1、UNIT 2SUCCESSSection E WRITING WORKSHOPREADING CLUB 2Lead-inTell a story about a person who you admire most.1 1Pair Work You are going to write a life story of a person you like or admire.Discuss with Pair Work You are going to write a life story of a person you like or admire.Discuss with your part
2、ner.your partner.Who are you going to write about?Who are you going to write about?What is special about him/her?What is special about him/her?What big events did he/she experience in his/her life?What big events did he/she experience in his/her life?Key:Im going to write about Yao Ming.He was a bas
3、ketball player and he was really tall.In my opinion he was the best Chinese basketball player who played for the NBA.He reached the NBA Playoffs four times，and the Rockets won a first-round series in the 2009 postseason，their first playoff series victory since 1997.In July 2011，Yao announced his ret
4、irement from professional basketball.In April 2016，Yao was elected to the Naismith Memorial Basketball Hall of Fame.2 Read the article.Answer the questions.1Who is Lang Ping?2Why was Lang Ping named“Iron Hammer”?3What is Lang Pings experience as an athlete?4What is Lang Pings experience as a coach?5
5、Why do people like Lang Ping?Key:1 Lang Ping is one of Chinas most recognised athletes.2 Her strong and powerful playing style earned her the name“Iron Hammer”.3 In the 1984 Olympics，Chinas team won the gold medal.With Lang Pings help，the team achieved a series of amazing wins from 1981 to 1985，incl
6、uding the World Cup，Olympics and the World Championship.4 After retiring as an athlete in 1986，she has been successful as a volleyball coach in the United States and Italy.In 1995，she returned to become the coach of the womens national team who won the 2015 World Cup.5 People like her not only becau
7、se of her devotion to her career，but also because of her huge influence on the sport of volleyball.3 Label the paragraphs（a c）in the boxes of each paragraph.aimportant life or work experiences of the person bgeneral introduction of the person cmajor awards and comments Key:b；a；a；c4 Write 2 3 sentenc
8、es about the person that you are going to write about.Use the Sentence Builder to help you.5Find more detailed information about the person you are going to write about.6 Outlining Complete the outline of the persons life story based on Activity 3.7 Drafting Use your outline and the Writing Help to
9、write your first draft.8 Editing Edit your essay in pairs.Then share what you have written in class.Language points 阅读理解（根据课文内容选择正确答案）阅读理解（根据课文内容选择正确答案）1.What earned Lang Ping the name of“Iron Hammer”?A.Her strong and powerful playing style.B.Her strong will and determination.C.Her lifestyle and abi
10、lity.D.Her being recognised worldwide.2.What can we know from the second paragraph?A.Lang Ping played on Chinas national volleyball team for more than ten years.B.Chinas national volleyball team won several medals in the 1980s.C.Lang Ping was recognised only because of the great success she achieved
11、.D.Lang Ping was the coach of Chinas national volleyball team in the 1980s.o oo o3.Which is the right order of what Lang Ping did according to the passage?a.Lang Ping became the coach of the womens national team.b.Lang Ping worked as a volleyball coach in the United States and Italy.c.Lang Ping play
12、ed on Chinas national volleyball team.d.Lang Ping was named“Touching China Personality”.e.Lang Ping was given the Best Coach and the Sports Special Contribution awards at the CCTV Sports Personality Awards.A.a，b，e，c，d B.b，c，a，e，d C.c，b，a，e，d D.d，a，b，c，e 4.What can we know about Lang Ping according t
13、o the passage?A.She has been a volleyball star for over forty-five years and has contributed greatly to the sport.B.She is the most popular figure in Chinas volleyball history.C.She has been successful as a volleyball coach in the United States and India.D.She is the best volleyball coach both at ho
14、me and abroad.o oo oII语法填空（根据课文内容和语法规则完成短文）语法填空（根据课文内容和语法规则完成短文）Iron Hammer Lang Ping is one of Chinas most 1 （recognise）athletes and the most popular figure in Chinas volleyball history.Lang Ping 2（play）on Chinas national volleyball team during the 1980s.Her strong and 3（power）playing style earned
15、her 4_ name“Iron Hammer”.She became a star in China because of her success，her positive attitude and her ability to take on challenges.After retiring as an athlete in 1986 she has been successful as a volleyball coach in the United States and Italy.However，Lang Pings 5 （commit）to Chinese volleyball
16、brought her back home.In 1995，she returned to become the coach of the womens national team when the team was struggling.6 her leadership，the team came back to the top，7 （win）the 2015 World Cup.That year，Lang Ping 8_（give）the Best Coach and the Sports Special Contribution awards and also named“Touchi
17、ng China Personality”of 2016.She is loved not only because of her 9（devote）to her career，10 also because of her huge influence on the sport of volleyball.recognised played powerful the commitmentUnderwinning was given devotion butIII.概要写作概要写作 阅读课文，根据其内容写一篇阅读课文，根据其内容写一篇60 词左右的内容概要。词左右的内容概要。Lang Ping
18、named“Iron Hammer”is one of Chinas most recognised athletes and the most popular figure in Chinas volleyball history.She has made great contributions to volleyball and won great glory for our country.She is loved not only because of her devotion to her career，but also because of her huge influence o
19、n the sport of volleyball.教材原句p.40 Lang Ping is one of Chinas most recognised athletes.郎平是中国最受认可的运动员之一。1 recognised（recognized）adj.公认的；经过检验的Zhong Nanshan is one of Chinas most recognised professors.钟南山是中国最知名的教授之一。【归纳拓展归纳拓展】（1）recognise vt.认出；承认；意识到 recognise.to be/as.承认/认为是 be recognised as/to be.被认
20、为是 recognise that.承认/意识到 It is recognised that.人们公认（2）recognition n.认识，承认 beyond recognition（变得）认不出来 The moment I answered the phone，I recognised his voice.我一接电话就听出了他的声音。We all recognised him to be/as a wise leader.=He was recognised to be/as a wise leader by us all.=We all recognised that he was a
21、wise leader.=It is generally recognised that he was a wise leader.我们都承认他是一位英明的领导。题组练领悟方法 核心词汇【一言助记一言助记】I have known Tom for ten years，but I didnt recognise him just now because he changed so much.我认识汤姆10 年了，但因为他变化很大，我刚才没有认出他来。（know“认识”，延续性动词，recognise“认出”，终止性动词）单句语法填空单句语法填空（1）His father is a （recogn
22、ise）professor in the medical circle.（2）Alexander tried to get his work （recognise）in film industry.（3）I havent seen Sara since she was a little girl，and she has changed beyond （recognise）.（4）The film star wears sunglasses.Therefore，he can go shopping without （recognise）.（5）He was recognised the best
23、 artist of his time.完成句子完成句子（6）Lincoln （被公认为）one of the greatest presidents in America.（7）（人们公认）teenagers play an important part in sports and games.recognised recognised recognition being recognised as is recognised as/to be It is generally recognised that 教材原句p.40 She has been a volleyball star fo
24、r more than thirty-five years and has contributed greatly to the sport.她当排球明星超过35 年了，为这项运动做出了巨大贡献 2 contribute v.捐献；促成；投稿搭配搭配 contribute.to.为贡献/捐献 contribute to 为做出贡献；向捐款；促成，造成Is this the charity that you contributed money to?这就是你向它捐款的慈善机构吗？Plenty of fresh air contributes to good health.大量新鲜空气有助于身体健
25、康。The professor often contributes articles to the magazine.这位教授经常向这家杂志投稿。【词语积累词语积累】contribution n.C 贡献；捐款make a contribution/contributions to 对做出贡献；向捐款We all appreciate the contributions he has made to our company.我们都很感激他对我们公司所做的贡献。【误区警示误区警示】contribute ones life/oneself to（）devote ones life/oneself
26、to（）单句语法填空单句语法填空（1）He has made an important （contribute）to the companys success.（2）Eating too much fat can contribute heart disease and cause high blood pressure.（3）He made a very positive contribution to （build）the project successfully.完成句子完成句子（4）Honesty and hard work （促使）success and happiness.（5）Y
27、uan Longping is respected because he （对做出 巨大贡献）our country.（6）The Chinese Dream requests every Chinese to （做贡献），indicating another great development will happen.contribution to building contribute to has made great contributions to make a contribution 教材原句p.40 Lang Ping became a star in China becaus
28、e of her success，her positive attitude and her ability to take on challenges.郎平因为她的成功、积极向上的态度和接受挑战的魄力，成了中国的明星。3 take on 承担；呈现；雇用I dont feel ready to take on new responsibilities.我还没准备好承担新的责任。Then your company must take on a new look now.那你们公司现在肯定呈现出一番新的面貌了。They are not always willing to take on untr
29、ained workers.他们一般不愿意雇用没有受过训练的工人。【归纳拓展归纳拓展】take apart 拆开，拆卸 take over 接管，接任 take away 拿走，带走 take down 拿下；记下take back 退回；收回（说错的话）take up 拿起；占据；开始从事take in 吸收；收留；欺骗；领会 take off 去掉；脱下；起飞；突然开始成功；休假He intended to take back what he said，but it was too late.他想收回他说的话，但已经太迟了。单句语法填空单句语法填空（1）Cleaning up the po
30、lluted river takes all his free time.（2）Last nights tornado nearly took the roof my house.（3）Some insects take the colour of their surroundings to protect themselves.（4）Hes spoken to a publishing firm.Theyre going to take him .（5）Our factory will take twenty more workers next month.（6）He had nowhere
31、 to go，so I took him .完成句子完成句子（7）He is always ready to （承担重任）.up off on on on in take on heavy responsibilities 教材原句p.40 After retiring as an athlete in 1986 she has been successful as a volleyball coach in the United States and Italy.1986 年作为运动员退役后，她成功地担任美国和意大利的排球教练。4 retire vi.退休；退职After his fathe
32、r retired，his brother took over this entertainment company.他父亲退休后，他哥哥接管了这家娱乐公司。搭配搭配 retire from 从退休 retire as 从职位退休After he retired from office，Ben took up painting for a while，but soon lost interest.从办公室退休后，本开始学了一段时间的绘画，但很快就失去了兴趣。【误区警示误区警示】retire 的过去分词 retired 只表完成，不表被动。a retired worker 一名退休工人【词语积累
33、词语积累】retiree n.退休者；退役者 retired adj.退职的；退休的 retiring adj.即将退休的；离群的 retirement n.退职；退休 单句语法填空单句语法填空（1）He must be getting near （retire）age.（2）It is no wonder many （retire）people are escaping from crowded cities.（3）She took to painting after （retire）.（4）A firm employs my （retire）father as a consultant.（
34、5）He has agreed to struggle on，though he hopes to retire his position.完成句子完成句子（6）His mother is （一位退休教师）and she is very patient with children.（7）My father （从退休）his work 3 years ago.retiring retired retirement retired froma retired teacher retired from 教材原句p.43.Huang was approached to participate in t
35、he“Thousand Talent”programme.黄（大年）被邀请参加“千人计划”。5 participate in 参加Everyone in the class is expected to participate actively in these discussions.全班同学都应该积极参与这些讨论。31.7 million retirees had participated in the basic pension insurance programme.3 170 万退休人员参加了基本养老保险计划。【词语辨析词语辨析】participate in，take part in
36、，join in，join 与与 attend（1）participate in 正式用词，特指参加团体活动，暗示以一个积极 的角色参加。常可与 take part in 换用。（2）take part in 参加群众性活动，并发挥一定的作用。（3）join in 多指参加竞赛、娱乐、游戏类活动，常可与take part in 换用。（4）join 加入某团体或组织，成为其中的一员，也可指加入某人的行列。（5）attend 参加会议、婚礼、葬礼、典礼或上课，上学等。My younger brother joined the army three years ago.三年前，我弟弟参军了。He
37、stared at them without joining in the conversation.他盯着他们看，没有参与交谈。Please let us know if you are unable to attend the meeting.如果你不能出席会议，请通知我们。There is no doubt that we will select the best players to take part in/participate in the coming Olympic Games.毫无疑问，我们会选出最优秀的运动员去参加即将到来的奥运会。选词填空（选词填空（participat
38、e in/take part in/join in/join/attend）（1）Women were not allowed to the Olympics in ancient times.（2）It is the most instructive lecture that I since I came to this school.（3）We invite you to us on an amazing journey of language learning.（4）He would the sports meeting if his left leg were not broken.（
39、5）They came out for their morning exercise.I also it.完成句子完成句子（6）Many people will （参加）the celebration.（7）Generally speaking，athletes （参加）the Olympic Games and compete for the honour of winning.take part in/participate in have attendedjointake part in/participate in joined in participate in/take part
40、in participate in/take part in 教材原句p.43 Huang was named lead scientist on Chinas deep earth exploration programme，developing advanced cameras.黄（大年）被任命为中国地球深部探测项目的首席科学家，他开发出了先进的摄像机 6 advanced adj.先进的；高级的advanced technology 先进的技术 advanced mathematics 高等数学 advanced education 高等教育 advanced learners 高级学习
41、者【词语积累词语积累】advance vi.前进；进展 vt.促进；提前 n.前进；进步，进展advance on/upon/towards 朝前进 in advance 预先，提前in advance of 在前面；比进步；超过make an advance/advances（in）（在方面）有进步，取得进展Hes trying to advance his own career.他在努力促进自己事业的发展。The meeting has been advanced to ten oclock.会议提前到 10 点钟。You would not have wasted so much tim
42、e if you had planned well in advance.你如果提前计划好，就不会浪费这么多时间了。They have made great advances in protecting endangered wildlife.他们在保护濒危野生生物方面取得了很大进展。单句语法填空单句语法填空（1）This is the most （advance）type of engine available.（2）Its cheaper if you book a room advance.（3）Copernicus ideas were well in advance the age
43、in which he lived.（4）The course is intended for （advance）learners.完成句子完成句子（5）（先进的技术）helps make peoples life much easier.（6）There is no reason that you shouldnt tell them （提前）when you are going.（7）Information technology （有了很大进步）since the 1960s.advanced inofadvanced Advanced technology in advance has
44、made great advances 教材原句p.43 Huang s dedication contributed to China s lunar probe Yutu being landed on the moon in 2013 and the launch of the spacecrafts Shenzhou-11 and Tiangong-2 in 2016.黄（大年）的贡献促使中国的月球探测器“玉兔”于 2013 年在月球着陆，并促使中国在2016 年发射了“神舟十一号”和“天宫二号”宇宙飞船。7 launch n.&vt.（1）n.发射；（船的）下水；（产品的）上市Thi
45、s mornings launch of the space shuttle has been delayed.定于今天上午航天飞机的发射已经被推迟了。The companys spending has also risen following the launch of a new Sunday magazine.公司的花费也随着一份新星期日杂志的推出而增加。（2）vt.发射；发起；推出（新产品）；使（船）下水launch a rocket 发射火箭 launch a campaign 发起运动 launch an attack 发起攻击 launch a new product 推出新产品
46、 写出下列句中写出下列句中 launch 的含义的含义（1）词汇复现They intend to launch a campaign to raise money._（2）News came that the rocket had been launched successfully._（3）The company researched the market demand and decided to launch their new product._（4）Are you at the launch of the new ship?_完成句子完成句子（5）They have （发起一场运动）
47、to protect ancient buildings in urban areas.发起发射推出（新产品）（船的）下水launched a campaign 教材原句p.43 Even from his hospital bed，he continued his work，writing letters of reference for his colleagues and replying to questions from his students.即使在病床上，他也继续工作，为同事写推荐信，回答学生的问题。8 reference n.推荐信；谈到，提及搭配搭配 make refere
48、nce to 谈到，谈及 in/with reference to 关于She made no reference to her illness but only to her future plans.她没有提到她的病，只说了她未来的计划。have nothing to say in reference to that incident.关于那起事故，我无可奉告。【归纳拓展归纳拓展】refer vi.提到，关系到；参考，查阅 refer to 指的是；提到；涉及；参考refer to.as.将称为 I put my dictionary within my reach so that I c
49、an refer to it when necessary.我把字典放在伸手可及的地方，以便必要时查阅。单句语法填空单句语法填空（1）Write down the phone number of that restaurant for future （refer）.（2）The scientist referred to the discovery the most exciting new development in this field.（3）She is going to give a lecture in （refer）to American literature.（4）He gav
50、e the speech without referring his notes.完成句子完成句子（5）Some scientific stories this book （提及）have come true now.（6）I have nothing to say （关 于）the agreement.（7）I was not （指的是）her when I said so.reference asreference toreferred to in/with reference to referring to 教材原句p.43 He had great faith in the talen
