江苏2020-2021学年（牛津版）高一上期中（市、百强校、校联考）汇编：续写、概要（含解析）.docx

1、1 江苏江苏 2020-2021 学年高一上期中（市、百强校、校联考）学年高一上期中（市、百强校、校联考） 汇编：汇编：续写、概要（含解析）续写、概要（含解析） 江苏南京鼓楼区统考江苏南京鼓楼区统考(二十九中、宁海、田家炳、南大附中二十九中、宁海、田家炳、南大附中) 2020-2021 学年高一上期中英语试题学年高一上期中英语试题 第二节（满分第二节（满分 25 分）分） 47. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段。使之构成一篇完整的短文。续 写的词数应为 150 左右。 In 1945, a 12- year- old boy saw something in a shop w

2、indow. But the price- - five dollars- - was far beyond Reuben Earles means. He couldnt ask his father for the money who made a living through fishing in Bay Roberts. His mother, Dora, tried hard to feed and clothe their five children. However,he opened the shops door, went inside and talked to the s

3、hopkeeper. “.I dont have the money right now. Can you please hold it for me for some time?” “Ill try,” the shopkeeper smiled. Reuben respectfully touched his worn cap and walked out. Hearing the sound of hammering from a side street, he suddenly had an idea. He ran towards the sound and stopped at a

4、 construction site. Reuben knew he could collect the discarded nails(被丢弃的钉子) and sell them to the factory for five cents. He looked for nails until sunset. Then he ran to the factory and sold them. Reuben tightly held the five- cent pieces and ran home. He found a small can and dropped his coins ins

5、ide. Then he rushed into the barn(谷仓) near his house and hid it. It was dinner time when Reuben got home. His mother Dora who was at the kitchen stove, ready to serve dinner. Looking at his mother, thinking Mothers Day would come, Reuben smiled. 注意：1. 续写词数应为 150 左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 2 Then one

6、day, he counted the coins and found that he finally had enough money! The time came! _ _ _ _ Racing home, Reuben burst through the front door to find his mother. _ _ _ _ 【答案】Then one day, he counted the coins and found that he finally had enough money! The time came! Clutching the tin can, he headed

7、 for the shop. “I have the money,” he solemnly told the owner. The man went to the window and retrieved Reubens treasure. He wiped the dust off and gently wrapped it in brown paper. Then he placed the parcel in Reubens hands. Racing home, Reuben burst through the front door to find his mother. His m

8、other was scrubbing the kitchen stove. “Here, Mum! Here!” Reuben exclaimed as he ran to her side. He placed a small box in her work roughened hand. She unwrapped it carefully, to save the paper. A blue- velvet jewel box appeared. Dora lifted the lid, tears beginning to blur her vision. In gold lette

9、ring on a small, almond- shaped brooch was the word Mother. It was Mothers Day, 1946. 3 Dora had never received such a gift; she had no finery except her wedding ring. Speechless, she smiled radiantly and gathered her son into her arms. 【解析】 【分析】 这是一篇读后续写作文。文章主要讲述了 1945 年，Reuben在一家商店看到一件物品，物品 的价格超出了

10、 Reuben 的承受范围，但是他不能向父母要钱，于是他让店主帮他保留那件物 品，店主欣然答应。走出商店之后，Reuben 想到了攒钱的好办法，他收集被丢弃的钉子， 把它们卖给工厂。他把零钱放进罐子里，把罐子藏在他家附近的一个谷仓里。晚上回家后， Reuben看到厨房里的妈妈，想到母亲节就要到了。 【详解】1.段落续写： 由第一段首句内容“后来有一天，他数了数硬币，发现钱终于够了!时间到了。”可知， 第一段可描写 Reuben去商店买回心仪已久的物品。 由第二段首句内容“Reuben一路狂奔回家，冲进前门，找到了妈妈。”可知，第二段可 描写作者把礼物送给妈妈，妈妈收到礼物后很感动。 2.续写线

11、索：攒够钱购买物品回家赠送礼物打开礼物感动 3.词汇激活 行为类 购买物品：head for/wipe the dust off 回家：race home 打开礼物：unwrapped it carefully 情绪类 兴奋：burst through the front door 感动：speechless/gathered.into. 4 【点睛】高分句型 1 Clutching the tin can, he headed for the shop.（现在分词短语作伴随状况 状语） 高分句型 2Racing home, Reuben burst through the front doo

12、r to find his mother.（现在分词短 语作伴随状况状语） 高分句型 3tears beginning to blur her vision.（独立主格结构） 江苏省江阴二中、要塞中学等四校江苏省江阴二中、要塞中学等四校 2020-2021 学年高二上学学年高二上学 期期中考试英语试题期期中考试英语试题 第四部分第四部分 书面表达书面表达 （25 分）分） 86. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续 写的词数应为 150左右。 “Im going to miss you so much, Poppy,” said the tall, t

13、hin teenager. He bent down to hug his old friend goodbye. He stood up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying not to let his emotions get the better of him. His parents were not quite able to control theirs. They had driven their son several hours out of town to the university where he would soon be

14、 living and studying. It was time to say goodbye for now at least. The family hugged and smiled through misty eyes and then laughed. The boy lifted the last bag onto his shoulder, and flashed a bright smile. “I guess this is it,” he said. “Ill see you back home in a month, okay?” His parents nodded,

15、 and they watched as he walked out of sight into the crowds of hundreds of students and parents. The boys mother turned to the dog, “Okay, Poppy, time to go back home.” The house seemed quiet as a tomb without the boy living there. All that week, Poppy didnt seem interested in her dinner, her favori

16、te toy, or even in her daily walk. Her owners were sad too, but they knew their son would be back to visit. Poppy didnt. 5 They offered the dog some of her favorite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit on the sofa, but the old girl just wasnt her usual cheerful self. Her owners started to get

17、 worried. “What should we do to cheer Poppy up?” asked Dad. “Weve tried everything.” “I have an idea, but it might be a little crazy,” smiled Mom. “Without anybody left in the house but us, this place could use a bit of fun. Lets get a little dog for Poppy. It didnt take long before they walked thro

18、ugh the front door carrying a big box. Poppy welcomed them home as usual but when she saw the box, she stopped. She put her nose on it. Her tail began wagging (摆动) ever so slowly, then faster as she caught the smell. 注意： Para 1：Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. _ _ _ _ Para 2：A few

19、 weeks later, the boy arrived home from university. _ _ _ _ 【答案】Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. She was all white with shining big eyes, a black spot on its forehead making it more attractive. Her new owners gave her a new name, Spotty. Mom took her out of the box carefully, putt

20、ing her beside Poppys feet. Poppys eyes were first filled with surprise and curiosity and then brightened with joy. Looking at this, the parents relieved because Poppy accepted Spotty and their plan worked. A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from university. The first thing that caught his atte

21、ntion was the happy noise made by Poppy and another dog.When finding the boy back home 6 from university, Poppy was overjoyed and introduced Spotty to him. The three, immediately became just one solid alliance. From their story we can see the fact that happiness between three is much more than betwe

22、en two or just having it alone. 【解析】 【分析】 这是一篇读后续写文章。文章讲述了男孩要去上大学，和自己的狗 Poppy道别。而没有了男 孩在家里，Poppy也非常想念男孩，于是男孩父母决定给 Poppy买一条小狗作伴。 【详解】1. 第一步理解整篇文章，包括一些细节：一位少年去上大学，父母送他到大学里， 他与家人和狗狗 Poppy 伤心地告别。他们约定一个月后回家见面。男孩走后，狗狗 Poppy 对一切都失去了兴趣：最爱的食物，最爱的玩具，甚至是出门散步，少年的父母为了让狗狗 振作起来用尽办法，但是事情没有好转。少年的父母知道孩子会回来，而狗狗并不明白。后

23、来妈妈想出一个主意： 再养一只小狗， 给 Poppy作伴， poppy当时的反应： 当她看到盒子时， 她停下了。她把鼻子放在上面。她的尾巴开始摆动得越来越慢，然后越来越快，因为她闻到 了气味。 2. 续写思路，第一段的首句 Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared.注意句子中的 一个形容词 sweet, little,盒子里的狗狗小小的，非常可爱，后面续写可以描述两只狗狗很快 建立起友谊，Poppy不再情绪低落，小狗狗也很快融入这个家庭。第二段首句为 A few weeks later, the boy arrived home fr

24、om university. 可以续写为男孩加入到两个狗狗的友谊中，一人两 狗相处的非常愉快，最后主题升华为：一人不能独享快乐，两人分享才能快乐，三人分享会 有加倍的快乐。 3. 文本中划线的单词，Poppy, university, parents, back, cheerful 都是续写中必需的单词，其他 划线单词根据续写情节选择使用。整体为一般过去时，注意句式的变化，各类从句和非谓语 动词的使用。 4. 第一段续写可以细节描述小狗狗的可爱， 粘人， 以至于伤心的 Poppy不得不喜欢上了他， 忘记了自己的悲伤，男孩的父母也高兴地松了一口气。字数约 70- 80 单词。第二段续写可以 描述

25、少年回家之后， 见到 Poppy和小狗狗之后的兴奋， 原先两个伙伴分享的乐事变成了三个 伙伴一起分享。 7 【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符 合逻辑关系。 作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句， 如： The first thing that caught his attention was the happy noise made by Poppy and another dog.这句话运用了 that引导的定语从句； From their story we can see the fact that happiness between three

26、 is much more than between two or just having it alone.这句话运用了 that引导的同位语从句； 文章也使用了一些固定词组， 如 be filled with; takeout of等。 全文中没有中国式英语的句式， 显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。 另外， 文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。 江苏省江苏省南京南京市市 2020_2021 学年高一上学期期中英语试题学年高一上学期期中英语试题 第二节第二节 概要写作概要写作(满分满分 25 分分) 47. 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇 60 词左右的内容概要。 Scien

27、tists in London say they have found the best diet for both humans and the planet. If the world followed the so- called “planetary health” diet, the scientists told Reuters that each year more than 11 million early deaths could be prevented. Scientists say that the way we produce and eat food is very

28、 bad for the planet. For the health of the planet, they claim the same diet would reduce greenhouse gases and save more land, water and animals. Tim Lang, a professor at Britains University of London, co- led the research. He told Reuters, “The food we eat and how we produce it determines the health

29、 of people and the planet, and we are currently getting this seriously wrong.” Lang added that the worlds population is expected to grow to 10 billion people by 2050. If we want to feed everyone, he explained, we all need to change what we eat and the way we eat by “improving food production and red

30、ucing food waste.” Well, what do you eat on the planetary health diet? The scientists who created this diet say it is largely plant- based but still has small amounts of dairy, fish and meat. The diet calls for cutting red meat and sugar by 50 percent and doubling the amount of nuts, fruits, vegetab

31、les and legumes. Food situations around the world are not equal. In certain areas, this would mean great changes. 8 People in North America, for example, eat 6.5 times the recommended amount of red meat. On the other hand, people in South Asia eat only half the amount suggested by the new planetary

32、health diet. Meeting the targets for vegetables would need big changes in other areas. In sub- Saharan Africa, people on average eat 7.5 times the suggested amount of vegetables like potatoes and cassava. The scientists admit their goal will be difficult to achieve. But for them doing nothing is als

33、o not an option. Willet said, “If we cant quite make it, its better to try and get as close as we can.” _ _ _ _ _ _ 【答案】Scientists claim they have obtained the best diet benefiting both humans and the planet. Tim Lang, the leader of the research, emphasized the significance of changing the food and

34、the way we eat. In other words, it is more scientific for diet to be more based on plants than animals. However, the food condition is not globally balanced. Tough as the target is to realize, it is worth trying. (69 words) 【解析】 【分析】 这是一篇说明文。科学家们说：他们已经找到了适合人类和地球的最佳饮食。文章介绍了这 种最佳饮食的必要性和特点。 【详解】这篇文章属于科

35、学研究报道类的文章。那么，研究结果即是文章中心。故第一段的 中心句是首句：Scientists in London say they have found the best diet for both humans and the planet（伦敦的科学家们说，他们已经找到了适合人类和地球的最佳饮食。 ）第二段的最后一 句是中心句：If we want to feed everyone, he explained, we all need to change what we eat and the way we eat by “improving food production and re

36、ducing food waste.通过该句，我们可以知道该 段主要介绍的我们改变自己吃的食物和饮食方式的必要性。 第三段回答了这个问题： What do 9 you eat on the planetary health diet? 答案为：it is largely plant- based but still has small amounts of dairy, fish and meat（它主要是以植物为基础的，但仍然含有少量的乳制品、鱼和肉。 ）第四 段的首句是中心句：Food situations around the world are not equal.（世界各地的食物状况

37、是不 平等的。 ） 。同时该段提到：Meeting the targets for vegetables would need big changes（要达到 健康饮食均衡的目标， 需要做出巨大的改变） 。 最后一段的中心句为末句： The scientists admit their goal will be difficult to achieve. But for them doing nothing is also not an option.（科学家们 承认他们的目标很难实现。但对他们来说，无所事事也不是一种选择。即：科学家们会竭尽 全力来实现目标。 ） 。综合上述几段的中心可知，文

38、章的中心可概括为：Scientists claim they have obtained the best diet benefiting both humans and the planet. Tim Lang, the leader of the research, emphasized the significance of changing the food and the way we eat. In other words, it is more scientific for diet to be more based on plants than animals. However

39、, the food condition is not globally balanced. Tough as the target is to realize, it is worth trying. 江苏省淮安市江苏省淮安市 2020-2021 学年高一上学期期中模拟学年高一上学期期中模拟 第二节第二节 读后续写读后续写(满分满分 25 分分) 67. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 It was the wedding anniversary and Ria(Wife) was waiting for her husband to show up. Afte

40、r some years of marriage, things changed between them. Once they are a loving couple who couldnt live without each other, but now everything had changed. Now, they were fighting over every little thing, but both of them didnt like to put an end into their marriage. Ria was waiting to see if Manoj(Hu

41、sband) remembered that it was their wedding anniversary. As the doorbell rang, she ran toward the door and opened it with a smile and a bunch of flowers to greet her husband. They started to celebrate the anniversary. They wanted to make up for fights. They planned to prepare champagne and light mus

42、ic to celebrate. All of a sudden, the phone in the bedroom rang. Ria went to pick it up. On the call there was a man who said, “Hello maam, I am calling from the police station. Is this Mr. Manoj Kumars 10 number？” She replied, “Yes, it is! ” “I am sorry, maam, but an accident happened and a man die

43、d. We got this number from his wallet. Can you please come to the police station and identify the body？”the man replied. Ria was extremely shocked! “But my husband is with me here! ”she replied in disbelief. “Sorry, maam, but the incident took place this afternoon and he died while he was getting of

44、f a bus.” the man replied. On hearing this, Ria was about to lose her consciousness. “How could this happen？”she thought to herself. She had read some stories about souls returning to meet their loved ones after their death. Her heart sank .In fear she ran towards other rooms to look for her husband. But he was not there. 注意： 1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150左右； 2. 至少使用 5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所