01 书信-冲刺2021年高考英语书面表达满分技巧.docx

1、高考英语书面表达 应用文之“书信”写作技巧 高考英语“书面表达”所要求写作的内容均与考生的学习和生活密 切相关，常涉及语言学习、活动开展、人际关系，以及关于中国传统文化 方面，如参观中国画展、参观中国剪纸艺术展、在中国朋友家做客等。 高考中，考查的形式仍然可能会以文字提纲类为主，也可能仍然是要 求考生写一篇书信(或邮件)。考生在平时的训练当中，应该适当地注重这些 方面的练习。 考点突破考点突破 高考例析 真题热线真题热线 (2019 全国卷) 假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中 国画展。请写 一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括： 1写信目的； 2个人优势； 3能做的事情。 注意：

2、1词数 100 左右； 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3结束语已为你写好。 思路点拨 体裁和格式：应用文：书信 主体时态：一般现在时为主，可兼顾现在进行时 中心人称：第一人称为主 段落层次：第一段：写信目的； 第二段：信件正文； 第三段：结尾，表达期望与祝愿 写作要点 第一段：自我介绍、写信目的； 第二段：信件正文，描述申请优势、工作经验或专业知识； 第三段：结尾，套用书信的相关语句 作文评台作文评台 学生习作 得分 25 分 Dear Sir/Madam， Im Li Hua, an exchange student from China during this summer vaca

3、tion. Im delighted to learn that volunteer students are wanted for a Chinese painting exhibition to be held in the local art gallery. Now Im writing to apply for the position. The reasons for my application are as follows. First of all, having been exposed to foreign teachers since a young age, I ca

4、n communicate freely with others in English. Whats more, years of being monitor makes me a brilliant organizer, which will help a lot to keep the exhibition in order. The most important factor is that my related knowledge will undoubtedly help the audience learn more about the unique Chinese art for

5、m. All in all, my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer. Id appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration. Yours， Li Hua 名师点评名师点评 这篇书面表达属于应用文中的申请信类型，可以按照申请信的思路来 写，同时要注意电子邮件的写作需要体现交际性。 首先作者进行自我介绍，简要交代了写作背景，阐明写信目的。 第二段是文章的主题，把题干给到的提示完整地体现出来了。文章用 First of all， W

6、hats more, The most important factor is that 等过渡性结构 自然地串联三个要点。同时灵活运用多样化的句式与众多的高级词汇。 最后使用求职信的常用套话及书信的常用套话结尾。 参考范文参考范文 Dear Sir/Madam， I am Li Hua, a student currently studying English in London. Having known a Chinese painting exhibition will be held recently, I am writing to apply for the post of vo

7、lunteer. I think I am quite qualified for the position. Firstly, I have a good command of English, specially my spoken English which is good enough to communicate with native speakers fluently. Besides, being an energetic and outgoing girl I get well along with all my classmates and always get ready

8、 to help others. Most importantly, having been a student majored in art, I am confident that I can give the visitors a brief introduction about Chinese painting with less difficulty. I would be grateful if you could give me a full consideration. Yours， Li Hua 应用文之“书信”写作技能 写作指南 英语书信写作的关键在于对书信主体的处理： 1

9、称呼(salutation)：收信人称呼从信左边开始写，一般以 “Dear” 或“My dear”开头，后面常用逗号。 2正文(body)：正文是书信的主体，它质量的高低将直接决定作文得 分的高低，因此在书信的训练和写作中对其要精雕细刻，力求做到层 次清晰、要点齐全、过渡自然、行文流畅和文笔优美。若是回信则应 根据实际需要告诉对方自己何时 收到信件，自己的感受或自己的近 况，而后切入正文。 正文结束时， 常会另起一行， 写上一些表示祝福或期待的话 语， 如： Best wishes！/Looking forward to your early reply./Good luck！等。 3结尾(c

10、omplimentary close)：是写信人表示自己对收信人的谦称， 常用表达有Yours， Yours sincerely， Yours truly或 Yours faithfully等。 写作语料 一、常用开头一、常用开头 1邀请信：It is a pleasure for me to invite you on behalf ofto/We would like to inviteto/We are more than glad to invite you to 2申请信：My name isI would like to work as/apply for 3祝贺信：We are

11、very happy to know that you have successfullyAllow me/us to give our most sincere congratulations on/I was delighted to hear (to receive) the news that 4 投诉或抱怨信： Im writing to tell you something about which I think is not satisfying. 5慰问信：We are very sorry to learn of/learn that/I am very sorry to h

12、ave heard of your present situation that 6 建议信： Im glad to receive your letter asking for advice on how toHere are some tips for you. 7 询问信： I would like to ask some information on/Im writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor. 8欢迎信：Glad to hear from you and youre welcome to 9回信：Thank you

13、for your letter of/Thanks so much for your letter, which arrived/I am writing to tell you about/Im glad to receive your letter. Its a pleasure for me to tell you my plan of 10 其他： Now I am so excited that I cant wait to share with you/ I would also like to know if you can/Im very excited to learn th

14、at/It is indeed a wonderful idea to 二、常用结尾二、常用结尾 1鼓励型： How delighted I am now! Actually, whatever happens, we must stay clam first and then find a wise solution. Try and write me in Chinese next time. 2祝愿型： I hope whats mentioned above might be helpful and wish you a good journey. I will value them

15、forever. Many happy returns of the day(年年有今日) 3请求询问型： By the way, could I By the way, could I？Thank you very much in advance. 4展望型： I believe that the wide use of these shopping bags can greatly improve our environment. This is one of the steps we take to make our country an even cleaner place. I be

16、lieve that this magazine will surely strengthen our ties, and I am looking forward to reading it. 5目的型： I am writing the letter in the hope that you can consider these problems and make more improvements. 6期待型： Im looking forward to your early reply. If you happen to know the news, please inform you

17、r classmates of it. I hope all of you can learn a lot in this activity. 真题热线真题热线 (2019 全国卷) 假定你是校排球队队长李华。 请写封邮件告知你的队友 Chris 球队近期 将参加比赛，内容包括： 1比赛信息； 2赛前准备； 3表达期待。 注意： 1词数 100 左右； 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 思路点拨思路点拨 体裁和格式：应用文：邮件 主体时态：一般现在时为主 中心人称：第一人称为主，第二人称为辅 写作要点： 1. 表明写信目的：参加近期的排球比赛； 2告知比赛的基本情况、奖项设置及精心准备； 3

18、表达期望。 作文评台作文评台 学生习作学生习作 22 分 Dear Chris， How is everything going? I have good news to tell you. A volleyball match is going to be held a few weeks later and our team will participate. As for the detailed information of the match, there will be probably dozens of teams. They are going to make a revol

19、ving competition.Additionally, not only canthe top three teams each be awarded a medal but all the other teams taking part in it will get a reward as well. The most attractive is that it will be a great honor for the top three teams to receive special volleyballs that have the name of the most popul

20、ar volleyball player on them. Therefore, we must do enough preparations before the match, such as training as frequentas we can. So excited am I that I cant wait to join in it. How about you? Looking forward to your reply. Yours， Hua 名师点评名师点评 失分诊断失分诊断 1a few weeks later 可以表示“几个星期以后”，但是不能用于一般将来时态 中，这

21、是典型的中式思维，应该改为 in a few weeks。 2can the top three teams each be awarded a medal 是一个倒装句型，可是这 里不必用倒装语序， 应该改为正常语序， 即： the top three teams can each be awarded a medal。 3虽然句中的 training 是一个动名词，但是，结合前面的 do enough preparations 可知，它完整的意义应该是表示 train frequently，故要使用 副词形式 frequently。 打打 造造 靓靓 点点 1.将句子改为含有定语从句的复合

22、句： _ 2.将句子改为含有主语从句的复合句： _ 参考答案参考答案 1As for the detailed information of the match, there will be probably dozens of teams which are going to make a revolving competition. 2What will be the most attractive is that it will be a great honor for the top three teams to receive special volleyballs that hav

23、e the name of the most popular volleyball player on them. 【参考范文参考范文】 Dear Chris， How is everything going? I have good news to tell you. A volleyball match is going to be held in a few weeks and our team will participate. As for the detailed information of the match, there will be probably dozens of

24、teams which are going to make a revolving competition. Additionally, not only can the top three teams each be awarded a medal but all the other teams taking part in it will get a reward as well. What will be the most attractive is that it will be a great honor for the top three teams to receive spec

25、ial volleyballs that have the name of the most popular volleyball player on them. Therefore, we must do enough preparations before the match, such as training as frequently as we can. So excited am I that I cant wait to join in it. How about you? Looking forward to your reply. Yours， Li Hua 写一写写一写 (

26、天津静海一中高三学生学业能力调研试卷) 假如你是晨光中学学生李华，你们学校有一个生态农场，种植各种蔬菜和 果树。为弘扬中国传统农业和提升环保意识， 你校打算召开一个夏令营。 请你给朋友 Peter 写信邀请他参加 这个活动。要点如下： 1邀请的时间和地点； 2活动安排(如中国传统农业种植介绍，体验中国传统农业 种植与管理， 自由采摘等)； 3注意事项(如衣物，安全等)。 注意：1词数不少于 100 词； 2开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：生态农场 ecological farm Dear Peter， It is my pleasure to write

27、 to you. _ Yours， Li Hua One possible version： Dear Peter， It is my pleasure to write to you. Will you be available this weekend? In order to let us learn something about Chinese traditional agriculture and enhance the awareness of environmental protection, our school is going to hold a summer camp

28、on our schools farm. We will gather at the school gate at 8：00 am. and go there on foot. When we arrive there, we will meet the farmers who will introduce Chinese traditional planting. Then we will be given a small piece of land to experience Chinese traditional planting and management. Finally, we

29、will enjoy the pleasure of picking our favorite fruit and vegetables. Do remember to wear comfortable clothes and shoes. And youd better wear a hat in case you get burnt. Besides, wherever you go and whatever you do, keep safety in your mind. If you are free and want to go, please let me know as soon as possible. Yours， Li Hua