1、Do you have such problems as mentioned by the following teenagers?Eric,15,ChicargoXu Ting,15,HangzhouMin Ho,15,SeoulSusan Luo,an adviser for teenagers,always receives many letters asking for advice from many worried friends.In addition she is also responsible for providing advice for confused and wo
2、rried parents in a column called“Talking Teens”.Here is a letter of advice from Susan.in addition 而且而且in a column在一个专栏中在一个专栏中be responsible for负责负责.How to write a letter of advice?10 September 2018Dear Worried Friend,But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus
3、 on other things in life.Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life.I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies.Why not discuss the problem together?I am sure he will listen to you,since you are his good friends.I recommend tha
4、t you talk to your friend about his behavior.It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world.You wrote that you are very worried about your friend,Chen Lei.I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible.You think that your fri
5、end plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.All the best,Susan LuoDateGreetingBodyCloseSignatureA Letter of AdviceBut spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life.Some students even become addicted to the Internet and
6、cannot concentrate on school and family life.I think you should encourage your friend to try new obbies.Why not discuss the problem together?I am sure he will listen to you,since you are his good friends.I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behavior.It is not unusual for teenagers of y
7、our generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world.You wrote that you are very worried about your friend,Chen Lei.I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible.You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.All the best,S
8、usan Luodate and greetingyou understand how he/she feels.suggestion(s)&reason(s)the problemwhat you think will happenClose andsignature.10 September 2018Dear Worried Friend,A Letter of AdviceUse what you have learnt to write a letter of advice to one of the teenagers below.My parents wont listen whe
9、n I tell them things.I guess its because theyre adults and cant understand me.Do you have any suggestions?I always feel lonely after school because my parents work in another city.What can I do?There is a girl I like in my class,but Im too shy to talk to her.Please help me.Eric,15,ChicagoXu Ting,14,
10、HangzhouMin Ho,15,SeoulStep 1:To show your empathy with the worried teenagers or parents.(表明你的感同身受表明你的感同身受)I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible.我非常明白你的心情，感觉糟糕而且非常焦急。Four steps of writing the bodyStep 2:To state clearly the problems worried teenagers or parents faced with.(清
11、晰陈述问题的症结清晰陈述问题的症结)You think that your friend/son/child play computer games too often.Step 3:To put forward your suggestions and your reason.(提出建议及理由提出建议及理由)I recommend that you talk to your friends/son/daughter about.Its not unusual for.to.,but.Step 4:To encourage the worried teenagers or parents tr
12、y your suggestion.(鼓励对方尝试你的建议鼓励对方尝试你的建议)I think you should encourage your friends to try new hobbies.Why not.?Im sure.I know you are now having trouble/difficulty in.Im glad to receive your letter for asking me how to.You asked me for my advice on.and I will try to make some suggestions.Here are som
13、e tips to help you./Here are a few suggestions.I think you can make it if you follow the advice below.I am writing to share some advice with you.首段首段主体主体First/Firstly/First of all,I recommend/suggest you should do.Second/Secondly/Meanwhile,if I were you,I would do.Third/Thirdly/Whats more/Moreover,y
14、oud better do.Last but not least,Im always here ready to help you.As far as Im concerned,you should/can.Its very important/wise/advisable to doI think it would be more beneficial to you if you could doI hope you will find these ideas useful.I believe that if you follow my advice,you will.I believe,w
15、ith your trying,you can manage to I do hope you will take my advice into account/consideration.In the end,I do hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations practical/useful/helpful.I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions.结尾结尾Evaluationscores1.Are all the parts of a letter included and organized in good order？1232.Does the writer give reasons for the advice？1233.Does the writer use proper expressions to give suggestions？1234.Does the writer use commas and stops correctly?1235.Is the handwriting easy to read？123
