牛津译林英语中考一轮复习写作课件English writing -The ways to improve your writing(共29张PPT).pptx

1、The ways to improve your writing Free talkFree talkFree talkFree talk How will you spend the coming summer holiday? go travellinggo travellingdo voluntary workread good books accumulateaccumulate(积累） My plans for the summer holiday East or west, Guilin landscape is best. Which city is a better choic

2、e? reduce the stress _ friends _ sights _ the world Its for sb. to. good helpful a good way What can we get by travelling? enjoy beautiful make new learn more about accumulateaccumulate read good books accumulateaccumulate(积累） My plans for the summer holiday novel history science travel culture Book

3、s accumulataccumulat e e I love reading. I spend over seven hours a week reading different types of books. I am interested in history books, but I like novels best. My friends give me lots of advice on books. We often meet together and discuss what to read. Reading is always a wonderful time. Good b

4、ooks help me relax after a busy day. They also open up a whole new world to me. My readingMy reading relax relax _ _ _ _ open up _ reading and writing reading and writing skillsskills knowledge I can by reading. Why do you like reading books? open up my eyes increase _ improveimprove_ _ myselfmyself

5、 a new world to me do voluntary work accumulateaccumulate(积累） My plans for the summer holiday What voluntary work can we do? accumulateaccumulate plantplantplantplant donatedonatedonatedonate helphelp cleancleancleanclean pickpick repairrepair do voluntary work If we , we will deal with the difficul

6、ties better make _ friends improve skills get _ working experience feel _ happy Why do we do voluntary work? Analysis Composition How many main points? What are they? What kind of tense(时态时态 ) What kind of person(人称) What further information Subjects: How do you arrange your coming summer holiday? T

7、ony参观名胜：缓解压力，增长见闻（或自拟内容） Helen博览群书：愉悦身心，开拓视野（或自拟内容） Kitty志愿服务：获取经验，提升能力（或自拟内容） Your ideas (请考生自拟至少两点内容) 紧张的初中生活即将结束，某中学毕业生论坛正在谈论关于即将来临的暑假活动 安排，下面截取了论坛的部分内容，请你根据论坛中的信息以及你自己的想法， 写一篇短文。 Analysis main points tense the present tense person he she she further information I the future tense Summary Composi

8、tion How many _ What kind of _ What kind of _ What _ information main points tense person further Common Problems He think travelling help him reduce the stress.He thinks travelling helps him reduce the stress. If she will travel, she will learn a lot about the world.If she travels, she will learn a

9、 lot about the world. More read books can make our body and heart happy. Reading more books can make our body and mind happy. Kitty shows interested in doing volunteer work. Kitty shows interest in doing voluntary work. I prefer go travelling to stay at home during the summer holiday. I prefer going

10、 travelling to staying at home during the summer holiday. Analysis subject-verb agreement(主谓一致) tense and voice(时态和语态) Chinglish(中国式英语) wrong words(词类和连词错用) collocation(固定搭配错误) Beautify ? Use more beautiful words ? Use some useful patterns ? Dont forget the transitional words Make your article more

11、beautiful Reading is good. Beautify wonderful. helpful. useful. in a right waycorrect proper 句式富于变化 1. She reads more books. She opens up her eyes. Beautify She reads more books in order to open up her eyes. 2. It can reduce the stress. It can also help him learn more about the world. She reads more

12、 books so that she can open up her eyes. It can not only reduce the stress but also help him learn more about the world. Some useful patterns: ? notuntil ? not only but also ? Its+ adj. + to do sth. ? tooto ? enough to do sth. ? prefer to/ would ratherthan ? in order to do sth. ? 自然的过渡 She does volu

13、ntary work to help more people,_ ,she wants to get some experience. A. because B. whats more C. whats worse D. so I will visit my grandparents during the holiday. _, I decide to get a part-time job to make money A. Besides B. Since C. As D. First B A To show reasons: (原因) To show sequence:(顺序) To ad

14、d more information:(更多信息) To compare or contrast: (比较与对比) To show opinions:(观点) Some useful transitional words: because,so, as a result, therefore first, second, next, then, finally, in the end,last but not least whats more, moreover, also,too,whats worse ,besides but, however, on the other hand, wh

15、ile, otherwise in my opinion, in my view, I think, Im sure TopicHow do you arrange your coming summer holiday IntroductionRecently we had a discussion about how we arrange our coming summer holiday at Main body Tony参观名胜：缓解压力，增长见闻（或自拟内容 ） Helen博览群书：愉悦身心，开拓视野（或自拟内容 ） Kitty志愿服务：获取经验，提升能力（或自拟内容 ） Concl

16、usionYour ideas FormFormFormForm Grading standards ? 第五档（很好）：（17-20分） 1、覆盖所有要点。（允许3处以下小错） 1 小错19分 2、语言表达形式多样，语言流畅，词汇丰富； 3、有效地使用连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，过渡自然。 ? 第四档（好）：（13-16分） 1、虽漏1、2个要点，但覆盖所有主要内容（允许1个大错）1大错16分 2、语法结构和词汇运用基本正确，有少数错误； 3、能运用连接成分，有助于全文结构紧凑，过渡自然。 ? 第三档（适当）：（9-12分） 1、虽漏3、4个要点，但基本覆盖主要内容； 2、语法结构和词汇应用基

17、本正确，虽有一些错误，但不影响表达； 3、尚能注意语句间的连接，使内容连贯。 ? 第二档(较差5-8分)漏写或未写清主要内容；错误较多，影响表达 ? 第一档(差1-4分）错误很多，严重影响表达。 ? 不得分（0分）未能传达与试题有关的任何信息。 Show your compositionShow your compositionShow your compositionShow your composition How do you arrange your coming summer holiday Recently we had a discussion about how we arra

18、nge our coming summer holiday at . Here are the results. Tony plans to travel around the world and enjoy beautiful sights of many places of interest. He thinks it can not only reduce the stress of study, but also help him learn a lot about the world. Helen is going to read all kinds of good books. I

19、n her opinion, reading is really wonderful. Besides, it can open up her eyes and relax herself. Good books also open up a whole new world to her. Kitty prefers to do some voluntary work so that she can help more people. Whats more, she wants to get some working experience and improve her skills. I w

20、ould like to make my holiday happy and meaningful. First of all, I am going to read a lot of books and keep a good balance between study and rest. Also, Ill visit my grandparents during my holiday. Besides, I decide to get a part-time job in order to get some pocket money. Rome isnt built in a day. The more you read，the more you accumulate(积累）; The more you practice，the better your writing will be！ Homework: 1.Revise what we have learnt today. 2.Read & recite some good articles. Thank you!Thank you!