1、UNIT 2HEALTHY LIFESTYLE本单元的写作任务是给编辑写一封关于健康生活方式的信。此本单元的写作任务是给编辑写一封关于健康生活方式的信。此类作文主要围绕以下几个方面写作:类作文主要围绕以下几个方面写作:1.1.健康生活的必要性、重要性。健康生活的必要性、重要性。2.2.指出目前存在的不利于健康的问题。指出目前存在的不利于健康的问题。3.3.健康生活方式:加强锻炼、注意饮食、均衡营养、养成良好的生健康生活方式:加强锻炼、注意饮食、均衡营养、养成良好的生活习惯等。活习惯等。4.4.如何从自我做起,如何制定计划改变不良生活习惯等。如何从自我做起,如何制定计划改变不良生活习惯等。1.H
2、aving a good diet is very important.2.Eating lots of fresh fruit and vegetables means a lot to our body.3.Doing exercise is another good way to keep healthy/fit.4.Running is the best workout for weight loss because its cheap.5.It is important to ask your doctor for a health check once a year.6.Going
3、 to bed early and getting up early is also very important.7.To keep healthy,wed better cut down on fat and sugar in our diets.8.It is bad for your health to stay indoors for a long time.常用表达常用表达 假如你是中学生李华,请你给某报社编辑写一封信,指出健康假如你是中学生李华,请你给某报社编辑写一封信,指出健康的重要性,并针对的重要性,并针对“如何保持健康如何保持健康”给出自己的建议。信的内容需给出自己的建议。
4、信的内容需包含以下信息:包含以下信息:1.1.健康的重要性;健康的重要性;2.2.给出如何保持健康的方法,如:避免含糖高、脂肪高的食物;给出如何保持健康的方法,如:避免含糖高、脂肪高的食物;摒弃不良习惯;多锻炼等。摒弃不良习惯;多锻炼等。第一步第一步审题谋篇审题谋篇 审题审题 1.1.确定文体:这是一篇应用文。确定文体:这是一篇应用文。2.2.主体时态:现在的情况用现在时,预期效果用将来时。主体时态:现在的情况用现在时,预期效果用将来时。3.3.主体人称:以第一人称为主。主体人称:以第一人称为主。谋谋篇篇 第一段:介绍写信的目的。第一段:介绍写信的目的。第二段:介绍如何保持健康。第二段:介绍如
5、何保持健康。第三段:最后表达祝愿第三段:最后表达祝愿。_第二步第二步遣词造句遣词造句 核心核心词汇词汇 1.1.强调强调的的重要性重要性2 2.首先首先3 3.依赖依赖做做某事某事4 4.决定,决定,选定选定5 5.由由组成组成/构成构成的的6 6.下定决心做某下定决心做某事事s t r e s s/l a y s t r e s s/l a y s t r e s s o n t h e s t r e s s o n t h e importance ofimportance offirst first of allof allrely rely on.to do sth.on.to do
6、 sth.decide decide ononbe be composed ofcomposed ofmake make up ones mind to do sth.up ones mind to do sth._7.7.立即;立即;马上马上8 8.筋疲力尽的;疲惫筋疲力尽的;疲惫的的9 9.焦虑不安的;焦虑不安的;心力交瘁心力交瘁1010.记住记住1111.尽力做某尽力做某事事1212.用用回报回报某人某人1313.恢复恢复精力精力straight straight awayawayworn worn outoutstressed stressed outoutkeep/bearkeep/
7、bear.in mind.in mindtry try to do sth.to do sth.reward reward sb.with sth.sb.with sth.get get refreshedrefreshed 连词连词成句成句 1.1.我怎么强调健康的重要性都不为过。我怎么强调健康的重要性都不为过。_I cant stress/lay stress on the importance of fitness I cant stress/lay stress on the importance of fitness too much.too much.2.2.这里是如何保持健康的一
8、些实用的建议。这里是如何保持健康的一些实用的建议。_Here are some practical suggestions on how to Here are some practical suggestions on how to keep fit.keep fit.3.3.我们可以依赖平衡饮食保持健康我们可以依赖平衡饮食保持健康。_We can rely on a balanced diet to keep We can rely on a balanced diet to keep healthy.healthy.4.4.我们应该决定不吃由许多糖和脂肪组成的食物。我们应该决定不吃由许多
9、糖和脂肪组成的食物。5.5.我们应该下定决心立即改掉那些坏习惯。我们应该下定决心立即改掉那些坏习惯。6.6.那些坏习惯损害我们的健康。那些坏习惯损害我们的健康。_We should decide on cutting out foodsthat are composed of lots of sugar and fat.We should make up our minds to quit those bad habitsstraight away.7.如果我们筋疲力尽或者心力交瘁,我们应该每天锻炼身体以恢复精力。get refreshed.,we should work out every
10、day to 8.尽管我们非常忙,我们应该记住我们应该尽力锻炼以增强体质。Even if we are busy,we should keep in mind that _ .9.如果我们遵从以上建议,我们将被回报以好的身心健康。If we follow the above tips,_ .If we are worn out or stressed outwe should try to we should try to do some exercise to strengthen our bodydo some exercise to strengthen our bodywe will
11、be rewarded with good physicalwe will be rewarded with good physicaland mental healthand mental health第三步第三步句式升级句式升级1.1.将句将句4 4改成过去分词短语作定语。改成过去分词短语作定语。_We should decide on cutting out foods composed of lots We should decide on cutting out foods composed of lots of sugar and fat.of sugar and fat.2.2.
12、将句将句5 5和句和句6 6用定语从句合并成一句话。用定语从句合并成一句话。_We should make up our minds to quit those bad habits We should make up our minds to quit those bad habits straight away that damage our health.straight away that damage our health.3.3.用用“祈使句祈使句andand陈述句陈述句”改写句改写句9 9。_Follow the above tips and we will be rewarde
13、d with good Follow the above tips and we will be rewarded with good physical and mental health.physical and mental health.第四步第四步组句成篇组句成篇用适当的过渡词语,把以上词汇和句式,再加上联想内容,组用适当的过渡词语,把以上词汇和句式,再加上联想内容,组成一篇英语短文。成一篇英语短文。Dear Editor,_ 参考范文参考范文 I cant lay stress on the importance of fitness too much.Here are some p
14、ractical suggestions on how to keep fit.First of all,we can rely on a balanced diet to keep healthy.We should decide on cutting out foods composed of lots of sugar and fat.Whats more,we should make up our minds to quit those bad habits straight away that damage our health._Yours sincerely,Li HuaLast
15、 but not leastLast but not least,if we are worn out or stressed outif we are worn out or stressed out,we should work out every day to get refreshed.Even if we we should work out every day to get refreshed.Even if we are busyare busy,we should keep in mind that we should try to we should keep in mind that we should try to do some exercise to strengthen our bodydo some exercise to strengthen our body.Follow Follow the above tips and we will be rewarded with the above tips and we will be rewarded with good physical and mental health.good physical and mental health.Thank you for Listening!