05 记叙文-冲刺2021年高考英语书面表达满分技巧.docx

1、高考英语书面表达 “记叙文”写作技巧 写作指南写作指南 1审读题目要求，确定写作主题：确定文章要表达的中心思想， 为选 取写作素材明确方向。 2抓取典型事例，凸显表达中心：记叙文一般包括事情发生的 时间 (when)、地点(where)、内容(what)、人物(who)、原因(why) 等要素。在这些 要素中要善于抓取那些最能体现中心的事件或情 节，然后将其进行有机地 整合，尽量达到层次分明、详略得当、 条理清晰、叙述生动、引人入胜、 回味无穷的表达效果，从而给 读者留下深刻的印象。 3选用恰当角度，理顺写作顺序：根据实际需要确定采用第一 或第三 人称进行写作， 然后根据表达的需要可采用顺叙(

2、按照时 间的先后顺序叙述 事情发生、 发展的过程)、 倒叙(先交代事件的 结局或某个突出的精彩片断， 然后回过头来再按照事情发生、 发 展的顺序叙述)或穿插等方法进行事件的 叙述。 4丰富语言手段，适度进行总结：在记叙文中可根据行文的需 要灵活 使用各种从句、倒装、非谓语动词、强调形式、省略、虚 拟语气等表达手 段对文章进行润色以增加文采。另外，根据实际 情况在必要的时候对主题 进行概括、总结或抒发情感从而起到 “画龙点睛”和“升华主题”的作用。 写作语料写作语料 1The other day, I took part in a meaningful activity from which I

3、 benefited a lot. 2Today isI feel very excited, because I will 3After arrivingwe set aboutAt firstAfterwardsAt last 4On our way towe had great fun, singing and laughing. 5It is Sunday today. This morning, we participate in a voluntary activity. 6From the experience I have learned that only ifcan we

4、7All in all, I have benefited a lot from 8What an unforgettable experience! From it, I come to realize/be aware of 9So interesting and exciting was the activity that 10Never will I forgetbecause not only did it teach me how tobut also 11Though tired, we all felt very happy. 12Tired as we were, we en

5、joyed 真题热线真题热线 (2017 北京) 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序， 写 一篇英文周记，记录毕业前夕你们制作以“感恩母校”为主题 的毕业纪念视 频的全过程。 注意：词数不少于 60。 提示词：视频 video 思路点拨思路点拨 体裁和格式：记叙文：活动介绍 主体时态：以一般过去时为主 中心人称：第一人称 写作要点 1.引入话题；2介绍活动的详细过程(以时间为序)； 3谈谈活动感受。 作文评台作文评台 学生习作学生习作 得分 22 With the graduation drawing near, my classmates and I made up o

6、ur minds to make a video to record the unforgettable time when we spent at school after having a heated discussion. We spent about ten days collect the material we would need. In the process, (1)we not only we interviewed our teachers, but also took a great number of photos of every aspect of school

7、 life. Although it was a bit difficult for us to choose the best materials and edit them wonderfully, we managed to create a perfect video. A few days later, when the video played on the graduation ceremony, all the people present were satisfied with it and couldnt help clapping their hands. It made

8、 us very excited. (2)I will never forget it . 名师点评名师点评 失分诊失分诊断断 1在定语从句中作动词 spent 的宾语，应使用关系代词，故 将when 改 为 which 或 that。 2spend time in doing sth.为固定句型，介词 in 可以省略，故 应将collect 改为 collecting。 3 the video与动词played构成被动关系， 故应将played改 为was played。 打造靓点打造靓点 1.将第一处划线句子改为部分倒装句： _ 2将第二处划线句子改为倒装句： _ 参考答案参考答案 1no

9、t only did we interview our teachers, but also we took a great number of photos of every aspect of school life 2Never will I forget it 参考范文参考范文 Graduation finally came. My classmates and I decided to do something. After a heated discussion, we agreed on making a video to record our experiences at sc

10、hool. Material collecting took us a whole week, during which we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of school life. The editing part after that was tough. We debated over what to put into the video. Some compromises were unavoidable, but the video turned out perfect. Several d

11、ays later, when the video was played on the graduation ceremony, it was well received. The students and teachers shared a great time. That surely gave us a great sense of achievement. 写一写写一写 (清华大学附中 20182019 学年下高三一模) 假设你是红星中学高三(1)班学生李华。 上周六你和同学骑共 享单车去购书 时看到某些不文明现象。请根据以下四幅图的 先后顺序，以“Our Meaningful Wor

12、k”为题，给校刊“英语角” 写一篇英文稿件，介绍事情的整 个过程。 注意：词数不少于 60。 提示词：共享单车 shared bicycle One possible version: Our Meaningful Work Last Saturday my classmates and I did some meaningful work as we went to buy books. That afternoon we rode shared bicycles to Beijing Book Building as planned. Everyone was excited, enjoy

13、ing the convenience brought about by the shared bicycles. However, something unexpected happened on arrival. We noticed the shared bicycles parked here and there, blocking the way of the passersby. One of my classmates proposed placing them in order, so we got down to work immediately. It took us ab

14、out twenty minutes to finish the work. Seeing the tidily arranged bicycles, we all felt delighted. We also received high praise for what we had done. The experience caused my concern about shared bicycles. I think we should put them in place after using them, which not only brings us neat and tidy environment, but also reflects qualities of a good citizen.