（参赛）读后续写-获奖-完整版PPT课件.ppt

1、寻找细节，把握细节。 （考生）不知道如何写？（考生）不知道如何写？ （材料）有话说！（材料）有话说！有发现蛛丝马迹的有发现蛛丝马迹的细节吗？细节吗？_Details will lead you to the success!1.记叙文六要素：时间，地点，人物以及事件的起因、经过和结果。一般来说，人物信息是故事中情节发展的基础，有时甚至是事件发生的关键原因。Tip 1细读文本，抓住6要素及人物信息，寻找可延续的话题。1. all because of my mother-loving, sweet, yetabsent-mindedandforgetful.2. We bravely drove

2、 off again two hours later after wed returned home to get the om had forgotten.3. David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms ifMomwas driving while Dad sleily showed uom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world is asniceas she is. 2.标有下划线的单词或词组可以是阅读材

3、料中的关键词，也可以是原作者使用的比较地道和有特色的表达。Tip2 扫读关键词，关注提示词的作用，预测后续故事内容。 (弟弟) familytripmom3. 讲故事必有其目的，或证明某一理论，或阐明某一概念，或赞美某种美德，或谴责其罪恶等等。Tip3 思考文本主题，鼓励立志高远，与读者达成共鸣。1. Suoms characters/behavior? Why?2. What do you think of the authors family? Can you use some words(adjectives) to describe it ?3. Can you to ore impo

4、rtant for you on the road? the car. “Oh, wheres our tent? Mom!” David shouted suddenly. Mom exust be joking, my little boy! Look at this!” Dad came over and sighed “Its you that are absent-minded! Its not a tent at all! Its just a raincoat!” We cant helom then. She also burst into tearsoflaughter.fo

5、rt and encouragement, they decided to take a challenge to ily细读文本，抓住6要素及人物信息，寻找可延续的话题。When :_Where:_Who: _What: _It was a cold Sunday morning.In the ward (病房)a young mother/ her son (Bob)/ Fireman Philipmanaged to make her sons dreams come true.A little fireman1. a young mother stared down at her so

6、n who was dying. He looked so small and weak that even a gentle touch could break him.2. She bent down and whis much strength, and he was now coughing andout of breath, the mother could feelthe long-lost excitementcame back to her sons face. 4. I have always wanted to be a brave fireman.5. And to ma

7、ke him feel that he is a real fireman. ward(病房)was filled with sadnessout of breathdreamthe long-lost excitementdeeovedfire stationfire engineWednesday morningfire uniformBobfeelingsDream come true1. Suing a fireman with the helother and Philip?Bob will be offered some chances to experience 2. If yo

8、u were Bob, what would you feel of being a real fireman? How to express your inner feelings in details?Inner feelings 神情动作言语He smiled with satisfaction .His eyes glittered with delight.Bob was so grateful that said “thank you” again and again.His heart was filled with happiness.No matter what hae true will bring us the confidence and warmth in the world!Conclusion:_ helforted _,but also gave Bob the hope of _.The fireman PhilipBobs mothersurvival