人教新目标中考英语复习课件：英语写作复习研讨课课件 (共21张PPT).ppt

1、Revision,The Affiliated High School to Jilin University 吉大附中 吴轶佳,Topic-based writing,If you want to be skilled in writing , first of all, you need to be an efficient, thoughtful and wise learner.,My advice,写作是综合能力的体现，要想成中考中的写作达人，应该在总复习的过程中成为一个高效，善思，智慧的学习者。,Initially(= Firstly), be a sharp observer（观

2、察者）. - There must be thought behind phenomenon. （看透现象后的问题）,What topics can you find out from these pictures?,Topics that are concerned with the pictures,A. Students are under too much pressure. B. Students have no free time to do what they like. C. Parents fit as much as they want into their childre

3、ns lives. D. Parents are always trying to plan their childrens lives.,初三的学生即将面临(be around the corner)中考，学习的压力很大，最近取消初三学生晚自习(evening self-study)的消息在学生和家长当中引发了很大反响。请根据此内容，按照如下提示写一篇不少于80词的小短文。 1. 谈谈你对此话题的个人观点。 2. 为什么你觉得应该保留或者取消晚自习。 3. 你觉得应该如何更有效地合理地计划安排自己的时间。,长春市第45中学 英语模拟考试书面表达（B）,What is more, be an

4、open-minded learner. - I can make full use of any leanring resources (学习资源)，especially our textbooks.,Related units in our textbooks,Grade 8 II Unit 2 Reading Maybe you should learn to relax. Topic: causes of problems Grade 9 Unit 1 Reading How do you deal with problems? Topic: how to do things Unit

5、 3 Reading Should I be allowed to make my own decisions? Topic: agree and disagree,Useful words &expressions about target topics,complain v. complaint n. busy adj. pushy adj. compare v. crazy adj. freedom n. solution n. realize v. opportunity n. syn. = chance n. volunteer v. achieve v. importance n.

6、 succeed v.,Useful words &expressions about target topics,try to fit as much as possible into. under too much pressure tired kids join after-school clubs push. a lot send. to kinds of classes agree (with.) find it hard to think for oneself plan. for sb. on the one hand on the other hand,need time an

7、d freedom to relax need time to do things by themselves So how do we deal with.? with the help of . worry about. practice ones hobbies as much as sb. want spend time on. be allowed to make decisions for oneself achieve ones dream,Since the entrance exam is around the corner, we students are supposed

8、 to make full use of every possible _, of which self-study is a _ one. Therefore, I _ the idea that evening self-study should be kept. To tell the truth, its not easy to _ study at home, no matter how much Im interested in getting knowledge. However, studying is efficient when the whole class are le

9、arning quietly. Such good learning environment _ me to do my best to keep up with those hard-working guys. Besides, whenever I meet a problem, I have my teachers to _. This cant happen when Im alone in my study and probably I will _ more tries. As for my afterschool time, I _ keep a good balance of

10、work and play. On the one hand, Ill finish all my school tasks as soon as possible. On the other hand, relaxing activities like practicing hobbies or hanging out with friends also help me to be _ in studies.,crucial,chance,agree with,concentrate on,encourages,help me out,give up,prefer to,active,be

11、useful to, crucial, chance, concentrate on, encourage, help . out, give up, prefer to do, agree with, active,Last but not least, be a critical and flexible(有主见的和善于变通的)learner. - Ive been a crash( 速成的) writing expert .,初三的学生即将面临(be in the corner)中考，学习的压力很大，最近取消初三学生晚自习(evening self-study)的消息在学生和家长当中引发

12、了很大反响。请根据此内容，按照如下提示写一篇不少于80词的小短文。 1. 从你的角度你非常赞成取消晚自习。 2. 为什么你觉得取消晚自习对你有利。 3. 你会如何合理地计划安排自己的时间。,长春市第45中学英语模拟考试书面表达（B）,Imitate(模仿) and rewrite(改写),Since the entrance exam is around the corner, we students are supposed to make full use of every possible chance,_. Therefore, I agree with the idea that e

13、vening self-study should be _. - beginning,of which self-study is a crucial one,kept,But it doesnt mean we dont need time and freedom to do things by ourselves.,canceled,.,As for how to plan my after-school time, I prefer to keep a good balance of work and play. On the one hand, Ill finish all my sc

14、hool tasks as soon as possible. On the other hand, relaxing activities like practicing hobbies or hanging out with friends also help me to be active in study. - ending,Take full advantage(充分利用） of our textbooks,聪明的你一定发现了，我们把可以利用的那篇小文章中开头部分的观点倒置，最后一段保留或做简单修改，完成了开头和结尾部分。 一篇高端大气上档次的作文就新鲜出炉了。中考作文怎能难倒我们。

15、,The second paragraph about why you think it should be canceled is actually a piece of cake.,如果再利用从教材中总结归纳的单词，短语，句型结构完成对于观点的说明和支持，(Dont forget the useful words and expressions collected from the textbooks.),Initially, “ All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.“ A whole day of classes and exercise

16、s has been tiring enough. If parents and teachers try to fit as much as possible into our after-school time, life is no fun at all. We do think we should be allowed to do what we are really interested in, especially when we have a plan or to-do list. From another perspective, we dont want to find it

17、 hard to think for ourselves when we are getting older. The reduction of time at school will help us learn to be more independent both in growing and in study and also its certain that we will benefit a lot from planning things for ourselves.,DIY Time - the second paragraph,Useful words &expressions

18、 we can use,try to fit as much as possible into. under too much pressure tired kids join after-school clubs push. a lot send. to kinds of classes agree (with.) find it hard to think for oneself plan. for sb. on the one hand on the other hand,need time and freedom to relax need time to do things by t

19、hemselves So how do we deal with.? with the help of . worry about. practice ones hobbies as much as sb. want spend time on. be allowed to make decisions for oneself achieve ones dream,How can we finish our composition in the entrance examination paper perfectly? With the help of the topics and related words and expressions that we are so familiar with in our textbooks, we can just do it.,Lets sum up.,1. 审题，确定相关话题 2. 联系教材，搜索可以利用的单词，短语，句式和结构 3. 按照 what ,why, how的线索流畅表达,efficiently thoughtfully wisely,Thanks for your time!,