2020高考英语四层写作阶梯—层级二 不落俗套的亮点词汇.docx

1、2020 高考英语四层写作阶梯层级二 不落俗套的亮点词汇 阅卷时，一篇高考作文往往在阅卷时，一篇高考作文往往在 1 分钟内就会被判定生死，大众化的词汇、平庸的表分钟内就会被判定生死，大众化的词汇、平庸的表 达已使长时间工作的阅卷老师产生了视觉疲劳。在词汇方面：如果一篇作文中突然出现达已使长时间工作的阅卷老师产生了视觉疲劳。在词汇方面：如果一篇作文中突然出现 几个几个与众不同、让人眼前一亮的词汇与众不同、让人眼前一亮的词汇，阅卷老师的给分也绝不会吝啬；在句式方面：如，阅卷老师的给分也绝不会吝啬；在句式方面：如 果考生多运用一些果考生多运用一些并列句和复合句等高级句式并列句和复合句等高级句式，并注

2、意句式的灵活多变，使文章读起来，并注意句式的灵活多变，使文章读起来 抑扬顿挫，让考生深厚的语言功底得以体现，阅卷老师一定会毫不犹豫地将考生的作文抑扬顿挫，让考生深厚的语言功底得以体现，阅卷老师一定会毫不犹豫地将考生的作文 定位于五档线。定位于五档线。 不落俗套的亮点词汇不落俗套的亮点词汇 写作最基本的要求是考查考生遣词造句的能力，遣词的原则是表达准确、地道自然、写作最基本的要求是考查考生遣词造句的能力，遣词的原则是表达准确、地道自然、 生动形象。如果考生在掌握了最基本词汇的基础上，能够将一些常用词汇进行升华，就生动形象。如果考生在掌握了最基本词汇的基础上，能够将一些常用词汇进行升华，就 将成为

3、高考作文获得高分的亮点之一。将成为高考作文获得高分的亮点之一。 一、使用亮点词汇的一、使用亮点词汇的 4 种方法种方法 1“语语”众不同，避免人云亦云众不同，避免人云亦云 写作时，恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇或表达，会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感写作时，恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇或表达，会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感 觉。觉。 Im busy with my lessons now, for the College Entrance Examination, which is very important to me, is near. Im occupied with my lessons

4、 now, for the College Entrance Examination, which is of great importance to me, is around the corner.(2017天津高考书面表达天津高考书面表达) So I have to bother you to correct my mistakes in the material I attach to the letter. Therefore, I have no choice but to put you to trouble by correcting my mistakes in the ma

5、terial I attach to the letter.(2016全国卷全国卷书面表达书面表达) 2更新换代，避免重复更新换代，避免重复 写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语，要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。用写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语，要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。用 词不同、表达方式迥异，也是高级用法。词不同、表达方式迥异，也是高级用法。 The team will hold many activities, some of which will appeal to you, including many matches. The team will hold a ra

6、nge of activities, some of which will appeal to you, including many matches.(2017全国卷全国卷书面表达书面表达) Weve built a new experiment building beside the old one and weve also built a library where the old playground used to be. Weve built a new experiment building beside the old one and weve also set up a l

7、ibrary where the old playground used to be. 3单词与短语巧妙互用单词与短语巧妙互用 一般情况下短语优先，应多使用短语、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。但有时单一般情况下短语优先，应多使用短语、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。但有时单 词比短语更生动，可以词比短语更生动，可以“一词传神一词传神”。 Ive decided to teach you Tang Poetry in Room 101 Building 1 at 8 am on Wednesday, which will last two hours. Ive made up my mind

8、to teach you Tang Poetry in Room 101 Building 1 at 8 am on Wednesday, which will last two hours.(2017全国卷全国卷书面表达书面表达) We can look at this problem in many ways. We can view this problem in many ways.(view 比比 look at 更有更有“内涵内涵”) 4用高年级学到的词汇代替低年级学到的词汇用高年级学到的词汇代替低年级学到的词汇 为了表现自己的语言功底，吸引阅卷老师的眼球，应避免反复使用初中或小学

9、阶段学为了表现自己的语言功底，吸引阅卷老师的眼球，应避免反复使用初中或小学阶段学 过的词汇，尽量用高中阶段学到的词汇来代替。过的词汇，尽量用高中阶段学到的词汇来代替。 I should say sorry for being unable to go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I owe you an apology for being unable to go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.(2016全国卷全国卷书面表达书面表达) Second, I am try

10、ing my best to acquire the essential knowledge and skills concerning my position. Second, I am sparing no efforts to acquire the essential knowledge and skills concerning my position.(2017天津高考书面表达天津高考书面表达) 二、高分必备的亮点词汇二、高分必备的亮点词汇 Thats why I think the trip along the Yangtze River will be a betterchoi

11、ce. Thats why I think the trip along the Yangtze River will be a betteralternative.(2017北京高考书面表达北京高考书面表达) 这就是为什么我认为长江之行将是一个更好的选择。这就是为什么我认为长江之行将是一个更好的选择。 In the coming three years, our school life will be difficult. In the coming three years, our school life will be challenging.(2014江西江西 高考书面表达高考书面表达

12、) 在随后的三年里，我们的学校生活将会非常具有挑战性。在随后的三年里，我们的学校生活将会非常具有挑战性。 【课时提能训练课时提能训练 】 .请用高级词汇替换下列句子中的加黑部分请用高级词汇替换下列句子中的加黑部分 1(2017 全国卷全国卷书面表达书面表达) So, please spend some time taking a brief look at the history of the Tang Dynasty, which will help you prepare for your class. Therefore;_make_preparations_for 2(2017 全国卷

13、全国卷书面表达书面表达)In order to get a better understanding of Tang Poetry, I advise you to learn some brief history of the Tang Dynasty in advance.acquire_ 3 (2017 全国卷全国卷书面表达书面表达)The craftsmen will show visitors how to cut paper into different shapes on the spot.various/a_range_of 4(2016 北京高考书面表达北京高考书面表达)Ou

14、r class thought of the idea to make better use of used materials.came_up_with 5(2016 四川高考书面表达四川高考书面表达)The reasons are the following. as_follows 6(2015 湖南高考书面表达湖南高考书面表达)At the same time, I decided to study harder rather than waste precious time on those useless things . made_up_my_mind 7 As high scho

15、ol students, we should be neatly dressed when at school.are_supposed_to 8. .Theres no harm in your staying up late sometimes. occasionally/once_in_a_while 9. .The teacher directed the gifted students towards the moredifficult courses.challenging 10So far as I know, everyone of them wants to be a mod

16、el student.intends_to .请用高级词汇提升下面的考生作文请用高级词汇提升下面的考生作文 假定你是中学生李华，家住泉州。你的英国笔友假定你是中学生李华，家住泉州。你的英国笔友 Jason 来信谈到了他的家乡伦敦，来信谈到了他的家乡伦敦， 并希望了解你的家乡泉州的情况。请你用英文写一封回信。并希望了解你的家乡泉州的情况。请你用英文写一封回信。 回信必须包括以下内容：回信必须包括以下内容： 1自然情况：地理位置优越、气候风景宜人等；自然情况：地理位置优越、气候风景宜人等； 2发展成就：经济发展迅速、城市高楼林立等；发展成就：经济发展迅速、城市高楼林立等； 3存在问题：交通拥堵现象

17、、空气污染问题等；存在问题：交通拥堵现象、空气污染问题等； 4对泉州发展的看法：内容由考生自己拟定。对泉州发展的看法：内容由考生自己拟定。 注意：注意：1.词数词数 100 左右；左右； 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：高层建筑参考词汇：高层建筑 highrise building 【考生作文】考生作文】 Dear Jason， Im very happy to hear from you and know about your beautiful home city London. Now Id like to tell you somethin

18、g about my hometown Quanzhou. Quanzhou is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing fast during the past ten years. New bridges and roads have been built, highrise buildings standing in many parts of the city.More and more schools and hospitals are useful for the nativ

19、e people. It is developing into a modern and beautiful city. But there are still some problems, such as heavy traffic in rush hours and serious air pollution, which have a bad effect on peoples daily life. I think Quanzhou should develop healthily and scientifically, so that we could have a better h

20、ometown in future. Yours， Li Hua 【升格作文】升格作文】 Dear Jason， Im more_than happy to hear from you and know about your beautiful home city London. Now Id like to tell you something about my hometown Quanzhou. Quanzhou is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing rapidly duri

21、ng the past ten years. New bridges and roads have been set_up,_highrise buildings standing in many parts of the city. An_increasing_number_of schools and hospitals are available for the native people. It is developing into a modern and attractive/charming city. However,_there are still some problems, such as heavy traffic in rush hours and severe air pollution, which have a bad influence/impact on peoples daily life. In_my_opinion/As_far_as_I_am concerned,_Quanzhou should develop healthily and scientifically, so that we could have a better hometown in future. Yours， Li Hua