1、英 语 写作写作 触类旁通触类旁通 阅读下面短文阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整使之构成一个完整 的故事。的故事。 How to keep healthy Ten years ago I used to be very healthy.I went to work by bike and I got a lot of exercise at the weekend.I played tennis a lot and went for long walks.In those days,I didnt earn very much.I had a job i
2、n an office,which wasnt very good, but I had a lot of time to do the things I enjoyed. Then,about 8 years ago,I got a much better job.The pay was better.But the hours were a lot longer.I bought a car and drove to work every day,and began to take people out to lunch.And I began to be overweight,too.I
3、 stopped playing tennis and going for long walks at the weekend,because I just didnt have any time for things like that any more.There was a lot of stress in a job like mine;perhaps that was why I started drinking more than I used to.For example,I used to have only half a glass of whisky when I got
4、home,and then I started filling the glass to the top.Then I had another glass, and then another.I started smoking a lot,too.I never used to smoke at all. Two months ago I had a heart attack.At first I just couldnt believe it.“ Im too young and I want to keep healthier,”I said.Luckily it wasnt very s
5、erious.I was in hospital for a few days and they did a lot of tests.The doctor advised me to stop smoking and to eat less.He told me to do a lot of other things.For example,he advised me to workless and get more exercise.But I just havent any time! My job takes everything out of me! Sometimes I wond
6、er if I should get another job.Perhaps I could do something that I used to do.But if I do that,I wont earn much.I have a family to support.I just dont know what I should do. 注意注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为所续写短文的词数应为150左右左右; 2.至少使用至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语个短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3.续写部分分为两段续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好每段的开头语已为你写好; 4.续写完成
7、后续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1: Later,I knew one person who really believed in keeping fit._ _ _ Paragraph 2 : But now her story has completely changed the way I live._ _ _ 初读课文初读课文 明大意明大意 1.在写续文之前在写续文之前,首先要审时态首先要审时态:本文以一般过去时为主本文以一般过去时为主;审人审人 称称:文章以第一、三人称为主文章以第一、三人称为主;审要点审要点:这
8、是写作的关键点。特别这是写作的关键点。特别 要注意写作的提示性语言。这样文章前后才能保持一致要注意写作的提示性语言。这样文章前后才能保持一致,同时同时 注意使用语法知识。注意使用语法知识。 2.本篇续写要注意本篇续写要注意:首先是作者现在身体的状态越来越差首先是作者现在身体的状态越来越差,这都这都 是不锻炼引起的后果。再结合文中的信息来看是不锻炼引起的后果。再结合文中的信息来看“Later,I know one person who really believed in keeping fit.” 显然是要先介绍显然是要先介绍 这个人的情况这个人的情况,也就意味着要从这个人的锻炼的事例中获得一
9、也就意味着要从这个人的锻炼的事例中获得一 些有益的建议。这样在续写第二段时些有益的建议。这样在续写第二段时,文章的意思才能连贯。文章的意思才能连贯。 Paragraph 1: Later,I knew one person who really believed in keeping fit.She looks 1. at least 10 years younger (至少年轻至少年轻10岁岁). She shared her story with me.Two years ago,she was overweight 2. because she was addicted to smoki
10、ng (因为因为 她吸烟上瘾她吸烟上瘾),about 30 cigarettes a day.Whats more,she liked eating 3. food that is high in fat (含脂肪高的食物含脂肪高的食物). However,she never 4. took exercise (锻炼锻炼) and often stayed at home all day.She seldom went out except for shopping.If she had to go out,she only drove a car,5. instead of walking
11、there or riding a bike (而不是走路去或者骑自而不是走路去或者骑自 行车去行车去).As a result,she put on too much weight and became weaker and weaker. Paragraph 2: But now her story has completely changed the way I live. Firstly,I 6. have given up smoking (已经戒烟已经戒烟).Besides,I start to eat far more fresh vegetables and follow 7.
12、 a balanced diet (均衡的饮食均衡的饮食).I also sold my car and bought a bike.I even do yoga exercise at the weekend. My husband and daughter often go cycling with me.8. With the encouragement of my family (在家人的鼓励下在家人的鼓励下),I began to 9. lose weight (减肥减肥) and I am much healthier 10. than what I used to be (比我以前的样子比我以前的样子).
