高中英语基础写作-调查报告课件.ppt

1、基础写作图表类By Tracy0909广东高考广东高考你是校报小记者，最近进行了一次采访。你是校报小记者，最近进行了一次采访。时间：上周末对象：眼科医生时间：上周末对象：眼科医生(eye-doctor) (eye-doctor) 王教授王教授主题：我国中小学生近视主题：我国中小学生近视(short-sightedness)(short-sightedness)问题问题基本信息：基本信息：(1)(1)发生率：略高于发生率：略高于50%50%；(2)(2)人数：世人数：世界第一界第一专家解读：专家解读：(1) (1) 原因：很复杂；原因：很复杂；(2) (2) 治疗：没有哪一治疗：没有哪一种药物能

2、治愈近视；种药物能治愈近视；(3) (3) 建议：不要过度用眼；建议：不要过度用眼；多参加户外活动；多参加户外活动；(4) (4) 特别提示：如何握笔也和特别提示：如何握笔也和近视有关近视有关根据以上情况写一篇采访报道，包括如下内容：根据以上情况写一篇采访报道，包括如下内容：（1 1）采访的时间、对象和主题；（）采访的时间、对象和主题；（2 2）中小学）中小学生近视的发生率及人数；（生近视的发生率及人数；（3 3）专家解读）专家解读Last weekend I had an interview with Professor Wang, an eye-doctor, about the prob

3、lem short-sightedness. According to Prof. Wang, a little more than half of the students in middle and primary schools are suffering from it, rating the first in the world consequently. Related experts say that the causes leading to it are very complicated and up till now no medicine has been found t

4、o cure for it. It is suggested that we students not overuse their eyes and its of great help to our eye health to participate in more outdoor activities. Meanwhile another tip from the experts is that the problem has business with how we hold the pen while writing.20112011年深一模年深一模你是校报小记者，最近进行了一次采访。你

5、是校报小记者，最近进行了一次采访。时间：上周星期三时间：上周星期三 对象：王老师对象：王老师 主题：中学生英语单词拼写的问题主题：中学生英语单词拼写的问题基本信息：（基本信息：（1 1）约）约54%54%高中同学英语书法很差；高中同学英语书法很差；（2 2）约）约45%45%的英语词汇只会说而不会写的英语词汇只会说而不会写老师解读：（老师解读：（1 1）原因：）原因：考试未设拼写题型；考试未设拼写题型；平时训练不够；平时训练不够；学生懒于记忆学生懒于记忆（2 2）建议：）建议：提高认识，引起重视；提高认识，引起重视；加强训练，加强训练，掌握方法掌握方法根据以上情况写一篇采访报道，包括如下内容：

6、根据以上情况写一篇采访报道，包括如下内容：1 1采访的时间、对象和主题；采访的时间、对象和主题；2 2中学生英语单中学生英语单词拼写的现状；词拼写的现状；3 3老师解读。老师解读。oLast weekend I had an interview with Professor Wang, an eye-doctor, about the problem short-sightedness.o时间：上周星期三时间：上周星期三 对象：王老师对象：王老师 主题：中学生英语单词拼写的问题主题：中学生英语单词拼写的问题oLast Wednesday, I had an interview with Mr.

7、 Wang, an English teacher, about the problem of English word spelling among middle school students.concerning the issue ofoAccording to Prof. Wang, a little more than half of the students in middle and primary schools are suffering from it, rating the first in the world consequently.o基本信息：（基本信息：（1 1

8、）约）约54%54%高中同学英语书法很差；高中同学英语书法很差；（2 2）约）约45%45%的英语词汇只会说而不会写的英语词汇只会说而不会写oAccording to Mr. Wang, a little more than half of the senior middle school students English handwriting are very poor, and the percentage of the words which they can not spell correctly although they are able to speak is 45.sligh

9、tlyoRelated experts say that the causes leading to it are very complicated and up till now no medicine has been found to cure for it.o老师解读：（老师解读：（1 1）原因：）原因：考试未设拼写题型；考试未设拼写题型；平时训练不够；平时训练不够； 学生懒于记忆学生懒于记忆oHe said that the causes leading to it are that there are no specific word spelling checks in exam

10、s, and there are no enough training. The students are lazy to memorize. for spelling problemsalso pointed outWorse still,oIt is suggested that we students not overuse their eyes and its of great help to our eye health to participate in more outdoor activities.o（2 2）建议：）建议：提高认识，引起重视；提高认识，引起重视；加强训加强训练

11、，掌握方法练，掌握方法He suggested that we (should) raise the awareness and place great emphasis on that, and above all, we should master skills while we are training ourselves.Last Wednesday, I had an interview with Mr. Wang, an English teacher, concerning the issue of English word spelling among middle schoo

12、l students. According to Mr. Wang, slightly more than half of the senior middle school students English handwriting are very poor, and the percentage of the words which they can not spell correctly although they are able to speak is 45. He also pointed out that the causes for spelling problems are t

13、hat there are no specific word spelling checks in exams, and there are no enough training. Worse still, the students are lazy to memorize. He suggested that we should raise the awareness and place great emphasis on that, and above all, we should master skills while we are training ourselves.07-10年广东

14、高考基础写作题目统计年份 命题形式主要内容体裁题材07表格谁是你的偶像 调查报告学校生活08中文提纲奥运比赛项目射击介绍体育/热点话题09中文提纲 中小学生近视问题采访报道健康10中文提纲禁烟决定通讯报道热点话题Structure of the articleoGeneral idea (conclusion / tendency)（ 图表反映的问题或总体图表反映的问题或总体趋势）趋势）oFacts (to support the idea)（具（具体数据或事实）体数据或事实）oReasons （原因分析）（原因分析）oSolutions or personal opinion / sugge

15、stions (if needed) （解决（解决问题的方法或建议）问题的方法或建议）必备词句必备词句o点明主题的常用词句：点明主题的常用词句：上周，我们对上周，我们对人进行了关于人进行了关于的调查。的调查。Last week, we made / did / carried out a survey on among people.e.g. 上周，你市的一家报社对国庆长假期间市上周，你市的一家报社对国庆长假期间市民的休闲方式进行了一项调查。民的休闲方式进行了一项调查。A survey was carried out by an evening post in our city among t

16、he citizens on how they spent their last national holidays.Practice o受某英文报的委托，你最近就英语阅读兴趣以访谈的方式对某市10所高中的1000名学生进行了调查。Recently, we did a survey among 1000 senior middle school students from ten schools on their reading interests.o最近我国的教育专家对我国中学生所喜爱的最近我国的教育专家对我国中学生所喜爱的节日进行了一项调查。节日进行了一项调查。Recently some

17、Chinese educational experts did a survey to find out which festivals are the most favorite ones among middle school students.o图表反映的问题或总体趋势的常用词句：图表反映的问题或总体趋势的常用词句：o从以上表格中我们可以明显地看出，中国人从以上表格中我们可以明显地看出，中国人口在高速增长。口在高速增长。From the graph / table / diagram / chart above, we can see obviously that the populat

18、ion of China is increasing fast.o正如能够从图表中所看到的，正如能够从图表中所看到的，As can been seen from the table, .As we can see clearly from the table, .必备词句必备词句p图表内容描述的常用词句：图表内容描述的常用词句：p表赞成的动词短语：表赞成的动词短语：p表不赞成的表不赞成的动词短语：动词短语： 的人数是的人数是(数字数字) the number of people who is(数字数字) the number of people who takes up X% e.g.反对该观

19、点的人超过反对该观点的人超过5 5千。千。 The number of people who are opposed to this idea is over 5,000.必备词句必备词句agree with, approve of, be in favor of, be for disagree with, disapprove of, be opposed to, be against 吸烟人数：约吸烟人数：约3.53.5亿亿; ;分布：男性分布：男性75%75%女性女性25%25%oThe number of people who smoke is about 350,000,000.o

20、The number of men who smoke takes up 75%. The number of women who smoke takes up 25%.1. The number of people who smoke is about 350,000,000，and 75% are male while 25% are female.Practice 受二手烟影响人数约受二手烟影响人数约5.45.4亿亿; ; 因二手烟死亡人数超过因二手烟死亡人数超过1010万人万人/ /年年oThe number of people who are affected by second-h

21、and smoke is about 540 million.1.The number of people who died from second-hand smoke is over 100,000 every year.PracticeWhat is the worst, 分数、倍数、排序的常用词句：分数、倍数、排序的常用词句：o直接表达：直接表达：18% of , two fifths of .o变换表达：变换表达：50% of = half of25% of =one fourth of =one quarter of ;o倍数倍数+ +（形容词（形容词/ /副词）比较级副词）比较级

22、+ than+ than；o倍数倍数+ as+ as+（形容词（形容词/ /副词）副词）+as+asoThe number of students in our school is three times larger than that in theirs.o(4) 排序：排序：sb. / sth. rank the first place.o sb. / sth. is in the second place.(1) A put B in the first place.必备词句必备词句呈现数据的常用词句：呈现数据的常用词句：o表示对比、转折：表示对比、转折：oon the contrar

23、y, in contrast to, compared to / with, while, but, howevero表示比较：表示比较：oas as; twice the amount of; more than; less than; the same as; similar to; different fromo表示升、降：表示升、降：rise, on the rise, go up, climb, rocket, increase, double; go down, fall, drop, decline, decrease/reduce, on the decrease必备词句必备词

24、句 上周，你对全班50人就学校取消周六第二课堂(extracurricular classes)的决定进行了一次调查，调查结果如下：I made a survey last week among 50 classmates about their views on our schools decision to cancel the extracurricular classes on Saturday. The survey shows that 86% of my classmates agree to the decision while 12% dont agree but 2% do

25、nt voice their opinion.Practiceo分析原因的常用词句：分析原因的常用词句：o的原因是的原因是。The reason for is that .o有两个原因可以解释这样一种现象。有两个原因可以解释这样一种现象。There are two reasons that account for this phenomenon.o许多因素可以说明许多因素可以说明/ /导致导致/ /引起这个变化引起这个变化/ /成功成功/ /增增长。长。1. 1.A number of factors could account for (contribute to / lead to / r

26、esult in) the change (success / increase).必备词句必备词句Practice 上周，你市的一家报社对国庆长假期间市上周，你市的一家报社对国庆长假期间市民的休闲方式进行了一项调查。以下是调查结民的休闲方式进行了一项调查。以下是调查结果的原因分析：果的原因分析： 1. 1. 大多数市民觉得物价太高，生活压力大，大多数市民觉得物价太高，生活压力大，没有太多的钱出游。没有太多的钱出游。 2. 2. 一部分市民认为国庆期间游客太多，太拥一部分市民认为国庆期间游客太多，太拥挤。挤。 3. 3. 一部分市民则认为，可利用国庆放假好好一部分市民则认为，可利用国庆放假好好

27、地休息一下，以放松自己。地休息一下，以放松自己。 The reason for such a situation is that most citizens hold the view that they dont have too much extra money for tour due to high living expense and pressures in their lives. Meanwhile, a portion of the citizens think that most of the places of interest are usually over crow

28、ded during the national holidays. However, some others believe that it is the right time for them to take a good rest and relax themselves during the holidays.o归纳总结或发表评论的常用词句：归纳总结或发表评论的常用词句：o归纳总结：归纳总结：in a word, in short, to conclude, in conclusion, generally speaking; personally, in my opinion, as

29、far as Im concerned, from my point of viewo我们可以得出这样的结论：我们可以得出这样的结论：We can draw the conclusion that .We can learn / know .From the changes in the charts, we can predict that .必备词句必备词句Practice 最近你对你们学校高三学生的体育锻炼情况做最近你对你们学校高三学生的体育锻炼情况做了一次调查，结果如下：了一次调查，结果如下：坚持锻炼的同学主要参加以下体育活动：坚持锻炼的同学主要参加以下体育活动：70%70%同学坚持体

30、育锻炼同学坚持体育锻炼30%30%的同学基本上不锻炼的同学基本上不锻炼o一种放松一种放松o有利于学习有利于学习1. 1. 时间；时间；2. 2. 运动受伤或过度疲劳会影响学习运动受伤或过度疲劳会影响学习【写作内容】根据调查结果，写一篇短文，【写作内容】根据调查结果，写一篇短文，包括以下内容：包括以下内容：o有多大比例的同学认为不锻炼好及其理由；有多大比例的同学认为不锻炼好及其理由；o有多大比例的同学认为要进行体育锻炼及有多大比例的同学认为要进行体育锻炼及其理由；其理由；1.坚持锻炼的同学主要参加的体育活动项目。坚持锻炼的同学主要参加的体育活动项目。One possible version:30

31、% of the students questioned say they think it better not to have physical exercise. They believe theres no time to spare for sports for Senior 3 students and it will have a bad effect on study if the students get hurt or too tired in it. While 70% students think we should do necessary physical exer

32、cise. They hold the view that it is a good relaxation and will surely do good to our study. Half of them stick to running every day, and others prefer to play basketball, table tennis, badminton or do something else.必备词句必备词句p有关采取措施的词或句型：有关采取措施的词或句型：make efforts to do make efforts to do take measures

33、take measurestake stepstake stepstake actiontake actionIts time to do .Its time to do .Its about / high time that sb. should do sth.Its about / high time that sb. should do sth. sb. did sth. sb. did sth.Appreciation Here are some suggestions on how to build a harmonious relationship between students

34、 and teachers. Above all, students and teachers should trust each other, which may result in better communication and understanding. Whats more, students should respect teachers while teachers treat every student fairly. Only by trusting and respecting each other can they achieve their goal.提出建议或措施的

35、常用句型：提出建议或措施的常用句型：o对对我提出以下可能的解决方法。一方我提出以下可能的解决方法。一方面，面，；另一方面，；另一方面，I suggest some possible solutions to . For one thing, . For another, .o对对可采取一些切实可行的措施。首可采取一些切实可行的措施。首先，先，；另外，；另外，；能成功解决这个问题；能成功解决这个问题的方法还有的方法还有1.Some workable advice may be taken to . First of all, . In addition, another way contribu

36、ting to success of solving the problem is .必备词句必备词句提出建议或措施的常用句型：提出建议或措施的常用句型：o下面是对于如何处理下面是对于如何处理的方法。第一，的方法。第一，；此外此外，最后，最后。Here are some suggestions on how to deal with . To begin with, . Moreover, . Finally, .o我们应当采取一系列有效措施来处理这种情况。我们应当采取一系列有效措施来处理这种情况。第一第一；第二，；第二，；最后；最后。We should take a series of ef

37、fective measures to cope with the situation. Firstly, .Secondly,. Finally, .必备词句必备词句Practice Health Health Magazine Magazine 做了一项调查，了解到做了一项调查，了解到现在人们的健康状况在下滑，主要原因如下：现在人们的健康状况在下滑，主要原因如下：1 1工作忙碌，压力过大，缺少锻炼；工作忙碌，压力过大，缺少锻炼；2 2生活没有规律，熬夜，休息不够；生活没有规律，熬夜，休息不够；3 3不少人有抽烟、喝酒的习惯；不少人有抽烟、喝酒的习惯；4 4建议：培养良好的生活习惯，戒烟，戒

38、酒，建议：培养良好的生活习惯，戒烟，戒酒，多运动。多运动。According to the survey made by Health Magazine, compared with the past, people are in poorer health. One of the main reasons is that people are living a busy life without taking enough exercise and suffer lots of stress. Besides, most of them have to stay up late at nig

39、ht with so little time to rest, making their life become quite irregular. Worse still, a number of these people have got into the habit of smoking and drinking alcohol. To change this situation, one should form a good living habit by doing physical exercise regularly and try to keep away from cigare

40、tte and alcohol. 你校将开展禁毒宣传，请你根据下面表格的内容和饼状图写一篇短文。短文内容包括分析青少年吸毒原因，介绍毒品危害并给同学们提出建议，以便让同学们远离毒品。【写作内容】Practice毒品毒品的危的危害害1. 1.每年浪费每年浪费8,0008,000亿美元亿美元; 2.; 2.严重危害健康，加速死严重危害健康，加速死亡亡;3.;3.诱发或直接导致犯罪诱发或直接导致犯罪远离远离毒品毒品的建的建议议1. 1.不要和吸毒的人做朋友不要和吸毒的人做朋友; ; 2. 2.保持乐观的生活态度和保持乐观的生活态度和健康的生活方式健康的生活方式 In modern society,

41、drugs are becoming a more and more serious problem in the world. The trade of drugs is widespread, which costs up to $ 800 billion every year. _ _ _ _ As we all know, drugs do great harm to our health, not only causing people to die at an early age but also directly contributing to the happening of

42、crimes. As is shown on the chart above, 30% of the teenagers taking drugs are cheated into doing it, and 50% are driven by curiosity. Another 15% just seek excitement or try to get rid of their anxiety, and the rest try it for some other reasons. In my opinion, in order to protect us students from drugs, we should be careful to make friends and stay away from those who take drugs. Also, it s very important for us to lead a healthy life and hold positive attitudes towards life.