulty wit

16、h sth.是固定搭配,意为“做某事有困难”,故 in 改为 with。首 页末 页第六处:how 后面加 to。 考查不定式。 how to do.意为“如何做”,故 how 后面加 to。第七处:Especial寅Especially。 考查副词。 副词修饰整个句子,故 Especial 改为 Especially。第八处:but寅and。 考查连词。 根据句意可知,星期二上午和星期五下午都没有课,故 but 改为 and。第九处:days寅day。 考查名词单复数。 因为前面提到了星期二上午和星期五下午没有课,所以让史密斯老师从中选择一天,因此使用单数,故 days 改为 day。第十处

17、:emailed寅email。 考查动词。 情态动词后面接动词的原形,故 emailed 改为 email。首 页末 页Step 3 谋篇布局谋篇布局一、案例展示一、案例展示英语高考原创题英语高考原创题书面表达书面表达 假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。 给外教 Ms Jenkins 写信,请他帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。 注意:1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_首 页末 页二、审题立意二、审题立意审题定位审题定位1. 文体:求助信2. 主题:请求帮助3. 要点:说明兼职意向+请求帮忙修改4. 要

18、求:词数 100 左右,增加细节以使文章充实、连贯5. 人称:第一、第二人称为主6. 时态:一般现在时为主技技巧巧点点拨拨1. 本试题并非提纲作文,首先需要理清写作思路,总结要点内容,从而整理作文框架结构。2. 适时地采用丰富的时态、语态以及复杂句型表达。3. 注意语句间的衔接,适当使用过渡性词语或独立结构。首 页末 页要点整合要点整合1. 铺垫陈述:为了获得暑假兼职的机会,需要写申请书和个人简历。2. 碰到问题:第一次写申请书和个人简历,对文字和格式不太了解。3. 请求帮忙:提出让对方帮忙检查修改申请书和个人简历,自己将不胜感激。框框架架构构建建第一段:自我介绍,开门见山提出写信目的:寻求对

19、方的帮助。第二段:简要阐述想要得到兼职的机会,并写好了申请书和个人简历,顺着话题,提出自己碰到的问题,拿不准申请书和个人简历的文字和格式是否正确,希望对方能够帮忙检查修改。第三段:提前感谢对方的帮助。首 页末 页斟词酌句1. 铺垫陈述:淤In order to get some practical experience, Im planning to apply for a part鄄time job at a famous foreigncompany, which I think will be pretty helpful to my future career.于I have alre

20、ady completed my application letter and resume.2. 碰到问题:However, as this is the first time I prepare these, Im not quite sure of the language and the format Ive used.3. 请求帮忙:I know you have a very busy schedule, but Id be very grateful if you could spare some time to go throughthem and make necessary

21、 changes.首 页末 页三、妙笔生花三、妙笔生花 丰富的词汇和多样的句型,是从众多作文中脱颖而出的关键。积累高级词汇,学会运用多种句型,你的作文才能出类拔萃。词汇与短语词汇与短语ask for 寻求 in order to 为了get some practical experience 获得一些实践经验 plan to 打算,计划apply for 申请 be helpful to 有助于busy schedule 繁忙的日程 go through 仔细检查make necessary changes 对做必要的修改 in advance 提前句型与表达句型与表达淤In order to

22、 get some practical experience, Im planning to apply for a part鄄time job at a famous foreign company, which I think will be pretty helpful to my future career.句中使用丰富的词汇,将目的状语独立出来,非限制性定语从句是亮点。首 页末 页于However, as this is the first time I prepare these, Im not quite sure of the language and the format I

23、ve used.用过渡词 however 表转折,逻辑关系清晰;用 as 引导状语从句巧妙地带出原因。盂I know you have a very busy schedule, but Id be very grateful if you could spare some time to go through them and make necessary changes.you have a very busy schedule 为宾语从句,后面的 but 表转折,Id be very grateful if you.为条件状语从句。首 页末 页四、写作达人四、写作达人首 页末 页首 页末

24、 页Step 4 经典再现经典再现一、考题回放一、考题回放20162017 河南省天一大联考 假定你是李华, 今年 10 月份即将去英国的布莱顿大学 ( Brighton University)留学。请给你在布莱顿的网友 Tom 写一封英文电子邮件,让他介绍一下布莱顿这座城市,告知他你的租房需求并请他帮忙租房子。 注意:1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 开关和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Tom, _Li Hua首 页末 页二、思路点拨二、思路点拨这是一封求助邮件,首先清楚双方关系为网友,由于很快要去对方所在的城市上学,可以告知对方很快就可以见面了。

25、 顺便引出写信目的,即求助。 因为对方是当地人,熟悉当地的情况,可以请对方大致介绍这座城市,并提前帮忙租房。 不管最终对方能帮到多少忙,邮件中一定要提前感谢对方,以表礼貌。 在谈到租房子时,可以适当增加细节,如原因或者对房子的具体要求。三、词句锦囊三、词句锦囊each other 彼此 give sb. a hand 帮某人一个忙do sb. a favor 帮某人一个忙 in advance 提前brief introduction 简短介绍 give an introduction 做个介绍live off 住在之外 furthermore 此外anyway 不管怎么样 express.t

26、o sb. 向某人表达首 页末 页四、补充完整四、补充完整Dear Tom, I am very excited to tell you that well meet each other soon because Ill start my study in Brighton University this October. Talking about this, I am thinking whether you could give me a hand. 1._ (为了让我在那里更加舒适), I wonder if you could do me a favor. First, I nee

27、d to have a clear idea of the city of Brighton in advance, so would you please give me a brief introduction of it? Second, I want to live off campus while studying there, 2. _(这会给予我更多的自由). Therefore, could you please help me rent a one鄄bedroom apartment with a kitchen and a bathroom? Furthermore, 3.

28、_(如果房子在学校附近那就完美了). Anyway, I would like to express my sincere gratitude to you first. Looking forward to your early reply!Yours,Li HuaTo make my stay there more comfortablewhich will give me more freedom it would be perfect if the apartmentis near the schoolStep 5 佳作研习佳作研习一、作文典范一、作文典范佳作研读佳作研读Dear Wa

29、ng Wei, Im looking after my sick father in the Second Hospital. Hes getting a little better now, which is the biggest happiness I received these days. Ill take my responsibility toattend to him for three more days here, and Ill make an attempt to teach myself in my free time in case Im left behind.

30、But what I worry about is if I can completely catch math. As you know, it is obviously abstract sometimes. So are you kind to lend your math notebook to me? Itll be better if you take the trouble to note the lessons down in detail. Hoping for your notebook. Your help counts to me! Yours,Li Hua非限制性定语

31、从句非限制性定语从句+限制性定语从句限制性定语从句并列句并列句+状语从句省略状语从句省略+in case 从句从句+what 主语从句主语从句+if 表语从句表语从句+catch three more days+make an attemptit 形式主语形式主语首 页末 页习题示例习题示例 假如你是某校学生李华,正请假照顾病重住院治疗的父亲。 你不想落下课程,打算在看护期间自学。 但你担心自己难以看懂数学,所以给你的同学王伟发一封电子邮件,借他的数学笔记看看。 注意:1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯; 3. 开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。Dear Wan

32、g Wei, _Yours,Li Hua首 页末 页一、作文典范一、作文典范研习以上范文美句研习以上范文美句,将下列句子译为英文。将下列句子译为英文。1.我有 3 份兼职工作,一年能挣大约 14,000 英镑。2.大致说来,做这件事有 3 种方法。3.把溜冰鞋带去,说不定你们要溜冰呢。4.童年发生的事深深地影响着我们。5. 如果我能告诉他是谁给他打过电话,那样会更好。_ There are, broadly speaking, three ways in which this can be done. I have three part鄄time jobs, which bring in ab

33、out 14,000 a year. Take your skates in case you want to go skating.We are deeply affected by what happened to us in childhood. I think it would be better if I could tell him who called.首 页末 页Step 6 仿真模拟仿真模拟 假定你是李华,在美国某中学做交换生。新生开学之际,你被选为优秀学生代表在开学典礼上发言,已写好了发言稿。 给你的外教 Mr. Brown 写封信,请他帮你修改发言稿的内容和格式(form

34、at),并且希望他告知你作为优秀学生代表发言有哪些需要注意的地方。注意:1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Task 1Task 2 假定你是李华,正在美国的某所中学参加暑期课程,你的教授布置完成一篇关于美国的风俗与文化的论文。 写作过程中你遇到了一些困难,希望得到你的美国朋友 Peter 的帮助。 请给Peter 写 一 封 邮 件, 内 容 要 点如下: 1. 求助的内容; 2. 希望得到建议和帮助; 3. 约定时间。注意:1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。首 页末 页Dear Mr. Brown, Im Li Hua, one

35、 of your students. Worried about how to be a speaker, Im writing to turn to you for help. Im chosen as the representative of the outstanding students to give a speech at the school opening ceremony, but Im not sure how to do it well since itll be the first time I do the job. Ive already completed my

36、 speech draft. However, Im afraid that there aresome mistakes. I wonder whether its convenient for you to find them out in terms of words and format. Besides, would you please tell me what I should pay attention to? I dont know if there are any special ways of speaking on such occasion. Ill be grate

37、ful if you can give me a hand. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li HuaTask 1首 页末 页Dear Peter, How are you doing? Attending a summer school in America, Im writing to turn to you for help. My professor has assigned a paper on American custom and culture and I show great interest in it. However, I

38、m encountering a problem. I have some difficulty choosing a topic, which troubles me a lot. When writing the paper, I have no idea of how to express ideas clearly. Faced with these problems, Im at a loss and eager to get your advice and help. I have no class on Monday afternoons and Friday afternoons. Please let me know which day is OK with you. Id really appreciate it if you could do me a favor. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li HuaTask 2