1、高考英语读后续写语篇练习女孩好心帮男孩拿着他的夹克，但却意外弄丢了夹克1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part 1题目呈现3续写原文Lorena parted the curtain in her living room and looked out onto the wet street.She was relieved the sunlight appeared.If it didnt stop raining it would ruin her day.Her mother had promised to drive her to Fashion Fair if it wer
2、e sunny.Lorena was eager to go there because she had to replace a Nike jacket.Earlier that Wednesday afternoon,Eddie,the most popular seventh-grader,had given Lorena his jacket and asked her to keep an eye as he would play basketball in a hurry.Lorena was quite happy to be of help.During her last cl
3、ass,the biology teacher made them cut apart dead frogs.For fear of getting blood on Eddies jacket,Lorena folded it and placed it on a chair.Then she took the knife and cut the skin quickly.She felt sick opening the frogs belly.4续写原文When the bell rang Lorena hurried out because the bus she caught for
4、 home left ten minutes after school.She raced to board the bus and found a seat.After a few minutes the driver started the engine and drove away when Lorena looked out of the window and saw Eddie.The jacket!she screamed.She shot from her seat and ran up to the driver.Youve got to stop!I forgot Eddie
5、s jacket!Whos Eddie?the driver said angrily.Sit down.All that evening she was upset and blamed her biology teacher for her problem.If he hadnt made them dissect(解剖)frogs,she wouldnt have been so absent-minded.The next day Lorena rushed from the bus to the biology room.The jacket was not there!How ca
6、n I ever tell Eddie?she closed her eyes.She spent most of her break and lunch period in the rest room,brushing her hair and worrying.On Friday she stayed home to avoid Eddie.She told her mother she wanted to go shopping to buy her a gift for her birthday,which was the next week.Actually,she wanted t
7、o buy a Nike jacket with her life savings at Fashion Fair.5段首句Para 1：Mom drove Lorena to Fashion Fair and left,asking her not to waste money.Para 2：Lorena was about to leave when she saw Eddie in his Nike jacket.6Part 2题目分析7续写原文分析8本文以时间和人物为线索展开，讲述了Lorena帮Eddie拿着他的夹克，因为他要去打篮球，Lorena很乐意能帮忙，她拿着夹克去上生物课，
8、为了防止夹克被解剖青蛙的血弄脏，她把夹克放在了椅子上，下课后她匆匆忙忙赶公交车回家，忘了拿夹克，第二天Lorena去生物室发现夹克不在那儿了，Lorena很想去买件Nike的夹克。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析 Para 1：Mom drove Lorena to Fashion Fair and left,asking her not to waste money.由第一段首句内容“妈妈
9、开车带罗瑞娜去了时装展，然后离开了，让她不要浪费钱”可知，第一段可描写Lorena如何在时装展上购买夹克。10续写思路分析 Para 2：Lorena was about to leave when she saw Eddie in his Nike jacket.由第二段首句内容“罗瑞娜正要离开时，看见了穿着耐克夹克的埃迪”可知，第二段可描写Lorena和埃迪之间的对话。11续写素材 续写素材 试穿付钱埃迪责备埃迪抱怨12续写素材 续写素材 试穿：try on/put on/pull on 付钱：pay the money/give the money 责备：scold/blame 抱怨：c
10、omplain/grumble 情绪类.高兴：be overjoyed/be delighted/be happy13续写素材 续写素材 高分句型1 Stopping at a rack of Nike jackets,she wondered what size Eddie wore.（现在分词表主动，作状语）高分句型2 Lorena was about to leave when she saw Eddie in his Nike jacket.（be about to dowhen固定句型）14Part 3范文呈现15范文呈现Mom drove Lorena to Fashion Fai
11、r and left,asking her not to waste money.Lorena promised and ran in.Stopping at a rack of Nike jackets,she wondered what size Eddie wore.She tried one on and found the sleeves coming down over her hands.She felt it must be the size.She walked to the cash register and paid the money.She was overjoyed
12、 to have settled the problem.Then she headed for the perfume department to buy a gift for Mom.It was too bad she didnt have enough money.16范文呈现Lorena was about to leave when she saw Eddie in his Nike jacket.With a tight face,Eddie scolded Lorena why she had left his jacket in the biology room.“I tho
13、ught we could be friends.”he complained.“I can explain.”Lorena begged.“Youre of no help at all.”Eddie rushed off.“What the hells going on?”Lorena wondered.Realizing some people could never be friends,she wiped her eyes,returned the jacket,bought Mom some cheese instead of the romantic perfume and we
14、nt home.17范文译文妈妈开车送洛蕾娜去时装展，让她不要浪费钱。洛蕾娜答应了，跑了进去。在一排耐克夹克前停下，她想知道埃迪穿了多大号。她试穿了一件，发现袖子掉到了手上。她觉得这一定是尺寸。她走到收银台前，付了钱。她很高兴解决了这个问题。然后她去香水部给妈妈买礼物。可惜她没有足够的钱。洛蕾娜正要离开，这时她看到埃迪穿着耐克夹克。埃迪板着脸，斥责洛蕾娜为什么把他的夹克忘在生物室里。“我以为我们可以做朋友。”他抱怨道。“我可以解释。”洛蕾娜恳求道。“你一点帮助都没有。”埃迪冲了出去。“这到底是怎么回事？”洛蕾娜想知道。意识到有些人永远无法成为朋友，她擦了擦眼睛，归还了夹克，给妈妈买了一些奶酪，而不是浪漫的香水，然后回家了。18Part 4努力方向19高级结构名词性从句高级结构三连动虚拟语气形容词做状语无灵主语20定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）21Thank you!
