2021届高考英语二轮复习写作必做题-短文改错+书面表达（五）含答案及解析.doc

1、2021 届高考英语二轮复习届高考英语二轮复习 短文改错短文改错+书面表达书面表达（五）（五） 题组一题组一： 1.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写 的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误 仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(), 并在其下写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。 修改:在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2.只允许修改 10 处, 多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。 I went to Turkey last summer, wh

2、ere I saw many place of interest. The weather was very nice and the people here were friendly. What I especial enjoyed was the Turkish food which was delicious. I caught the early ferry to cross from one side of the city to other side, take many pictures with my camera. The cost of the whole trip wa

3、s a bit of high, but I thought it was worth it. The Turkish people did not speak much English, and I managed to get to where I plan to go. During the trip, I went to the traditional Turkish baths, what were very cheap and relaxed. 2.假如你是李华,你的英国好朋友 Tom 来信说,每次遇到重要考试,他都 会感到不安,想让你给他提一些建议。请你用英语给他写一封回信,信

4、的内容应包括以下要点: 1. 考前制定好复习计划; 2. 考试期间正常作息; 3. 睡前洗热水澡、喝热牛奶等有助于睡眠。 注意: 1. 根据以上内容写一篇短文,不要逐字翻译,可适当增加细节,以使行 文连贯。 2.词数 100 左右。 Dear Tom, _ _ _ _ _ _ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 题组二题组二： 1.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写 的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉 及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。 修

5、改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2. 只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。 My uncle, director of Yonghua Company, has several expensive cars, which he used to enjoy driving. However, recently he has begun to ride his bicycle at and from work following a doctors advices. The benefits of the chan

6、ge are obviously. He has become more energetic and is in good shape than before. Besides, he is happy that he can make difference to reducing pollution and preserving natural resources. Follow his example, more and more people in his company, which spend a lot of time sitting in the office every day

7、, have been started using bicycles, saying that with the popularity of shared bicycles, this is extremely convenient. Now this has become a new fashion in the company to go green or keep fit. 2.假定你是李华,为方便学生为偏远山区学校捐赠旧书、杂志等,学生 会决定设置旧书回收角。请你写一封信给生病休假的留学生 Tom 告 知此事,内容包括: 1. 询问近况; 2. 告知返校后捐赠书籍; 3. 祝愿早日康复

8、。 注意: 1. 词数 100 左右; 2.首句已给出,但不计入总词数: 3.参考词汇:a recycling book corner Dear Tom, _ _ _ _ _ _ Yours, Li Hua 答案以及解析答案以及解析 题组一： 1.答案： I went to Turkey last summer, where I saw many place places of interest. The weather was very nice and the people here there were friendly. What I especial especially enjoy

9、ed was the Turkish food which was delicious. I caught the early ferry to cross from one side of the city to the other side, take taking many pictures with my camera. The cost of the whole trip was a bit of high, but I thought it was worth it. The Turkish people did not speak much English, and but I

10、managed to get to where I plan planned to go. During the trip, I went to the traditional Turkish baths, w what hich were very cheap and relaxed relaxing . 2.答案： Dear Tom, I am sorry to hear that you feel nervous when taking an important exam. It is quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions may

11、 offer you some help. First of all, in my opinion, its important for us to make careful plans for every exam. In this way we can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams. Besides, enough sleep can make us energetic and enable us to perform well in an exam. Therefore, during the period of exams, we

12、 should not stay up too late. We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed which might help us have a good sleep. I hope youll find these suggestions useful. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 题组二： 1.答案： My uncle, director of Yonghua Company, has several expensive cars, which he used t

13、o enjoy driving. However, recently he has begun to ride his bicycle at to and from work following a doctors advices advice . The benefits of the change are obviously obvious . He has become more energetic and is in be good tter shape than before. Besides, he is happy that he can make a difference to

14、 reducing pollution and preserving natural resources. Follow Following his example, more and more people in his company, which who spend a lot of time sitting in the office every day, have been started using bicycles, saying that with the popularity of shared bicycles, this is extremely convenient.

15、Now this it has become a new fashion in the company to go green or and keep fit. 2.答案： Dear Tom, How are you doing these days? Do you feel a bit better? I miss you very much. I have some good news to tell you. A recycling corner for old books will be set in our school next week. If students have old

16、 books, newspapers and magazines they dont want to read, they can donate them to it. All the collected books and magazines will be given away to the remote poor mountain schools. Remember to bring some old books when you return to school. We can do our part to help those kids in need. Wish you get well soon. Looking forward to your early return to school. Yours, Li Hua