1、高考英语读后续写语篇练习偶遇在桥上锻炼的老者，交谈后对生活有了新的感悟1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part 1题目呈现3续写原文The most important change in a persons life is the change of his or her attitude.Right attitudes produce right actions.Have you ever met someone who gave you a different view of life?On a Sunday morning,I saw something very inte
2、resting as I went to the greengrocers.To get there,I had to cross a bridge over railway tracks.The bridge was pretty high.A set of steep steps had to be climbed;then the bridge flattened out(变平),followed by coming down another set of steps.On my way back from the greengrocers,I saw an elderly gentle
3、man running up the steps.After watching him run up the steps so fast,I thought that he could be in a rush.Before I knew it,he had crossed the bridge,and then he ran back to where he started.To my surprise,he did not stop.He turned around,and then went up and down the bridge again.He was not struggli
4、ng,and seemed to enjoy going up and down the bridge.Being a fitness fanatic(热衷于健美的人)myself,I admired his ability to Cross the bridge so quickly.My curiosity got the better of me,and I came up to him to have a chat with him.4续写原文“Excuse me,sir.Are you training for an event?”I asked.He stopped.“No,not
5、 training for an event.Well,I am training for life,”he said with a broad smile on his face as sweat rolled down his cheeks.I told him that I had been looking for a role model of fitness,and that I hoped to be as strong as he is when I get to his age.He said that everyone has a choice about what they
6、 do with their life.“I am not different,”he added.With much admiration,I asked,“What drives you to maintain good health?”Then he told me the accident he met with when he was young.5段首句Para 1：“I used to be a cyclist,”he said.Para 2：His great determination paid off,and he was able to walk again.6Part
7、2题目分析7续写原文分析8本文是记叙文。文章讲述了作者偶遇在桥上锻炼的老者，通过与他的交流和聆听他的故事，作者大受启发，对生活的态度也得以改变。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析 Para 1：“I used to be a cyclist,”he said.由第一段首句内容“我以前是骑自行车的，他说。”可知，第一段可描写这一位上了年纪的绅士所述往事。10续写思路分析 Para 2：His g
8、reat determination paid off,and he was able to walk again.由第二段首句内容“他的决心得到了回报，他又能走路了”可知，第二段可描写听完老者故事后，作者的感悟。11续写思路分析 老人讲述往事骑车被撞可能失去行走能力决心与命运斗争付出得到回报与老者道别和感悟12续写素材 续写素材 行为类 参加自行车比赛：competing in cycling events/contesting in cycling events 被车撞倒了：was hit by a car/was knocked over by a car 他决定不：he was det
9、ermined not to/he made his mind not to 情绪类 被他的故事感动：Moved by his story/touched by his story 愉快同意：agreed happily/agreed gladly13续写素材 续写素材 高分句型1 Then he told me why he stopped cycling.(运用了why引导的宾语从句)高分句型2 While cycling one day,he was hit by a car.(运用了while引导的时间状语从句和状语从句的省略)高分句型3 Moved by his story,I to
10、ld him that it was an honor to meet a role model like him and that I wanted to make friends with him.(运用了过去分词作原因状语和that引导的宾语从句)14Part 3范文呈现15范文呈现“I used to be a cyclist,”he said.“Competing in cycling events is what I loved and enjoyed.“Then he told me why he stopped cycling.While cycling one day,he
11、was hit by a car.The doctor told him that he might never walk again.He refused to believe that.So,he was determined not to let the accident prevent him from walking again.16范文呈现His great determination paid off,and he was able to walk again.His love for life and for fitness is what makes him cross th
12、e bridge many times.Moved by his story,I told him that it was an honor to meet a role model like him and that I wanted to make friends with him.He agreed happily.I shook his hand,thanked him for having a chat with me,and let him continue with his exercise.As I walked away,my admiration for him grew
13、even more because of his attitude to life.17范文译文“我曾经是一名自行车手，”他说。“参加自行车比赛是我喜欢和享受的。”然后他告诉我他为什么停止骑自行车。有一天，他在骑自行车时被车撞了。医生告诉他，他可能再也走不动了。他拒绝相信这一点。所以，他下定决心不让这场事故阻止他再次行走。他的决心得到了回报，他又能走路了。他对生活和健身的热爱使他多次过桥。被他的故事感动了，我告诉他，很荣幸能见到像他这样的榜样，我想和他交朋友。他高兴地同意了。我握了握他的手，感谢他和我聊天，让他继续锻炼。当我离开时，由于他对生活的态度，我对他的钦佩更加强烈。18Part 4努力方向19高级结构名词性从句高级结构三连动虚拟语气形容词做状语无灵主语20定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）21Thank you!
