1、七上英语七上英语 YLNJ YLNJ写作帮写作帮方法指导方法指导Unit 2 HobbiesWriting如何写与兴趣爱好相关的文章如何写与兴趣爱好相关的文章 本单元的话题是兴趣爱好,要求学生能介绍自己或他人的兴趣爱好,写作时可以从以下几个方面展开:引出兴趣爱好是什么;介绍喜欢这项爱好的原因及跟此爱好相关的行为等;介绍这项爱好对生活和学习的影响。写作时要注意是介绍自己还是他人的兴趣爱好,确定好人称。WritingWriting要求:1.语言通顺,要点齐全,条理清楚;2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称;3.90词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。Dear John,How is it g
2、oing?Im writing to tell you about my hobby._All the best!MikeWritingWriting词词汇汇兴趣兴趣爱好爱好hobby业余爱好 interest兴趣 favourite特别喜欢的(人或事)join参加be interested in对感兴趣love/like/enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事频率频率every day/week/month每天/周/月 once/twice a week一周一/两次优点优点help me keep fit帮我保持健康 full of energy 精力充沛find answers to.
3、找到的答案be good for对有好处bring me a lot of fun给我带来很多乐趣Writing词词汇汇梦想梦想scientist科学家 teacher老师 player运动员 doctor医生in the future在未来 come true实现 be sure确定design beautiful clothes设计漂亮的衣服want/hope/plan to do sth.想要/希望/计划做某事句句子子开头句开头句I love/enjoy/like.very much.我非常喜欢Im really interested in.我对很感兴趣。Writing句句子子中间句中间
4、句1.与爱好的频率有关I play/go/do.twice a day/week.我一天/周打/去/做两次。I often/sometimes/usually.我经常/有时/通常2.与喜欢爱好的原因有关I enjoy.because.我喜欢是因为It is great fun to.很有趣。It can help/make me.它可以帮助/使我3.与行为榜样有关My favourite.is.我最喜欢的是My role model is.我的榜样是She/He is a master of.她/他是的大师。Writing句句子子结尾句结尾句I want to become.in the fu
5、ture.我将来想成为I hope my dream can come true one day.我希望有一天我的梦想能成真。好句积累好句积累Interest is the best teacher.兴趣是最好的老师。A hobby plays an important role in our daily life.爱好在我们的日常生活中起着重要作用。Hobbies are an important step to knowledge.爱好是获得知识的重要一步。Writing佳作展示佳作展示Dear John,How is it going?Im writing to tell you abo
6、ut my hobby.I love playing basketball very much.Im a member of the school basketball team.I practice playing basketball with my teammates every day.It can not only help me keep healthy but also make me happy.Whats more,playing basketball teaches me the importanceof teamwork.WritingMy favourite baske
7、tball star is Yao Ming.His amazing skills make him a role model for me and many other teenagers.I want to become a basketball player in the future.My basketball skills can help me a lot.I hope my dream cancome true one day.All the best!Mike教材原句 I want to become a designer.(教材P28)教材原句 I hope my dream
8、 can come true.(教材P28)教材原句 My favourite artist is Xu Beihong.(教材P28)Writing名师点评名师点评 本文涵盖了题目所有要点,介绍了有关爱好的频率和喜欢的原因,同时也说明了自己的榜样和梦想。文章结构清晰、语言流畅,且使用了本单元所学短语和句型,做到了学以致用。用practice doing sth.及every day介绍了打篮球的频率。用not only.but also.及help sb.do sth.表明了喜欢打篮球的原因。Writing用whats more和the importance of teamwork介绍了打篮球的另一个好处。用My favourite.is.介绍了自己的榜样。分别用want to do sth.及come true表明了自己的梦想和期待。THANKS谢谢聆听!