（精）人教新目标（Go for it）版九年级全册英语Unit 13 We’re trying to save the earth! Section B 话题写作ppt课件（含学案）.zip

写作写作题目：题目： Save our earth AreAre theythey cute?cute? TheyThey areare dying!dying!TheyThey areare endangeredendangered animals!animals! What problem are these animals facing? There used to be a lot of animals, but now some animals are endangered. Why are they facing this problem? Some of their living places have been polluted or destroyed. People catch and kill these animals. How to solve the problem/save animals? The government has passed laws to protect them. Tell people around us to protect animals. be polluted / be destroyed be killed the government passed laws tell people around us What other problems do we have? things that are in nature and can be used by people Help me! What are the problems? Why do we have these problems? How to solve the problem? 合作探究合作探究 Discuss in groups , try to answer the 3 questions. 2. This is because we throw trash everywhere. For example: 1. This is waste pollution. take your own bags put trash in the right places recycle use less paper napkins 合作探究合作探究 Now choose one pollution. Discuss in groups , try to answer the 3 questions. Water Pollution Air Pollution global warming 全球变暖全球变暖 当我们回答了这当我们回答了这 3个问题，已基本个问题，已基本 完成文章的主体！完成文章的主体！ What are the problems? Why do we have these problems? How to solve the problem? basic structure 基本结构基本结构 beginning body 中心要点中心要点 ending 1. 1.打比方打比方 The earth _ _(像像) our mother. We must stop people hurting her. writing methods(一些支持论点的写作方法一些支持论点的写作方法) 2. 2.列数字列数字 We can use less paper. Because a big tree can only be made into _ _ (大约大约4000) pieces of A4 paper. 3.3.举例子举例子 We can do many things to reduce pollution, _ _ using fewer plastic bags.4. 4.引用引用_(就如俗语所说就如俗语所说), “ Helping the earth is helping ourselves.” The earth _ _ our mother. We must stop people hurting her. 打打 比比 方方 is like writing methods(一些支持论点的写作方法一些支持论点的写作方法) We can use less paper. Because a tree can only be made into _ _ (大大 约约4000) pieces of A4 paper. 列列 数数 字字 about 4000 writing methods(一些支持论点的写作方法一些支持论点的写作方法) We can do many things to reduce pollution, _ _ using fewer plastic bags. 举举 例例 子子 such as writing methods(一些支持论点的写作方法一些支持论点的写作方法) _ (就如俗语所说就如俗语所说), “ Helping the earth is helping ourselves.” 引引 用用 As the saying goes writing methods(一些支持论点的写作方法一些支持论点的写作方法) 信息点与连接词的关系信息点与连接词的关系 信息点是珠子，连接词是线信息点是珠子，连接词是线 ，用线把珠子串连起来就是一，用线把珠子串连起来就是一 条熠熠生辉、优雅华贵的项链条熠熠生辉、优雅华贵的项链 。单独看某一方就成为一条破。单独看某一方就成为一条破 绳子，一堆烂珠子。绳子，一堆烂珠子。 写作技巧：善用连接词写作技巧：善用连接词 加上开头、结尾和连接词使你的文章更加完整加上开头、结尾和连接词使你的文章更加完整 吧！吧！ _ There used to be a lot of animals, _ some animals are endangered. Some of their living places have been polluted or destroyed. Animals _ dont have enough food to eat. _, People catch and kill animals for food or fur. Animals are peoples friends, _ I think its neccessary for us to save animals. The government has passed laws to protect them. We should obey the law _ tell people around us to take good care of animals. _ _ Nowadays, animals are facing a serious problem- Only in this way can we save them and live with animals happily./Dont put it off. Lets . but now so as well as / and not only obey the law but also tell people around even Whats more/Besides 开头常用词语：开头常用词语： as far as we know 据我们所知据我们所知 as everybody knows 众所周知众所周知 at present 目前目前 nowadays 现今现今 to tell the truth 老实说老实说 好的结尾好的结尾 1.1. 首尾呼应。首尾呼应。 We must do something to protect water in order to make the world more beautiful. Only in this way can we. 2.2. 提出倡议或号召。提出倡议或号召。 Save animals! Save Ourselves! Save our planet! / Dont put it off.Lets . 3.3. 名句结尾。名句结尾。 I believe we can do better in protecting our world. Where there is a will there is a way. 作文作文 1 1 我们周围的环境变得越来越糟糕，垃圾污染越来越我们周围的环境变得越来越糟糕，垃圾污染越来越 严重，应该如何保护我们的环境？根据提示写一篇严重，应该如何保护我们的环境？根据提示写一篇8080 字左右的短文。字左右的短文。 1.1. 现状：陈述垃圾污染问题（现状：陈述垃圾污染问题（wastewaste pollutionpollution） 2.2. 原因：乱扔垃圾原因：乱扔垃圾 3.3. 措施：分门别类放置垃圾；少用塑料袋，减少白色措施：分门别类放置垃圾；少用塑料袋，减少白色 污染；循环利用书和纸等。污染；循环利用书和纸等。 提示词：trash，pile up堆积, put . in the right places, reduce 减少, plastic bag塑料袋, recycle 作文作文 2 2 以以“Protecting“Protecting Water”Water”为题写一篇为题写一篇 8080字左右的短文。字左右的短文。 1.1. 现状：水越来越少，水污染严重现状：水越来越少，水污染严重 2.2. 原因：有人不关心节约用水，洗完手不关水龙头原因：有人不关心节约用水，洗完手不关水龙头 ；工厂往河里排放污水，河流、湖泊的水被污染了；工厂往河里排放污水，河流、湖泊的水被污染了 ，鱼死了。，鱼死了。 3.3. 措施：保护水。措施：保护水。 提示词：care about, tap, pour waste water into A.Narration 记叙文记叙文 B. Exposition 说明文说明文 C. Argumentation 议论文议论文 Whats the style of this writing? 审人称：审人称： 审时态：审时态： 第一人称为主：第一人称为主：we 以一般现在时为主以一般现在时为主 开声朗读自己的文章，开声朗读自己的文章， 并并 从结构、人称、时态、从结构、人称、时态、 字数、拼写、大小写、字数、拼写、大小写、 标点符号等方面进行自标点符号等方面进行自 我修正。我修正。 Task 1 自我欣赏与修正自我欣赏与修正 集体赏析，共同进步集体赏析，共同进步 Task 2 1 Worksheet for: Unit 13 Were trying to save the earth 话题：话题：The world and the environment (世界与环境世界与环境) School Class Name Date 一、本节课的学习目标一、本节课的学习目标 1能力目标 （1）能根据写作要求，收集、准备素材，完成一篇关于环境保护的作文。 （2）掌握议论文中几种支持论点的写作方法。 （3）能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系。 2情感目标 增强保护环境的意识，从身边小事做起。 二、语料箱二、语料箱 词块：词块： close down the factories，stopped from throwing litter into the sea，take the bus, ride a bike, instead of driving cars，plastic bowls, wooden chopsticks, keep public places clean, put sth into the dustbin, recycle books and paper, save electricity and water, play a part/role in, Turn off the light, protect the environment, take action to, try our best to, 句型：句型： is also very necessary; It is everyones duty/responsibility to; Its important/necessary for us to ；We must/should/are supposed to；We shouldn t；We had better (not) do ；I suggest/advise that；We can try our best to；The government should；If we；I believe that; 2 提出倡议或号召的句子：提出倡议或号召的句子：: 1. Dont let our tears become the last drop of water. 2. Lets play a part in loving and saving our earth! 3. Do it now! / Start to join us now! 4. Dont put it off! Become a volunteer today! 5. Dont hesitate(犹豫). It will be great fun! 6. As students, we should start from ourselves. 7. It is everyones duty to protect the earth. 三、写作任务三、写作任务 （一）（一）Free talk: What problem are animals facing? _ Why are they facing this problem? _ How to solve the problem/save animals? _ （二）（二）Group discussion： What are the problems? _ Why do we have these problems? _ How to solve the problem? _ （三）单元话题写作（三）单元话题写作 3 作文作文 1 我们周围的环境变得越来越糟糕，垃圾污染越来越严重，应该如何保护我 们的环境？根据提示写一篇 80 字左右的短文。 1. 现状：陈述垃圾污染问题（waste pollution） 2. 原因：乱扔垃圾 3. 措施：分门别类放置垃圾；少用塑料袋，减少白色污染；循环利用纸等。 提示词：trash，pile up 堆积, put . in the right places, reduce 减少, plastic bag 塑料袋, recycle 作文作文 2 以“Protecting Water”为题写一篇 80 字左右的短文。 1. 现状：水越来越少，水污染严重 2. 原因：有人不关心节约用水，洗完手不关水龙头；工厂往河里排放污水， 河流、湖泊的水被污染了，鱼死了。 3. 措施：保护水。 提示词：care about, tap, pour waste water into 思路点拨：体裁：_ 主要人称：_ _ 主要时态： _ Beginning: Ending: 写一稿（first draft）： 4 （ （四）评价四）评价 1. 大声朗读自己的文章，从结构、人称、时态、字数、拼写、大小写、标 点符号等方面进行自我修正。 2. 同伴互赏：我欣赏，我快乐！ 项目标准自我评价同伴评价教师评价 段落合理 （2 分）结构（3 分） 衔接自然 (1 分) 要点齐全 （6 分）内容（8 分） 拓展合理 (2 分) 词汇丰富 (1 分) 语言（3 分） 句法正确 ，语言优美( 2 分) 卷面（1 分） 书写工整（ 1 分） 3. 作文通用修改字符：优美句子；漏词；错处：；去掉，语法错 误 G ,人称错误 P，时态错误 T 5 （五）总结反思（五）总结反思：当我们写议论文的时候，有哪些支持论点的写作方法呢?