1、Lets learn continuation writing Part I 应用文 =续写=？What is the most impressive and creative?Something new you never get exposed to beyond your wildest dream色：耳目一新,新颖别致香：回味无穷，情感共鸣味：有机统一，相互衬托 世事洞明皆学问，人情练达即文章。Though it is one of the faded memories of my life today,there are times when I remember his face
2、clearly,especially his eyes.As he had yellow spots on his eyes we called him Spotty.He would have been a stray(流浪)dog,until he came to me.I was seven years old.My dad had just got a new job in Nasik.We had moved into a rented house.It was raining very heavily on the day we moved.It was a cold dark n
3、ight.We had our meal and went to sleep.Somehow in the midnight I heard some strange sounds outside the main door.I gathered courage and looked out through the window and I was really amused with what I saw outside.There was a small puppy lying on an old doormat which my mother had put outside the do
4、or.It was wet and trembling.At first it was difficult to see the little one.It was the yellow spots on its eyes that made me realize its presence.It was trying to get under the doormat to avoid the cold air outside and it had managed to get in as I could see only its head outside the doormat.Was it
5、sick or injured?I felt pity for the poor soul.I went in and came out with an old towel.I went near the innocent one and held it in my hand and wiped the puppy till he had become dry.I took him into my room and made a bed for him with a woolen blanket and a small pillow.He seemed very healthy and com
6、fortable in his new bed as he went to sleep immediately.The next morning,everyone in the family came to know about the unusual guest.“Shall we keep him with us?”I questioned my mom.Like any other parents would,my parents first totally refused my idea but my sister and I convinced them to keep Spotty
7、.Slowly Spotty got on with everyone and became one of the family members.One day Spotty returned from his daily walk with a broken leg._.Almost a year later,one midnight,we heard Spotty barking breathlessly._ _.moan weakly/be short of breath (2017浙江高考)On a bright,warm July afternoon,Mac Hollan,a pri
8、mary school teacher,was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends.One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair,but they had encouraged Mac to carry on,and they would catch up with him soon.As Mac pedaled(骑行)along alone,he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home.H
9、e hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him.“Man,thats a big dog!he thought.But when he looked to the side,he saw instantly that it wasnt a dog at all,but a wolf quickly catching up with him.Macs heart jumped.He found out his can of bear spray
10、.With one hand on the bars,he fired the spray at the wolf.A bright red cloud enveloped the animal,and to Macs relief,it fell back,shaking its head.But a minute later,it was by his side again.Then it attacked the back of Macs bike,tearing open his tent bag.He fired at the wolf a second time,and again
11、,it fell back,only to quickly restart the chase.Mac was pedaling hard now.He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down.He saw a steep uphill climb before him.He knew that once he hit the hill,hed be easy caught up and the wolfs teeth would be tearing into his flesh.At this mo
12、ment,Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska.They didnt think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road.A bit later,they spotted what they,too,assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike.As they got closer,they realized that the d
13、og was a wolf.Mac heard a large vehicle behind him.He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast,just a dozen yards away now.The car abruptly stopped in front of him._ A few minutes later,the other two friends arrived._ A few minutes later,the other two friends arrived.They were shocked
14、to find a wolf fainted and fell onto the ground before them.It turned out that the while pills were sleeping pills Becky brought along.In relief,they moved the wolf to the bush on the roadside,for fear that it got run over by the traffic.Mac thanked again and again for Paul and Beckys timely help.Th
15、e three friends swore to pedal on together,never leaving one alone.After all,three heads are better than one or two.续写题材分类 1.智慧型 2.情感型 3.混合型 Im going to miss you so much,Poppy,said the tall,thin teenager.He bent down to hug his old friend goodbye.He stood up,hugged his parents,and smiled,trying not
16、to let his emotions(情绪）get the better of him.His parents were not quite able to keep theirs under control.They had driven their son several hours out of town to the university where he would soon be living and studying.It was time to say goodbye for now at least.The family hugged and smiled through
17、misty eyes and then laughed.The boy lifted the last bag onto his shoulder,and flashed a bright smile.I guess this is it,he said.Ill see you back home in a month,okay?His parents nodded,and they watched as he walked out of sight into the crowds of hundreds of students and parents.The boys mother turn
18、ed to the dog,Okay,Poppy,time to go back home.The house seemed quiet as a tomb without the boy living there.All that week,Poppy didnt seem interested in her dinner,her favorite toy,or even in her daily walk.Her owners were sad too,but they knew their son would be back to visit.Poppy didnt.They offer
19、ed the dog some of her favorite peanut butter treats.They even let her sit on the sofa,but the old girl just wasnt her usual cheerful self.Her owners started to get worried.What should we do to cheer Poppy up?asked Dad.Weve tried everything.I have an idea,but it might be a little crazy,smiled Mom.Wi
20、thout anybody left in the house but us,this place could use a bit of fun.Lets get a little dog for Poppy.It didnt take long before they walked through the front door carrying a big box.Poppy welcomed them home as usual,but when she saw the box,she stopped.She put her nose on it.Her tail began waggin
21、g(摆动）ever so slowly,then faster as she caught the smell.Para 1 Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared._.Para 2 A few weeks later the boy arrived home from university._.智慧型 1.渲染所处困境 The horse ran wildly for hundreds of miles before it slowed down.But we seemed to get lost,unable to find t
22、he track we had kept to.The car abruptly stopped in front of him.Mac violently knocked on the window,shouting for help.The moment Paul unlocked the car door,Mac slipped off the bike and threw himself into the car.2.合理可行的解决方案 At that crucial moment,Becky took out some sausages,thrust in several white
23、 pills and threw the sausages as far as she could.Attracted by the smell,the wolf approached and began to bite tentatively.Wandering around,we attempted to figure out a solution.All of a sudden,the faint sound of flowing water came into our ears,which drew us to a riverbank.3.自然合理正能量结尾 We shared the
24、 story with Uncle Paul while having dinner together,bursting into laughter now and then.Paul was about to start the car when Mack stopped him,telling of the two friends left behind.The wolf was likely to attack them Mac thanked again and again for Paul and Beckys timely help.The three friends swore
25、to pedal on together,never leaving one alone.After all,three heads are better than one or two.情感型情感型身体语言；心理活动；思前想后；后续发展 I laughed out loud before realizing it.Meanwhile,I couldnt keep back my tears,thinking of the hardship and pains I went through.It seemed that I got closer to my dream university,w
26、hich greatly promoted my confidence.My efforts paid off eventually.I got admitted to my favourite univeristy.As soon as Father appeared,I held him tight and kissed him.I couldnt hold back my tears,thinking of the pains and struggles father went through.Father just smiled in relief,patted me on the b
27、ack softly.From then on,I put my heat into the practice,determined never to let father down.Now as a famous pianist,I tour all over the world giving concerts.Any luxurious piano is a drop in the bucket for me but I still keep the old piano in my living room,which reminds me of fathers unconditional
28、and selfless love of me.顺水推舟顺水推舟1.首句 One day Spotty returned from his daily walk with a broken leg.He trembled in every step,leaving a trail of blood on the floor.Almost a year later,one midnight,we heard Spotty barking breathlessly.He jumped up and down,scratching our doors.Holding the plastic pear
29、l his daughter offered,the father dragged out a blue box.It was such a fancy box that Jenny couldnt help wondering what it contained.2.段尾 1.Concerned about his safety,we took turns walking him,never leaving him alone.Over time,we got closer./we got more fond of him.We took delight in getting exposed
30、 to nature with him.2.After all,three heads are better than one or two.When someone comments if only they had reunited earlier,they will reply in chorus,“Better late than never.”续写三要素 1.内容 2.词汇语法 3.篇章结构内容新颖新颖、丰富、合理、丰富、合理的内容，富有逻辑性，续写完整，与原文情境融洽度高；学生问题：1.顾左右而言他 Several days later,when Jennys father cam
31、e in to read her story,Jenny was waiting anxiously for him on the bed.2.两段雷同。3.原文把握欠缺。deer4.胡乱发挥。5.新新人类思维。语言方面要求1.高中句型2.准确语法3.高级词汇、短语语言范例 One day Spotty returned from his daily walk with a broken leg.He trembled in every step,leaving a trail of blood on the floor.We were about to send him to pet hos
32、pital when the doorbell rang.In came a woman with a big bag of dog food.Spotty saved her child.An abrupt teenager on roller skates almost knocked over her child,who toddled to the road.Fortunately,Spotty,who happened to be close by,dashed forward and pushed the child aside.The child was unhurt while
33、 he got his own leg run over.结构篇章四要素1、语言衔接。时空转移，情感色彩no sooner.than,be about to.when,suddenly,happily,to our relief,to make things worse 及however,therefore2、内容衔接。One year later3、前后呼应。Mac thanked again and again for Paul and Beckys timely help.4、首尾呼应。But I still keep the old piano in my living room,which reminds me of fathers unconditional and selfless love of me.He died old but I often recall his lovely yellow-spotted eyes,which were filled with loyalty,bravery and affection.
