（2021新牛津译林版）高一上学期期中英语联考试题精选汇编：写作专题（含解析）.docx

1、1 江苏省部分地区江苏省部分地区 2020-2021 年高年高一上一上学期期中英语学期期中英语联考联考试题精选汇编试题精选汇编 写作专题写作专题 江苏省徐州市铜山区 2020-2021 学年高一上学期期中学情调研英语试题 第三节书面表达（满分第三节书面表达（满分 15 分）分） 66. 假设你是李华，最近收到了笔友 Lucy 的来信，内容如下： Dear Lihua, I had an argument with my best friend Lisa for some very tiny things and said some bad words to her a few days ago

2、. Then, we never talk to each other any more. Now, I feel quite lonely sometimes and dont want to lose my best friend. I know she must be hurt by my words, and I am not sure whether she still wants to be my friend or not? I do want to change this situation, but I dont know how. I would be grateful i

3、f you could give me some advice. Yours, Lucy 请你给他写一封 100 词左右的回信，内容包括如下要点： 1.表示同情；2 给出建议（2 3 条） ；3 表达希望 Dear Lucy, _ _ _ Yours, 2 Li Hua 【答案】Dear Lucy, I quite sympathize with you and understand how you feel. To help you save your friendship, here is my advice. To begin with, having been friends with

4、 her for so many years, you should trust her. Maybe something happened to her or her family. So it may be a good idea to give her some time to be alone. Finally, you can ask another friend to help find out the reason, which is the key to solving the problem. I hope these suggestions are helpful and

5、that you and Tom are on good terms as before Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【分析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封建议信。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。 结构：总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求： 1.表示同情；2 给出建议（2 3 条） ；3 表达希望 3 第二步：列提纲（重点词组） sympathize，save，to begin with，trust，happen to，a good idea，find out，the key to

6、，helpful，on good terms 等等。 第三步：连词成句 I quite sympathize with you and understand how you feel. To help you save your friendship, here is my advice. To begin with, having been friends with her for so many years, you should trust her. Maybe something happened to her or her family. So it may be a good id

7、ea to give her some time to be alone. Finally, you can ask another friend to help find out the reason, which is the key to solving the problem. I hope these suggestions are helpful and that you and Tom are on good terms as before. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与

8、过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，本文可以使用表示顺 序的 to begin with，finally 等。 【点睛】高分句型 1 To begin with, having been friends with her for so many years, you should trust her.使用了非谓语动词作状语。 高分句型 2 So it may be a good idea to give her some time to be alone.使用了 it 作形式主语，不定式短语作真正的主语； 高分句型 3 Finally, you can ask another friend to hel

9、p find out the reason, which is the key to solving the problem.使用了 which 引导非限制定语从句。 4 江苏省泰州市三校（黄桥中学、口岸中学、楚水实验学校）联盟 2020-2021 学年高一上学期期中联考英语 试题 第七部分第七部分 书面表达书面表达 应用文（满分应用文（满分 20 分，含卷面整洁分分，含卷面整洁分 3 分）分） 62. 假设你是李华，你好朋友王伟刚刚升入一所重点高中，但面对陌生的同学、老师和校园，感到有点不 适应，发邮件询问你如何尽快适应高中生活。请你回复邮件，内容包括： 1、写信目的； 2、提出建议并说明理

10、由； 3、表达美好希望。 注意：1、词数 100 左右； 2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Wang Wei, _ _ _ _ _ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Wang Wei, Congratulations on your admission to a key senior high school. But faced with the unfamiliar environment, you feel it a bit challenging. Dont worry. Id like to share my experience with you. Firs

11、t, remember youre not alone when you have difficulty adapting to a new life. Moreover, its useful and necessary to set some practical goals, which will give you continuous motivation to study. Of equal importance 5 are good study habits, useful skills and a positive attitude. In time, you will be am

12、azed to find great achievements in all aspects. I hope these suggestions will be helpful and everything will turn out all right in the end. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给好朋友王伟回封邮件，帮助他尽快适应高中生活。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。 结构：总分总法 要求： 1、写信目的； 2、提出建议并说明理由； 3、表达美好希望。 第二步:列提纲 （重

13、点词组） be faced with； sharewith； adapt to； set some practical goals； a positive attitude； in time； in all aspects； turn out；in the end;have difficulty doing 第三步：连词成句 1.Congratulations on your admission to a key senior high school. 2.But faced with the unfamiliar environment, you feel it a bit challeng

14、ing. 6 3.Id like to share my experience with you. 4.First, remember youre not alone when you have difficulty adapting to a new life. 5.Moreover, its useful and necessary to set some practical goals, which will give you continuous motivation to study. 6. Of equal importance are good study habits, use

15、ful skills and a positive attitude. 7.In time, you will be amazed to find great achievements in all aspects. 8.I hope these suggestions will be helpful and everything will turn out all right in the end. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 1.表文章结构顺序：First 2.表并列补充关系：Moreover 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句

16、子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 【点睛】高分句型 1 First, remember youre not alone when you have difficulty adapting to a new life. (when 引导时间状语从句) 高分句型 2 Moreover, its useful and necessary to set some practical goals, which will give you continuous motivation to study. (which 引导非限制性定语从句) 江苏省苏州市吴中区 2020-2021 学年高一上学期期中

17、教学质量监测英语试题 第四部分第四部分 写作（共两节，满分写作（共两节，满分 30 分）分） 第一节第一节 书评（满分书评（满分 15 分）分） 76. 请以“My favourite book”为题，写一篇书评。要求如下： 1. 词数 100 左右。 7 2. 介绍书名、作者、概要等相关信息。 3. 说明你最喜欢这本书的原因。 （1 到 2 点） 【答案】 My Favourite Book Of all the books that I have read, I like Harry Potter best. It was written by a British woman writer

18、, J.K. Rowling. The book describes a brave boy named Harry Potter. I like this book best for many reasons. First, the main character, Harry Potter, attracts me. He is such a brave and clever boy that he dares to fight against strong enemies. Besides, the beautiful language and wonderful description

19、in the book take me into a magical world. It also encourages me to overcome any difficulty I may meet in my life. If you havent read it yet, pick it up now and youll find a wonderful world in it. 【解析】 【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求考生以“My favourite book”为题，写一篇书评。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：说明文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。 结构：总分

20、法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求： 1. 词数 100 左右。 2. 介绍书名、作者、概要等相关信息。 3. 说明你最喜欢这本书的原因。 （1 到 2 点） 第二步：列提纲 （重点词组） 8 like sth. best; describe; for many reasons; main character; attract; brave and clever; dare to do sth.; fight against; description; encourage sb. to do sth.; overcome; wonderful 第三

21、步：连词成句 1. Of all the books that I have read, I like Harry Potter best. 2. The book describes a brave boy named Harry Potter. 3. I like this book best for many reasons. 4. First, the main character, Harry Potter, attracts me. 5. He is such a brave and clever boy that he dares to fight against strong

22、enemies. 6. Besides, the beautiful language and wonderful description in the book take me into a magical world. 7. It also encourages me to overcome any difficulty I may meet in my life. 8. If you havent read it yet, pick it up now and youll find a wonderful world in it. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问

23、题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 1.表文章结构顺序：First 2.表并列补充关系： Besides 3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but,Although+clause(从句) （供参考） 4.表因果关系：Because,As, So, Thus, Therefore,As a result（供参考） 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 【点睛】高分句型 1 Of all the books that I have read, I like Harry Potter best It was written b

24、y a British woman writer, J.K. Rowling. (运用了 that 引导定语从句) 高分句型 2 He is such a brave and clever boy that he dares to fight against strong enemies. (运用了 suchthat引导结果状语从句) 9 第二节第二节 应用文写作（满分应用文写作（满分 15 分）分） 77. 根据以下内容写一封建议信。 假如你是当代中学生的主编 David，你收到了一封 Jack 的读者来信，请根据信件内容，给 Jack 回信。 Dear Editor, I am Jack.

25、 I am writing to ask for advice on my school life. I have stepped into senior high school campus for two months, but I feel lonely because I failed to make new friends. Whats worse, the subjects are really challenging and I find it difficult to follow the teachers. I feel at a loss what to do now. C

26、an you help me? Im looking forward to your early reply. Best regards, Jack 注意: 1. 词数应为 100 左右。 2. 建议信内容需紧扣求助信。 【答案】Dear Jack, Im sorry to learn that you are having a bad time at school.Actually, it is quite common that students find it hard to fit in the new school, but dont worry. Try the following

27、 suggestions. To make new friends, you can join school clubs and you may find it easier to make friends with those who share the same interests with you.As for your study, youd better make a timetable to manage your time better and turn to your classmates and teachers for help if necessary. I hope m

28、y suggestions can help you. Best wishes, David 【解析】 10 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生根据读者 Jack 的求助信内容给他写一封建议信。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。 结构：总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求： 1. 表达想法； 2. 提供具体建议； 3. 提出希望。 第二步：列提纲 （重点词组） have a bad time, common, fit in, make friends, join clubs, share the s

29、ame interests, make a timetable, turn to. 第三步：连词成句 1. Im sorry to learn that you are having a bad time at school. 2.Actually, it is quite common that students find it hard to fit in the new school, but dont worry. 3.To make new friends, you can join school clubs and you may find it easier to make fr

30、iends with those who share the same interests with you. 4.As for your study, youd better make a timetable to manage your time better and turn to your classmates and teachers for help if necessary. 5.I hope my suggestions can help you. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 11 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） （供参考） 1.表文章结构顺序：F

31、irst of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/SecondAnd then, Finally, In the end,At last 2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not onlybut (also), including. 3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, In spite of+n/doing. 4.表因果关系：Because,As, So, Thus, Therefore,As a r

32、esult 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 【点睛】高分句型 1 Im sorry to learn that you are having a bad time at school.运用了 that 引导的宾语从句。 高分句型 2 Actually, it is quite common that students find it hard to fit in the new school.运用了 it 作形式主语，that 从句是 真正主语。 高分句型 3 To make new friends, you can join school club

33、s and you may find it easier to make friends with those who share the same interests with you.运用了 who 引导的定语从句。 江苏省江阴二中、要塞中学等四校 2020-2021 学年高一上学期期中考试英语试题 第四部分：书面表达（满分第四部分：书面表达（满分 15 分）分） 66. 假定你是李华，你想参加学校 11 月 4 日在学校大礼堂举办的英语诗歌朗诵比赛，请你给外教 Mr.Smith 发一封邮件，请他帮你选一首诗，并给予指导。内容包括： 1.请求帮助； 2.主题必须是爱和友谊； 3.期待回复。

34、 12 注意： 1. 词数不少于 100； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mr.Smith, _ _ _ _ _ _ _ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Mr. Smith, How is everything going? Im writing to you in the hope of seeking for help. Our school will hold English Poetry Reading Contest on 4thNovember. I am eager to have a try, but

35、dont know which poem is suitable.As a lover of poetry, would you please be so kind to give me some recommendations? According to the requirements, the theme should be about love and friendship. Each contestant is given up to five minutes to read the poem in the contest. Id appreciate it if you could

36、 give me some guidance. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 13 【分析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教 Mr.Smith 发一封邮件，请他帮忙选一首诗，并给予指导。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和少量一般将来时。 结构：总分法 要求： 1.请求帮助； 2.主题必须是爱和友谊； 3.期待回复。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） in the hope of; be eager to; give me some recommendations; require

37、ments; be given up to; look forward to 第三步：连词成句 1. Im writing to you in the hope of seeking for help. 2. I am eager to have a try, but dont know which poem is suitable. 3.As a lover of poetry, would you please be so kind to give me some recommendations? 4.According to the requirements, the theme sho

38、uld be about love and friendship. 5.Each contestant is given up to five minutes to read the poem in the contest. 6.Looking forward to your reply. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 14 文中运用到了表转折对比关系词 but 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰， 【点睛】 高分句型1 I am eager to have a try, but dont kno

39、w which poem is suitable.运用which引导宾语从句。 高分句型 2 Id appreciate it if you could give me some guidance.运用 it 作形式宾语。 江苏省崇真中学、乐余高级中学 20202021 学年高一上学期期中考试两校联考英语试题 第五节第五节 作文作文 （满分（满分 15 分）分） 71. 假如你是 当代中学生 的主编 Li Hua， 你收到了一封读者来信， 请根据信件内容， 给 Confused daughter 写封回信。 Dear Sir, I have a mum who is just like a c

40、amera in the home. She wants to know everything about me and decides everything for me. I know that is her special love to me, yet I still hope she can respect and trust me. Could you please give me some advice? Best regards, Confused daughter 注意：1.词数 80 左右，开头结尾已给出，但不计入总词数 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：p

41、rivate space 私人空间 ； generation gap 代沟 Dear Confused daughter, Im deeply concerned about your situation. _ _ _ _ 15 _ _ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】One possible version: Dear Confused daughter, Im deeply concerned about your situation. Therefore, I am writing to offer you the following practical suggestions. F

42、irst, it is wise to understand your mum and her love to you, because understanding is the first step to solution. Besides, talk to her face to face and ask her to give you some private space. Just imagine how she hopes to narrow the generation gap. Finally, why not do something to earn her trust? Yo

43、u can get her involved in some of your daily activities .If so, she will be relieved to find her daughter reliable and promising. Above is my advice, which may help make your life a lot easier . Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以当代中学生的主编 Li Hu 的身份，根据读者来信内容 给 Confused daughter 回复一封

44、信件。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。 结构：总分法 16 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求： 1.根据所给的读者来信内容进行适当的回复； 2.词数 80 左右。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） offer sb sth; practical suggestions; it is wise to do sth; talk to sb; face to face; practical suggestions; why not; earn sbs trust; get sb involved in; be rel

45、ieved to. 第三步：连词成句 1.Therefore, I am writing to offer you the following practical suggestions. 2.First, it is wise to understand your mum and her love to you, because understanding is the first step to solution. 2.Besides, talk to her face to face and ask her to give you some private space. 3.Just i

46、magine how she hopes to narrow the practical suggestions. 4.Finally, why not do something to earn her trust? 5.You can get her involved in some of your daily activities . 6.If so, she will be relieved to find her daughter reliable and promising. 7.Above is my advice, which may help make your life a

47、lot easier . 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 1.表文章结构顺序：First, Besides, Finally 2.表因果关系：Therefore 3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but(供参考) 17 4.表并列补充关系：Additionally, moreover(供参考) 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 【点睛】高分句型 1 First, it is wise to understand your mum and her love t

48、o you, because understanding is the first step to solution. (使用了由 it 作形式主语的固定句型 Its +形容词+to do sth.； 由 because 引导原因状语从 句。) 高分句型 2 Just imagine how she hopes to narrow the practical suggestions. (运用了祈使句式；由 how 引导宾 语从句。) 高分句型 3Above is my advice, which may help make your life a lot easier . (由 which 引导非限定性定语从 句。)