英语-必修一Unit-1-建议信课件.ppt

1、必修必修1必修一必修一Unit 1 FriendshipWriting如何写建议信如何写建议信how to write letters of advice如何写建议信如何写建议信how to write letters of advice写作三步曲写作三步曲说明写信目的说明写信目的提出建议以及改进措施，提出建议以及改进措施，忠告忠告表达希望采纳建议，或者期盼回复。表达希望采纳建议，或者期盼回复。注意！注意！语言要委婉、礼貌，顾语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。在提出缺及对方感受。在提出缺点之前，最好先肯定其点之前，最好先肯定其优点。优点。 建议信 三段式：第一段： 点明主题第二段： 陈述事实，提

2、出建议，给出理由 （是什么，为什么，怎么样）第三段：总结全文，表明希望适当运用模板适当运用模板 Dear Li Hua, Im sorry to hear that you have such a difficult problem. In your letter, you said+ 你碰到的问题你碰到的问题. My suggestions are as follows. Firstly, _,because_. Secondly, you should_, because_. Thirdly, youd better _.Only in this way can you _.Whats m

3、ore,_. I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you. Best wishes. Yours, xxx 建议信重点建议信重点第二段：第二段： 说明说明建议的内容建议的内容；（是什么）；（是什么） 提出具体建议的提出具体建议的原因原因；（为什么）；（为什么） 指出采纳建议的指出采纳建议的益处益处。（怎么样）。（怎么样）注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。方感受。 Opening sentences 开头句开头句1. I am very glad to hear from you.2. Thank you

4、for your letter.3. You have asked me for my advice with regard to and I will try to make some suggestions.4. I am writing in reply to 5. I am sorry to hear that表示建议的句子 You should/must Dont What/How about trying a new method? Why not find a new way? Youd better change your former plan. Id like to sug

5、gest you make a new plan. If I were you, I would Id like to suggest I strongly recommend You might as well 学会用not only but also表示并列含义 亲爱的朋友们，去参加课外活动吧，这不但会使你的校园生活变得丰富多彩，还会改善你的学习。Dear friends, please take part in after-class activities, which will not only make your school like colorful, but also impr

6、ove your learning.Closing sentences 结束语结束语1. I hope you will find my suggestions/advice helpful/ useful.2. At last, I hope I will be your best friends forever! Good luck to you! 3. Lets keep in touch. I do hope to hear good news from you. Read Xiao Dongs letter on page 7 and answer: What is Xiao Don

7、gs problem? Read the instructions at the top of page 7 and find out what you are required to do.Hes not good at communicating with people. He finds it hard to make friends with his classmates.I Lead inTo ask people their likes and dislikesTo join in discussionsTo show interest in others ideasTo shar

8、e his feelings with othersII BrainstormingYour advice for Xiao DongHow to writea letter of adviceStepWhat should be writtenPart IPart IIPart IIIPresenting the problemProposing the solutionConclusionDear Xiaodong, Im sorry you are having trouble in making friends. However, the situation is easy to ch

9、ange if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you: First, why not? If you do this, Secondly, you should/can Then/ That way, Thirdly, it would be a good idea if By doing this, I hope you will find these ideas useful. Yours, Miss WangOutlining建议信重点建议信重点第二段：第二段： 说明说明建议的内容建议的内容；（是什么）；（是什么） 提出具体

10、建议的提出具体建议的原因原因；（为什么）；（为什么） 指出采纳建议的指出采纳建议的益处益处。（怎么样）。（怎么样）注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。方感受。 Firstly, why not go and talk to people standing alone. I agree that this is difficult but that student may be lonely too,If you do this,Im sure you will soon have new friends. Secondly, you should beg

11、in the conversation by asking about their likes and dislikes,That way,you will soon find people with the same interests,because that is a good way to find new friends. Thirdly,it would be a goos idea if you try to join in a discussion. You may feel that is right.By doing this,you are letting people

12、know how friendly you are.So there should be no problem.It should provide you with some new friends. 即时训练即时训练你是我们学校一名很热心的学生，得知我们你是我们学校一名很热心的学生，得知我们校要建设娱乐休闲中心，正在征求同学们的校要建设娱乐休闲中心，正在征求同学们的意见，请你根据以下几个方面的提示给校长意见，请你根据以下几个方面的提示给校长写一封写一封120120词左右的建议信。词左右的建议信。 1. 1. 娱乐休闲中心应该包括乒乓球室娱乐休闲中心应该包括乒乓球室和羽毛球室。和羽毛球室。 2

13、. 2. 最好在学生的课余时间开放。最好在学生的课余时间开放。 3. 3. 尽量不要收费。尽量不要收费。 4. 4. 写作分析：写作分析：第一段：引出话题，得知要建娱乐中心，第一段：引出话题，得知要建娱乐中心，想提建议。想提建议。第二段：建议建乒乓球室和羽毛球场。第二段：建议建乒乓球室和羽毛球场。第三段：建议课余时间开放，能使其得到第三段：建议课余时间开放，能使其得到充分利用。充分利用。第四段：免费开放，有些学生经济困难。第四段：免费开放，有些学生经济困难。第五段：简单总结。第五段：简单总结。Dear Mr. President, Its come to my attention that o

14、ur school is going to build a new leisure center. Im writing to ask you to consider the following suggestions. Firstly, Id like to suggest that there should be a table-tennis room as well as a badminton court. I think it would do great good if you could build the center with an eye to those students

15、 who are interested in playing table-tennis or badminton. Secondly, could the center open in our spare time? If so, we will have enough time to make full use of it. Thirdly, we will be more than happy if the center is free. As we all know, not every student can afford the extra expense. Thank you fo

16、r reading my letter. I hope you will consider my suggestions. If the center is built, it will greatly enhance student life here on campus. Yours sincerely, Li Hua范文范文建议信模版建议信模版Dear _, You have asked me for my advice with regard to(关于关于) _, and I will try to make some conductive(建设性的建设性的) suggestions

17、 here. In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions:_(建议的内容建议的内容) . I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you for further details. Good Luck with your_(祝愿祝愿) Yours sincerely 签名签名English/exams 假设你是某报社编辑，最近收到读者李华的假设你是某报社编辑，最近收到读

18、者李华的一封来信。一封来信。信中李华提到自己在学习英语的过信中李华提到自己在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难，这让他很苦恼。程中遇到了困难，这让他很苦恼。请根据以上请根据以上提示，写一篇提示，写一篇回给李华的建议信回给李华的建议信，帮他解决困，帮他解决困难，促进学习。难，促进学习。 建议内容：建议内容： 1. 1. 不要灰心，保持良好心态；不要灰心，保持良好心态； 2. 2. 掌握学习方法；掌握学习方法； 3. 3. 培养对英语的兴趣爱好。培养对英语的兴趣爱好。 第一步：审题第一步：审题养成重视审题的习惯。养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的，但审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例，谈谈如何审题

19、：思考的问题思考的问题样题分析样题分析第几人称？（第几人称？（person）文章的题材是什么？文章的题材是什么？要写的文章主题是什么要写的文章主题是什么 (topic)怎样安排信息点的顺序？怎样安排信息点的顺序？ (order)动作是什么时候发生的？动作是什么时候发生的？(时态时态) (when)第一人称第一人称一封信一封信对英语学习给出建议对英语学习给出建议说理的逻辑性说理的逻辑性一般现在时一般现在时 假设你是某报社编辑，最近收到读者李华的一封来假设你是某报社编辑，最近收到读者李华的一封来信。信。信中李华提到自己是高一的学生，在学习英语的信中李华提到自己是高一的学生，在学习英语的过程中遇到了

20、困难，这让他很苦恼。过程中遇到了困难，这让他很苦恼。请根据以上提示，请根据以上提示，写一篇回给李华的建议信，帮他解决困难，促进学习写一篇回给李华的建议信，帮他解决困难，促进学习。建议：建议：1. 1. 保持良好心态；保持良好心态； 2. 2. 掌握学习方法：掌握学习方法： 如坚持每天记单词，读英语课文；多如坚持每天记单词，读英语课文；多 练、多问等。练、多问等。 3. 3. 培养对英语学习的兴趣爱好。培养对英语学习的兴趣爱好。 develop an interest in learning English 坚持每天记单词：坚持每天记单词： insist on/ persist in doing

21、 insist on/ persist in remembering words every day Dear Li Hua, Im sorry to hear that you have such a difficult problem. In your letter, you said you have some difficulties in learning English. This is a normal problem that every student could suffer, so I think I can give you some useful suggestion

22、s. My suggestions/ advice are as follows. Firstly, you should listen to the teachers carefully in the class. Secondly, the best way to learn English is reading it well and knowing the meanings of it. Thirdly, you can speak English with your classmates and teachers, which can improve your listening a

23、nd speaking abilities. Whats more, the most important advice is reading English books before the class and after the class. 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。要点：要点： 参加中文学习班；参加中文学习班； 看中文书刊、电视；看中文书刊、电视； 学唱中文歌曲；学唱中文歌曲； 交中国朋友。交中国朋友。注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语

24、已给出。注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已给出。Dear Peter, Im glad to hear that you can ask for my advice no how to learn Chinese well._ _Best wishes,Li HuaHomework:Dear Peter,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a

25、Chinese course, as youll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers, and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so youll lea

26、rn and remember Chinese words more easily. In addition, You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.Try writing to me in Chinese next time.Best wishes, Li Hua 第二篇建议信：第二篇建议信： 对于我的朋友花大量时间上网，耽误学对于我的朋友花大量时间上网，耽误学习的建议信习的建议信建议内容：建议内容：1）和他面对面地交流、沟

27、通；）和他面对面地交流、沟通；2）给她发邮件或短信；）给她发邮件或短信；3）告诉他学习的重要性。）告诉他学习的重要性。Homework: Dear Li Hua, Im sorry to hear that you have such a difficult problem. In your letter, you said your friend spends most of his time chatting on the Internet and often goes to the Internet cafe instead of attending classes. You reall

28、y want to help him out but you dont know what to do with it/ how to help him. Well. I would like to give my advice for you. My advice are as follows. Firstly, I think you should have a talk with him sincerely. Because if your friend skips classes, he is not going to do well at school. Secondly, you

29、can e-mail him or leave a message. Thirdly, you should tell him the importance of study. Because every one of us just has one chance to go to high school, he should study hard and not waste time in indulging on the Internet. In a word, I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you. / Best wishes. Yo

30、urs, Editor Homework 假定你是某中学的学生李华，请用英语给出版社的编辑写假定你是某中学的学生李华，请用英语给出版社的编辑写一封信，一封信，表达你对现在使用的英语教材的看法，表达你对现在使用的英语教材的看法，主要内容主要内容包括：包括： 优点：优点：1.话题广泛话题广泛 : 2.图片丰富图片丰富 3.有助于提高学习兴趣有助于提高学习兴趣 建议：适当降低词汇难度建议：适当降低词汇难度Dear Editor, As a student reader, I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by you

31、r house._常用关联词1. 表示并列的过渡词或短语 as well; or; too; also; as well as; and ; not onlybut also. ; both and. either or ; neithernor First；Second; Third For one thing; For another (thing)2. 表示递进的过渡词或短语 Moreover ; Whats more; Besides; Whats worse,3. 表表转折转折对比对比的过渡词的过渡词: instead of, but, however, on the contrar

32、y, although, different from, despite in spite of, Some ;Others On the one hand,;On the other hand, 4. 表原因原因的过渡词: because, because of, since, as, for, now that, thanks to, due to（由于） 5.表结果结果的过渡词: so, thus, therefore, as a result, so that, then, 6.表条件条件的过渡词: if, unless , as long as7.表时间时间的过渡词: recentl

33、y, finally, at the same time, at last, from now on, 8.表特定的顺序顺序关系的过渡词:first, firstly, second, secondly, third, thirdly, above all, first of all, then, next, finally, in the end, at last9.表换一种方式换一种方式表达的过渡词: in other words, that is to say10.表进行举例说明举例说明的过渡词: for instance, for example, such as11.表陈述事实陈述事

34、实的过渡词: In fact, To tell you the truth12.表目的目的的过渡词： for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order to, so as to13.表总结总结的过渡词: In a word(总之，简言之), in short(总之), generally speaking, finally, in conclusion, at last, in summary常用句型1. 对于某人来说，做某事很It is adj /adv (for sb to do sth) 学英语对于我们来说不简单 It is not

35、 easy for us to learn English2.不明白/想知道I wonder +疑问词/if 我想知道怎么能减肥 I wonder how to lose weight. 3.做某事的最好的办法就是1) The best way to do sth is to do 2) There is no better way to do sth than to do sth 学好英语的最佳途径就是阅读浅显的英语书籍 1) The best way to learn English well is to read many easy English book. 2) There is n

36、o better way to learn English than to read many easy English book.4.学会用定语从句定语从句拓展句意教材当中有许多好看的图片，这些图片能够帮助我们更好的理解英语。 There are many beautiful and colorful pictures, which can help us understand English better.一些教材当中有些生词或表达、表情（expressions），这些对于我们来说很难。Some of the texts have too many new words and expressions which are hard for us.