1、高考英语读后续写语篇练习帮助因家庭困难染上偷窃恶习的朋友解决困难1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part 1题目呈现3续写原文My name is Frank.I was from the north of England,but my father had been offered a better job in London,and our whole family had moved there.I was 12 and,having lost all my old friends,I felt shy and lonely at my new school.There we
2、re 33 students in my new class,and most people werent very interested in a shy new boy.Tony was one of the few people who were kind to me.He often invited me to join his particular group,and as a result,I started getting to know people.Tony and I become good friends.We trusted each other and we coul
3、d talk about personal matters,things that were important to us.4续写原文Five years later,Tony and I are still in the same class.But just under a year ago,Tonys father was knocked over by a car.He died a few days later.The family had to move to a much smaller house in order to manage financially.Tony,who
4、 had always been very close to his father,changed completely,becoming silent and moody.He had always been a clever,hard-working student but now he seemed to lose all interest in his work.He started losing friends.These days,Tony and I see each other from time to time,but were no longer close.About t
5、hree months ago,a group of us were playing football together after school.Having left something in the cloakroom,I went inside to get it,and found Tony going through the pockets of peoples coats.In his hand he had a wallet-and I knew it wasnt his！5段首句Para 1：My mouth fell open and I just looked at hi
6、m.Para 2：I knew I must do something to help Tony.6Part 2题目分析7续写原文分析8本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的好朋友Tony由于父亲突然去世，家里遇到困难，性格突然改变，并染上了偷窃的恶习。作者努力帮助好朋友解决困难，改掉偷窃恶习的故事。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析 Para 1：My mouth fell open and I
7、 just looked at him.由第一段首句内容“我张大了嘴，只是看着他。”可知，第一段可描写作者发现Tony的偷盗行为，作者的惊讶，和Tony的尴尬。10续写思路分析 Para 2：I knew I must do something to help Tony.由第二段首句内容“我知道我必须做点什么来帮助托尼。”可知，第二段可描写作者帮助Tony的过程和结果。11续写素材 续写素材 发现惊讶尴尬疑惑思考募集赠送感谢12续写素材 续写素材 行为类 疑惑：wonder/want to know.思考：think/consider.募集：raise/collect 情绪类.尴尬：embar
8、rassed/awkward.感谢：express his gratitude/be grateful13续写素材 续写素材 高分句型1.I wondered if the thief was Roy but decided not to say anything to anyone.(if引导的宾语从句以及动词不定式的否定)高分句型2.Having thought about the situation for a while,I secretly raised some money from my friends and classmates.(非谓语动词现在分词的完成式作状语)14Par
9、t 3范文呈现15范文呈现My mouth fell open and I just looked at him.I was so surprised that I couldnt believe my eyes.Tony went bright red with a very embarrassed look.“Ill put it back right now,”he said,and he did so.I turned round and walked out without saying a word.I really hoped that Tony would explain wh
10、y he had been stealing,but he didnt.At the same time,small amounts of money started disappearing from students lockers.I wondered if the thief was Tony but decided not to say anything to anyone.I really hoped it wasnt him.16范文呈现I knew I must do something to help Tony.Having thought about the situati
11、on for a while,I secretly raised some money from my friends and classmates.With the money,I went to see Tony.“I know you are in trouble.A friend in need is a friend in deed.”I told him with concern giving him the money we raised.He hesitated for a moment,and then took the money,moved to tears.He exp
12、ressed his gratitude to us and regretted his theft deeply.He was determined to earn money by his own labor and never steal again.17范文译文我张大了嘴巴，只是看着他。我太惊讶了，简直不敢相信自己的眼睛。托尼满脸通红，一脸尴尬。“我现在就把它放回去，”他说，他照做了。我转过身，一言不发地走了出去。我真的希望托尼能解释一下他为什么偷东西，但他没有。与此同时，学生储物柜里的少量钱开始消失。我想知道小偷是不是托尼，但决定什么都不告诉任何人。我真的希望不是他。我知道我必须做点什么来帮助托尼。经过一段时间的思考，我偷偷地从朋友和同学那里筹集了一些钱。我带着钱去见托尼。“我知道你有麻烦了。患难见真情。”我关切地告诉他，把我们筹集的钱给了他。他犹豫了一会儿，然后接过钱，感动得流下了眼泪。他向我们表示感谢，并对自己的盗窃行为深感遗憾。他决心靠自己的劳动赚钱，再也不偷了。18Part 4努力方向19高级结构名词性从句高级结构三连动虚拟语气形容词做状语无灵主语20定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）21Thank you!
