中考英语写作公开课(25张)课件.pptx

1、A Lesson of Writing假如你叫肖鹏，是英语学习小组组长。 英语课上老师要求展开小组调查，内容包括爱好、理想职业及原因，然后由各组组长在班 内汇报。 请你根据表格内容提示，介绍本组成员及自己的情况，写一篇80词左右的调查汇报。SurveyNamesHobbiesDream JobsReasonsYi KewritingwriterBring her pleasure and successLi Ruitrave11ingguideExperience 1ife and 1earn about different cu1turesWu Fan1ooking after anima1

2、sWWF worker he1p anima1s 1ive in peaceI(Xiao Peng) 认真认真审题审题，明确写作主题、体裁、人称、，明确写作主题、体裁、人称、字数、结构、时态、提示要点和补充信字数、结构、时态、提示要点和补充信息。息。写作第一步假如你叫肖鹏，是英语学习小组组长。 英语课上老师要求展开小组调查，内容包括爱好、理想职业及原因，然后由各组组长在班 内汇报。 请你根据表格内容提示，介绍本组成员及自己的情况，写一篇80词左右的调查汇报。SurveyNamesHobbiesDream JobsReasonsYi KewritingwriterBring her pleasu

3、re and successLi Ruitrave11ingguideExperience 1ife and 1earn about different cu1turesWu Fan1ooking after anima1sWWF workerhe1p anima1s 1ive in peaceI(Xiao Peng) 一般现在时一般现在时 用简单的句子或短语用简单的句子或短语列出列出文章要文章要点。点。列列写作第二步 Yi Kes hobby is writing. She wants to be a writer. She thinks writing makes her relaxed

4、and it brings her pleasure and success. Li Rui likes travelling best. He wants to be a guide . He can experience different life and learn about different cultures. Wu Fan s hobby is looking after animals. He wants to be a WWF worker to help animals live in peace. My dream is to work at school . I wa

5、nt to be an English teacher.Because I like speaking English. I can be good with children and it makes me happy and pleased. 加加 加首尾加首尾，使结构完整。 可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。写作第三步：Yi Kes hobby is writing. She wants to be a writer.Writing brings her pleasure and success. Li Rui likes travelling best.

6、 He wants to be a guide . He can experience different life and learn about different cultures.Wu Fan s hobby is looking after animals. He wants to be a WWF worker to help animals live in peace.I want to be an English teacher.I like speaking English. I can be good with children and it makes me happy

7、and pleased. Boys and girls，Everyone has hobbies and dreams.Now let me share ours with you.I hope we enjoy our hobbies and our dreams can come true.a nice heada nice taila nice body连连 恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。写作第四步：英语写作时常用的过渡语英语写作时常用的过渡语: : 表并列或递进：表并列或递进：and, besides, bothand，not onlybut also，what

8、s more, 表转折：表转折：but, yet, however, though，although 表因果关系表因果关系：because, so, therefore, as a result 表先后顺序表先后顺序：First, Second, Third, Next, Then, Finally 表时间关系表时间关系：when, while, after, before, then, 表列举说明表列举说明：for example , for instance, such as 发表观点发表观点：in my opinion, to my understanding, from my poin

9、t of view, 表总结陈词表总结陈词：in general, all in all, in a word, generally speaking Boys and girls， Everyone has hobbies and dreams.Now let me share ours with you. Yi Kes hobby is writing. She wants to be a writer. She thinks writing makes her relaxed and it brings her pleasure and success. Li Rui likes tra

10、velling best. He wants to be a guide . he can experience different life and learn about different cultures.Wu Fan s hobby is looking after animals. He wants to be a WWF worker to help animals live in peace.I want to be an English teacher. I like speaking English. I can be good with children and it m

11、akes me happy and pleased. I hope we enjoy our hobbies and our dreams can come true.alsoalsoIn this wayIn this wayBecauseBecause美美 选好词句，美化美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。写作第五步： Boys and girls， Everyone has hobbies and dreams.Now let me share ours with you. Yi Kes hobby is writing. So she thinks writing makes

12、 her relaxed and it also brings her pleasure and success. Li Rui likes travelling best. In this way he can experience different life and learn about different cultures.Wu Fan s hobby is looking after animals. I want to be an English teacher. Because I like speaking English. I can be good with childr

13、en and it makes me happy and pleased. I hope we enjoy our hobbies and our dreams can come true.She wants to be a writer .She wants to be a successful writer in the future, just like Mo Yan. He wants to be a guide . He is looking forward to travelling abroad so he wants to be a guide in foreign count

14、ries. He wants to be a WWF worker to help animals live in peace. When she grows up, she wants to be a WWF worker to save the animals in danger and help animals live in peace.适当运用名言或俗语适当运用名言或俗语Time is money. 一寸光阴一寸金一寸光阴一寸金Time waits for no man.岁月不待人岁月不待人Knowledge is power.知识就是力量知识就是力量Where there is a

15、 will, there is a way.有志者，事竟成有志者，事竟成Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧熟能生巧Its never too old to learn. 活到老，学到老活到老，学到老Skill One Make your sentences correct Good good study, day day up. We should do sports a week once. Watch TV too much is bad for your eyes. There is going to have a meeting today. I hope I c

16、an come true my dream.once a weekWatchingbeachieveSkill Two Express in different ways When he spoke, he got more excited. The more he spoke, the more excited he got. We should learn English grammar. Its important to learn English grammar.A They listened to the music on the beach.B They enjoyed the m

17、usic on the beach.书面表达写作技巧审审列列加加连连美美中考作文评分标准中考作文评分标准第五档（很好）（第五档（很好）（25-21分）分） 完全完成了试题规定的任务，涵盖了所有内容要点，或在发挥时内容有新意或亮完全完成了试题规定的任务，涵盖了所有内容要点，或在发挥时内容有新意或亮点；语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚。点；语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚。第四档（好）（第四档（好）（20-16分）分） 完成试题规定的任务，涵盖了基本内容要点；语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯，完成试题规定的任务，涵盖了基本内容要点；语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。表达基本清楚。第三档（一般

18、）（第三档（一般）（15-11分）分） 基本基本完成试题规定的任务，写出了一些内容；语言有一些错误，行文不够连贯。完成试题规定的任务，写出了一些内容；语言有一些错误，行文不够连贯。第二档（较差）（第二档（较差）（10-6分）分） 未能恰当完成试题规定的任务，只能写出个别要点；语言错误较多，未能清楚传未能恰当完成试题规定的任务，只能写出个别要点；语言错误较多，未能清楚传达信息。达信息。第一档（差）（第一档（差）（5-0分）分） 未能完成试题规定的任务，只能写出与内容有关的一些单词；语言错误较多，未未能完成试题规定的任务，只能写出与内容有关的一些单词；语言错误较多，未能清楚传达信息。能清楚传达信息

19、。Rome is not built in a day.Tips: 1. 卷面工整。 2. 规范写作过程。 3. 多背诵美文，积累素材。Have a Try!Have a Try! 以以 “I have a dream”为题写一篇不少于为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文。个词的短文。 Sentence patterns for reference(以下句型以下句型供参考）供参考） My dream is to be/to do/to go I enjoy /like/prefer To make my dream come true, I If my dream comes trueThanks

20、!1.新闻特写则是用形象的事实说话。它常常抓住事物有特征的一面进行描述，比消息更细腻、更生动、更形象。2.由于新闻特写的画面感特别强，因此常给读者以身临其境的感受。3.“花香蝶自来，题好一半文”，一篇文章有一个好的标题，就像一个人有一双明亮有神的眼睛一样，留给别人的是将是十分美好而深刻的印象，同时也是文学修养，语言功底，思想魅力的最直接的流露，从考试的角度来说，更是作文质量高底的一杆标尺。4.对于话题作文的拟题我们一定要多一些有针对性的训练，掌握一定的技巧，达到需要应用时信手拈来，出语不俗的效果，感动自己，征服读者。5.这些根据材料提供的话题，进一步挖深、提炼出来的题目，源源源于材料而高于材料，加进去个体的感悟与理解，充满了理性的光辉，于平凡中见奇倔，也是很多喜欢定议论文的同学拟题一种好方法，很有思想深度。6.路在脚下，更在心中，“前方转弯”的路牌不是要你停下，而是提醒你该转弯了，心随路转，心路常宽。让思维转弯是人生的智慧，因为挫折往往是转折，危机同时也是转机。7.自主性是天才的基本特征。正如居里夫人所说：“我们每个人都有能力干好一件事。”古今中外，多少仁人志士以自主为经，以勤奋为纬，编织成功。8.生存于宇宙间，同顶烈日炎炎，共沐明月清辉，我不比别人多，也不比别人少。只要勇于展示自己的个性与风采，我就没必要仰视任何人。