1、Reading for Writing P44-45-Unit 4 History and Traditions 1.Reading for structure2.Reading for language3.Reading for writingcountyfeastrolldotcattleroaroceanpubwinen.（一杯）啤酒（一杯）啤酒n.炖菜炖菜 vt.&vi.炖炖n.风俗；习俗风俗；习俗n.气味气味adj.感觉的感觉的adj.引人注目的引人注目的n.过度过度n.人群人群beerstewcustomscentsensorystrikingtransitioncrowdn.(英
2、国、爱尔兰的英国、爱尔兰的)郡郡n.盛宴；宴会盛宴；宴会vi.&vt.（使）翻滚（使）翻滚 n.卷卷n.点点n.牛牛vi.&n.吼叫吼叫n.大海大海n.酒吧酒吧n.葡萄酒葡萄酒Words and Expressions It has many place of interests.The view is amazing/wonderful/breathtaking.It attracts people around the world.It is popular/enjoys wide popularity.Irelands beautiful has always had a great i
3、nfluence on.Introductory sentenceRead and Think about the Structure Judging from the title,what may it be about?Underline the introductory sentence(s)and the ending sentence(s).Introduce/Describe Irelands beautiful view and its traditions.attract readers with sth.surprising Ending sentence Which sen
4、tence(s)attracts you more?Why?sth.surprising In what order is the beautiful view shown?topic sentences+supporting sentences/examples:In a scenery description,its a good idea to organize information in the order of specific places.Whats the structure of the description?topic sentencesupporting senten
5、ces/examplesPlaces.Read and Think about the StructureInspiration:How to make your description logical?Introductory sentenceEnding sentencein the order of placesTopic sentenceSupporting sentencescontents respond to titletransitional sentenceFind out the senses and the words to describe the sensory de
6、tails.The peaceful landscape of the“Emerald Isle”and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes,with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle.PlacesSensesSensory detailsin the green counties and hillssighta feast for the eyes;rolling green hills;dotted with.What makes the Irish
7、 countryside exciting and inspiring?Its beauty and how it offers something for each of the senses.Read and Think about the LanguageFind out the senses and the words to describe the sensory details.sightAnd down by the sea,the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the
8、 coast.PlacesSensesSensory detailshearingdown by the seathe roar of.and cries of.make up the music of Find out the senses and the words to describe sensory details.sightOn a quiet morning in the mountains,feel the sun on your skin,and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the
9、 new day with their morning song.PlacesSensesSensory detailsin the mountainstouchfeel the sun on your skinsmell breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers tastegreet with morning songhearingWhat figure of speech(修辞)are applied?personificationInspiration:Writing techniques of descriptive writingUse
10、sensory details Use sensory details Use figure of speech Use figure of speech Use concrete words Use concrete wordsThe peaceful landscape of the“Emerald Isle”and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes,.我们的校园是如此美丽，在里面漫步真是令人赏心悦目。A walk around our school is a feast for the eyes.Our school
11、 is so beautiful that it is a feast for the eyes to stroll in it.春天来临时，鲜花点缀着田野。The field is dotted with flowers when spring comes.湖面上布满了小船。The lake was dotted with little boats.操场独特的蓝色跑道上，遍布学生运动的身姿。The unique blue track of the playground is dotted with students doing exercises.Read for WritingDown b
12、y the sea,the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast.What do you usually hear at school？The sound of reading,cheers and laughter make up the music of youth.What do you usually hear at home？The cries，the shouts,the snap,the cheers and laughter make up the mus
13、ic of of my dailylife.Read for Writing On a quiet morning in the mountains,feel the sun on your skin,and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song.Read for Writing What do you want to eat most in summer?In a hot summer,breathe in sweet scent of
14、 chocolate ice-cream,have a lick of it and feel the cold on my tongue-this is the most enjoyable moment.Reading for Writing(P44-45)1.1.对对有很大影响有很大影响2.2.有久远的有久远的历史历史3.3.视觉盛宴视觉盛宴4.4.起伏的绿色山丘起伏的绿色山丘5.5.被被点缀着点缀着6.6.海浪的咆哮声海浪的咆哮声7.7.海鸟的叫声海鸟的叫声8.8.用清晨的歌声迎接新的一天用清晨的歌声迎接新的一天have a great influence ona feast for
15、the eyesbe dotted with the roar of the ocean waves the cries of the seabirdshave a long history of rolling green hills greet the new day with their morning song Reading for Writing(P44-45)9.9.毫不意外毫不意外10.10.一杯葡萄酒一杯葡萄酒11.11.更好的是更好的是12.12.非常可能做某事非常可能做某事13.13.亲身经历当地文化习俗亲身经历当地文化习俗1414.感官细节感官细节15.15.震撼人心的
16、画面震撼人心的画面16.16.组成；构成组成；构成 it is not surprising that better yetbe more than likely to do sth experience local culture and customs first-handsensory details a striking imagea glass of wine make up描写一个城市或地点描写一个城市或地点是一种描述性的说明文。它主要说明或解释某一城是一种描述性的说明文。它主要说明或解释某一城市或地点的市或地点的地理位置、外貌、环境、经济、文化、交通、历史演变、发展展望地理位置、
17、外貌、环境、经济、文化、交通、历史演变、发展展望等，使读者获取信息。等，使读者获取信息。一般来说，描述性的说明文写作顺序主要有三种形式：时间顺序、空间一般来说，描述性的说明文写作顺序主要有三种形式：时间顺序、空间顺序和逻辑顺序。顺序和逻辑顺序。写作指导写作指导introductionbodyendingmake readers eager to read transitions/details and examples let readers know the passage ends help readers remember your writing1.Use sensory detail
18、s2.Do not use general words3.Give examplesDescribe a place1.A striking image2.Something surprising3.A quote or question模板素材地理位置地理位置人口人口面积面积历史历史气候气候交通交通风俗习惯风俗习惯特产特色特产特色The geographical positionpopulationareahistoryclimateThe trafficCustoms and habitsSpecialty features模板素材地理位置地理位置The geographical posi
19、tionX位于位于：X is located in.X lies in/on/to the south of.Located in.,X is a city.X周围是周围是：Surrounded by.,X is.模板素材人口人口populationX有有人口人口：X has a(large/small)population of.The population of X is.X is a city with a(large/small)population of.X的人口增加到的人口增加到/增加了增加了：The population of X increases to/by.模板素材面积面积
20、areaX的面积是的面积是：X has/covers an area of.square kilometers.海岸线总长海岸线总长：Its coastline has a total length of.kilometers.模板素材历史历史historyX有有的历史的历史：X has a(long)history of.X追溯到追溯到：X dates/goes back to.模板素材气候气候climate表示天气表示天气：be(very/quite/extremely)cold/hot/warm/dry/humid/sunny/stormy/rainy/mild/.all year ro
21、und各地气候差异很大各地气候差异很大：The climate differs greatly from one area to another.模板素材交通交通The trafficX交通便利交通便利：It is very convenient for you to go to X.X is within easy reach.可乘可乘去去X:You can take a bus/a train/a plane to X.You can go to X by bus/train/plane.The best way to visit X is to take a bus tour.模板素材特
22、产特色特产特色Specialty features名胜：places of interest著名的旅游景点之一：one of the famous tourist attractions盛产；在方面丰富：be rich in(natural resources/tourist attractions/.,such as/like.)因而著名：be famous/well known for.It is located/situated in，with an area of它位于它位于，面积为，面积为It is the most popular tourist attraction.它是最受欢迎
23、的旅游景点。它是最受欢迎的旅游景点。There are many scenic spots in.,of which.is the most famous.有许多景点有许多景点，其中，其中是最有名的。是最有名的。.has a long history/.with a long history.有着悠久的历史有着悠久的历史/有很长的历史有很长的历史。With its pleasant climate,rich natural resources and fascinating scenery,is one of chinas major tourist cities.它它有宜人的气候有宜人的气候
24、,丰富的自丰富的自然资源和迷人的景色然资源和迷人的景色,是中国最重要的旅游城市之一。是中国最重要的旅游城市之一。Located in.,the city is a wonderful place for tourists to go sightseeing.位于位于，这个城市是游客观光的好地方。，这个城市是游客观光的好地方。The city is situated in.,well-known for./which is well-known for.这座城市坐落在这座城市坐落在，因，因而出名。而出名。The city,with lots of special attractions and
25、beautiful natural scenery,is worth visiting.这个城市有许多特殊的景点和美丽的自然风光，值得这个城市有许多特殊的景点和美丽的自然风光，值得一去一去。Whats more,the nice weather and convenience transportation here can make your trip more enjoyable.更重要的是更重要的是,这里的这里的好天气好天气和和便利便利的的交通可以让你的旅行更愉快。交通可以让你的旅行更愉快。To sum up,its quite relaxing and enjoyable to trav
26、el there and I love this experience very much.总之总之,那是一次那是一次很很轻松轻松愉快的旅行愉快的旅行,我非常喜欢这样的经历。我非常喜欢这样的经历。2.Useful words and sentences.sightseeing 观光观光 tourist attractions 旅游景点旅游景点 charming/attractive/fantastic/impressive/amazing 迷人的迷人的 a variety of/a wide range of 各种各样的各种各样的 pleasant climate 宜人的气候宜人的气候at home and abroad 国内外国内外a feast for your eyes 大饱眼福大饱眼福 Thank you!
