2021届高中英语牛津上海版高中三年级第一学期高三作文学案整理.docx

1、1 2021 届高三作文学案届高三作文学案 1 Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 请简要描述图片内容,并结合生活或学习中的例子谈谈你对该图的理解。 审题：审题： 本篇文章为看图作文，要求学生根据自己的认识水平解读画面，展开想象，并用例子来谈谈对 图片的理解。 本文应分为两个部分：一是描述图片描述图片，二是结合例子谈谈对图片的理解结合例子谈谈对图片的理解。 描述图片描述图片：本图描绘的是一群蚂蚁在遇到困难（单

2、凭个体，无法跨越沟壑）时，凭借集体的力 量，顺利抵达彼岸。图片描述力求生动、有趣。从图片中汲取的应是团结、牺牲等正能量。 结合例子谈谈对图片的理解结合例子谈谈对图片的理解：所引用的例子例子应为自己生活或学习中具体的一件事、或一个事件 （切忌空谈） 。注意，用一般过去时一般过去时来叙述事例。 （有的同学讲述了几位同学如何一起完成一个课题 研究这一件事、有的同学则讲述了这次举全国之力抗击疫情这一事件。 ）谈对图片的理解理解时应紧密结 合图片及例子，围绕从图片中汲取的正能量展开。 提纲：提纲： Para. 1 描述图片描述图片+所悟出的正能量所悟出的正能量 15% As is vividly dep

3、icted in the picture, a group of ants connect themselves with each other tightly to form a bridge, so that their fellows can smoothly make their way across the gap, which is much wider than their body length. At the sight of these cunning ants, I cant help recalling a memory about solidarity. Para.

4、2 写生活写生活或学习或学习中中具体的具体的一件一件事事、或一个事件、或一个事件（用用过去时态，切忌泛泛而谈）过去时态，切忌泛泛而谈）40-45% （e.g. My memory remains fresh when it comes to；The memory of flashes back to me.） It was my first day in high school when the new class teacher assigned me to rehearse a class performance. Being kind of timid in front of stran

5、gers, however, I found it a great challenge to me. Therefore, despite the scenario figured out, I could do nothing but stand still, blaming myself for being unable to utter a word. Just then, some of my classmates noticed my embarrassment and came toward me with bright smiles on their faces, asking

6、if they could do something to help. Such kindness wiped away my fear, like the gentlest wind in the world. Even more delightfully, the tasks were soon shared, whereby a wonderful performance was finally brought on stage. Para. 3 结合例子谈谈对图片的理解结合例子谈谈对图片的理解 30% Its true that sometimes were like the ants

7、, powerless in the face of a huge “gap”, yet making joint efforts can always tip the scale. Furthermore, so sweet is the fruit of solidarity that its by all means worth our while. At this time of world crisis, most importantly, its time for solidarity, not stigma. Para.4 总结总结 10-15% Simply put, the

8、lesson from the ants is that wed better unite to make ourselves stronger, especially in 2 times of adversity. 2021 届届范文汇总范文汇总 As is shown in the picture, the army of ants are faced with the “gap” which is so wide that none of them can safely go from one side to the other on their own. Under such cir

9、cumstance, some ants lie down, connecting with one another to build a “bridge” in order that the others can get to the other side safely. This picture reminds me of a trip to the mountain areas, during which our class had to cross a fast-flowing stream, with no bridge and only slippery stones to ste

10、p on. To help everyone cross the stream safely, some of my classmates voluntarily took off their shoes, stepped into the stream and stood beside each stone so that they could lend a hand when others went from one stone to another. Despite the fact that they were wet all over, these courageous young

11、men just stayed in the cold water until everyone reached the other side of the stream. It goes without saying that more often than not, we work with other people to complete a certain task in our life and obstacles are inevitably standing in our way. If what we have in mind is all about ourselves, w

12、e can never get through the obstacles and our road to success is therefore blocked. Facing the dilemma, those who are ready to sacrifice their own interest and make effort to seek solutions to the problem are called for. Compared with the teams eventual success as a whole, the individual loss isnt w

13、orth mentioning. In a word, what we need to do is to do our part for the fulfillment of collective interest, even if it is sometimes at the sacrifice of our own benefit. 高三（13）班曹阳 As is illustrated in the picture, a group of ants are making their way over a river. Some of them build a bridge with th

14、eir own bodies so that others can step on their backs and continue the trip. In our life, we are often required to work as a team. Through the teamwork, we can achieve what cannot be accomplished when we work alone. However, the teamwork sometimes involves sacrifice. We may feel unfair when we have

15、to make efforts only to pave the way for others. This perspective is totally wrong and self-centered. As team members, the major purpose of our efforts is to achieve success as a whole. As is shown in the picture, the ants who sacrifice themselves to serve as the bridge may not be able to catch up o

16、r cross the river later. Their choice is intended for the success of their whole group. So when we are in a team, it is wise to put away our judgment on our personal interests and focus only on what is beneficial to the whole team. This theory can be applied to our society. After the coronavirus bro

17、ke out, people from all walks of life, especially doctors and nurses, have chosen to sacrifice themselves, risking their lives to protect others from the disease and keep the society working. We are now pulling through this extreme adversity, so what we should do is to stand on the position of the w

18、hole country or even the whole world. We should respect whose who are willing to sacrifice and bear in mind that we must be generous rather than selfish. We all study or live in the groups, so it is very vital for us to arm ourselves with team spirits and willingness to sacrifice. 高三（13）班 杨郑祎 As is

19、vividly shown in the picture, several ants attempt to go ahead, whereas there is no bridge between the two small mountains. As a consequence, some ants sacrifice themselves and use their bodies to construct firm bridge, which others can make use of to go on their journey. It is the power of cooperat

20、ion that allows other ants the opportunity to go ahead and keep themselves safe and sound. Despite the fact that those ants serving as a bridge are likely to lose their lives, they still 3 lend a helpful hand to others without any complaints, regrets and hesitations. What is mentioned above can be s

21、imilar in our life and study. The strength of a person is limited when faced with unprecedented difficulties. On the contrary, the power of cooperation plays a crucial and dominant role. Take cleaning up the classroom for example, one will take vast quantities of hours to complete the task, while th

22、e team only uses a handful of minutes to finish it more effectively and perfectly. What can be easily concluded is that team spirit helps us overcome some obstacles smoothly and give us the courage to keep going on. Regardless of the fact that someone may be inferior temporarily, those who are advan

23、ced will help them in return. In the last analysis, taking advantage of the team cooperation brings us the convenience and leads all of us to succeed and accomplish a lot. 高三（13）班 徐冯祎旸 As is shown in the picture , eight ants are challenged with a huge gap , which is too wide for each of them to pass

24、 . Nevertheless , they manage to get to the opposite side because four of them construct a bridge with their bodies . Without the joint efforts and sacrifice made by the four ants , its impossible for them to succeed . This picture demonstrates the enormous power of cooperation to us . Take myself a

25、s an example. Im a member of a mountaineering club. Every time we went mountaineering , we assigned diverse tasks to each member . Each member carried different things we need on the mountain . And during the climbing , when some of us got exhausted or felt sick, we helped each other carry items and

26、 moved forward together . Every time I stood on the summit , it occurred to me that without other members selfless assistance , I could never enjoy the picturesque scenery on the mountain . When a tough situation comes to us , its significant to have team spirit . As huge tasks are all composed by s

27、mall ones , only by distributing tasks to members with different capacities can we eventually piece together a satisfactory result . Moreover , we ought to trust our teammates so that we can cooperate with each other better and thus solve the problem more smoothly . Everyone in a team ought to be wi

28、lling to make contributions, fulfill their commitments, or even make sacrifices for the team. In brief , cooperation is of the essence (极重要的，必不可少的) in our life . Not only should we realize the importance of cooperation , but also we should always cooperate with others actively in practice. 高三(6)班 卫乐

29、 2020 届范文汇总届范文汇总 As is vividly described in the picture, with five small ants connecting their bodies with one another, serving as an ant-made bridge, three ants have the access to the other side of the river with ease, which demonstrates the significance of uniting. It is widely accepted that it is

30、 the collective efforts that contribute to a win-win consequence. My memory was still fresh when it comes to a drama performance, which was around the corner. As the leader of the team, worried as I was, there were a wealth of tasks to deal with at the same time, which put me in a dilemma. Having wi

31、tnessed my helplessness, Mary and Tom stood out, suggesting that they extend a helping hand to stretch me out of trouble. So ambitious were we that we devoted numerous hours to practicing, ensuring that every detail is well performed. As far as Im concerned, by no means am I capable of achieving the

32、 goal without the help form my friends. It is the joint goal and united spirits that provide me with a chance to conquer difficulties. In a nutshell, never should we blink the significance of uniting, which enables people to embrace a brilliant future! 高三 11 班张怡凡 As is vividly showed in the picture,

33、 several ants laid down one by one, serving as a “bridge” over the gap which was definitely beyond one ants reach, to let their partners get over the gap safe and sound. 4 Undoubtedly, its their collective efforts and selfless sacrifice that contribute to their success. This spirit of solidarity and

34、 selflessness reminds me of the doctors and nurses working day and night just for their patients restless mind and delicate health condition. During the unprecedented outbreak of coronavirus, the whole world was trapped in fear with the death tolls rocketing, but, fortunately, there were thousands o

35、f doctors and nurses who had been acting just like the ants lying down, going to great lengths to cure as many patients as possible. Exhausted as they were, they kept using their vulnerable bodies to pave the way for the patients to let them get over the gap between life and death .It was because of

36、 their tolerance and persistence that the process where we overcame the virus was smoothed to an incredible extent. From my perspective, the meaning the picture wants to convey is exactly the spirit behind the ants sacrificing themselves for the safety of others and all the ants formed a tightly-con

37、nected group, which doubled their abilities and potentials. In a nutshell, we should all admire those “ants” around us and try to be one of them to make the world more beautiful and humane. 高三 12 班汪忱言 As is shown in the picture, the ants were faced with a seemingly impassable cliff, but finally they

38、 managed to get it through by cooperation. Touchingly, some of the ants lay down to “build” a bridge over the gulf so that the other ants passed, getting to the other side of the cliff. This comic shed light on the significance of cooperation in our life. As we all know, the power and capacity of a

39、single man is limited, but when it comes to the capacity of a group of people, it is unimaginable, for working together inspires everyone to act his best to contribute more to the community, thus encouraging the rest to imitate them and to get the most out of it. Take the outbreak of corona virus as

40、 an example, it was the perseverance and responsibility of all Chinese that brought about the impressively efficient control of such a severe epidemic disease. Doctors, policemen, construction workers, nurses went to the front line at the first moment, like the ants lying down to build a bridge, and

41、 all of us ordinary people were like the ants passing by. They made great efforts to help us through, and in turn, we stayed at home to undergo home confinement, relieving their pressure, which,from my perspective, definitely shows the mind-blowing power of cooperation. Only by connecting yourself t

42、o other people in a deeply meaningful way and working together can we work out the solution to every seemingly unsolvable problems. Weve learned this lesson from life and now what we need to do is to put this theory into practice. As students, teenagers, citizens, we should stand as one and hold a s

43、trong sense of community and responsibility. All in all,as the saying goes, “Two heads are better than one.”,if we actually cooperate with each other, we can conquer every difficulty we meet with. 高三 13 班裴李旸 5 奉贤中学奉贤中学 2020 届英语写作学案届英语写作学案 2 请简要描述以下图片的内容，并谈谈你的看法。 参考词汇： 雾霾 haze 雾霾天气 haze weather 一、审题：

44、一、审题：本文为看图作文，要求学生解读画面， 展开 想象，进行议论，揭示自己对生活的理解，使人受到教育。 本文应分为三个部分：本文应分为三个部分： 1. 描述图片描述图片, 提炼出问题或现象提炼出问题或现象。描述图片力求生动、有趣，是对写作能力的综合考量与检验。在 描述时，应该特别注意语言的丰富性，长短句结合、非谓语等灵活运用，方能出彩。 2. 谈谈看法。谈谈看法。 (1) 可分析雾霾产生的原因,也可分析雾霾对人类生活带来的影响或威胁。 (2) 还应在分析雾霾的原因或后果的基础上，提出自己的措施或建议。 3. 总结。总结。可以重申图中暗示的问题或现象，并号召人们采取行动。 二、提纲：二、提纲：

45、 Part 1: Describe the picture: Who? What? Where? Why? （20%-25%） What problem or phenomenon is reflected in the picture? Part 2: Opinions: （65%-70%） (1) reason(s) for haze or negative effects on / threats to human (2) suggestions/ measures Part 3: Conclusion: （10%） 三、典型问题：三、典型问题： 1. 没有描绘图片，直接提出问题或现象。

46、 区分下面表达哪个是描述图片？哪个是结论、现象、提出问题？ A. As is shown in the picture, two boys wearing masks are complaining about the haze. One thinks that he cant stand the serious haze any more, and the other thinks what people can do to solve the problem. B. As is shown in the picture, with the emission of the CO2 and o

47、ther polluting things, the air is becoming more and more dirty. These harmful things finally lead to the haze weather. Many people have no choice but to wear a mask if they should go out. (没有描述图片) Practice： 例二、例二、 （2010 上海高考）描述上课的情景上海高考）描述上课的情景 6 Wearing excitement and eager-ness expressions, the ch

48、ildren in the picture raise their hands as high as they can for the opportunity to answer the question put forward by the teacher. It apparently seems that all of them, whether boys or girls, sociable or shy, are totally fascinated and inspired, and are always full of ingenious（新颖的） ideas. 例三、 2002

49、年上海高考 In the picture，we can see a girl was learning to ride a bicycle. Her parents and her grandmother were helping her. Her parents were too nervous to teach the girl and they were only worried about not to make the girl injured. In that case, how could the girl learn riding a bike well? 2. 总结的原因不典型：有的同学认为雾霾的原因是很多人乱砍乱伐树木。其实应当提炼出一些和雾 霾联系比较紧密的原因，例如：汽车尾气、工厂排放废气等。 3. 提出的措施建议没有说服力。例如有的同学建议应减少出门，这种建议治标不治本，显然没有说 服力。 1. 尽管政府应该采取行动来解决这个问题，这也是我们的责任来减少污染和处理雾霾 2. 也许只有提高