（2021新人教版）高中英语必修第三册Unit 3 写作园地导学案.doc

1、写作园地写作园地 读后续写读后续写描写一个有文化特色的地方描写一个有文化特色的地方 本单元的写作项目是读后续写，写作主题为描写一个有文化特色的地方。在 进行此类的读后续写时，要把握文章的整体节奏，将写作重点放在描述其文化特 色上，而不是单纯的罗列辞藻。在读懂材料内容理清脉络之后，在所给段落开头 语的帮助下完成续写部分。写作时可根据自己的理解，对文章的情节发展进行不 同的诠释。 写作时要注意以下几点： 1在把握文章发展脉络的基础上，注意续写情节与原文之间的连贯性，凸显 文章主题。 2续写内容要与所给段落开头语衔接自然，语言通顺，逻辑性强。 3在词汇使用方面避免过于单一、贫乏，尽量使语言更丰富，并

2、适当加入复 杂句型结构。 1开头常用句式 We are living in a consumer culture. 我们生活在一种消费文化之中。 People from different cultures have different ways of doing things. 来自不同文化的人们有不同的做事方式。 During his summer holiday he visited Russia. 暑假期间他游览了俄罗斯。 2主体段落常用句式 Guangzhou is the political, economic and cultural centre of Guangdong Pr

3、ovince. 广州是广东省的政治、经济和文化中心。 The orchestra is very important for the cultural life of the city. 管弦乐队对这座城市的文化生活非常重要。 Venice is a beautiful city full of culture and history. 威尼斯是一座具有深厚文化和历史底蕴的美丽城市。 The children are taught to respect different cultures. 孩子们受到的教育是要尊重不同的文化。 As the capital of ten dynasties,

4、 Nanjing is rich in culture beyond the reach of any other cities. 南京作为十朝都会，有着深厚的文化底蕴，是任何城市都无法企及的。 For centuries, Pairs has attracted many of the worlds most influential artists, thinkers and writers. 几个世纪以来，巴黎吸引了许多世界上最有影响力的艺术家、思想家、作者。 3结尾常用句式 American English is significantly different from British

5、English. 美式英语与英式英语有很大差异。 Its one of the worlds most beautiful cities. 它是世界上最美的城市之一。 This area enjoys the reputation of a land with milk and honey. 这个地方有“鱼米之乡”的美誉。 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇 完整的短文。 Hutong Culture In the same way that the Forbidden City is the symbol of Chinas royal family, the w

6、inding Hutongs in Beijing represent the way of life of the common people. They are at the root of the local peoples way of life. Beijing City is like a boxy bean curd or a chess board with each hutong lying due north to due south or due east to due west. This square layout (布局；设计) not only influence

7、s Beijingers way of living, but also influences their thoughts and actions. The names of them are allembracing and various and relate to their location, origin or history, such as Lumicang, Fuxue, and Gongyuan hutongs, which were named by official organizations. Those examples named by craftsmen and

8、 ordinary people include: “earthenware pot Liu (now Dashaguo) Hutong”， maybe there once lived a Mr Liu who sold earthenware pots. Those who were named by their market trade include Xianyu Kou Hutong (Fish street), for it once was the place where fish was sold. There are also those which bear the nam

9、es of horses and mules because these animals were once traded there. Some take their name from special landmarks, such as Stone Tiger, Iron Lion and Cypress Hutongs. Their names are regarded as important materials when researching Beijing culture. People are pleased with their easy life in Siheyuan

10、(the courtyard distributed orderly). They live a peaceful and harmonious life in these small “boxes”， away from the hustle and bustle of the streets outside. Their daily needs could be fully satisfied by hawkers who sold vegetables, eggs, fruits, and snacks. In the past, they could even get their ha

11、ir cut by the itinerant ( 巡 游 的 ) barbers without walking out of their neighbourhood to find a barber shop. The winding and narrow Hutongs were heaven for children playinggames.Theywouldhaveplayedrubberbandskipping,kicking shuttlecocks ( 毽 子 ), and hideandseek. Even in modern times, young boys get t

12、ogether and hold football matches in these narrow lanes. Those who live in them love their way of life so much that it is often described by the Chinese as a culture of happiness and harmony. 注意： 1续写词数应为 150 左右； 2请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 However, the love of this way of life can become a burden for some Huton

13、gdwellers. _ _ _ _ Chinese people are familiar with the character “Chai”，which means to tear down. _ _ _ _ 精彩范文 However, the love of this way of life can become a burden for some Hutongdwellers. Because many people have never known anything outside, they can be unwilling to move house. People have b

14、een known to live in the same Hutong for decades, until the foundations are too weak to hold the weight of the house and until the roof allows rain in. But for these people, their house still had value because they loved the way of life that had lived there. In this enclosed environment, people live

15、 a peaceful and harmonious life but are unwilling to change. Chinese people are familiar with the character “Chai”，which means to tear down. When this character appears on the walls of a building everybody knows that its doomsday is near. A century ago, people who lived in hutongs would never have i

16、magined that this cruel word would be painted on their walls one day. 总评本篇范文整体续写合理，如续写的第一段根据首句“对这种生活方式 的热爱会成为一些胡同居民的负担”，作者巧妙的进行续写，如房子地基变软， 屋顶漏水等贴合首句并且有所延伸。文章体现了作者高超的写作技巧和对生活观 察入微的特点。 亮点呈现 (1)文章多处使用 who, that 引导的从句，使句式结构复杂多变。 (2)使用“be unwilling to” “too . to”等固定用法使文章语言更加生动。 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使

17、之构成一篇完整 的短文。 The first time I experienced culture shock was ten years ago. It was my first trip to Japan. At that time I didnt speak any Japanese, so I joined a group tour. I still remember one night we had a wonderful dinner with all kinds of dishes on the table. I was starving, due to a long walki

18、ng at daytime; therefore I grabbed a bowl of brownish soup and hurried to drink it. A lady sitting right next to me asked, “What kind of soup is that？” and I replied “It tastes like miso soup, but a little bit salty.” All of a sudden, the tour guide shouted out loud, “DO NOT drink that brownish stuf

19、f. Its not soup. Its soy sauce.” After hearing that, I was close to tear. I murmured “You should have told us earlier. I had already finished it all.” Every morning you can see passengers crowded the platform. So in Japan there is a special kind of people whose job is to push all the passengers into

20、 trains, so those people are called “pushman”. Japanese people are really good at getting on crowded trains. I have experienced once that the train was overcrowded and the passengers were totally jampacked. Surprisingly some people could still get on the train. These are the tricks that they use: ho

21、ld their bags tightly, walk backward, take a deep breath, move their hips, finally step in. No one complained about it. Even though I really wanted to yell out, “Stop pushing.It is too crowded here， ” I didnt do it for two reasons. First, I wasnt brave enough. And second, I didnt know how to say that in Japanese. 注意： 1续写词数应为 150 左右； 2请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Japan is a comic book paradise. _ _ _ _ When I returned to China, I felt quite positive about my trip. _ _ _ _ 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了作者去日本的有趣经历，并亲身 体验了不同地域之间的文化差异。作者为什么说日本是漫画书的天堂？作者回到 中国后，对此次日本之旅有何感想？ 精彩范文