1、Reading for WritingReading for WritingWrite to a friend about a travel planWrite to a friend about a travel plan说课文本分析学情分析教学目标教学步骤 该板块的活动主题是该板块的活动主题是“写信告诉朋友旅行计划写信告诉朋友旅行计划”（Write to a friend about a travel plan）。该）。该板块是从外国学生板块是从外国学生Richard的视角介绍中国最令他的视角介绍中国最令他着迷的地方着迷的地方西安。西安。这里的兵马俑是中华文化的这里的兵马俑是中华文化的瑰宝
2、，被称为瑰宝，被称为“世界八大奇迹之一世界八大奇迹之一”，受到世界人，受到世界人民的喜爱与推崇。我国学生应该有更深刻的认识，民的喜爱与推崇。我国学生应该有更深刻的认识，并引以为豪。同时，学生通过写作活动，探索、思并引以为豪。同时，学生通过写作活动，探索、思考国内外有价值的旅游资源及其文化内涵。考国内外有价值的旅游资源及其文化内涵。第第一一个文本以电子个文本以电子邮件邮件的形式介绍了作者的西安旅行的形式介绍了作者的西安旅行计划。作者运用计划。作者运用了现在了现在进行时表示将来的计划与进行时表示将来的计划与安排安排，内，内容包括旅行的主要目的、重点景观、其他容包括旅行的主要目的、重点景观、其他景点
3、景点和旅行安排和旅行安排（出发时间、出行方式等出发时间、出行方式等）。该文本的语言轻松随意，是。该文本的语言轻松随意，是年轻朋友之间的交流，并且使用了富有情感的表达，以此年轻朋友之间的交流，并且使用了富有情感的表达，以此突出作者对此次旅行的无限期待。突出作者对此次旅行的无限期待。第二个文本是关于兵马俑的宣传页，介绍了兵马俑的第二个文本是关于兵马俑的宣传页，介绍了兵马俑的基本情况，以此为学生提供有关这个旅行计划的背景知识。基本情况，以此为学生提供有关这个旅行计划的背景知识。我们的我们的授课对象为高一平行班的学生，学生英语基础授课对象为高一平行班的学生，学生英语基础较弱，英语语言运用能力较弱，英语
4、语言运用能力较较差，不具备快速准确地把握阅差，不具备快速准确地把握阅读材料的主要内容的能力。因此，读材料的主要内容的能力。因此，在完成写作输出环节前在完成写作输出环节前需要适当增加一些需要适当增加一些“读读”的步骤的步骤来来培养学生通过阅读文本，培养学生通过阅读文本，迅速在文本中找到迅速在文本中找到文体结构，语言知识等文体结构，语言知识等有关信息有关信息的能力，的能力，帮助学生将所学知识快速内化。帮助学生将所学知识快速内化。1、掌握电子邮件说明旅行计划的文体结构；掌握表达情感、掌握电子邮件说明旅行计划的文体结构；掌握表达情感的常用语言结构；能够理解并正确运用现在进行时表示将的常用语言结构；能够
5、理解并正确运用现在进行时表示将来的计划。来的计划。2、学生能够通过自主学习、合作学习来解决学习中遇到的、学生能够通过自主学习、合作学习来解决学习中遇到的问题，使写作能力和语言表达能力得到提高。问题，使写作能力和语言表达能力得到提高。3、培养学生的爱国情怀，拓展国际视野；探索、思考国内、培养学生的爱国情怀，拓展国际视野；探索、思考国内有价值的旅游资源及其文化内涵，从而更好地传播中国文有价值的旅游资源及其文化内涵，从而更好地传播中国文化。化。4、培养学生的批判性思维能力和发散性思维能力，对所获、培养学生的批判性思维能力和发散性思维能力，对所获取的信息进行比较和分析，并作出合理的判断。取的信息进行比
6、较和分析，并作出合理的判断。引导学生写一封语言简练、语义连贯、结引导学生写一封语言简练、语义连贯、结构清晰的电子邮件，介绍自己的旅行计划，并构清晰的电子邮件，介绍自己的旅行计划，并能恰当融入表达感情的语言结构。能恰当融入表达感情的语言结构。Step 1 warming up and lead inStep 2 Pre-readingStep 3 Reading Read to know Read to construct Read to findStep 4 WritingStep 5 Assessmentthe benefits of travelling do some exercise
7、and relaxenrich my knowledgebroaden my horizonsmake more friendseat much delicious foodand so on.show great perseverance毅力毅力Step 1 Warming up and lead in（2 mins）Step 2 Pre-reading（3 mins）the Terracotta Armythe Shaanxi History Museumthe Xian City Wallthe Giant Wild Goose PagodaRead the brochure Richa
8、rd attached to the email and find out what about the Terracotta Army might attract foreigners.Learn to write an e-mail.What does an e-mail include?Step 3 Reading（15 mins）Read to know（2 mins）the sender/address/timethe subjectsalutationbodysignatureRead letter again and find out what he wrote about in
9、 this letter.ParagraphMain idea1 main purpose for the trip2 other plans for the trip3 transport4 final thoughtsFill in more detail to each of the 4 parts.Step 3 Reading（15 mins）Read to construct（8 mins）Main ideaDetail1.main purpose for the trip2.other plans for the trip3.transport4.final thoughtsgo
10、to Xian to see the Terracotta Armygo to the Shaanxi History Museum,the Xian City Wall,and a few other famous sightsby train;leave before Oct.holiday begins and arrive at 9 a.m.write again soon and send photosDo you think his plan sounds interesting?Pay attention to some sentences:1.,my parents and I
11、 are planning to go to Xian to see.2.Were also planning to visit several other places in Xian.3.My dad and I are both looking forward to going to the Shaanxi History Museum,.4.Were also going to the Xian City Wall and a few other famous sights.5.Were taking the train.6.Were arriving at 9:30 am.1.,my
12、 parents and I are planning to go to Xian to see.2.Were also planning to visit several other places in Xian.3.My dad and I are both looking forward to going to the Shaanxi History Museum,.4.Were also going to the Xian City Wall and a few other famous sights.5.Were taking the train.6.Were arriving at
13、 9:30 am.use present continuous tense for future plansStep 3 Reading（15 mins）Read to find（5 mins）It is an amazing sight.It is _.Im amazed.is almost unbelievable.I cant believe it.Its hard _.Its an _ story.Underline the words and phrases used to express emotion in the email.Then complete the sentence
14、s below.amazingto believeunbelievableCan you find out more words and phrases used to express emotion?At the last of Richards email,he said“Do you have any plans for the coming holiday?Hope to hear from you soon.”Step 4 writing（15 mins）假设你是假设你是小李小李，暑假期间暑假期间你打算和家人去上海玩。你打算和家人去上海玩。请你给你的好友请你给你的好友Richard
15、写一封写一封 e-mail，分享你的出分享你的出行计划。行计划。审题定调审题定调 关于旅游计划的安排关于旅游计划的安排,写作的时态以现在进行时写作的时态以现在进行时表示将来表示将来为为主，人称以主，人称以第一人称第一人称为主。为主。谋篇布局谋篇布局内容可以分为四部分：内容可以分为四部分：第一部分第一部分:说旅游的主要目的（说旅游的主要目的（main purpose for the trip）；）；第二部分第二部分:谈其他的旅游安排（谈其他的旅游安排（other plans for the trip）；）；第三部分第三部分:讲交通方式（讲交通方式（other plans for the trip
16、）；）；第四部分第四部分:最终的想法（最终的想法（final thoughts）。）。References:high speed railway 高铁高铁 check in 入住入住Disneyland 迪士尼乐园迪士尼乐园recreation facilities 游乐设施游乐设施souvenir 纪念品纪念品Shanghai Science and Technology Museum 上海科技馆上海科技馆Oriental Pearl Tower 东方明珠东方明珠use am/is/are doing to express future plansuse some words and phr
17、ases to express emotionMain ideaDetail1.main purpose for the trip2.other plans for the trip3.transport4.final thoughtsAdd in more details to your plan.go to Shanghai to see the DisneylandShanghai Science and Technology MuseumOriental Pearl Tower by high speed railwaybuy some souvenirs 既然是回信，首先要对既然是回
18、信，首先要对 Richard 的来信作出评的来信作出评价和反馈，然后再谈自己的假期旅行计划。价和反馈，然后再谈自己的假期旅行计划。After finishing your draft,exchange your passage with your partner,and assess his/her work according to the checklist:lIs there a clear purpose for the trip?lDoes each paragraph have a clear main idea?lDo you use present continuous ten
19、se for future plans?lDo you use commas,stops,and question marks correctly?lAre all the words spelt correctly?lAre all the proper nouns capitalized?（专有名词是否大写了？）Step 5 Assessment(3 mins)（5 mins）SampleSampleDear Richard,How is everything going?Over the summer holiday,I will have a four-day trip to Shan
20、ghai with my family.Ive heard that it is an amazing sight,and I cant wait to go.We are leaving Sanming for Shanghai by the high speed railway at around 2 p.m.on August 21st.Upon arriving in Shanghai,we will check in the hotel for a good rest first,so that we can have enough energy to visit Shanghai.
21、On the second day,we are going to the Disneyland to experience all kinds of recreation facilities,and buy some souvenirs at the same time.On the third day,we re also planning to visit Shanghai Science and Technology Museum in the morning.Besides,we will climb the Oriental Pearl Tower in the afternoo
22、n,from which we will enjoy the whole view of Shanghai.On August 24th,we will take the high speed railway back to Sanming.I guess thats all for now.Ill buy you a souvenir from the Disneyland.Yours,Xiao LiSummarySummary In this lesson,we learned how to write an email about a travel plan by using present continuous tense to express future plans.ParagraphMain idea1 main purpose for the trip2 other plans for the trip3 transport4 final thoughts（2 mins）Revise your draft according to your partners comments.
