1、2024年新高考I卷读后续写汇报人：目录壹读原文找三主两线贰读首句 定情节发展叁列大纲 12句构情节肆做升级 扩句子格调伍看成果 仿优秀行文读原文找 三主两线章节副标题壹 I met Gunter on a cold,wet and unforgettable evening in September.l had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference.Due to a big storm,my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half,l touch
2、ed down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague.The moment l got off the plane,l ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought.That was when l met Gunter.l told him where l was going,but he said he had
3、nt heard of the bus station.l thought my pronunciation was the problem,so l explained again more slowly but he still looked confused.When l was about to give up,Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend.After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century,Gunter put his
4、 phone down and started the car.真题原文01 Finally,with just two minutes to spare,we rolled into the bus station.Thankfully,there was a long queue still waiting to board the bus,Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus,turned around,and looked at me with a big smile on his face.“We made it.”he said.Just th
5、en l realized that I had zero cash in my wallet.l flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard.He tried it several times,but the card machine just did not play along.A feeling of helplessness washed over me as l saw the bus queue thinning out.At this moment,Gunter pointed t
6、owards the waiting hall of the bus station.There at the entrance,was a cash machine.l jumped out of the car,made a mad run for the machine,and popped my card in,only to read the message:“Out of order.Sorry.读原文 找三主两线主题语境人与社会-和谐人际关系&人与自我-优秀品行主要人物Gunter-a warm-hearted taxi driver&I主题思想 人与人之间相互信任，互相帮助明线
7、（故事线）Due to a big storm,my flight to Vienna had been delayed,In order to catch the last bus to Prague,I jumped into a taxi in a hurry and met the driver Gunter,who was warm-heartd and gave me a big hand.暗线（情感线）I-worried(the flight had been delayed)-flustered(got off.ran like crazy.jumped in the firs
8、t car)-apologetic(has had zero cash)-helplessness(the bus queue thinning out)-？Gunter-confused(hadt heard of the bus station)-obliging(rang up a friend)-？01n.特点（adj./v./短语）角色1Guntera warm-hearted taxi driver 角色2 I 背景事件I jumped into a taxi in a hurry and met the driver Gunter,who was warm-heartd and
9、gave me a big hand.微情节 动作(v.)/情绪(adj.)l told him where l was going,but he looked confused.(p2)When l was about to give up,Gunter rang up a friend for help and sent me to the destination successfully.(p2-3)l realized that I had zero cash in my wallet and a feeling of helplessness washed over me.(p4)G
10、unter pointed towards a cash machine and I made a mad run for the machine,but failed to take cash out.(p5)读首句 定情节发展章节副标题贰Paragraph 1:I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news._Paragraph 2:Four days later,when I was back in Vienna,l called Gunter as promised._I ran back to Gunter and told him th
11、e bad news.1,The bad news and my feeling:2,I had to leave and tried to explain:3.Leave the phone number and made a promise:4、Gunter s response and my feeling:5、Caught the bus and leave:读P1P2首句 定情节发展02The machine was out of order and I felt full of apologies If I miss this last bus to Prague,Il be la
12、te for the conference.May I have your phone number?I will call you and return the money I owe you.I promise I will keep my word.He wrote down his phone number and gave it to me.A feeling of gratitude washed over me.I jumped onto the bus just before its departure.读P1P2首句 定情节发展Four days later,when I w
13、as back in Vienna,l called Gunter as promised.021.Agree on time and place:2.Our reactions and conversations:3.The ending:4.Lesson:We met at the bus station where he had dropped me off four days before.I gave him a big hug the moment I saw him.I told him that thanks to his generosity and timely help.
14、I paid him the fee and I also gave him an extra$10 tip,Gunter refused.warm-hearted,kindness列大纲 12句构情节章节副标题叁 列大纲 两段12句法 1）2）3）4）5）6）7）8）9）10）11）12）思考：12句话中，有哪几句是固定内容？I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.Four days later,when I was back in Vienna,l called Gunter as promised.03 列大纲：两段12句法1）固定
15、2）3）4）5）6）固定 7）固定 8）9）10）11）12）固定 结局/升华主旨续写首段首句续写二段首句承接首段首句I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.Four days later,when I was back in Vienna,l called Gunter as promised.03I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.Four days later,when I was back in Vienna,l called Gunter as promised.列大纲：两
16、段12句法1）2）3）4）5）6）7）固定 8）9）10）11）12）Kindness makes a big difference.What was the bad news?Gunter knew I would call.I left without paying.Gunter agreed.I felt moved.I wrote his number down.I promised to pay him back.We appointed to meet.I offered an extra$10 tip.Gunter refused the tip.I appreciate it.
17、03做升级 扩句子格调章节副标题肆 出其不意用新招 招招升级 例句翻译：（1）“Sorry,I cant take cash out.”I said embarrassedly,with my face burning.（2）Hearing my words,Gunter replied with the familiar smile on his face.招式1：非谓语动词常用句式：Doing.,.with+n+doing/done/to do .,doing.04”对不起，银行的取款机坏了，我拿不出来现金。“我尴尬地解释道，脸上火辣辣的。听到我的话，Gunter带着熟悉的笑容回应我。出其
18、不意用新招 招招升级 招式2：无灵主语 a flood/wave of+（情绪类）n.seized/welled up/came over sb.无灵主语（表示时间、地点的名词）+有灵动词（see/witness）04当我听到他的话，一种感激之情油然而生。例句翻译：A feeling of gratitude washed over me as I heard his words.出其不意用新招 招招升级 招式3：使用动作链 动作A+动作B，and 动作C 将笼统的大动作拆解成具体的小动作，画面感十足 04我坚定的和他握手，然后跳下车，疯狂的向公共汽车跑去，在公共汽车从出发前跳了上去。例句翻译
19、：Giving him a firm handshake,I jumped out of the car,made a mad run for the bus,and jumped onto it just before its departure.（2）It was at that time that I realized that a small kindness action could make such a big difference!出其不意用新招 招招升级 招式4：使用结构句式 （1）倒装句so.that.（2）强调句式：It was.that.04例句翻译：（1）So sur
20、prised and moved was I that I couldnt say a word out我如此惊讶和感动，以至于一句话也说不出来。(2)It was at that time that I realized that small kindness makes a difference知道那是我才意识到小小善举影响深远。看成果 仿优秀行文章节副标题伍看成文 仿优秀行文 I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.“Sorry,I cant take cash out.”I said embarrassedly,with my fa
21、ce burning.Hearing my words,Gunter replied with the familiar smile on his face,“Thats OK,just go ahead,you can pay me at your convenience.”So surprised and moved was I that I couldnt say a word out.As the bus queue became shorter,Gunter pointed toward it and said to me,“It is your turn.”Realizing it
22、 was time to leave,I took out my notebook,asked Gunters number and wrote it down hurriedly.At the same time,I promised firmly that I would call him and paid him back as soon as possible.05Four days later,when I was back in Vienna,l called Gunter as promised.The moment Gunter picked up the phone,I co
23、uldnt wait to introduce myself.Gunter seemed to know I was going to call,and he said softly,I know.We made an appointment to meet at the departure place.As we met the following day,I hugged him tightly like we were long-time-no-see old friends,and I expressed my great gratitude to him.I paid him back and offered an extra$10 tip,however,he refused the tip,only to accept the taxi fare,saying“It is not a big deal.”Suddenly,a warm current washed over me.It was at that time that I realized that a small kindness action could make such a big difference!Thank you!汇报人：WPS
