1、写作专题训练写作专题训练Unit 6 When was it invented?随着科技的不断发展,许多新的发明涌现出来。这些发明给我们的生活带来了极大的便利,有的甚至改变了世界。假如你在学校的科技周活动中,想向同学们“推销”你的一项新发明。请根据下面的提示准备一份英语发言稿。提示:1.Whats it and when was it invented?2.Whats it used for?3.Whats it like?4.How does it work?5.How much is it?1.谋篇布局:理清文章要素,构建文章结构。谋篇布局:理清文章要素,构建文章结构。介绍介绍新发明新发明
2、引出话题 introduce名称及发明时间an alarm on your glasses;3 months ago用途finding your glasses介绍介绍新发明新发明构造及操作方法controlled;remote control(遥控器);button(按钮);press;make a sound价格20 yuan推荐购买 come to me and buy2.遣词造句:就结构图中的要点和词语写出句子。遣词造句:就结构图中的要点和词语写出句子。(1)我想向你们介绍一下我的新发明。Id like to _.(2)我的新发明是一只配在你眼镜上的闹钟。它是三个月前发明的。My ne
3、w invention is _.It _.introduce my new invention to youan alarm on your glasseswas invented three months ago(3)我的新发明被用来在家里或学校找眼镜。My new invention _ in your home or at school.(4)这个闹钟由遥控器上的按钮来控制。The alarm _.is used for finding your glassesis controlled by a remote control witha button on it(5)按住按钮,闹钟就
4、发出声音。跟随声音去找眼镜。Press the button,and the alarm _._your glasses.will make a soundFollow the sound to look for3.巧妙衔接:利用表示顺序的词,使句子意思连贯。巧妙衔接:利用表示顺序的词,使句子意思连贯。在介绍该发明的操作方法时,可以使用表示顺序的词first 和then 来连接,使文章条理更清晰。4.佳句妙用:添加谚语、名言等精彩句子。佳句妙用:添加谚语、名言等精彩句子。(1)Its cheap and good.物美价廉。(2)Its one of the most useful inven
5、tions in the world.它是世界上最有用的发明之一。5.连句成篇:连句成篇:May I have your attention,please?_【范文赏析范文赏析】May I have your attention,please?Id like to introduce my new invention to you.It is an alarm on your glasses.It was invented three months ago.It is used for finding your glasses in your home or at school.The ala
6、rm is controlled by a remote control with a button on it.First press the button,and the alarm will make a sound.Thenfollow the sound to look for your glasses.You must want to know how much it is.Its 20 yuan.Its cheap and good.You can afford one.Dont you hate it when you cant find your glasses?If so,
7、please come to me and buy one.智能手机(smartphone)的广泛使用使越来越多的人成为“低头族(phubber)”。请根据表格所提供的信息,以“Refuse to be phubbers”为题写一篇不少于100 词的短文,开头已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:1.have effects on 对有影响;2.concentrate on 集中精力于;3.face-to-face conversation 面对面交流;4.make good use of 充分利用现象弊端影响家人、朋友的关系(relationship);容易引发交通事故;对身体健康有害,不利于学习
8、和工作。观点 正确利用手机,面对面交流胜过网上聊天Refuse to be phubbersNowadays with the development of the Inter,smartphones are widely used among people.Phubbers can be seen here and there._Refuse to be phubbersNowadays with the development of the Inter,smartphones are widely used among people.Phubbers can be seen here an
9、d there.We can use phones to do many things but few people notice it has some bad effects on them.To begin with,more people have become silent when_having dinner with family members or friends because they concentrate more on phones,which influences their relationship with their friends and family.T
10、hey are not glad to have a facetoface conversation with others anymore.Many students spend too much time on the phones in their spare time or at home so that they cant finish their homework on time.Some people become so_addicted to them that they even use them when driving,which often leads to traffic accidents.Last but not least,using phones for a long time is bad for our health.As students,we should learn to make good use of phones.