（2019版）人教版选择性必修第一册英语 unit 1 People of achieve 作文指导（含答案）.doc

1、1 Unit1 人物描写属于记叙文的范畴，它以写人、记事为主，以叙述和描写为主要表 达方式。 一篇好的人物描写一般分为三大部分， 即生平介绍、 事迹叙述和简短的评论。 时态的选择要视情况而定，若写人物的过去就用过去时态，若写人物的现在就用 现在时态。 基本框架 1首段：生平介绍 人物的出生时间和地点是必不可少的信息；介绍生平时要尊重客观事实，材 料要真实。 2中段：事迹叙述 选材要着眼于人物的生活背景及其成就事迹，以形成对比，起到突出人物的 特点和树立榜样的作用。选材要有重点，不必面面俱到。 3尾段：简短的评论 对所描述的人物的评论要客观公正。 常用词块 1at the age of four

2、 4 岁时 2a boy of sixteen 一个 16 岁的男孩 3make friends with her 和她交朋友 4set up a band of his own 成立自己的乐队 5a lively and smart girl 一个活泼聪明的女孩 6be warmhearted and goodlooking 热心肠而且漂亮 7become a famous actor 成为一名著名演员 8show great talent in music 显示出音乐上的非凡天赋 9be ready to help others 乐于助人 10encourage us to speak a

3、nd read more English 鼓励我们多说多读英语 11learn from each other and help each other 相互帮助相互学习 2 12be highly praised by the teachers and students 得到老师和同学的高度称赞 常用语句 精彩开头 1He has fair hair and blue eyes. 他有金色的头发和蓝色的眼睛。 2 Abraham Lincoln, the son of a poor family, was born in Kentucky on February 12, 1809. 亚伯拉罕林

4、肯，一个贫苦家庭的儿子，于 1809 年 2 月 12 日生于肯塔基州。 3 She is an ordinarylooking girl, but her kindness and consideration impress me most. 她是一个普普通通的女孩，但她的善良和体贴打动了我。 4He is a goodlooking, kindhearted man. 他是一个好看且好心肠的人。 正文佳句 1During her career life, she obtained 132 championships, including 4 Olympic championships. 在

5、她的职业生涯中，她获得 132 个冠军，包括 4 个奥运冠军。 2When he was still a boy, he showed great interest in literature.当他还是个孩 子的时候，他对文学表现出极大的兴趣。 3He/She is good at spoken English and even better at using computers. 他/她擅长英语口语，更擅长使用电脑。 4He went to college, during which he showed great interest in folk music.他上 了大学，在大学期间他对民

6、间音乐表现出极大的兴趣。 余味结尾 1He became famous for his new theory. 他以他的新理论而闻名。 2The people had come to love him as an inspiring leader. 人们把他作为一个鼓舞人心的领袖而开始热爱他。 3We regard him as our model. 3 我们把他作为我们的榜样。 4Lei Feng has been praised for his communist spirit. 雷锋因他的共产主义精神而受到称赞。 请根据以下内容写一篇文章介绍美国著名歌手、音乐家、诗人鲍勃迪伦。 姓名鲍勃

7、迪伦(Bob Dylan) 出生地美国 出生日期1941 年 音乐风格遵守美国音乐的传统 经历 少年时期展示出音乐天赋； 在高中的时候就组建了自己的乐队； 在读大学期间，对民谣产生兴趣； 1961 年，鲍勃迪伦开始致力于音乐 成就2016 年，鲍勃迪伦获得诺贝尔文学奖 评价作品充满创造力； 为美国文化以及世界的文化做出了很多贡献 【参考范文】 Born in America in 1941, Bob Dylan is a famous singer, musician and poet in America, who has observed the tradition ofAmerican

8、music all the way. When he was young, he showed his great talent in music.It was just when he was in high school that he set up a band of his own.He went to college, during which he showed great interest in folk music.In 1961, he began to devote himself to music.Bob Dylan has achieved great success in music and literature, which enabled him to win the Nobel Prize in 2016. Bob Dylan, whose works are full of creativity, has made great contributions to the culture ofAmerica and the world.