高考英语作文写作指导：以2020年浙江题为例谈如何用小说中的词句快写读后续写！.docx

1、高考英语作文写作指导： 以高考英语作文写作指导： 以 2020 年浙江题为例谈如何用小说中年浙江题为例谈如何用小说中 的词句快写读后续写！的词句快写读后续写！ 看完返老还童短篇小说后，有学生问我，如何用在读后续写中？她目前都是分类 记忆。我说，不止是这些，你需要把分类记忆的句子还原到小说人物身上。譬如你积 累的关于喜怒哀乐的词句，看到后，应该让你想到关于人物的一个个场景。这样的记 忆才非常有用。 今天这篇文章的句子全部来自返老还童小说，我主要的目的是示范如何自己去练 习。 首先这篇作文主要是围三个感情：恐惧、好奇、惊喜恐惧、好奇、惊喜。相应的动作也应该是相对 应的。 原因很简单：父亲买来小狗，

2、大狗必然过来看看，期间自然是先有点小害怕，然 后好奇，最后相处融洽。那么父母看到呢，一般都是惊奇。儿子回来后，同样也是好 奇和惊喜，最后从父母那得到答案。 最近我感到读后续写真不需要想得太复杂，顺着文章结构和中心自然续写就够了。最近我感到读后续写真不需要想得太复杂，顺着文章结构和中心自然续写就够了。 先确定文章中心（主要是要解决一个小问题或悬念），然后结构先确定文章中心（主要是要解决一个小问题或悬念），然后结构(把握好情感和环境细把握好情感和环境细 节描写），尤其注意首末照应。节描写），尤其注意首末照应。 而在返老还童的小说里这样的描写非常多。 一、仿写一、仿写 Dad put the box

3、 on the ground and opened the top. 1. 原句：原句：The colonel read it, his eyes popping from their sockets. 仿写：（下同）仿写：（下同）A little cute head poked out with caution, its eyes popping from their sockets out of curiosity. 2.原句：原句：When his grandfathers initial antagonism wore off, Benjamin and that gentleman

4、took enormous pleasure in one anothers company. They would sit for hours, these two, so far apart in age and experience, and, like old cronies, discuss with tireless monotony the slow events of the day. Approaching the box, Poppy wagged furiously. When their initial caution wore off, these two, so f

5、ar apart in age, took enormous pleasure in one anothers company like old cronies. 3. 原句：原句：Blind with enchantment, he felt that life was just beginning. Blind with enchantment, Poppy felt that life was just beginning. 4. 原句：原句：The doctor heard him, faced around, and stood waiting, a curious expressi

6、on settling on his harsh, medicinal face as Mr. Button drew near. The father stood and gasp in surprise, a curious expression settling on his face. 5. 原句：原句：Clank! The basin clattered to the floor and rolled in the direction of the stairs. Clank! Clank! It began a methodical decent as if sharing in

7、the general terror which this gentleman provoked. Clank! The basin in mothers hand clattered to the floor, as if sharing the general happiness which the two provoked. 6. 原句：原句：Am I mad? thundered Mr. Button, his terror resolving into rage. “Am I dreaming?” demanded she, her sadness resolving into jo

8、y. 7. 原句：原句：Benjamins growing unhappiness at home was compensated for by his many new interests. Their monotony at home was compensated for by the newcomer. 8. 原句：原句：A grotesque picture formed itself with dreadful clarity before the eyes of the tortured mana picture of himself walking through the cr

9、owded streets of the city with this appalling apparition stalking by his side. Benjamin jumped to his feet fairly quivering with enthusiasm. A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from university. 9. 原句：原句： Far up the road the lights of the Shevlins country house drifted into view, and presently th

10、ere was a sighing sound that crept persistently toward themit might have been the fine plaint of violins or the rustle of the silver wheat under the moon. Almost two miles away from the house, there was two dogs happy bark that crept persistently toward him, which aroused curiosity in him. 10. 原句：原句

11、：but an anxious inspection of his bureau drawer disclosed that the dye bottle was not there. An anxious search disclosed that Poppy was tumbling about with a puppy on the floor. 11. 原句：原句：At this a look of utter terror spread itself over girls face. She rose to her feet and seemed about to fly from

12、the hall, restraining herself only with the most apparent difficulty. At this a look of utter ecstasy spread itself over the young mans face. He rose to his feet and seemed about to fly from the door, restraining himself only with the most apparent difficulty for fear that he would startle the littl

13、e member. 12. 原句：原句：Again he threw a curious glance at Mr. Button. Poppy and the puppy threw a glance at him and ran over like crazy. 13. his jealousies and anxieties melted from him like a mantle of snow. His anxieties melted from him like a mantle of snow. “I cant believe you got yourselves a pupp

14、y!” “We didnt,” replied Mom. “This puppy is for Poppy! 二删减二删减 Dad put the box on the ground and opened the top. A little cute head pokedout with caution, its eyes popping from their sockets out. Approachingthe box, Poppy wasamazed and wagged furiously. When their initial caution woreoff, these two,

15、so far apart in age, took enormous pleasure in one anotherscompany like old cronies. Blind with enchantment, Poppy felt thatlife was just beginning.The father stood and gasp insurprise, a curious expression settling on his face. Clank! The basin in mothershand clattered to the floor, as if sharing t

16、he general happiness which the twoprovoked. “Am I dreaming? What will our son think?” demanded she, her sadnessresolving into joy.Their monotony at home was compensated for by the newcomer.A picture formed itself before their eyestheir son jumpedto his feet fairly quivering with enthusiasm. A few we

17、eks later, the boy arrived home from university. Almosttwo miles away, there was two dogs happy bark that crept persistently toward him,which aroused curiosity in him.Ananxious search disclosed that Poppy was tumbling about with a puppy on thefloor. At this a look of utter ecstasy spread itself over

18、 the young mans face.He rose to his feet and seemed about to fly from the door, restraining himselfonly with the most apparent difficulty for fear that he would startle the littlemember.Poppy and the puppy threw a glance at him and ran over like crazy. His anxietiesmelted from him like a mantle of s

19、now. “Icant believe you got yourselves a puppy!” “We didnt,” replied Mom. “This puppy is for Poppy!” 三、成文三、成文 Dad put the box on the ground and opened the top. A little cute head poked out of the box with caution, its eyes popping from their sockets out. Approaching the box,Poppy wagged furiously. B

20、ut when their initial caution wore off, these two, so far apart in age, took enormous pleasure in one anothers company like old cronies. Clank! The basin in mothers hand clattered to the floor, as if sharing the general happiness which the two provoked. “Am I dreaming? What will our boy think?” dema

21、nded she, her sadness resolving into joy. A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from university. Almost two miles away, there was two dogs cheerful bark that crept persistently toward him, which aroused curiosity in him. An anxious search disclosed that Poppy was tumbling about with a puppy on the

22、 floor. At this a look of utter ecstasy spread itself over the young mans face. Poppy and the puppy threw a glance at him and ran over like crazy. His anxieties melted from him like a mantle of snow. “I cant believe you got yourselves a puppy!” “We didnt,” replied parents. “This puppy is for Poppy!”