1、读后续写读后续写小组讨论，解答问题 step1 step1 研读语篇研读语篇 （5min)5min)及首句及首句 Step2 Step2 回顾：在考场中，我们读完语篇需要思考哪些问题？回顾：在考场中，我们读完语篇需要思考哪些问题？顺序是？顺序是？矛盾冲突矛盾冲突人物性格人物性格主题主题研读首句，确定研读首句，确定4 4，2 2，1 1，3 3首句画出关键词，首句画出关键词，进行提问，弄清进行提问，弄清楚楚main ideamain idea构思每段情节，每个情节构思每段情节，每个情节写几句话？（写几句话？（确定重点确定重点）原则：不增加新人物，不新增加段落，要解决矛原则：不增加新人物，不新增加
2、段落，要解决矛盾冲突，盾冲突，不增加新的场景，主题积极向上不增加新的场景，主题积极向上评分标准：评分标准：主题主题情节情节语言语言故事基本故事基本信息信息 5w 1 5w 1 h h1.梳理故事基本信息 When Brandon came back from locking the door of the barn,he knew his son Louie fell into the hole and could not swim.But after he jumped into the wall,he could not pull them out the well because the
3、 pipe was too slippery.2.梳理问题/冲突 After Brandon jumped into the wall,he could not pull them out the well because the pipe was too slippery.They got stuck.3.如何解决这个问题？A 3 years old son,Everett,stood by the mail and found Chris and Mark to save them.4人物性格 Brandon:brave,impulsive(容易冲动的）smart,love his son
4、.Louie:careless,timid,helpless Everett:calm,smart 5.主题 Help others,the wisdom of the little boy,the love between the father and sons 6.研读首句，确定4，2，1，3 Para.1 After a while,Chris and Mark,nearby farmers,were driving by the farm._ Para.2:Twenty minutes later,Louie emerged(出现),then Brandon,both cold and
5、 wet._ 第4句：位于第2段末，主题句:help others;the wisdom of the little boy;the love between the father and sons 第2句：第一段末，承接第二段Twenty minutes.句,写什么由给定的第二句决定。The father and son were saved.第1句：承接给定的首句。写什么由它决定。俩人看到了Everett招手求助。第3句：承接给定的第二句，写什么由它决定。C与M拿出毛巾/父亲筋疲力尽，缓过神来。4 43 32 21 1 研读首句画出关键词，进行提问，构思两段研读首句画出关键词，进行提问，构
6、思两段main idea main idea 及具体故事情节及具体故事情节 Para.1 After a while,Chris and Mark,nearby farmers,were driving by the farm._ Para.2:Twenty minutes later,Louie emerged(出现),then Brandon,both cold and wet._Para.1:Chris and Mark saved the father and the son from the well.Para.2:express thanks to Chris and Mark,e
7、xamine the son,praise Everett.1.WhenChris and Mark were driving by the farm,what did see?_A 3 years old boy,E was waving to stop the car.2.What Chris and Mark would ask?Whats wrong with you?3.How did the boy answer?My father and brother were trapped in the well.4.Then,what did they do?Took E,and hea
8、ded for the well.5.How did they save the father and the son?Whether was it successfully?Tools:ropes,贴近农民的身份特点 _ 研读首句画出关键词，进行提问，构思两段研读首句画出关键词，进行提问，构思两段main idea main idea 及具体故事情节及具体故事情节 Para.1 After a while,Chris and Mark,nearby farmers,were driving by the farmPara.1:Chris and Mark saved the father a
9、nd the son from the well.Para.2:express thanks to Chris and Mark,examine the son,praise Everett.1.WhenChris and Mark were driving by the farm,what did see?_A 3 years old boy,E was waving to stop the car.2.What Chris and Mark would ask?Whats wrong with you?3.How did the boy answer?My father and broth
10、er were trapped in the well.4.Then,what did they do?Took E,and headed for the well.5.How did they save the father and the son?Whether was it successfully?Tools:ropes,贴近农民的身份特点 _1.1.看到三岁小孩招手看到三岁小孩招手（孩子神态描写孩子神态描写）2.2.停车询问，得知情况停车询问，得知情况（语言描写）语言描写）3.3.抱抱上孩子，驱车前往地上孩子，驱车前往地点点 4.4.拿出工具，拿出工具，成功救出被困父子。成功救出被困
11、父子。1.1.看到三岁小孩招手（看到三岁小孩招手（孩子神态描写孩子神态描写）2.2.停车询问，得知情况（停车询问，得知情况（语言描语言描写）写）3.3.抱上孩子，驱车前往地点抱上孩子，驱车前往地点 4.4.拿出工具，成功救出被困父拿出工具，成功救出被困父子。子。After a while,Chris and Mark,nearby farmers,were driving by the farm.All of a sudden,they saw a little boy,Everett was waving anxiously and urgently,as if some serious m
12、atter happened.They stopped the car,got out,and asked what happened.Everett wept with tears brimming over his eyes(眼睛里充满了泪水）,and said,his father and brother were trapped in the well and waited for rescue.Hearing this,Chris and Mark took the boy immediately and drove the car to the hole.When they Arr
13、ived at the spot,Without a second thought,they grabbed a thick rope from the car,threw one end into the water and tied the other around a tree nearby.Hold it!And climb up!shouted Chris,peering down（向下看；俯视）Para.1 After a while,Chris and Mark,nearby farmers,were driving by the farm Para.2:Twenty minut
14、es later,Louie emerged(出现),then Brandon,both cold and wet.Para.2:express thanks to Chris and Mark,examine the son,praise Everett.1.What did Brandon say to Chris and Mark?Without your help,we couldnt get rid of the trouble.Thank you so much!If it convenient for you,please come to my home and have a d
15、inner.I want to thank you for your help.2.What about their reaction?They declined and left first.3.Brandon examined the son and comfort him.4.How did Brandon praise Everett?You are a big boy and save us.How clever you areYou are something.(你太了不起了）1.表达感谢-2.俩人回应-3.父亲检查L ouie 情况，安抚他-4.夸赞Everett.-5.父子三人
16、回家(三人被送回家）Para.2:express thanks to Chris and Mark,examine the son,praise Everett.Para.2:Twenty minutes later,Louie emerged(出现),then Brandon,both cold and wet.The moment they were out,Brandon,as if all energy was drained(v.耗尽）out of him,（筋疲力尽）collapsed（v.倒塌）on the floor.When Brandon finally came back
17、 to life（恢复）,the first thing was to express thanks.“Thanks for saving us!But for you,we wouldnt have breathed the fresh air,”（要不是你，）said Brandon in a grateful and genuine voice.“We just help neighbors.It is your little son Everett who is brave and calm enough to save you,”responded Chris with a genu
18、ine smile before he offered to send the Brandons back home.Then,out of instinct,Brandon checked Louie for his injuries,gave him comfort and spoke highly of Everett.“You are a big boy and save us.How clever you are!You are something!”said Brandon.Everett smiled.Love is selfless and noting is better t
19、han help others.1.表达感谢-2.俩人回应,告别-3.检查L ouie 情况，安抚他-4.夸赞Everett.-5.父子三人回家 After a while,Chris and Mark,nearby farmers,were driving by the farm.All of a sudden,they saw a little boy,Everett was waving anxiously and urgently,as if some serious matter happened.They stopped the car,got out,and asked what
20、 happened.Everett wept with tears brimming over his eyes(眼睛里充满了泪水）眼睛里充满了泪水）,and said,his father and brother were trapped in the well and waited for rescue.Hearing this,Chris and Mark took the boy immediately and drove the car to the hole.When they arrived at the spot,Without a second thought,they gr
21、abbed a thick rope from the car,threw one end into the water and tied the other around a tree nearby.Hold it!And climb up!shouted Chris,peering down（向下看；俯视）（向下看；俯视）Para.2:Twenty minutes later,Louie emerged(出现出现),then Brandon,both cold and wet.The moment they were out,Brandon,as if all energy was dra
22、ined(v.耗耗尽）尽）out of him,collapsed（v.倒塌倒塌）on the floor.When Brandon finally came back to life（恢复）（恢复）,the first thing was to express thanks.“Thanks for saving us!But for you,we wouldnt have breathed the fresh air,”（要不是你，）（要不是你，）said Brandon in a grateful and genuine voice.“We just help neighbors.It i
23、s your little son Everett who is brave and calm enough to save you,”responded Chris with a genuine smile before he offered to send the Brandons back home.Then,out of instinct,Brandon checked Louie for his injuries,gave him comfort and spoke highly of Everett.“You are a big boy and save us.How clever
24、 you are!You are something!”said Brandon.Everett smiled.Love is selfless and noting is better than helping others.范文范文After a while,Chris and Mark,nearby farmers,were driving by the farm.All of a sudden,noticing a little boy waving his arms like crazy at the mailbox,they pulled over（停车）（停车）to invest
25、igate（调查，（调查，查看）查看）.“My daddy and brother fell in the hole!”Everett wept with tears brimming over his eyes,Puzzled(adj.困惑的困惑的）as they were,they piled Everett into their pickup（挤进小卡车）（挤进小卡车）and asked him to show them the hole.One look at the approaching well explained everything.Without a second thou
26、ght（不假思索（不假思索)they grabbed（v.抓）抓）a thick rope from the car,threw one end into the water and tied(v.系）系）the other around a tree nearby.Hold it!And climb up!shouted Chris,peering down（向下看；俯视）（向下看；俯视）Twenty minutes later;Louie emerged,then Brandon,both cold and wet.The moment they were out,Brandon,as i
27、f all energy was drained out of him,（耗尽力气）（耗尽力气）collapsed（v.倒塌倒塌）on the floor.When Brandon finally came back to life,the first thing he remembered,out of instinct,（出于本能）（出于本能）was to check Louie for his injuries.Luckily,there was nothing but a few scratches（n.抓痕）抓痕）on his forehead and arms.Thanks for
28、 saving us!But for you,we wouldnt have breathed the fresh air,said Brandon in a grateful and genuine voice.We just help neighbors.It is your little son Everett who is brave and calm enough to save you,responded Chris with a genuine smile before he offered to send the Brandons back home.(Love is selfless and noting is better than helping others.
