1、高考英语读后续写语篇练习在机场误以为别人偷了自己的东西，真相大白后诚恳道歉1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part 1题目呈现3续写原文Dannis was waiting at the airline ticket counter when he first noticed the young woman with shiny black hair.She wore black boots of soft leather.Dannis struggled to see her face.She was ahead of him in line,but it was not unt
2、il she bought her ticket and turned to walk away that he realized how beautiful she was,who was fair-skinned and big-eyed.She seemed aware that he was staring at her and lowered her gaze abruptly.His flight was leaving in an hour.To kill time,Dannis stepped into an airport bar and ordered a cup of S
3、cotch.While sipping it,he caught sight of black-haired girl in the leather coat again,deep in conversation with a blonde girl.“Invite her for a drink?”Dannis hesitated and didnt come up to her.4续写原文When next he saw her,Dannis was buying a magazine and became aware someone was pushing him.At first,he
4、 was startled(受惊吓的)that anyone would be so close as to touch him,but when he saw who it was,he smiled.“Busy place,”Dannis said.She looked up at him and blushed.Wordlessly,she moved away and joined the crowds in the terminal.5续写原文Dannis was at the counter with his magazine,but when he reached into hi
5、s pocket for his wallet,the pocket was empty.Where could I have left it?His mind was racing,the credit cards,the cash,the identification card,etc.His stomach stirred with something very like fear.“The girl who was so near to me!”he said to himself.All at once he understood she had picked his pocket.
6、What should he do?First,find a policeman,and tell him what has happened.He would probably never see his wallet again.Dannis gritted his teeth.When glancing around for the police,suddenly,he spotted the black-haired girl,seated against a front window of the terminal.She seemed absorbed in a book.6段首句
7、Para 1：A seat beside her was empty,and Dannis occupied it.Para 2：The girl ran and Dannis ran after her.7Part 2题目分析8续写原文分析9本文以时间为线索展开，讲述了主人公在机场遇到了一个美丽的年轻女人，十分心动，但是在后来误以为这个女人在靠近他时偷走了他的信用卡和现金等，于是主人公对女人大喊大叫，把她吓得跑掉，结果警察告知有人在厕所里捡到了他的东西。主人公非常惭愧，向女人诚恳道歉。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句
8、；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析 Para 1:A seat beside her was empty,and Dannis occupied it.由第一段首句内容“她旁边的一个座位空着，丹尼斯坐了下来。”可知，第一段可描写丹尼斯质问女人，女人感到很困惑并被吓了一跳。11续写思路分析 Para 2：The girl ran and Dannis ran after her.由第二段首句内容“女孩跑着，丹尼斯在后面追。”可知，第二段可描写丹尼斯追上了女孩，这时有警察询问，并告知有人在厕所里捡到并
9、上交了他丢失的东西。12续写素材 续写素材 质问困惑愤怒吓到追赶警察询问找到失物道歉13续写素材 续写素材 行为类 变得：turn/grow 抓住：grab/pounce at 发生：happen/occur 情绪类 困惑的：confused/puzzled 愤怒：anger/rage14续写素材 续写素材 高分句型1The girl turned deadly pale,looking so restless that words failed her.（运用了现在分词作伴随状语）高分句型2At exactly that moment,a policeman approached them
10、and asked about what happened.（由连接代词what引导的宾语从句作介词about的宾语）高分句型3What a mistake he had made!（由what引导的感叹句）15Part 3范文呈现16范文呈现A seat beside her was empty,and Dannis occupied it.He felt a wave of anger swept over him.“Where is my wallet?”he yelled.The black-haired girl glanced up from her reading,with a
11、confused look on her face.Dannis stood up,glared at her and shouted,“You stole my wallet!”The crowds began to gossip.The girl turned deadly pale,looking so restless that words failed her.A strange silence hung in the air.Abruptly,she leaped from the seat.17范文呈现The girl ran and Dannis ran after her.A
12、fter a while,Dannis finally grabbed her by the arm.At exactly that moment,a policeman approached them and asked about what happened.Dannis hastened to explain it while the girl frowned with a shake of her head.After further enquiries,the policeman took out a wallet and handed it to Dannis,adding tha
13、t someone had found it in the toilet.What a mistake he had made!Overwhelmed by guilt,Dannis made an apology to the girl.18范文译文她旁边的座位是空的，丹尼斯坐了下来。他觉得一阵怒火席卷了他。“我的钱包在哪里？”他喊道。黑发女孩从阅读中抬起头来，一脸困惑。丹尼斯站起来，怒视着她喊道：“你偷了我的钱包！”人群开始闲聊起来。女孩脸色变得惨白，看起来坐立不安，说不出话来。空气中弥漫着一种奇怪的寂静。突然，她从座位上跳了起来。女孩跑了，丹尼斯追了上去。过了一会儿，丹尼斯终于抓住了她的胳膊。就在那一刻，一名警察走近他们，询问发生了什么事。丹尼斯赶紧解释，女孩皱着眉头，摇了摇头。经过进一步调查，警察拿出一个钱包递给Dannis，并补充说有人在厕所里发现了它。他犯了多么大的错误啊！丹尼斯深感愧疚，向女孩道歉。19Part 4努力方向20高级结构名词性从句高级结构三连动虚拟语气形容词做状语无灵主语21定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）22Thank you!
