（2019新教材）外研版高中英语必修一英语Unit 5 表达 作文巧升格 教材讲解 .doc

1、1 动物介绍 本单元的写作项目是介绍动物，此类文章以说明为主要表达方式，用来介绍 动物的类属、生活习性、生存状态、外貌特征等。在写作时多用一般现在时。 基本框架 1开头总体概括介绍该动物的情况。 2主体进行具体介绍该动物的详细情况。 3结尾做总结来描述该动物目前的状况、处境以及我们应该采取的应 对措施。 常用词块 1be equal to it in size 在个头大小上和它相等 2feed on flowers and leaves 以花朵和树叶为食 3the increasingly demand on the antelopes fur 对藏羚羊的毛皮的需求量逐渐增大 4die out

2、 in the near future 在不久的将来将灭绝 5give birth to three baby pandas 产下了三个熊猫宝宝 6thousands of tourists coming to appreciate the beautiful birds 成千上万的来欣赏美丽鸟儿的游客 7the decreasing number of the birds that migrate here 迁徙到这里的鸟儿的数量越来越少 8call on everyone to work as a volunteer to help us 号召大家做志愿者来帮忙 9take immedia

3、te measures to protect their habitats from being destroyed 采取紧急措施来保护它们的栖息地免遭破坏 10be aware of the importance of protecting mother nature 意识到保护大自然母亲的重要性 常用语句 精彩开头 2 1The giant panda is an animal that/which lives in the mountains. 大熊猫是一种生活在山里的动物。 2It feeds on/lives on bamboos. 它靠吃竹子为生。 3The bird has be

4、autiful wings with some black spots on some feathers. 这种鸟有着美丽的翅膀，一些羽毛上有着黑色的斑点。 丰满主体 1Many trees are being cut down and more and more forests are lost，making animals lose their homes to live in. 许多树木被砍伐，越来越多的森林消失，使得动物失去了家园。 2 Many fields are being turned into desert， which makes the animals living th

5、ere have no place to find food to eat. 许多土地正在变成沙漠，这使得生活在那里的动物没有地方找食物吃。 3 Many animals are being killed so that some of them are in danger of dying out. 许多动物被捕杀，因此有些动物濒临灭绝。 4To protect pandas，measures should be taken to set up some nature reserves. 为了保护大熊猫，应该采取措施建立一些自然保护区。 余味结尾 1 In a word ， we must

6、take some measures to prevent rare animals from extinction. 总之，我们必须采取一些措施来防止珍稀动物灭绝。 2Finally，we should let people know the importance of protecting endangered animals. 最后，我们应该让人们知道保护濒危动物的重要性。 假定你是大熊猫繁殖基地的工作人员李华，请你为大熊猫写一篇解说词，并 向前来参观基地的美国客人介绍中国的这种特有的物种。内容包括： 1主要生活在四川、陕西和甘肃的山区； 2以竹子为食； 3憨态可掬； 3 4濒危原因：栖

7、息地减少及气候变化。 注意：1.词数 80 左右； 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：大熊猫繁殖基地(giant panda breeding base) 学生习作 Ladies and gentlemen，welcome to see panda.Now I will tell you something about it. The panda is lovely with black and white hair.It is very special in China，even in the whole world.It lives in Sichuan ， Shaanxi a

8、nd Gansu Provinces.They eat bamboos.Many people come to the giant panda breeding base to see them.However， because of some reason，the number of them is becoming smaller and smaller. In order to protect them，we should take some measures.We believe the number of giant pandas will greatly increase very

9、 soon. Wish you a good time here.Thanks. 名师点评： 1写作内容太过于口语化； 2对熊猫的观察细致，描述不够重点突出； 3未能指出保护熊猫的原因以及保护措施。 升格作文 Ladies and gentlemen，welcome to our giant panda breeding base.Id like to introduce this unique species to all of you. As a symbol of China， the giant panda is a special Chinese species， mainly li

10、ving in the mountains of Sichuan，Shaanxi and Gansu Provinces.They feed mostly on bamboos.They look so cute in appearance that they are popular among people all over the world.However， they are in danger of extinction because of the loss of their nature habitat and the climate change. In order to pro

11、tect giant pandas from dying out，we have taken many practical measures.We believe the number of giant pandas will greatly increase very soon. Wish you a good time here.Thanks. 根据要求写一篇关于濒危动物金丝猴(golden monkey)的短文。词数 80 4 左右。 1栖息地：中国 2外貌：金黄色，有点灰；尾巴和身体一样长。 3生活环境：海拔 1 5003 000 米的森林。 4生活习性：群居，吃水果、干果，在树上活动

12、； 5它们的数量减少了，呼吁人们保护金丝猴。 _ _ _ _ _ 参考范文 The golden monkeys Living only in China， golden monkeys are protected by the Chinese government. Their fur is golden and a bit grey.Their tails are as long as their bodies.The male golden monkeys are big and strong while the female ones are much smaller.Golden monkeys live in forests which are 1， 5003， 000 meters above the sea level.They like living in family groups.They feed on fruits，nuts，tree leaves and so on. But now their number is getting smaller and smaller.We hope that people will stop hunting golden monkeys.