四级英语作文(总复习).doc

1、四级作文评分标准四级作文评分标准 阅卷标准分为五等：阅卷标准分为五等：2 2 分，分，5 5 分，分，8 8 分，分，1111 分及分及 1414 分，分， 每一每一 等都可上下浮动一分，各等的具体标准如下：等都可上下浮动一分，各等的具体标准如下： 1414 分分-切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本 无语言错误。无语言错误。 1111 分分-切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错 8 8 分分基本切题。表达思想比较清楚，文字尚连贯；但语言错基本切题。表达思想比较清楚，文字尚连贯；但语言错

2、 误较多，其中有少量的严重错误。误较多，其中有少量的严重错误。 5 5 分分-基本切题。表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严基本切题。表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严 重语言错误。重语言错误。 2 2 分分-条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有 错误，且多数为严重错误错误，且多数为严重错误 切题切题； 例：例：Trees为题目的作文：为题目的作文： Trees are mans friends. We can see trees everywhere. We plant trees every year. We can mak

3、e tables with trees. Trees also give us fruits to eat. I like to eat fruits very much. 修改后：修改后： Trees are mans friends. They provide man with timber, fruits and seeds. With timber, man can build houses and make furniture. Fruits are the food, which is necessary to us every day. As for seeds, they ca

4、n be used to extract oil 2002 年年 12 月四级考试作文月四级考试作文 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: It pays to Be Honest. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese. 1. 当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象。当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象。 2. 诚实利人利己，做

5、人应该诚实。诚实利人利己，做人应该诚实。 14 points:切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本无语言错误。切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本无语言错误。 Although honesty is believed to be a virtue, there are still dishonest people in our society. For example, some businessmen sell fake product to their consumers; some students cheat in the exams. Dishonest peop

6、le are short-sighted. Those who sell fake products may make money at first, but consumers wont buy their products any more. As a result, they will lose their fortune or even be sent to prison. By contrast, honest people gain a lot. Those who always tell truth or keep to their promise not only let ot

7、hers trust them but also gain respect from other people as well. Such persons are sure to have a lot of good friends. Because they are trustable and respectable, everyone is eager to make friends with them, Besides, it is easier for a person with a good record to get a good job. Generally speaking,

8、every employer wants his employees to be honest. So we can say that anyone who is honest will be paid back later. In a word, honesty wins trust, respect and honor. So it is important that we should be honest. 11 points:切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错 Nowadays, many people choose not be

9、honest in our modern society. We almost can find such things every day of our life: some students cheat in the exam for higher marks; some corporations tell wrong data to the public in order to get more investment; andsome doctors treat their patients with unnecessary and expensive medicines in orde

10、r to make money, sometimes(主语?) damaged the patients health, even their life. Seeing this situation, I think it must be changed(诚实带来的好诚实带来的好 处？）处？） . Being honest will benefit not only others, but also ourselves. First, your honesty will make others willing to trust you. Second, being honest can lea

11、d you to face your problem bravely, which helps to solve it. And the last, honesty surely helps to make the society more harmony. So, I think everyone should start to be honest and everyone should have the idea that our society can not do without honesty. 8 points:基本切题。表达思想比较清楚，文字尚连贯；但语言错误较基本切题。表达思想

12、比较清楚，文字尚连贯；但语言错误较 多，其中有少量的严重错误。多，其中有少量的严重错误。 In our modern social life, there are many examples around us show many people are cheated. (举例衔接？举例衔接？)Advertisements cheat people, salesmen cheat people, even ones closest friends cheat him or her. So many heartbreaks are heard everyday that we cannot he

13、lp asking: where is our honest exist? Everybody is taught honest in the primary school or even in the kindergarten(诚实的好处？）诚实的好处？）. Honesty does good not only to ourselves, but to others as well. If we are honest to others, we will be happier and be in a better mood. Otherwise, well feel guilty at la

14、st. To a company and its advertisement, honesty will bring it more consumer and more profit. If we cheat others, friends will not believe you and they will leave you alone. To a company, no consumer will buy your product again! So, as the above is said, it pays to be honest. Lets create a morally ou

15、tstanding social. 5 points:基本切题。表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言基本切题。表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言 错误。错误。 With the development of modern economic and industry, competitive is becoming more and more obvious（跑题）（跑题）. At the same time, the performance of dishonest is becoming more and more clearly（ 无例子）无例子）. Nowadays,

16、there are many dishonest performance in our society. （ 举例？利弊？）举例？利弊？）For example, some people found that he saled goods had past the preservation date. （主语？）（主语？）Not throw them away, the revised the preservation date and saled them again after several day. Another case in the point, a pair of shoes

17、was made from goat. However, in order to sale at a high price, the salers would say they were made from cow which has good quality. From the foregoing, we can see that dishonest does not only harm to yourselves but also harm to others. And it is no use only realize the harmness of dishonest. We shou

18、ld be honest from now on and be honest on our daily life. It is only that people all over the world are honest then our country will be beautiful and wealthy. 2 points:条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子 均有错误，且多数为严重错误。均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 Now in our society, many people are not honest in doing so

19、ming. we often can meet with soming happened cause by people who are not honest. For example, Now we take the bus need carry cents own, and when you upstairs the bus, you should put the cent into the money box. Every people do that, but some of the people put the other things instead the cents. For

20、another example, it is more normal that in the exams we can always find some students see others. I consider that every people should be honest. As a people, honest should be first, because it can make us to be increase and make our society develop. In doing everything we should be honest all, study

21、, work, life and so on. If you re honest, every people will be friend to you, and who will regard you good people. But if you dont be honest, people must unwilling to trath with you. So if you are want to be a good people, remember honest first. 评分时还考虑以下三个因素：评分时还考虑以下三个因素： l白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词白卷，作

22、文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词 而无法表而无法表 达思达思 想，想， 则给零分。则给零分。 2. 字数不足者酌情扣分字数不足者酌情扣分 81-89-1 分，分，7l-80-2 分，分，61-70-3 分，分， 51-60-4 分，分，不足不足 50最多给最多给 5 分分 3只写一段者只写一段者 0-4 分，只写两段者分，只写两段者 0-9 分。分。 作文最低分的规定：作文最低分的规定： 1.作文分为作文分为 0 分，总分若高于分，总分若高于 60 分，最后报导一律按分，最后报导一律按 59 分不及格处分不及格处 理；理； 若若 低于低于 60 分则报导时一律再减分则报导时一律再减 6 分

23、；分； 2.作文分大于作文分大于 0 分，小于分，小于 6 分，则按下面的公式计算成绩：分，则按下面的公式计算成绩： 最后报导分最后报导分=原计算总分原计算总分-6 分分+实得作文分实得作文分 高分作文标志高分作文标志 1. 四级：四级：120-150; 六级：六级：150-180; 2. 结构合理三段式；结构合理三段式； 3. 中心突出主题句；中心突出主题句； 将提纲的中文提示改将提纲的中文提示改 写成主题句放于段首写成主题句放于段首 4. 层次清晰：层次清晰： 1)首先首先:to begin with / firstly / first and foremost / in the firs

24、t place 2)其次其次:besides/in addition/moreover/ furthermore / in the second place 3)最后：最后：thirdly/finally / lastly / last but not least 最后最后 4) for one thing, for another thing 5) on one hand, on the other hand 5. 词汇闪光、亮点句：词汇闪光、亮点句： 1) 词汇：词汇： A:词汇不重复词汇不重复 5 个常用单词的替代：个常用单词的替代： 1. think claim / suggest /

25、 believe / advocate / maintain / suppose 2. good beneficial / profitable / helpful / sound / decent / positive 3. bad harmful / detrimental / hazardous / negative 4. advantage merit / virtue / benefit / profit / pro 5. disadvantage demerit /drawback / flaw / shortcoming /con /cost B:多实少虚多实少虚 (恰当，准确，

26、形象恰当，准确，形象) “好好” 虚词：虚词：good, nice （空洞）（空洞） 实词：实词：generous, humorous, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospitable “走走”: 走出房间：走出房间：walk out of the room （空洞）（空洞） 小偷：小偷： slip/sneak out of the room 小姐：小姐： sail out of the room 小小 孩：孩： dance out of the room 老人：老人：stagger out of the room C：短语优先：短语优先 I want to d

27、o that. - Im looking forward to that. I cannot bear/endure it. - I cannot put up with it. 2) 句子：句子： A. 长短句交叉长短句交叉, 变换句型变换句型: 被动代替主动：被动代替主动： we should pay attention to - Attention should be paid to. I think/believe - It is thought/believed that B.使用插入使用插入 语语 : 副词、连接词、同位语等作插入语副词、连接词、同位语等作插入语 however /

28、 therefore / for example / I believe 1.Other individuals, however, take the attitude that 2.One day, it is said, Newton saw an apple fall from a tree. 3.Mrs. Wang, my favorite teacher, gives me considerable encouragement. C.加定语从句，状语从句等加定语从句，状语从句等 The first reason which they point out is that， The se

29、cond reason they maintain is that， Also playing a part is that. 6避免低级错误避免低级错误 错：错：You taken me to your home, and cooked me, and said “Daddy, I wash you happy.” 正：正：You took me to your home, and cooked for me, and you said “Baby, I wish you happy 1997.01 1. 怎样理解怎样理解“熟能生巧熟能生巧”？ 2. 例如：在英语学习中例如：在英语学习中 3

30、. 又如又如 1997.06 My View on Job-hopping 1. 大学生了解社会的必要性。大学生了解社会的必要性。 2. 了解社会的途径了解社会的途径(大众媒介、社会服务等大众媒介、社会服务等) 3. 我打算怎么做。我打算怎么做。 1998.01 Harmfulness of Fake Commodities 1.目前社会上有不少假冒伪劣商品，为什么会有这种现象目前社会上有不少假冒伪劣商品，为什么会有这种现象 2.举例说明说明假冒伪劣商品对消费者个人社会的危害举例说明说明假冒伪劣商品对消费者个人社会的危害 1998.06 Do Lucky Numbers Really Brin

31、g Good Luck? 1. 有些人认为某些数字回带来运气有些人认为某些数字回带来运气 2. 也有些人认为数字与运气无关也有些人认为数字与运气无关 3. 试说明你的看法试说明你的看法 1999.01 Dont Hesitate to Say “No” 1. 别人请求帮助时，在什么情况下我们会说不别人请求帮助时，在什么情况下我们会说不 2. 为什么有些人在该说不的时候不说不为什么有些人在该说不的时候不说不 3. 该说不时不说不的坏处该说不时不说不的坏处 1999.06 Reading Selectively or Extensively 1. 有人认为读书要有选择有人认为读书要有选择 2. 有

32、人认为应当博览群书有人认为应当博览群书 3. 我的看法我的看法 2000.01 How I Finance My College Education? 1. 上大学的费用可以通过多种途径解决上大学的费用可以通过多种途径解决 2. 哪种途径适合我（说明理由）哪种途径适合我（说明理由） 2000.06 Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary? 1. 很多人认为有必要举行英语口语考试，理由是很多人认为有必要举行英语口语考试，理由是 2. 也有人持不同意见也有人持不同意见 3. 我的看法和打算我的看法和打算 2001.01 How to Succeed in a J

33、ob Interview? 1. 面试在求职过程中的作用面试在求职过程中的作用 2. 取得面试成功的因素：仪表，举止谈吐，能力，专业知取得面试成功的因素：仪表，举止谈吐，能力，专业知 识，自信，实事求是识，自信，实事求是 2001.06 A Letter to a Friend 你的朋友即将到来，你向他写信表示欢迎，对他的到来你的朋友即将到来，你向他写信表示欢迎，对他的到来作作 出安排，并提醒一些注意出安排，并提醒一些注意事项。事项。 2002.01 A Letter to President 假如你是李明，请你就本校食堂给校长写一封信，内容涉及食堂的假如你是李明，请你就本校食堂给校长写一封信

34、，内容涉及食堂的 饭菜质量价格服务等，可以是表扬，也可以是批评，可以兼而有之。饭菜质量价格服务等，可以是表扬，也可以是批评，可以兼而有之。 2002.06 Student Use of Computers 1.下图所是为下图所是为 1990、1995、2000 年某高校大学生使用计算机的情况，年某高校大学生使用计算机的情况， 请描述其变化；请描述其变化； 2.请说明发生这些变化的原因；请说明发生这些变化的原因； 3.你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有何困难或问题。你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有何困难或问题。 2003.01 It Pays to Be Honest 1. 最近社会上出现了一些不

35、诚实的现象。最近社会上出现了一些不诚实的现象。 2. 诚实利人利己；怎样做到诚实。诚实利人利己；怎样做到诚实。 2003.06 An Eye-witness Account of a Car Accident 假设你在某日某时某地目击了一起车祸，就此写一份见证书。假设你在某日某时某地目击了一起车祸，就此写一份见证书。 见证书须包括以下几点：见证书须包括以下几点： 1. 车祸发生的时间地点车祸发生的时间地点 2. 你所见到的车祸情况你所见到的车祸情况 3. 你对车祸原因的分析你对车祸原因的分析 2004.01 A Letter in Reply to a Friend 1. 建议报考的专业及理由

36、建议报考的专业及理由 2报考该专业的基本条件报考该专业的基本条件 3应当如何备考应当如何备考 2004.06 A Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attraction Your rule: a tourist guide Your audience: a group of foreign students Your introduction should include: 1. some welcome words 2. the schedule for the day 3. a description of the place the tourists wil

37、l be visiting (e.g. a scenic spot or a historical site, etc.) 2005.01 A Campaign Speech 1.你认为自己具备了什么条件（能力、性格、爱好等）可以你认为自己具备了什么条件（能力、性格、爱好等）可以 胜任学生会主席的工作。胜任学生会主席的工作。 2. 如果当选，你将为本校同学做些什如果当选，你将为本校同学做些什 么。么。 2005.06 An Incident 1. 向老师祝贺节日向老师祝贺节日 2. 从一件难忘的事情记述老师的教诲和无私奉献从一件难忘的事情记述老师的教诲和无私奉献 3. 如何回报老师如何回报老师

38、 2006.06 An announcement for a voluntary program 1校学生会组织一次暑假志愿活动，现招聘志愿者校学生会组织一次暑假志愿活动，现招聘志愿者 2本次志愿者活动目的本次志愿者活动目的 内容及安排内容及安排 3报名条件和联系方式报名条件和联系方式 2006.12 Spring festival evening 1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜观看春节晚会许多人喜欢在除夕夜观看春节晚会 2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会但有些人提出取消春节晚会 3. 我的看法我的看法 2007.06 Welcome to our club 1. 本社团的主要活动内容本社团的主要活动内

39、容 2. 参加本社团的好处参加本社团的好处 3. 如何加入本社团如何加入本社团 2007.12 What electives to choose 1. 各大学开设了各种各样的选修课各大学开设了各种各样的选修课 2. 学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课 3. 以你自己为例以你自己为例 2008.06Recreational activities 1. 娱乐活动多种多样娱乐活动多种多样 2. 娱乐活动可能使人们受益，也可能有危害性娱乐活动可能使人们受益，也可能有危害性 3. 作为大学生我的看法作为大学生我的看法 2008.12 Limiting the Use o

40、f Disposable Plastic Bags 1.一次性塑料袋曾经广泛使用一次性塑料袋曾经广泛使用 2.由此带来的问题由此带来的问题 3.限制一次性塑料袋的意义限制一次性塑料袋的意义 2009.06 Free admission to museums 1. 越来越多的博物馆免费开放的目的是什么？越来越多的博物馆免费开放的目的是什么？ 2. 也会带来一些问题也会带来一些问题 3. 你的看法你的看法 2009.12 Create a green campus 1.建设绿色校园十分重要建设绿色校园十分重要 2.绿色校园不仅指绿色环境绿色校园不仅指绿色环境 3.为了建设绿色校园我们应该为了建设绿

41、色校园我们应该 2010.06 Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling 1.如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写。如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写。 2.出现这种情况的原因。出现这种情况的原因。 3.这种现象导致这种现象导致 的结果。的结果。 2010.12 How should Parents Help Children to Be independent? 1. 目前不少父母为孩子包办一切目前不少父母为孩子包办一切 2. 为了让孩子独立为了让孩子独立, 父母应该父母应该 2011.06 OnlineShopping 1、现在网上购物已成为一种时尚

42、、现在网上购物已成为一种时尚 2、网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题、网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题 3、我的建议、我的建议 2011.12 Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by commenting on the humorous saying,“ Quitting smoking is the easiest thin

43、g in the world, I have done it hundreds of times.” You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. 2012.06Over-packed Goods 1. 许多商品都存在过度包装的现象许多商品都存在过度包装的现象 2. 出现这种现象的原因及其带来的后果出现这种现象的原因及其带来的后果 2012 年年 12 月月 【第一套试卷：】【第一套试卷：】 A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan1.你的基本情况你的基本情况 2.你申请贷款的原因、数额

44、及用途你申请贷款的原因、数额及用途 3.你如何保证专款专用以及你的还款打算你如何保证专款专用以及你的还款打算 【第二套试卷：】【第二套试卷：】 图表说明：图表说明： Education Pays, published every three years, presents detailed evidence of the private and public benefits of higher education. It also sheds light on the distribution of these benefits by examining both the increases

45、 and the persistent disparities in college participation and completion. In the three years between the publication of Education Pays 2007 and Education Pays 2010, median earnings for four-year college graduates increased more rapidly than those of high school graduates and the gap between the unemp

46、loyment rates of the two groups grew. In addition to earnings comparisons, the report documents differences in lifestyles, health, and other outcomes for people with and without college education. Differences in enrollment and completion patterns across demographic groups highlight the reality that

47、gaps in educational attainment are explained by a combination of money and other factors. 2013.06 【第一套试卷：】【第一套试卷：】 【第一套试卷：】【第一套试卷：】 2013.12 【第一套试卷：】【第一套试卷：】 【第二套试卷：】【第二套试卷：】 【第三套试卷：】【第三套试卷：】 2014.06 Suppose a foreign friend of yours is coming to visit your hometown, what is the most interesting plac

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