（2021新人教版）高中英语必修第一册记叙文概要写作学案.docx

1、1 记叙记叙文概要写作文概要写作 I.真题再现 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇 60 词左右的内容概要。 1 That cold January night, I was growing sick of my life in San Francisco. There I was, walking home at one in the morning after a tiring practice at the theatre. With opening night only a week away, I was still learning my lines. I was having tro

2、uble dealing with my part-time job at the bank and my acting at night at the same time. As I walked, I thought seriously about giving up both acting and San Francisco. City life had become too much for me. 2 As I walked down empty streets under tall buildings, I felt very small and cold. I began run

3、ning, both to keep warm and to keep away from any possible robbers. Very few people were still out except a few sad-looking homeless people under blankets. 3 About a block from my apartment, I heard a sound behind me. I turned quickly, half expecting to see someone with a knife or a gun. The street

4、was empty. All I saw was a shining streetlight. Still, the noise had made me nervous, so I started to run faster. Not until I reached my apartment building and unlocked the door did I realize what the noise had been. It had been my wallet falling to the sidewalk（人行道）. 4 Suddenly I wasnt cold or tire

5、d anymore. I ran out of the door and back to where Id heard the noise. Although I searched the sidewalk anxiously for fifteen minutes, my wallet was nowhere to be found. 5 Just as I was about to give up the search, I heard the garbage truck pull up to the sidewalk next to me. When a voice called fro

6、m the inside, “Alisa Camacho?” I thought I was dreaming. How could this man know my name? The door opened, and out jumped a small red-haired man with an amused look in his eye. “Is this what youre looking for?” he asked, holding up a small square shape. 6 It was nearly 3 A.M. by the time I got into

7、bed. I wouldnt get much sleep that night, but I had gotten my wallet back. I also had gotten back some enjoyment of city life. I realized that the city couldnt be a bad place as long as people were willing to help each other. Step 1: Read for text type and structure 1)The text is a(n) narration（记叙文）

8、. 2)Structure: 六要素：time, place, character, cause（起因）, process（经过） and outcome （结果）+主题（theme） Step 2: Find out the elements of the narration timeone cold January night 2 placeempty streets in San Francisco characterI, a small red-haired man causepara. 1I was walking home at one in the morning after a

9、 tiring practice at the theatre. As I walked, I thought seriously about giving up both acting and San Francisco. processpara. 2I began running to keep warm and to keep away from any possible robbers. para. 3I heard a noise which made me nervous and run faster, which was actually the sound of my wall

10、et falling. para. 4I ran back but my wallet was nowhere to found. outcomepara. 5Just as I was about to give up the search, a garbage truck driver returned the wallet to me. themepara. 6I realized that the city couldnt be a bad place as long as people are willing to help each other. Step 4: Link the

11、sentences by conjunctions（连词）（连词）if necessary: One cold January night, I was walking home, thinking about giving up both acting and her tiring life in San Francisco. To keep warm and to keep away from any possible robbers, I began running and didnt realize my wallet had been lost until I got home. T

12、herefore, I ran back but failed to find it. Just as I was about to give up the search, a garbage truck driver returned the wallet to me. Moved by this, I realized that the city couldnt be a bad place as long as people are willing to help each other. Step 3: Restate/ rewrite to make it shorter One co

13、ld January night, I was walking home, thinking about giving up both acting and her tiring life in San Francisco. To keep warm and to avoid any possible robbery, I began running and didnt realize my wallet had been lost until I got home. Therefore, I ran back but failed to find it. Unexpectedly, a ga

14、rbage truck driver returned it to me. Moved by this, I regain faith in city life and would probably stay on. Step 5: Check and revise Step 6: Copy your draft II.实战演练 I received a call today asking if I would be ready to bring food to a family in need. The mother was having a major operation and woul

15、d be lying down for several weeks. Of course, I responded with an immediate “Yes!”. As I planned the meal in my head, I reflected on how many times over the years I had been asked to prepare food. I have done so countless times with a very open heart. But the truly amazing thing is that I have recei

16、ved double over the course of my life. When my mother passed away, our house was filled with fresh dinners for weeks. A woman from the church of our community stopped by each evening with some food. The gift of food was her small way of trying to relieve our pain. Later in my life, when I was on bed

17、 rest during my pregnancy with twins, men of the church again stepped in to help. They arranged babysitting for my two-year-old 3 daughter, and brought lovely dinners to our house. Even when I was put in the hospital, my husband would bring cooked meals to my hospital room. How we relied on these di

18、nners to feed my tired husband and young daughter. Food is all about comfort. It feeds our bodies, but it can also feed our souls. When you hear people talking about their favorite holidays, it usually includes their feelings connected with sharing food. I know that I will have many more opportuniti

19、es in my lifetime to prepare food for others. It is truly a gift I want to prepare and deliver to someone in need. 参考答案：参考答案： One day I received a call asking me to prepare food for a family in need. I was glad to do that. When her mother passed away and when she got pregnant, the church of her community brought food to her family, which was a great relief. Thats why when others were in need of help, I was pleased to lend a hand.