2021春人教新目标英语八年级下册unit2I'll help to clean up the city parks.-writing being volunteer课件.pptx

1、clean up the parks What kind of volunteer jobs is it? visit sick kids and cheer them up What kind of volunteer jobs is it? give out food at the food bank What kind of volunteer jobs is it? help disabled people with the housework What kind of volunteer jobs is it? help kids in an after-school program

2、 What kind of volunteer jobs is it? work in an old peoples home What kind of volunteer jobs is it? What kind of volunteer jobs is it? Be a guide at a museum Pre-writing PART 02 work in an old peoples home help kids in an after-school program be a guide at a museum plant trees clean up the parks help

3、 disabled people raise money for poor children hand out notices put up signs give out food visit sick kids and cheer them up volunteer activities/jobs: Which volunteer job do you want to do? I would like to I hope to I want to volunteer to Free talk What are your interests and hobbies? How can these

4、 help you to do the job? hobby abilities I am interested in I am a (an) lover. In my free time, I like /love to Im good at/ Im strong in/ I do well in So I think Id be good at this job. hobby ability Id like to teach the kids to draw. Because I am interested in drawing. In my free time, I often help

5、 my sister with it. I also do well in it. So I think Id be good at this job. Id like to . Because I . I think . Lets say example Id like to . because I . I think . I am interested in I am a (an) lover. In my free time, I like /love to Im good at/ Im strong in/ I do well in So I think Id be good at t

6、his job. hobby ability Lets say Group work Why do you want to do the volunteer job? wish love dream hobby I get a strong feeling ofwhen I it can help me to learn more about I can do what I love to do it is a dream come true for me Meaning of volunteering Helping others is helping ourselves. Roses gi

7、ven, fragrance in hand. 赠人玫瑰，手有余香。赠人玫瑰，手有余香。 Where there is great love, there are always miracles. 哪里有爱，哪里有爱， 哪里就有奇迹。哪里就有奇迹。 If you light a lamp for somebody, it will also brighten your path. 为别人点一盏灯，照亮别人，也照亮自己。为别人点一盏灯，照亮别人，也照亮自己。 While-writing PART 03 如何如何写一封自荐信推荐自己做一名志愿者？写一封自荐信推荐自己做一名志愿者？ 2.选材选材 3

8、.列提纲列提纲 4.写作写作 5.复查复查 1.审题审题 审人称审人称 审时态审时态 审文体审文体 Help kids in an after-school program 第第一人称一人称 一般现在时一般现在时 记叙文（书记叙文（书信）信） voluntary workvoluntary work whichwhich whatwhat whenwhen whywhy Lets start to volunteer! Write a letter or e-mail to the place you want to volunteer at. howhow Which volunteer j

9、ob do you want to do? Body Ask for the job again with strong feelings. Beginning What are your interests and hobbies? How can these help you to do the job? Why do you want to do the volunteer job? When are you free to do the job? Ending Write the outline （提纲）（提纲） first. 点明主题点明主题 描述活动描述活动 说明感受说明感受 I

10、would like to I hope to I want to volunteer as I am interested in I am a (an) lover. In my free time, I like /love to Im good at/ Im strong in/ I do well in So I think Id be good at this job. I want to help out as a volunteer in your old peoples home/ school because Im free to help in/on I am really

11、 looking forward to 1. I want to volunteer as an art teacher in an after-school program. 2. I am interested in drawing. In my free time, I often help my sister with it. 3. I do well in it. I think Id be good at teaching kids to draw. Im free to help on Saturday morning. 4. I want to help out as a vo

12、lunteer in an after-school program, I can do what I love. I can help others. Write the outline （提纲）（提纲） first. Being a wordsmith! Lets use conjunctions and phrases because.; so.; also; and; at the same time. I want to volunteer as an art teacher in an after-school program_ I am interested in drawing

13、. In my free time, I often help my sister with it. I _do well in it, _ I think Id be good at teaching kids to draw. I want to help out as a volunteer in an after-school program because I can do what I love _ help others _. because also so and at the same time Add details and English sayings as the s

14、aying goes; Helping others is helping ourselves. Roses given, fragrance in hand. 赠人玫瑰，手赠人玫瑰，手 有余香。有余香。 Where there is great love, there are always miracles. 哪里有爱，哪里就有奇迹。哪里有爱，哪里就有奇迹。 If you light a lamp for somebody, it will also brighten your path. 为别人点一盏灯，照亮别为别人点一盏灯，照亮别 人，也照亮自己。人，也照亮自己。 Add details

15、 and English sayings Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Jenny, I want to volunteer as an art teacher in your after-school program because I am interested in drawing. In my free time, I often help my sister with it. I also do well in drawing, so I think Id be good at teaching kids to draw. I want to help

16、out as a volunteer in your program because I can do what I love and help others at the same time. As the saying goes, if you light a lamp for somebody, it will also brighten your path. I really hope to get this job and Im free to help on Saturday morning. Im looking forward to your early reply! Your

17、s, Jenny Score 7-9 Add a good beginning and ending.（加（加1-2分）分） Cover all the focal points. 覆盖要点覆盖要点 Use proper conjunctions. 连接词连接词(加加1-2分）分） Add some details and English sayings. Score 9-11 Score 10-13 Score 13-15 有细节描写和美句有细节描写和美句(如谚语等如谚语等) (加加1-2分）分） Writing Accessments Make your sentences beautif

18、ul.(加加1-2分）分） 2.选材选材 3.列提纲列提纲 4.写作写作 5.复查复查 1.审题审题 审人称审人称 审时态审时态 审文体审文体 One of volunteer jobs you are interested in 第第一人称一人称 一般现在时一般现在时 记叙文（书记叙文（书信）信） voluntary workvoluntary work whichwhich whatwhat whenwhen whywhy Write a letter or e-mail to the place you want to volunteer at. 给你想做志愿工作的地点写一给你想做志愿工

19、作的地点写一封封自荐自荐信信或者电子邮件或者电子邮件 howhow Let s practice work in an old peoples home help kids in an after-school program be a guide at a museum clean up the parks help the disabled people visit sick kids and cheer them up Choose one volunteer job, such as: I would like to I hope to I want to volunteer as I

20、 am interested in I am a (an) lover. In my free time, I like /love to Im good at/ Im strong in/ I do well in so I think Id be good at this job. I want to help out as a volunteer in your old peoples home/ school because Im free to help in/on I am really looking forward to volunteer job interests abilities reasons (love, dream) time to volunteer 评价项目 评价内容 要点 齐全 不齐全（差要点 ） 结构 完整 不完整（开头 主体 结尾） 条理 清晰 不清晰（连接词 顺序） 语法 正确 错误 （人称 时态 句子结构） 拼写 正确 错误 （少 多） 书写 规范 不规范（大小写 标点符号 字迹） Discussion with your partner Show your writing The Best Group Today Rewrite Make it better and better -period 2