1、中考英语中考英语作文指导作文指导 九九 （2）2017年年4月月26日日英语写作在中考英语中占据重要的地位，写作分值的高低直接影响到英语测试的成绩，怎样才能写出一篇优秀作文，在中考中获取高分呢？习作范例 Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it.Tell the magazine readers.What exactly your hobby is;When and how you became interested in this hobby;Why you enjoy y
2、our hobby;About your hopes and plans for the future.写作要求：1.根据所提供的内容，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。2.条理清楚，语句通顺，书写清晰、规范。3.词数60-80.一、写作要点“一审”即审题。“二写”即列纲或打腹稿。“三连”即连词和句成文。“四改”即修改润色全文。审题：做到三审做到三审 体裁体裁看清楚题目要求，读懂题目所表达看清楚题目要求，读懂题目所表达的含义，抓住要点，注意文体是什么的含义，抓住要点，注意文体是什么 时态、人称时态、人称如果是日记和故事，宜采如果是日记和故事，宜采用过去时态；如是简介之类的，宜采
3、用现用过去时态；如是简介之类的，宜采用现在时态。在时态。列纲：做到三思三思 词汇词汇短语短语句式句式 列个提纲，考虑所要选用的单词、词组、句型，要能根据自己的英语水平，尽量扬长避短，避难就易。遇到想不起的词、句时，就用同（近）义词或同义句代替，不要使用没有把握的词句，并且要综合考虑所涉及到的情景、场合，语言要地道。连句成文 根据短文的内容要求，确定先写什么，后写什么，按照表述内容的情节发展和实际需要，重新排列组合已写成的 句子，划分必要的段落，一般分成三段。但要注意句式的灵活运用，长、短句，简单句，复合句要搭配运用。文章分文章分3段：段：综述：综述：概括性强，最多概括性强，最多2句话引入主题句
4、话引入主题 正文正文主要内容主要内容：层次性强，一定要有：层次性强，一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开过渡型连接词。最多展开3个方面，每个方个方面，每个方面最多面最多2句话句话 结尾结尾：紧扣主题，：紧扣主题，2句话内结束，尽量升华句话内结束，尽量升华 修改润色全文做到三查三查 要点、拼写、语法是否连贯要点、拼写、语法是否连贯 看全文符不符合题目要求，行文是否流畅看全文符不符合题目要求，行文是否流畅，有没有遗漏要点；语法是不是正确，包，有没有遗漏要点；语法是不是正确，包括单词的拼写、大小写、标点符号、时态括单词的拼写、大小写、标点符号、时态、语态、单复数、主谓一致、冠词等。、语态、单复数、主谓一致
5、、冠词等。二、各二、各类类作文常用框架作文常用框架 1、话题作文，演讲 总-分-总 Its adj for us to.On the one hand,On the other hand,Whats more,In a word,/In short,.2、讨论报告，列举不同观点 总-A方-B方-我方-总 Recently,we have a discussion about.Different people have different opinions.A thinks.B thinks differently.As for me,/In my opinion,.All roads lead
6、 to Rome,we can choose the way we like to.3、写信，建议 总-分-总 Im adj to hear that you Here is some advice for you.Firstly,.Secondly,.Finally,.In a word,If you,you will 学生习作A My hobby is read books.When I was seven years old,I became interested in reading books.I like reading books because there are a lot
7、of useful things in books.I can learn a lot of knowledge from books.Books also can teach me how to be a good person.Books even can solve many problems for me.I will read more good books to improve myself.改为reading books，动词作表语时应该用动名词。also的位置应放在can之后。12 点评：档次10-15分。要点不全，漏掉最后一个要点。句子基本无误，能正确传递信息给读者 但文章不
8、流畅，句子与句子之间过渡不自 然，给读者感觉在回答上述问题。有少量错误。学生习作B My hobby is reading.Reading books is very enjoyable.When I was young,my mother used to tell me a story before.I went to bed every night.The stories were so interesting that I always felt they werent enough.So I began to read books by myself.Little by little
9、I became interested in reading.I can learn much knowledge and many interesting things all over the world.When I read books,I can enjoy the beautiful sentences.At the same time I can improve my writing.I want to be a writer in the future,so I must study hard and read more books so that my dream can c
10、ome true.开门见山、点题。真情流露，理由充分。文中带圈的连词使用得恰当，使文章过渡 自然、巧妙使用句型以表决心。点评：档次15-25分。清楚表达写作目的，要点齐全。语言表达灵活多样，字里行间流露出真情实 感，文章有感染力。恰当使用连词和从句，语言流畅，且无错 误，是一 篇高质量的作文。句型转换，句式多样性 Tom is a student.He is 16 years old.He likes running Tom,a 16-year-old student,likes running.多使用短语多使用短语 I got up quickly.I got up as quickly a
11、s possible.He studies English well.He is good at English.He does well in English.The girl likes reading.The pretty girl likes reading novels.The pretty girl likes reading novels carefully.The pretty girl who I talked to just now likes reading novels carefully.扩写 句子的衔接词句子的衔接词 并列关系：and，or，either.or，bo
12、th.and，not only.but also.as well as转折关系：but，however，yet，although条件关系：if,whether，unless时间关系：when，as，before，after，while，until，since，as soon as因果关系：because，as，since，for，so In my life,I will thank my mother forever.My mother is busy everyday.she does housework and works hard in the factory.I am in troub
13、le,she always encourages me to overcome difficulties.I am ill,she looks after me carefully.I will thank my mother for giving me life.I will thank her for helping me.I love my mother very much.In my life,I will thank my mother forever.My mother is busy everyday.(But)she does housework and works hard
14、in the factory.(When)I am in trouble,she always encourages me to overcome difficulties.(When)I am ill,she looks after me carefully.(In a word),I will(not only)thank my mother for giving me life,(but also)thank her for helping me.(So)I love my mother very much.卷面、书写卷面、书写Homework 许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力压力,为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题的心理压力问题,你们班特意开展了一次以你们班特意开展了一次以Less Pressure,Better LifeLess Pressure,Better Life为主题的为主题的英语演讲比赛英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿请你准备发言稿,谈谈你的谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法一些缓解压力的好办法,与同学分享与同学分享,内容内容包括：包括：同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么；同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么；我的压力是什么；我的压力是什么；我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。
