1、读后续写读后续写主题升华句主题升华句1CONTENTS3灵活运用2常用句式1策略指导23策略指导012022年 新课标 全国I卷2 0 2 0 y p p p t!It was the day of the big crosscountry run.Students from seven different primary schools in and around the small town were warming up and walking the route(路线路线)through thick evergreen forest.I looked around and finall
2、y spotted David,who was standing by himself off to the side by a fence.He was small for ten years old.His usual big toothy smile was absent today.I walked over and asked him why he wasnt with the other children.He hesitated and then said he had decided not to run.What was wrong?He had worked so hard
3、 for this event!I quickly searched the crowd for the schools coach and asked him what had happened.“I was afraid that kids from other schools would laugh at him,”he explained uncomfortably.“I gave him the choice to run or not,and let him decide.”I bit back my frustration(懊恼懊恼).I knew the coach meant
4、 wellhe thought he was doing the right thing.After making sure that David could run if he wanted,I turned to find him coming towards me,his small body rocking from side to side as he swung his feet forward.David had a brain disease which prevented him from walking or running like other children,but
5、at school his classmates thought of him as a regular kid.He always participated to the best of his ability in whatever they were doing.That was why none of the children thought it unusual that David had decided to join the crosscountry team.It just took him longerthats all.David had not missed a sin
6、gle practice,and although he always finished his run long after the other children,he did always finish.As a special education teacher at the school,I was familiar with the challenges David faced and was proud of his strong determination.2022年 新课标 全国I卷注意：注意：1.续写词数应为续写词数应为150个左右；个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置
7、作答。请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Para1:We sat down next to each other,but David wouldnt look at me._Para2:I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners._2 0 2 0 y p p p t!We sat down next to each other,but David wouldnt look at me.I said gently and quietly,No one can change yourmind,ex
8、cept yourself.If you desire to challenge yourself,there is nothing to do with others thoughts.He sat stillwith a deep breath.“You have a full preparation before this event,which is the most important reason why you show up here,I added with a sincere tone.Hearing my words,David turned to me tremblin
9、gly with tears spilling out of his eyes and expressed he had made a firm determination to finish the cross-country run.His coach heard what David saidand gave me a look-the kind that was more determined than anyone elses.I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners.The rac
10、e started.It seemed that the runway was extremely long for young children,not to mention a child with a brain disease.David insisted on running as if he had forgotten all his weaknesses,though he was tripped over within the a few kilometers.It didnt take long before hepicked himself up again and con
11、tinued his mission.Classmates all appeared on the racing track,cheering for him.”Come on!You can make it!We are proud of you!they shouted enthusiastically.To everyones joy,he reached the final line and ranked the 20th,It was no more important whether he won the first place or not,It was his brave he
12、artand strong faith that could make something unusual happen finally.2022年 新课标 全国I卷 sample writing主题升华句助人为乐亲情关爱成功脱险成长蜕变策略指导7主题升华句是指故事的主人公在经历某次事件之后从中得出的道理、感悟或经验教训。通过最后一句“主题升华句”让整个故事变得有意义。028常用句式常用句式常用句式19It was his brave heart and strong faith that could make something unusual happen finally.n 强调句It
13、was/is+被强调的部分+that+剩余部分“正是.使.”常用句式常用句式110正是爱、关怀与责任创造了奇迹。正是爱、关怀与责任创造了奇迹。It is love and care as well as responsibility that created the miracle.n 强调句It was/is+被强调的部分+that+剩余部分“正是.使.”助人为乐助人为乐 亲情关爱亲情关爱 正是这段独特而又难忘的经历促进了我们的亲子关系。正是这段独特而又难忘的经历促进了我们的亲子关系。It is this unique and impressive experience that stren
14、gthenedthe bond between my parents and I.常用句式常用句式111正是这两个陌生人的大无畏的精神和及时的帮助，挽救了他的生命。正是这两个陌生人的大无畏的精神和及时的帮助，挽救了他的生命。n 强调句It was/is+被强调的部分+that+剩余部分 成功脱险成功脱险 成长蜕变成长蜕变正是这次特别的经历使我明白了正是这次特别的经历使我明白了:谅解是一种美德。谅解是一种美德。It was the unique experience that made me realize forgiving is a virtue.It was the two strange
15、rs undaunted spirits and their timely help that saved his life.常用句式常用句式212Just as the proverb goes,charity begins at home.l Just as the proverb/saying goes.l As sb puts it.“老话说/常言道/正如某人所说.”常用句式常用句式213n Just as the proverb/saying goes.n As sb puts it.助人为乐助人为乐 亲情关爱亲情关爱常言道，哪里有爱与责任，哪里就有奇迹。常言道，哪里有爱与责任，哪里
16、就有奇迹。Just as the prverb/saying goes where there are love and belief,there are miracles.正如正如 Brian Tracy 所说，施恩勿记，受恩勿忘。所说，施恩勿记，受恩勿忘。As Brian Tracy puts it,always give without remembering and always receive without forgetting.常用句式常用句式214n Just as the proverb/saying goes.n As sb puts it.成功阶段成功阶段成长蜕变成长蜕变
17、正如正如 Michael Jordan 所说所说:我可以接受失败，但绝对不能接受未曾奋我可以接受失败，但绝对不能接受未曾奋斗过的自己。斗过的自己。As Michael Jordan puts it,I can accept failure but icant accept not trying.正如谚语所说，好人应得好报。一份薪水高的工作，生活变得越来正如谚语所说，好人应得好报。一份薪水高的工作，生活变得越来越好了。越好了。Just as the saying goes,one good turn deserves another.He got a well-paid job and led
18、a much easier life.常用句式常用句式315The unforgettable experience taught me a valuable lesson that setback does not always mean failure.From then on,I grew stronger and more determined.This unforgettable experienee taught me a valuable lesson that.From then on,I grew.“这段难忘的经历给我上了宝贵的一课，从那天起，我变得更.”常用句式常用句式31
19、6这段难忘的经历给她上了宝贵的一课。从那时起，她就像这对这段难忘的经历给她上了宝贵的一课。从那时起，她就像这对老夫妇一样，助人为乐会尽她最大的努力帮助需要帮助的人。老夫妇一样，助人为乐会尽她最大的努力帮助需要帮助的人。This unforgettable experience taught her a valuable lesson.From then on,she would try her best to help people in need like the old couple.n This unforgettable experience taught me a valuable
20、lesson that.From then on,I grew.助人为乐助人为乐 常用句式常用句式317从那时起，我意识到友谊是一种相互的关系，亲密且持久的友谊从那时起，我意识到友谊是一种相互的关系，亲密且持久的友谊对双方来说都是很珍费的。对双方来说都是很珍费的。From then on,I realized that Friendship is a two-way process and a close and lasting friendship means a great deal to each other.n This unforgettable experience taught
21、me a valuable lesson that.From then on,I grew.亲情关爱亲情关爱常用句式常用句式318这段难忘的经历给我上了宝贵的一课这段难忘的经历给我上了宝贵的一课:当我们遇到危险时一定要保当我们遇到危险时一定要保持冷静，并设法使自己摆脱因境。从那时起，我变得更强大，更持冷静，并设法使自己摆脱因境。从那时起，我变得更强大，更明智了。明智了。This unforgettable experience taught me a valuable lesson that we should stay calm when in danger and help ourselv
22、es out.From then on,I grew bigger and much wiser.n This unforgettable experience taught me a valuable lesson that.From then on,I grew.成功脱险成功脱险常用句式常用句式319从此以后，每当我失去耐心时，我都会回想起祖父的话从此以后，每当我失去耐心时，我都会回想起祖父的话:你要耐心你要耐心点。点。From then on,every time I lost patience I will recall my grandfathers words that you w
23、ill need plenty of patience.n This unforgettable experience taught me a valuable lesson that.From then on,I grew.成长蜕变成长蜕变Summary20It was/is+被强调的部分+that+剩余部分 n Just as the proverb/saying goes.n As sb puts it.This unforgettable experience taught me a valuable lesson that.From then on,I grew.03灵活运用Prac
24、tice助人为乐根据故事背景，写主题升华句。22(2020 年山东卷)Mrs.Meredith 和孩子们想出了在社区卖爆米花的主意，来帮助 Bernard 挣钱缓解家庭经济压力的故事。This unforgettable experience taught me a valuable lesson.From then on,Bernard made up his mind to help those people inneed.Practice亲情关爱根据故事背景，写主题升华句。23(2021年4月江苏模拟)奶奶带着“我”去给那些在胡同里避寒的人送了一张她用各种布片缝制的被子。It is my
25、 grandmas kind heart that makes a great difference.Practice成功脱险根据故事背景，写主题升华句。24(2022 年广东一模)父女三人坐船到湖上钩鱼，遭遇翻船事故，大女儿独自游回岸边求救。Undoubtedly it is love and affection for her beloved family that enabled her hold on until help arrived.Practice成功蜕变根据故事背景，写主题升华句。25(2021 深圳一模)Sally 在足球赛季比赛时总是不能成功得分,甚至想要放弃，妈妈叫她要保持专注。From then on,every time Sally was on the verge of giving up,she would remember her mothers words that stay focused and you can do it.THANKYOUY O U R T E X T G O E S H E R E26w w w.y p p p t.c o m2 0 2 0 y p p p t!
