1、Continuation Writing Parents often give their children unconditional love.Show our great appreciation.Elements of the story:When:_Where:_Who:_What:_What happened to Tom:Solution:_Conflict:_Too busy and too tired to see his momSend his mother some rosesElements of the story:What happened to the young
2、 man:Solution:_Conflict:_ Not afford the roses for his momSuccessfully got the roses with Toms helpElements of the story:Why did Tom offer his help to the young man?Reason:_Touched by the young mans love for his mom.Elements of the story:Theme:_ Touching and beautiful love for momClue(线索线索):_ Flower
3、s for mom Is the touching story a good one?What should a good story be like?A good story will be well-developed if it is based on conflicts and solutions to attract the readers.1.Was the young man happy?How do you know?The young man almost jumped in the air.He took the flowers and ran out of the sto
4、re.Action descriptions2.Why was Tom touched?“No,I have to have roses,”“My mom was badly sick last year and I didnt get to spend much time with her.I want to get something special.It has to be roses,because those are her favorite.”Speech descriptionsHow do you the young mans deep love for his mom?3.W
5、hat other ways can you think of that can serve well in a story writing?psychological descriptions:minds thoughts_.4.Whats your feeling after reading the last paragragh or the last sentence?Surprised Eager to know what was the matter.What is the life lesson have you learnt in your story?Mom is the ve
6、ry one _,and we should take action to _who deserves our fullest love Tom stopped his cae and followed the young man._ Action Speech Psychology .Action descriptionsWith the flower bunch held in his hands,the young headed up to a small monument and knelt down.After standing there and gazing at the pic
7、ture of a womans warm face on the momument for a while,he carefully/gently laid the flowers before it and couldnt help sobbing.Speech descriptions“Mom，do you know how much I miss you?”“Mom,your leaving tortures(折磨折磨)me day and night.Here I am to see you with your favorite flowers.“Mom，these are your
8、 favorte flowers.Why didnt I send you them when you were with me.”Tom went into his car in tears._ Psychological descriptions“My mom is just in touch,but why cant I manage to see her.”thought/regretted Tom.Struck by the scene,he was seized with the feeling of guilty.Struck by the scene,he immediately felt a huge surge of guilty.He felt a sense of guilty surging through himWhat do you think the word“FAMILY”mean?CHANGE FROMTHIS MOMENTThank you
