1、高考英语读后续写语篇练习去花店给患癌的母亲买花，恰好遇到花店老板的母亲也有癌症1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part 1题目呈现3续写原文Mom was in extreme pain of cancer.I sat outdoors,watching the bees flying from one flower to another.I studied Moms face,thinking how I could take her mind off the pain she was suffering.Her strong belief had always inspired
2、 and encouraged me.It was my turn to do the same for herto encourage her to cheer up.“Are the flowers in the field beautiful?”Mom asked weakly.She managed to find beauty in nature.Suddenly,I had an idea and asked her,“How about getting some flowers we can plant together in front of the house?”Moms f
3、ace slowly lit up and smiled.She said,“It sounds great.”Then we slowly climbed into the car.4续写原文Soon,we were wandering through rows and rows of colorful flowers.Moms pain was forgotten temporarily as she bent over to choose a bunch of red roses.“Oh,how beautiful,”she whispered,pressing the flowers
4、against her face.A young lady approached and said,“Hello,ladies.Its a beautiful day for planting flowers.My name is Jenny.You can choose and buy whatever flowers you like.”She was young and beautiful and I said thanks to her.I hurried to Moms side,“I think we will have enough flowers to plant,Mom.Wo
5、uld you mind waiting in the car while I pay for them?”5续写原文“Let me carry the flowers for you,”Jenny smiled and said,“You are so kind and patient with your mother.”I replied,“Thank you.Mom is experiencing great pain because of her cancer.What I am doing is make her happy and forget her pain.”Suddenly
6、,Jenny froze in her tracks.She said,“My mom has cancer,too.May I please add your Moms name to hers?Id be proud to pray for both of themovercoming the difficulties and achieving a victory as soon as possible.”6段首句Para 1：Hearing what she said,we were very inspired.Para 2：Mom was so happy that we talke
7、d a lot on the way home.7Part 2题目分析8续写原文分析9本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了母亲患有癌症，为了鼓励母亲积极战胜病魔，两人去买花打算种起来，碰巧花店老板的母亲也有同样遭遇，老板提议给两个母亲一起祈福，互相鼓励的温馨邂逅。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析 Para 1:Hearing what she said,we were very inspired.
8、由第一段首句内容“听了她的话，我们深受鼓舞。”可知，第一段可描写作者与花店老板的交心，两人对相似经历和积极态度所感动。11续写思路分析 Para 2：Mom was so happy that we talked a lot on the way home.由第二段首句内容“妈妈很高兴，我们在回家的路上谈了很多。”可知，第二段可描写作者和母亲回家路上的对买花经历的交谈和对所买鲜花的处理。12续写素材 续写素材 听了老板的话表示感谢写上名字并告别陪回家交心种花.13续写素材 续写素材 行为类 一起走路：choose a bunch of red roses/pick a bouquet of r
9、ed roses.回家：go back home/return home 让她开心：make her happy/let her happy 情绪类 深受鼓舞：be inspired/be encouraged/feel empowered 忘记痛苦：Moms pain was forgotten/take her mind off the pain14续写素材 续写素材 高分句型1.I extended my gratitude to her,hugging her in my arms.（由现在分词hugging做主句的伴随状语）高分句型2.After writing down our n
10、ames on the paper,we said goodbye to her and headed back home.（由连接词after引导时间状语从句）高分句型3.Mom prayed for Jennys mom,for those suffering from cancer and for ourselves.（由for引导的表原因的并列句）15Part 3范文呈现16范文呈现 Hearing what she said,we were very inspired.I extended my gratitude to her,hugging her in my arms.Look
11、ing back,I saw Mom beamed a warm smile with tears twinkling in her eyes.Jenny smiled and then carefully packed up the flowers for us before reaching for a pen and a piece of paper.She said,“Now please give me your names and I will remember you forever.”After writing down our names on the paper,we sa
12、id goodbye to her and headed back home.17范文呈现Mom was so happy that we talked a lot on the way home.Mom prayed for Jennys mom,for those suffering from cancer and for ourselves.She thanked me for asking her to go out that day.She smiled at those passing by and said hello to them even though they didnt
13、 hear what she was saying.On arriving at home,Mom asked me to plant the flowers in the garden so that they could grow,bloom and bring beauty to our home.I was happy that what I had done could make Mom cheer up and forget her pain gradually.18范文译文听到她说的话，我们深受启发。我向她表示感谢，把她抱在怀里。回头看，我看见妈妈脸上挂着温暖的笑容，眼里闪烁着泪
14、水。珍妮微笑着，然后小心翼翼地为我们收拾好鲜花，然后伸手去拿笔和一张纸。她说：“现在请告诉我你们的名字，我会永远记住你们的。”在纸上写下我们的名字后，我们向她道别，然后回家了。妈妈很高兴我们在回家的路上聊了很多。妈妈为珍妮的妈妈祈祷，为那些患癌症的人祈祷，为我们自己祈祷。她感谢我邀请她那天出去。她对路过的人微笑着向他们问好，尽管他们没有听到她在说什么。到家后，妈妈让我在花园里种花，这样它们就可以生长、开花，为我们的家带来美丽。我很高兴我所做的一切能让妈妈振作起来，逐渐忘记她的痛苦。19Part 4努力方向20高级结构名词性从句高级结构三连动虚拟语气形容词做状语无灵主语21定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）22Thank you!
