（新教材）牛津译林版（2019版）英语选择性必修一应用文写作 通知邀请信 .pptx

1、I am Li Hua. I have many friends worldwide.I am so busy writing letters/emails.Thousands of students pretend to be me. 通知&邀请信高中英语应用文写作之高中英语应用文写作之文体概述文体概述 通知是上级对下级、组织对成员或平行单位之间通知是上级对下级、组织对成员或平行单位之间部署工作、传达事情或召开会议等所使用的应用文。部署工作、传达事情或召开会议等所使用的应用文。常考的话题有常考的话题有活动、展览、比赛、讲座活动、展览、比赛、讲座等事项通知。等事项通知。通知要求言简意赅

2、、措辞得当、时间及时。通知要求言简意赅、措辞得当、时间及时。通知的结构通知的结构 通知一般由标题、正文和结尾三部分组成。通知通知一般由标题、正文和结尾三部分组成。通知标题一般为标题一般为 Notice，居中。然后是正文，正文之后，居中。然后是正文，正文之后，通知发布的单位或个人署名通常放在右下角，若有发通知发布的单位或个人署名通常放在右下角，若有发布时间也放在右下角。通常包括三部分内容：布时间也放在右下角。通常包括三部分内容：假如你是学生会主席李华，为了让外国人了解中国传统文化，学生会将进行“唐诗吟诵大赛” (Tang Poetry Recitation Contest)，特邀请学校国际部学生

3、参加，请你根据提示写一则通知。主要内容包括：1大赛目的和意义；2主办方：校学生会；时间：2021年6月30日；地点：校报告厅 (assembly hall)；3范围：唐诗三百首 (Three Hundred Tang Poems)。注意：1.词数80左右，开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。NoticeDo you want to have a further knowledge of Chinese culture？_Li Hua构思构思第一段：大赛的目的及名称第一段：大赛的目的及名称第二段：大赛的时间、地点及对象第二段：大赛的时间、地点及对象第三段：呼吁

4、大家积极参赛第三段：呼吁大家积极参赛1.学生会将组织一次唐诗朗诵比赛，旨在于提高学生对古诗以学生会将组织一次唐诗朗诵比赛，旨在于提高学生对古诗以及中国传统文化的鉴赏力。及中国传统文化的鉴赏力。Para.1大赛的目的及名称大赛的目的及名称The Student Union will organize a Tang Poetry Recitation Contest， which aims to improve studentsappreciation of ancient poems and traditional Chinese culture.2.我愿向大家介绍一些具体情况。我愿向大家介绍一

5、些具体情况。Id like to share with you some details.3.按计划，比赛将于按计划，比赛将于2021年年6月月30日在学校报告厅举行。日在学校报告厅举行。Para.2 大赛的时间、地点及对象大赛的时间、地点及对象As scheduled, the contest is to be held at school assembly hall on Jun. 30th, 2021 .4.你应该在比赛前做好准备。你应该在比赛前做好准备。You are supposed to get prepared before the contest.5.建议你读唐诗三百首，学会欣

6、赏中国古代文化之美。建议你读唐诗三百首，学会欣赏中国古代文化之美。Para.2 大赛的时间、地点及对象大赛的时间、地点及对象Its recommended that you should read Three Hundred Tang Poems, and learn to appreciate the beauty of ancient Chinese culture.6.对中国文化感兴趣和有热情的同学，请尽快报名参加。对中国文化感兴趣和有热情的同学，请尽快报名参加。Whoever feels interested and has a passion for Chinese culture，

7、please sign up for the contest as soon as possible.8.不要犹豫，去参加吧不要犹豫，去参加吧!我相信你会受益良多，取得更大的进步。我相信你会受益良多，取得更大的进步。Para.3 呼吁大家积极参赛呼吁大家积极参赛Dont hesitate to take part in it! Im sure you will benefit a lot and gain much progress.7.不要错过获奖的机会，一些有吸引力的奖品正等着你。不要错过获奖的机会，一些有吸引力的奖品正等着你。Dont miss the chance of being a

8、 winner，and some appealing prizes are eagerly waiting for you. NoticeDo you want to have a further knowledge of Chinese culture? Here comes your opportunity: the Student Union will organize a Tang Poetry Recitation Contest, which aims to improve students apprectiation of ancient poems and traditiona

9、l Chinese culture. Id like to share with you some details. As scheduled, the contest is to be held at the school assembly hall on Jun. 30th，2021. You are supposed to get prepared before the contest. Above all, its recommended that you should read Three Hundred Tang Poems, and learn to appreciate the

10、 beauty of ancient Chinese culture. Whoever feels interested and has a passion for Chinese culture, please sign up for the contest as soon as possible. Dont hesitate to take part in it,and some appealing prizes are eagerly waiting for you. Im sure you will benefit a lot and gain much progress. 课堂练习课

11、堂练习你受学生会委托写一则通知，请大家参加“英文读诗报告会(an English Poem Seminar)”活动，内容包括： 1. 活动的目的、时间和地点； 2. 推荐一首读过的好诗： 3. 谈谈推荐的理由。注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。首段：活动的目的及名称首段：活动的目的及名称主体段落：活动的时间、地点及具体内容主体段落：活动的时间、地点及具体内容结尾：呼吁大家参加并告知参与方式结尾：呼吁大家参加并告知参与方式1. 为了分享阅读好的英文诗歌乐趣，激发我们学习英语的兴趣，为了分享阅读好的英文诗歌乐趣，激发我们学习英语的兴趣，我们学校将举办英语读

12、诗研讨会。我们学校将举办英语读诗研讨会。Para.1 活动的目的及名称活动的目的及名称In order to share the fun of reading good English poems and arouse our interest in learning English, an English Poem Seminar is to be held in our school.2. 按照预定时间，研讨会将于本周五下午三点钟在报告厅举行。按照预定时间，研讨会将于本周五下午三点钟在报告厅举行。Para. 2 活动的时间、地点及具体内容活动的时间、地点及具体内容As scheduled,

13、 the seminar will be held in the Lecture Hall at three oclock this Friday afternoon.3. 欢迎每个人参加，并推荐一首让你印象深刻或鼓舞你的英文诗欢迎每个人参加，并推荐一首让你印象深刻或鼓舞你的英文诗歌。歌。Para. 2 活动的时间、地点及具体内容活动的时间、地点及具体内容Everyone is welcome to attend it and recommend an English poem that impresses or inspires you.4. 非常希望你能分享你对这首诗的理解，以及你为什么喜

14、欢读它。非常希望你能分享你对这首诗的理解，以及你为什么喜欢读它。Para. 2 活动的时间、地点及具体内容活动的时间、地点及具体内容It is highly desirable that you should share your understanding of the poem and the reasons why you take delight in reading it.5. 任何想参加的人请在这周五之前发邮件到任何想参加的人请在这周五之前发邮件到。Para. 3 呼吁大家参加并告知参与方式呼吁大家参加并告知参与方式Anyone who wish to participate in

15、 it should send an email to before this Friday.NoticeIn order to share the fun of reading good English poems and arouse our interest in learning English, an English Poem Seminar is to be held in our school. As scheduled, the seminar will be held in the lecture room at three oclock this Friday aftern

16、oon. Everyone is welcome to attend it and recommend a poem that impresses or inspires you. In addition, it is highly desirable that you should share your understanding of the poem and the reasons why you take delight in reading it. A good poem can affect our life in one way or another. Anyone who wi

17、sh to participate in it should send an email to before this Friday. The Student Union 邀请信是邀请亲朋好友或知名人士、专家等参加邀请信是邀请亲朋好友或知名人士、专家等参加某项活动时所发的邀约性书信。要求叙事一定要清楚、某项活动时所发的邀约性书信。要求叙事一定要清楚、明白，要写清楚以下三个方面的内容：明白，要写清楚以下三个方面的内容：年份卷名命题形式题材体裁词数分值 2019全国III 文字提纲邀请英国朋友参加学校音乐节邀请信100252017全国II文字提纲邀请外教参观中国剪纸艺术展邀请信100252017全

18、国III文字提纲邀请留学生朋友参加校乒乓球队邀请信100252016全国II文字提纲邀请英国朋友提供作品参展邀请信100252020浙江1月文字提纲邀请英国朋友参加演讲比赛邀请信80152017浙江11月文字提纲邀请外教到家里过春节邀请信8015 Comparison-requirements Comparison-requirements（2019全国III）假定你是李华, 你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容包括：1. 时间； 2. 活动安排； 3. 欢迎他表演节目。（2017全国II）假定你是李华, 想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸艺术展，请给他写封邮件，

19、内容包括：1. 展览时间、地点；2. 展览内容。（2017全国III）假定你是李华, 你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入，内容包括：1. 球队活动；2. 报名方式及截止日期。（2020浙江1月）假定你是李华, 你校将举办外国学生中文演讲比赛，请给你的英国朋友George写封邮件，邀请他参加。内容包括：1. 比赛时间；2. 演讲话题；3. 报名方式。（2017浙江11月）假定你是李华, 得知外教Mr. Hall寒假不回国，想邀请他到你家过春节。请你给他写一封信，内容包括：1. 时间；2. 一同过节的家人；3. 活动。邀请收信人参加某项活动的书信(节日、

20、聚会、展览、比赛等)（2016全国II）假定你是李华, 你校摄影俱乐部将举办国际中学生摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信，请他提供作品。信的内容包括：1. 摄影主题: 环境保护；2. 展览时间；3. 投稿邮箱。 Comparison-samples Comparison-samples(2020浙江1月) Dear George, It is a great privilege for me to invite you to participate in the Chinese Speech Contest for foreigners at my school on March 1st

21、, 2020. The theme of the upcoming speech contest is British Culture which we sincerely expect to know from a native of Britain. Undoubtedly, your fluent Chinese, excellent public speaking skills, along with profound knowledge will not fail to impress and inspire the audience. If you accept our invit

22、ation, we will be more than pleased to welcome you to register at the Student Organization Office. We are looking forward to your stunning performance. Yours, Li Hua (2017全国II) Dear Henry, I am Li Hua, one of your students. Im writing to invite you to visit the paper-cutting exhibition. Paper-cuttin

23、g is one of Chinese traditions and Im sure you will like it. The exhibition will be held in the local museum next Saturday, when some famous Chinese artists will perform. Meanwhile, some beautiful works, collected from all over the country, will be exhibited there. It will be an art feast. If you li

24、ke, you can also join in paper-cutting activities for yourself. Im sure it will be an unforgettable experience for you. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua 发出邀请活动介绍（主题、理由、报名）发出邀请活动介绍（时、地、内容、理由等）表达期待表达期待Para 1 发出邀请 Para 2 活动介绍Para 3 表达期待 A letter of invitation A letter of invitati

25、on文体套语积累 词句丰富准确时态-现在&将来时间、地点主题、内容报名方式邀请理由被动语态 突出主体定从非谓 补充信息前后连接 条理清晰倒装强调 一句多译假定你是李华，得知外教Mr Smith喜欢中国传统文化，想邀请他到你家过端午节，请给他写一封信，内容包括：1. 时间；2. 活动安排。注意：1. 写作词数应为100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。构思构思第一段自我介绍并表明写作意图第一段自我介绍并表明写作意图第二段说明事由第二段说明事由(主题，内容主题，内容)及活动时间和地点及活动时间和地点第三段期盼对方接受邀请，并希望尽快得到回复第三段期盼对方接受邀请，并希望尽快得到回

26、复1.我是李华，是您英语班的学生。我是李华，是您英语班的学生。 得知您对中国传统文化非常得知您对中国传统文化非常感兴趣，我写信邀请您来我家庆祝感兴趣，我写信邀请您来我家庆祝5月月5日的端午节。日的端午节。Para.1 自我介绍并表明写作意图自我介绍并表明写作意图Im Li Hua, a student of your English class. Knowing that you are very interested in Chinese traditional culture, Im writing to invite you to come to my home to celebrate

27、 the Dragon Boat Festival on May 5.2.传统上，这是家人团聚的时候，我的父母和我的兄弟都会在传统上，这是家人团聚的时候，我的父母和我的兄弟都会在那里。那里。Para.2 说明事由及活动时间和地点说明事由及活动时间和地点Its traditionally a time for family reunion when my parents and my brother will all be there.3.我们会一起包粽子，吃一顿丰盛的晚餐。我们会一起包粽子，吃一顿丰盛的晚餐。Para.2Well make rice dumplings together , w

28、hich are traditional food for the festival and taste delicious. In addition, we will have a big dinner.4.我们还将赛龙舟纪念屈原，这一定会给您留下深刻的印象。我们还将赛龙舟纪念屈原，这一定会给您留下深刻的印象。Well also race dragon boats in memory of Qu Yuan, which will surely leave a deep impression on you.说明事由及活动时间和地点说明事由及活动时间和地点5.如果您能来，请提前通知我，我好去学校

29、接你。如果您能来，请提前通知我，我好去学校接你。Para.3If youre able to come, please inform me in advance, so I could go and pick you up at school.期盼对方接受邀请，并希望尽快得到回复期盼对方接受邀请，并希望尽快得到回复6.期待您的回复期待您的回复Looking forward to your reply.Dear Mr Smith, Im Li Hua, a student of your English class. Knowing that you are very interested in

30、 Chinese traditional culture, Im writing to invite you to come to my home to celebrate the Dragon Boat Festival on May 5. Its traditionally a time for family reunion when my parents and my brother will all be there. Well make rice dumplings together,which are the traditional food for the festival. I

31、n addition we will have a big dinner. Well also race dragon boats in memory of Qu Yuan, which will surely leave a deep impression on you. If youre able to come, please inform me in advance, so I could go and pick you up at school. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua语言流畅语言流畅一气呵成一气呵成语用得体语用得体书

32、写工整书写工整紧扣主题紧扣主题条理清晰条理清晰 高分作文特点及赏析高分作文特点及赏析第二节 书面表达 （满分25分）(2019年全国2卷) 假定你是李华，请写封邮件告知你的队友假定你是李华，请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris Chris 球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括：球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括： 1. 1. 比赛信息；比赛信息； 2. 2. 赛前准备；赛前准备； 3. 3. 表达期待。表达期待。注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。体裁：邮件（邀请信）主题：人与社会（7. 体育活动、大型体育赛事、体育与健康、体育精神）引导考生关注体育运动和身心健康，弘扬体育精神

33、。内容：1. 比赛信息；比赛信息；2.赛前准备；赛前准备；3.表达期待表达期待 （12个字）个字）优点：留给考生去想象、构建和发挥的空间更大；难度：考查学生能力、拉开差距；贴近学生生活，符合学生的认知水平和写作要求，突出对核心素养核心素养的考查。2019满分作文一：Dear Chris, , Im writing to keep you informed. The national , , is scheduled to be held on July 13th. Four teams of senior schools around the country will come to part

34、icipate in it. Additionally, we are expected to gather at the train station tomorrow morning. Since it is a rare chance to experience the high level , we are supposed to practice twice with great efforts after reaching the destination. . Hopefully, the competition will bring out the best in us and e

35、ven witness our victory!Yours, Lihua2019满分作文二：Dear Chris, our team is to participate in a game in several days. Im writing to to tell you some details. we will compete with Peking university for the of this . , you are required to practice the basic skills, lay a solid foundation for bringing out ou

36、r potential. Meanwhile, appropriate health care and a good mood also count. Since you are the key member of our team, your wonderful performance will surely fuel our success. Looking forward to your show time! Yours,Lihua2019满分作文三-黑马被直接提到满分2. 文章本身在5档，基本功扎实，行文流畅；3. 大量运用了与运动或排球相关的话题词汇，比如striker, attac

37、ker扣球手, blocker 拦网队员，volleyball court, pass the ball, fire the ball,以及语块表达on a daily basis 等，即便不够准确，这样的话题词汇的恰当运用，在高考考场作文中十分亮眼。 应用文应用文写作写作格式格式只是最起码的只是最起码的要求，要求，信息信息是否完全关系到文章是否完全关系到文章是否完整，是否完整，结构结构的合理安排才能的合理安排才能让文章层次分明，而让文章层次分明，而语言语言使用的使用的准确性和丰富性关系到文章的内准确性和丰富性关系到文章的内容是否饱满。容是否饱满。01好 印 象 卷面整洁02好 形 式 合理分

38、段03好 给 分 要点全面04好 内 容 虎头凤尾评分标准解读（6个好）0506好 逻 辑 巧用连词好 语 言 语言华丽对好文章的评分标准对好文章的评分标准： 切题、表达意思正确且无重大语言错误切题、表达意思正确且无重大语言错误。 1）本题总分为15分，按5 5个档次个档次给分。 2）评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 3）少于80词和多于120词的，从总分中减去2分。 4）评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的构的和准确性及上下文的连贯性。和准确性及上下文的连贯性。 5

39、）拼写与标点符号拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。 6）如如书写书写较差，以至影响交际较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。 评分原则评分原则：高一文火慢炖高一文火慢炖1. 狠抓书写规范；（书写与成绩的相关性研究）2. 理清语法，尤其是句法（1.简单句/并列句; 2.复合句; 3.非谓语; 4. with的复合结构; 5.特殊句式; 6.逻辑词）；3. 词汇分频分级分频分级突破（多进行写作词汇写作词汇翻译、造句练习）4. 尝试单元主题教学展开的话题词汇归类整理、开放性的自由写作练习。好词好句 “换” 出来作文常见句型：

40、1.我从我从.得知得知.(我得知我得知)I know that.I was informed bythat 2.因为因为（现象），人们（现象），人们 例：因为手机的出现，人们的生活发生了很大变化。Our living conditions are faced with a number of changes due toOwing to the phenomenon that, individualsThanks to, our life are experiencing huge changes, whichBecause/ Because of虎头句型虎头句型As a proverb sa

41、ys, “Everything has two sides”. On the one hand, ; On the other hand, （谚语开头） As an old saying goes, ”.” 谚语：注意短小精悍，能够广泛使用的。It is universally acknowledged that （众所周知.）In recent decades, individuals in increasing number are immersed in doing （最近，越来越多人喜欢做.）With the development of economy/society/culture

42、 . (随着什么.的发展.)好 内 容 虎头凤尾凤尾句型：凤尾句型： It is of great value for me to be in possession of the opportunity to do sth., and my sincere expectation is that I will bear it in my mind all the time.对我来说有这个机会去做.是既有价值的.我真诚的期待是我能永远铭记于心。With the development of society, So its urgent and necessary toIf every membe

43、r is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better. 随着社会的发展。因此,迫切需要。如果每个人都愿为社会贡献自己的一份力量，这个社会将要越来越好。好 内 容虎头凤尾好 逻 辑 巧用连词时间顺序: at the same time, all of a sudden, afterwards 递进: in addition(还有), furthermore(而且), moreover(此外) 转折:however(然而), on the country(相反)，after all(毕竟) 总

44、结: generally speaking(总体上说), in brief(总之), in conclusion(最后) 强调: indeed(确实), certainly(一定), surely(确定), above all(尤其) 对比:in the same way(同样地), just as(正如), on the one hand . on the other hand(一方面.另一方面)低低级连接词：按照时间级连接词：按照时间顺序顺序 first，second.中中级连接词：按照逻辑级连接词：按照逻辑顺序顺序 but, because, and.高高级连接词：非谓语级连接词：非谓语

45、动词动词 having done.5步检查法”挽救你的“烂”作文1查：查：时态、语态、主谓一致纠错: When I were a little boy, I always think that once I grow up, it will be much better.时态：When I were a little boy, I always think that once I grow up, it will be much better. 主谓不一致：When I were a little boy 主语不明朗：When I were a little boy, I always thi

46、nk that once I grow up, it will be much better.5步检查法”挽救你的“烂”作文2查：句子结构查：句子结构 （四个不如）（四个不如） 陈述不如倒装好， 状从不如分词好， 肯定不如否定好， 主动不如被动好。陈述不如倒装好陈述不如倒装好 例:我们学校坐落在一条河边。 Our school lies by the side of a river. By the sides of a river lies our school.例:他一听到呼救，就跑去救那个小男孩。He ran to help the little boy as soon as he hea

47、rd someone was asking for help. Hardly had he ran to help the little boy when he heard someone was asking for help. (No sooner.than.) 过去完成时过去完成时 过去时过去时 5步检查法”挽救你的“烂”作文2查：句子结构查：句子结构 （四个不如）（四个不如）状从不如分词好状从不如分词好 例: 因为我是一个学生，所以我应该努力学习。 Because I am a student, I should study hard . Being a student, I shou

48、ld study hard.肯定不如否定好肯定不如否定好 例：每个人都在或多或少影响着别人，也受着别人的影响。 Everyone is affecting others more or less, and at the same time affected by others. There is hardly a man or a woman who is not affecting or affected by others.（双重否定） 4 主动不如被动好主动不如被动好 例: 当今社会，我们也可以用手机来拍照或当电脑使用。 Nowadays, we can also use cell-ph

49、ones as cameras and laptops. Nowadays, cell-phones can also be used as cameras and laptops.5步检查法”挽救你的“烂”作文3查：句式重复查：句式重复 纠错: I know that. I learn that. It will be that. She thinks that And finally she decided that 突破主谓宾，用上倒装句、强调句、定语从句等 4查：词汇拼写、词数查：词汇拼写、词数 特别注意: 重点表达部分的单词拼写是否有误5查：查：Chinese-English好作文必

50、备五五大结构1.分词的使用2.with结构3.It 句式4.倒装句5.定语从句a.表时间先后（Having done 动作已完成） Hearing this, a few people began to run after him.b.表逻辑关系（主动/被动） Encouraged by the fact that , we made every effort to do 描述人物、景色、事件或者状态a.强调句 It is + 被强调部分+ that b.主语从句 It作形式主语的主语从句 c.形式主语 It is + adj./n. + for sb. to do sth. a.Only/Not onl