（高考英语备考）：漂亮作文技巧及读后续写课件.pptx

1、什么是漂亮作文壹漂亮作文怎么评贰怎么写漂亮作文叁作文的进阶之路肆什么是漂亮作文第一章l书写漂亮：字迹工整，没有涂改l分段漂亮：hamburger writingl内容漂亮：要点齐全，字数够l词句漂亮：亮点词，亮点句子，死去活来漂亮作文漂亮作文漂亮作文漂亮作文漂亮作文怎么评第二章怎么写漂亮作文第三章元代陶宗仪南村辍耕录：乔吉博学多能，以乐府称，尝云：“作乐府亦有法，曰六字是也。”大致起要美丽，中要浩荡，结要响亮。尤贵在首尾贯穿，意思清新。苟能若是，斯可以言乐府矣。1.被动语态2.现在分词作主语1. I that our school Pingpong Team is looking for ne

2、w members among us students.2. that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and confused about the Chinese customs, I am writing to put forward some advice.状语从句I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.I am writing to invite you to attend the Music Festival t

3、o be held from 8：00 a. m .to 5：00 p.m. next Sunday in my school.Im writing to let you know that we will have a volleyball match next month.How are you doing? Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and confused about the Chinese customs, I am writing to put forward some advice

4、.Im LiHua, an outgoing boy, who is studying in London. I am writing to apply to be a volunteer of your team, having heard that a Chinese Painting Exhibition will be held in this local city.In order to have a better understanding of our school, an outstanding English short movie about our school will

5、 be shown in the library from 2:30 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th.I am Li Hua, I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor.Im sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.If you are able to

6、come with us, please let us know and well wait for you at the gate at 9 in the morning.All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.If you have any other problems, please dont hesitate to contact me.I would appreciate it if this wonderful chance would be offered to m

7、e.Dont hesitate to take part! Im sure you will benefit a lot and your Chinese will make much progress.Looking forward to your reply. And Id be really thankful.Once again, I am deeply sorry for any inconvenience caused and please accept my sincere apology.作文的进阶之路第四章不同程度下，学生的作文不同程度下，学生的作文现状现状2030分分203

8、0分分2030分分3050分分3050分分5070分分5070分分5070分分70100分分70100分分70100分分100分以上分以上100分以上分以上100分以上分以上Continuation writing Jenny was the only child in her home. She had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and she ran out of the house angrily. She couldnt help weeping when she thought of the scolding from her

9、mother. Having wandered in the street for hours, she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat. She stood beside a stand for a while, watching the middle-aged seller busy doing his business. However, with no money in hand, she sighed and had to leave. The seller behind the stand noticed t

10、he young girl and asked,“Hey, girl, you want to have the noodles?”“Oh,yes.but I dont have money on me,” she replied.“Thats nothing. Ill treat you today,” said the man.“Come in.”The seller brought her a bowl of noodles, whose smell was so attractive. As she was eating, Jenny cried silently.“What is i

11、t?” asked the man kindly.“Nothing, actually I was just touched by your kindness!”said Jenny. “Even a stranger on the street will give me a bowl of noodles, while my mother drove me out of the house. She showed no care for me. She is so merciless compared to a stranger!” Hearing the words, the seller

12、 smiled, “Girl, do you really think so? I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you thanked me a lot. But it is your mother who has raised you since you were a baby. Can you number the times she cooked for you? Have you expressed your gratitude to her?” Jenny sat there, speechless and numb with shock;

13、 she remembered Mothers familiar face and weathered hands. “Why did I not think of that? A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel grateful, but I have never thanked my mum for what she has done for me.” On the way home, Jenny made up her mind to make an apology to her mother for her rudeness a

14、s soon as she arrived home.Paragraph 1Nearing the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath._Paragraph 2A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back._Task : a continuation(续写) of the story what happened _in_ the story what happened _ the storyParagraph 1Nearing the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath._Para

15、graph 2A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back._afterStep 1 ReadingTask 1 Read for information content contentwhowho whenwhen wherewhere whatwhat whywhyJennymothersellerthat afternoonthe house, in the streetran out of the househad a quarrel with her motherTask 2 Read for plot ParaEvent (动词动词

16、)Jennys Feeling(形容形容)Para1Para29The seller _Jenny _,and Jenny _ the seller a lot.The seller _ her how many times her mother _ for her and if she _ her mother.Para1011She _ there,_Mothers familiar face and weathered hands. Realizing her mistakes, she _ to go home to _ her mother.Jenny _ her mother, _

17、home and a few hours later,felt a little _. quarreled withlefthungrybrought a bowl of noodlesthankedaskedcooked thankedsatremenberingmade up her mindmake an apology toangry, weep sadtouchedthankful/ gratefulmercilesscomplainmisunderstandingregretful, ashamed,guiltyreading-continuationRead for plot P

18、aragraph 1Nearing the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath.quarrel, ran out oftreat Jenny noodlesdecided to apologizeashamed, regretfulangry, sadthankful, touchedParagraph 2A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.beginningrising developmentClimaxEndingStep 2 WritingParagraph 1 Nearing the doorw

19、ay, Jenny took a deep breath. _Paragraph 2 A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back. Infer the contenttwo given beginningsTips两段首句定一框，二框二首正能量两段首句定一框，二框二首正能量Paragraph 1 Nearing the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath.Task 3 Outline possible plot（para.1）Reasonable动作，心理，情感，环境动作，心理，情感，环境/情景情景1）_ ,

20、she found her mother was not in.2) _ , she wondered, _3) Again, the scene of the quarrel appeared in her mind._4)_, she failed to control her tears. Paragraph 1: Nearing the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath. When she pushed the door open and entered the house, she found her mother was not in. Tired

21、 and sad, she sank down onto the sofa.“Where could my mother be?” she wondered.“Was she still angry with me?”Again, the scene of the quarrel appeared in her mind. She remembered her rudeness to her mother. Realizing that all the scolding from her mother was due to the fact that her mother really car

22、ed a lot about her, she felt rather ashamed, and tears began to roll down her cheeks.Paragraph 2 A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.Task 3 Outline possible plot（para.2）Reasonable动作，心理动作，心理/对话，情感，环境对话，情感，环境 Paragraph 2: A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back. She raised her head

23、 and saw the familiar face of her mother.“Here you come! Ive been looking for you,” she said, tired and relieved. Jenny couldnt help throwing herself into her mothers arms.“Mum, Im so sorry and thank you for all you have done for me.” She expressed her sincere apology and great gratitude. Hearing th

24、is, her mother smiled, patting her back gently. With a bright light streaming through the window, flooding the opening and spreading in a wide circle on the ceiling, they hugged together and too thrilled to say anything. Song of the Parting SonFrom the threads a mothers hands weaves,A gown for parti

25、ng son is made.Sewn stitch by stitch before he leaves,For fear his return be delayed.Such kindness as young grass receives,From the warm sun cant be repaid. 慈母手中线，游子身上衣。临行密密缝，意恐迟迟归。谁言寸草心，报得三春晖。Step 3 : Enjoy a famous Chinese poem Heaven and earth are generous, parents are generous. -天地宽大，父母恩大 Thank you for your listening!