2021届高考英语二轮复习应用文写作精准练 （3）感谢信.doc

1、 2021 届高考英语二轮复习应用文写作精准练届高考英语二轮复习应用文写作精准练 （3）感谢信）感谢信 1.假如你是李华,上周在加拿大参加了中加双方组织的中加学生文化交流周活动,并住在 Peter 家里.回国后,请你给在加拿大期间认识的新朋友 Peter 写封感谢信,内容包括: 1、交流活动中的收获; 2、难忘在 Peter 家的美好日子; 3、感谢他送你的英文书. 注意: 1、词数 100 左右 2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3、开头语已为你写好(不计入总词数) 提示词汇: 中加文化交流网 Sino-Canada Cultural Exchange Week Dear Peter,

2、Ive been back home safe from Canada. _ _ _ _ _ Yours, Li Hua 2.假定你是学生会主席李华,美籍教师 Peter 在你校工作三年,现即将回国。 请给他写一封信表 示感谢。内容包括: 1. 表示感谢; 2. 感谢的原因; 3. 表达祝福。 注意: 1.词数 100 左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; _ _ _ _ _ 3.假设你是李华,你上周刚刚参加了你校举办的第十届英语演讲比赛,并从三十名选手中脱颖 而出,荣获“十佳奖”。在准备参赛期间,你的外教 Mr.Craige 对你提供了很多指导和帮助。现请 你用英语给他写一封感谢信,

3、内容包括: 1.获奖情况及感受; 2.回顾准备过程; 3.感谢他的帮助; 4.邀他来家做客。 注意:1.词数 100 词左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 提示:十佳奖:Top Ten Prize Dear Mr. Craige, _ _ _ _ _ _ Yours, Li Hua 4.假如你叫李华,你的英语老师 Peter 在你因病住院期间经常在线辅导你学习英语,鼓励你积 极面对生活,战胜困难。请给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括: 1.表示感谢; 2.回顾帮助; 3.邀请来中国游玩。 注意: 1.词数 80 左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter, _ _ _

4、_ _ Yours, Li Hua 5.假如你是李华,你上周日在学校运动会上不小 心扭伤了左脚。多亏留学生 Tom 学过这方面 的急救知识,对你进行了急救。请你用英语给 Tom 写一封感谢信。内容要点如下: 1. 你扭伤的情况; 2. Tom 如何对你进行急救; 3. 向他表达你的感激之情; 注意: 1.词数 80 左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, My name is Li Hua, who was assisted by you last Sunday._ _ _ _ _ _ Best wishes to you.

5、 Yours, Li Hua 6.2020 年春节期间,新型冠状病毒肺炎(NCP)在我国蔓延。在此期间,义无反顾冲上疫情防控 第一线,作出了防疫的重大贡献。现在你向中国日报社写一封信,感谢在疫情期间奋斗在抗疫 一线的医务人员。 要点: 感谢他们的勇敢,忘我和付出; 我们一定能战胜疫情; 学习他们,学好本领,奉献社会; 表达感谢,并祝他们安康。 要求: 1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称; 2)词数 80 左右。 Dear Editors, I am writing to express my sincere appreciation for the unselfish efforts and

6、mission of the forefront medical workers in fighting against the NCP. _ _ _ _ _ Sincerely yours, A middle school student 答案以及解析答案以及解析 1.答案： Dear Peter, Ive been back home safe from Canada. Thank you very much for the warm help during my stay in your country. Last week, I participated in Sino-Canada

7、Cultural Exchange Week. I enjoyed myself very much. We visited some museums and some places of interest, which made me have a better understanding of the Canadian society, culture and history. The most important thing is that Ive made some foreign friends like you. Whats more, I am lucky enough to s

8、tay at your home. And I will never forget the days we spent together. Here I especially thank you for the books you offered me. Its a great help for me to learn English well. I will treasure and make full use of them. Welcome to China when it is convenient to you. Yours, Li Hua 解析：这是一封感谢信.根据题目要求可知用第

9、一人称,时态以一般过去时态和一般现在时态 为主. 高分句型 1.We visited some museums and some places of interest, which made me have a better understanding of the Canadian society , culture and history. 代指主句 We visited some museums and some places of interest, which 引导非限制性定语从句 made me have a better understanding of the Canadian

10、 society , culture and history. 我们参观了一些博物馆和一些名 胜古迹,这使我对加拿大的历史、文化和历史有了更深入的了解. 2.Its a great help for me to learn English well. 句子里It做形式主语,代指动词不定式 to learn English well. 学好英语对我 有很大帮助.审题是否清楚是一篇书面表达成功与否的关键所在,在整个写作过程中起着决定 性作用.审好题会让我们做到磨刀不误砍柴工,审题时要做到以下几点: (1)审要求:书面表达 试题一般都由情景和要求两部分构成.情景中包括所写材料的目的、 对象、 时间、

11、 地点、 内容等,一般在书面表达题的前半部分;而要求一般在书面表达的后半部分,以注意形式给 出,实际上是对考生提出的要求.因而考生对于题目所提供的说明,应认真分析、 反复推敲,搞清 提出的内容要求,抓住所要表达的信息点.( 2)审文体:高考书面表达的体裁一般有三大类:记叙 文、说明文和应用文,具体形式有便条,日记,通知,书信,人物、事情、情景故事的描写,看图说 话,缩写,扩写,改写等.审题时要审清文体,注意格式上的不同,避免出错. (3)审人称:审查书面表 达题干中隐含的读者对象和撰写人,即搞清楚此篇文章是由谁写给谁的.写稿人是谁一般都 已明确指出,给出形式假设环境中的某人,如假设你是李华,写

12、作时即用第一人称我,即李 华.而读者对象有时没有明示,要考生自己去进行判断. (4)审时态:根据情景判断短文需要的主 体时态,即搞清楚要写的是什么时候的事,过去的就用过去时.比如日记,是叙述过去发生的事 情,自然用过去时;通知多用将来时. 2.答案： Dear Peter, Im Li Hua, chairman of the Students Union in our school. On behalf of all the students, Im writing to extend my sincere thankfulness for your three years hard wor

13、k. Without your excellent teaching and correct guidance, our spoken English wouldnt have improved so much. The past three years have witnessed a sea of unforgettable moments we spent together. Your humorous gestures, fluent spoken English and standard pronunciation left a deep impression on us. When

14、 we were shy to talk in English, it was you who encouraged us to be brave. Anyway, thanks again for what you have done to us. We wish you a pleasant journey home and everything goes well with you/all the best. Yours, Li Hua 解析：高分句型一:Without your excellent teaching and correct guidance, our spoken En

15、glish wouldnt have improved so much.译文:没有你出色的教学和正确的指导,我们的英语口语就不 会有这么大的进步.分析:使用虚拟语气.高分句型二:When we were shy to talk in English, it was you who encouraged us to be brave.译文:当我们羞于用英语交谈时,是你鼓励我们勇敢.分析: 使用 when 引导时间状语从句,主句是强调句. 3.答案： Dear Mr. Craige, I am writing to express my thanks for your help, without

16、which I could not have got the “Top Ten Prize” out of 30 competitors in the l0th English Speaking Contest in our school. The final result was totally beyond my imagination. Its thanks to your effort that I have made much more rapid progress in my spoken English. Before the contest, whenever you had

17、free time, you would help me practice my spoken English. You communicated with me as much as possible, and corrected my pronunciation, intonation as well. Whats more, you taught me some helpful speaking skills and made me full of confidence. Without your help I couldnt have achieved such a good resu

18、lt. I have benefited from this competition a lot. All in all, I really appreciate your help. Thank you again for your advice and kind help. I sincerely invite you to my home for dinner and have a good time. 解析：本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息假设你是李华,你上周刚刚参加了你校举 办的第十届英语演讲比赛,并从三十名选手中脱颖而出,荣获十佳奖.在准备参赛期间,你的 外教 Mr. Cr

19、aige 对你提供了很多指导和帮助.现请你用英语给他写一封感谢信,写作时注意以 下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,要点包括:获奖情况及感受;.回顾准 备过程;感谢他的帮助;邀他来家做客. 2、 提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、 构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语, 按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写. 3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态. 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点. 【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:beyond ones imagination 超乎想 象 make rapid progr

20、ess 取得快速进步 achieve a good result 取得一个好成绩 benefit from从 中受益 all in all 总而言之 have a good time 玩得开心 I got the Top Ten Prize out of 30 competitors, which was totally beyond my imagination.(高分句型一)Its because of your effort that I have made such rapid progress in my spoken English.(高分句型二)Without your help

21、, I wouldnt have achieved such a good result.(高分句型三) 4.答案： Dear Peter, Im writing to express my gratitude to you for your help and encouragement during my stay in hospital. Undoubtedly, without your help with my English online every day, I couldnt have made my English study go smoothly as usual. And

22、 its your frequent encouragement and positive attitudes towards life that guide me out of low spirits to deal with my illness, study and life in such a sound way. Thank you for your kindness again and I do hope you will come to China to have a nice trip where you can witness in person the perfect co

23、mbination of culture and nature. Yours, Li Hua 5.答案： Dear Tom, My name is Li Hua, who was assisted by you last Sunday. I am writing to thank you for helping me out in the sports meeting. Last Sunday, unfortunately, my left foot got injured in the competition. Luckily, you just learned first aid. Fir

24、st, you dialed 120 immediately and performed first aid before the doctor came. Besides, you put my foot in a comfortable position. Then you rushed to a shop nearby and fetched bags of ice, and carefully applied the ice to the injury. Lastly, you covered the injury with a clean and dry bandage. 6.答案：

25、 During a time of such uncertainty and crisis, it was humbling to see them courageously putting others first in moments of need, devoting their efforts and time selflessly. The medical workers in our country have inspiringly shown that together as a community, anything is possible. We have the confi

26、dence to win total victory in NCP fight. We applaud the efforts of the medical workers. Not only do we back for them, but also what we have learned from them is that studying hard and becoming heroes in the hearts of the people. We again want to express our thanks to your outstanding contributions to the NCP control efforts in the face of the ongoing epidemic. Take care and come back home safe and sound.