1、高考英语读后续写语篇练习出身于贫困家庭的孩子如何给富人家的好朋友送生日礼物1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part 1题目呈现3续写原文Fifteen years ago,I was born in a big family.I had been taught that money couldnt buy everything ever since I was a little kid.My parents are the most hard-working people I have ever seen.As much as my parents tried to teach m
2、e these values,some could only be learned through personal experiences.As a child,I would sit in the church trying to concentrate on the words of the priest(牧师),but my attention was soon attracted by the shining gold and the diamonds worn by the Saturday churchgoers.As my eyes began to wander,I noti
3、ced men dressed in their tailored suits and shirts accompanied by women in their designer dresses with matching handbags and shoes.4续写原文My family,on the other hand,was the opposite of rich.Our hand-me-down clothes had been washed so many times that the colors had become dull and lifeless.Although th
4、is revealed the money struggles of our large family,our faces were always washed and hair neatly combed.When sitting on the old big red and white truck after the service,I pictured the lives led by those driving their brand-new cars,wishing I would be one of them.5续写原文I never stopped those fantasies
5、,even when I was in middle school.Since it was a private school,most of the children came from wealthy families.As a result,I constantly felt ashamed.Although I could hide my lack of wealth at school by wearing our school uniforms,my poverty was embarrassingly apparent on weekends with my classmates
6、 wearing designer jeans and I had no choice but to wear my sisters old jeans.I never fitted in with my classmates.To my relief,there was only one girl named Julie who opened her heart to me.I was attached to her like a shadow.Soon,her birthday was approaching.Julie invited me to attend her birthday
7、party.6段首句Para 1：However,I grew upset as I couldnt afford a gift.Para 2：When she opened the gift box,my heart was too nervous to beat.7Part 2题目分析8续写原文分析9本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者小时候生活穷，勤劳的父母教育她金钱并不是万能的。作者中学时就读的是私立学校，众多的富家子弟日常生活中表现出的阔绰与她拮据的生活形成鲜明对比，使她难以融入身边同学的生活圈子。幸亏有Julie同学乐意与她交好朋友，她俩形影不离。Julie邀请她参加她的生日聚会，家境
8、贫困的她该送什么礼物呢？点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析 Para 1：However,I grew upset as I couldnt afford a gift.由第一段首句内容“然而，由于买不起礼物，我变得心烦意乱。”可知，第一段可描写作者收到邀请后内心的忐忑，想要找到解决方法，最后决定自己动手制作一个玩具作为礼物，为参加生日聚会做好准备。11续写思路分析 Para 2：When
9、she opened the gift box,my heart was too nervous to beat.由第二段首句内容“当她打开礼品盒时，我的心紧张得无法跳动。”可知，第二段可描写Julie打开礼物时的反映，及作者的内心感受，最后作者意识到金钱买不到友谊。12续写素材 续写素材 心烦意乱寻找礼物的解决办法找到解决办法（自制玩具娃娃）送出礼物怕被嘲笑Julie开心感悟13续写素材 续写素材 行为类 放弃：quit/give up 想出：figure out/come up with 收到：receive/get 情绪类 尴尬的：embarrassing/awkward 兴奋：exci
10、tement/thrill14续写素材 续写素材 高分句型1.I immediately started my DIY project,which ended up with a toy doll.(由which引导的非限制性定语从句)高分句型2.What happened next was totally beyond my imagination.(由what引导主语从句)高分句型3.Upon seeing the doll,Julie let out a cry of excitement and she held it close to her face,saying repeated
11、ly that it was the sweetest gift she had ever received.(由that引导的宾语从句和省略that引导的定语从句)15Part 3范文呈现16范文呈现However,I grew upset as I couldnt afford a gift.It would be such an embarrassing scene to be present without a gift.I even thought about quitting,but I was not able to bring it forth.I struggled for
12、days but couldnt figure out any solution.One day,while helping with my hardworking parents with the housework,it suddenly occurred to me that maybe I could make a gift by myself.I immediately started my DIY project,which ended up with a toy doll.The big day finally came.I arrived at her house and ha
13、nded her the box.17范文呈现When she opened the gift box,my heart was too nervous to beat.I looked closely at her face,wondering if she would just laugh at me.What happened next was totally beyond my imagination.Upon seeing the doll,Julie let out a cry of excitement and she held it close to her face,sayi
14、ng repeatedly that it was the sweetest gift she had ever received.Her words freed me.I couldnt help smiling together with her.At that precious moment,I realized money couldnt buy everything.It was our friendship that really mattered.18范文译文然而，我越来越沮丧，因为我买不起礼物。如果没有礼物在场，那将是一个尴尬的场面。我甚至想过辞职，但我没能实现。我挣扎了好几天
15、，但找不到任何解决方案。有一天，在帮勤劳的父母做家务时，我突然想到，也许我可以自己做一份礼物。我立刻开始了我的DIY项目，最终得到了一个玩具娃娃。大日子终于来了。我来到她家，把盒子递给了她。当她打开礼盒时，我的心紧张得无法跳动。我仔细地看着她的脸，不知道她是否会嘲笑我。接下来发生的事情完全超出了我的想象。看到这个娃娃，朱莉兴奋地哭了起来，她把它凑近脸，反复说这是她收到的最甜蜜的礼物。她的话让我松了一口气。我忍不住和她一起微笑。在那个珍贵的时刻，我意识到金钱买不到一切。真正重要的是我们的友谊。19Part 4努力方向20高级结构名词性从句高级结构三连动虚拟语气形容词做状语无灵主语21定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）22Thank you!
