1、高考英语读后续写语篇练习雇主误多给了保姆女孩工资，女孩主动归还感动了雇主1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part 1题目呈现3续写原文Anna took her first baby-sitting job in Peter Smiths and played games with Peters three children until the bedtime.Mr.Smith praised her for the great work.After Mrs.Smith had pressed the money into her hand,Anna didnt even look
2、 at the money and then walked out of the house.Shed expected ten dollars.Now she saw that it was a one-hundred-dollar bill!Anna imagined her parents faces when she handed them the one hundred dollars.Things hadnt been easy for Annas family since Annas dad had lost his engineering job a year ago.Ther
3、e had been no new clothes or movies in the last year.They no longer went out to eat on Fridays.Anna didnt really mind,as long as her family was together.But now she could help.One hundred dollars!That was enough to fill the car with gas or to buy a bag of groceries.4续写原文Her excitement faded as she w
4、ondered if Mrs.Smith realized how much money she had given her.Could she have made a mistake?Anna felt bad as she remembered that Mrs.Smith had simply pulled the money from her purse without looking at it.Anna thought,“Maybe Mrs.Smith meant to give me the one-hundred-dollar bill.Baby-sitting three c
5、hildren is a lot of work.”Soon Anna remembered that the Smiths didnt seem to have much money,either.But,she silently argued with herself.“They gave me the money.I didnt steal it.”She found her parents in the living room.Anna took a deep breath and told them what had happened.“I wanted to give the mo
6、ney to you to help out the family,but I think Mrs.Smith made a mistake.”She continued.“Im going to give it back to her.”Dad settled his big hand on her shoulder.“You just gave us the best gift,Anna.”Mom kissed her.“Were proud of you,sweetheart.”5段首句Para 1：The next morning,Anna went to Mrs.Smiths hou
7、se again.Para 2：Mrs.Smith opened her purse and counted out ten dollars.6Part 2题目分析7续写原文分析8文章以人物为线索展开，讲述安娜在给史密斯夫妇看孩子之后史密斯太太给了她一百块钱报酬。回家之后她很矛盾，一方面在想是否是史密斯太太拿错了，一方面又想可能是她的劳动应该值这么多，并且这些钱能帮助家里改善一下生活，但她最终还是跟父母讲了这件事，说她觉得是史密斯太太给多了报酬，她要还给人家，她的父母听完之后很为她骄傲。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句
8、；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析 Para 1The next morning,Anna went to Mrs.Smiths house again.由第一段首句内容“第二天早上，安娜又去了史密斯太太家。”可知，第一段可描写安娜说完来意之后史密斯太太的反应。10续写思路分析 Para 2：Mrs.Smith opened her purse and counted out ten dollars.由第二段首句内容“史密斯太太打开钱包，数了十美元。”可知，第二段可描写史密斯太太为安娜的诚实所感动，
9、付了报酬并且决定继续让她帮忙看孩子。11续写素材 续写素材 询问事实感动继续雇用开心感悟12续写素材 续写素材 行为类 开始：start to do/begin to do 回家：go back home/return home 需要：need/want 情绪类 吃惊：surprised/amazed 对感到骄傲：be proud of/take pride in13续写素材 续写素材 高分句型1.I didnt know where that money had gone!（由where引导的宾语从句作know的宾语）高分句型2.I made a mistake of giving you
10、the one hundred dollars,but you are such an honest and kind girl that you did not keep it.（suchthat结构的结果状语从句）高分句型3.When she gave her mother the ten dollars,the best gift for her,she felt very proud because she thought she did a great a job.（when引导的时间状语从句；because引导的原因状语从句；省略that的宾语从句）14Part 3范文呈现15范文
11、呈现The next morning,Anna went to Mrs.Smiths house again.“I think you overpaid me last night,”she said and handed the one-hundred-dollar bill to her.Mrs.Smith looked surprised.“I didnt know where that money had gone!I knew that I had put it in my purse.Then this morning,I couldnt find it.”She started
12、to cry.“Its the last payment for something my husband needed.I made a mistake of giving you the one hundred dollars,but you are such an honest and kind girl that you did not keep it.”16范文呈现Mrs.Smith opened her purse and counted out ten dollars.“I hope youll baby-sit for us again.Our children think y
13、oure the best baby-sitter theyve ever had,and so do I.I think they will be proud of having such a great sister to baby-sit them!”Anna said yes and went back home happily.When she gave her mother the ten dollars,the best gift for her,she felt very proud because she thought she did a great a job.17范文译
14、文第二天早上，安娜又去了史密斯太太家。“我想你昨晚给我的钱太多了，”她说，然后把那张一百美元的钞票递给了她。史密斯太太看起来很惊讶。“我不知道那些钱去哪里了！我知道我把它放在钱包里了。然后今天早上，我找不到了。”她开始哭了。“这是我丈夫需要的东西的最后一笔付款。我给你一百美元是个错误，但你是个诚实善良的女孩，没有留着。”史密斯太太打开钱包，数出十美元。“我希望你能再次为我们照看孩子。我们的孩子认为你是他们有过的最好的保姆，我也是。我想他们会为有这么好的妹妹来照顾他们而感到自豪！”安娜答应了，高兴地回家了。当她把这十美元送给妈妈时，她感到非常自豪，因为她认为自己做得很好。18Part 4努力方向19高级结构名词性从句高级结构三连动虚拟语气形容词做状语无灵主语20定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）21Thank you!
