1、Developing ideas writing Unit 6 Survival目录contentsPre-writingILanguage pointsWhile-writingIIHomeworkPost-writingIIIIPre-writingRead the story and answer the questions.Pre-writingIts been a week since the other astronauts left Mars and went back to Earth,accidentally leaving me here alone.I was caugh
2、t in a dust storm and lost contact with them.After resuming communication with the base five days later,I was informed that it will be eight months before a rescue mission arrives from Earth.Pre-writingRead the story and answer the questions.Fortunately,I have shelter,because the landing capsule pro
3、tects me from the deadly radiation outside.The capsule is powered by a small nuclear plant.It might have just enough electricity for eight months,if nothing goes wrong.Whats more,my spacesuit keeps me safe from exposure to the Martian surface for up to several hours at a time.Pre-writingRead the sto
4、ry and answer the questions.Water and oxygen were my biggest worries at first,but Ive discovered an underground ice deposit nearby.I can reach the ice with our survey tools.Thats lucky,because I can drink the water from the ice and also use it to produce oxygen when I run low.Now I am worried about
5、food.There is only enough for one person for four months four months short ofPre-writingRead the story and answer the questions.what I need.Part of our mission was to experiment with growing plants in the Martian soil,so I have seeds of various kinds.I must work out how to farm on Mars.If I can solv
6、e that challenge,and if the electricity supply holds,I can survive until I am rescued.Theres still hope!Pre-writing1.Where is the person in the story?The person in the story is on Mars.2.What difficulties is he facing?He has to keep himself safe from the deadly radiation outside.And he is facing the
7、 lack of water,oxygen and food.Read the story and answer the questions.Pre-writing4.What will he do next?He will work out how to farm on Mars and grow plants with seeds.3.What has he already done to stay alive?He has resumed communication with the base.He has discovered an underground ice deposit to
8、 get water,and produce oxygen with the water.Read the story and answer the questions.What does a survival story usually include?Pre-writingsurvivalstoryWhat are the dangers?Where is the dangerous place?How do you manage to survive?How do you feel?IIWhile-writingThink about the detailed answers to th
9、e four questions of pre-writing part and try to write a survival story based on the four parts.Where is the dangerous place?a totally strange placeAntarcticaspacethe junglemore answersWhile-writing:Thinking and WritingWhat are the dangers?wild animalsthe coldno airno watermore answersThink about the
10、 detailed answers to the four questions of pre-writing part and try to write a survival story based on those answers.While-writing:Thinking and WritingHow do you manage to survive?hunt for food and watercatch fishmelt snowmake a firemore answersThink about the detailed answers to the four questions
11、of pre-writing part and try to write a survival story based on those answers.While-writing:Thinking and WritingHow do you feel?anxiousconfidentoptimisticpessimisticmore answersThink about the detailed answers to the four questions of pre-writing part and try to write a survival story based on those
12、answers.While-writing:Thinking and WritingNow write a survival story.While-writing:Thinking and WritingPlease keep in mind the four necessary elements to be included in a survival story:where is the dangerous place/what are the dangers/how do you manage to survive/how do you feel.Try to use some wor
13、ds and expressions you have learned.Do further research if necessary.Go beyond difficulties One day several months ago,I wandered into a jungle aimlessly.At first,excitement took over anxiety,however,with the time passing by,I knew I had to figure out how I could survive and go out.Without doubt,sur
14、vival is the top priority.In order toThink about the four necessary elements of the survival story and try to write a survival story based on those questions.While-writing:Thinking and Writingsurvive,food,especially water,must be found as soon as possible.Although it took me lots of time to think ou
15、t the ways to get water,my hard work finally paid off with a creek,which flowed slowly and quietly,coming into my sight.Keeping myself safe is also another priority.I stayed alert all the time,doing everything I could to avoid making noises.By doing these all,I accomplished the survival in the jungl
16、e.While-writing:Thinking and Writing While managing to survive,I actively searched for the every possible way to come out,sometimes by finding the light,sometimes by listening quietly to the sounds.Where there is a will,there is a way.A path leading to the outside world was eventually discovered.Aft
17、er this experience,I became more and more optimistic when facing obstacles.While-writing:Thinking and WritingIIIPost-writing Work in pairs.Make improvements to each others stories and share them with the class.Post-writing:PresentationPost-writing:EvaluationQuestions Your evaluation EvaluatorDoes th
18、e survival story include the key points?4 2 0Is the survival story organized properly and smoothly?3 2 1How is the language?12 8 4 2How is the handwriting?3 1 -1Paper design3 1 -1TOTAL MARK Post-writing:Reference Text What an Adventure!Its been three days since I got separated from the other team me
19、mbers.We went hiking together on Monday,but became separated due to a heavy rainstorm.Without a compass,I lost direction,and now I am lost in dense jungle.There are no roads at all,so I have to make my own way step by step.I have hurt both my hands quite badly from all the thorns they are everywhere
20、.To make things Post-writing:Reference Textworse,I stumbled and sprained my ankle.The pain is killing me!Snakes,monkeys,insects and other animals appear from time to time.Yesterday,I heard the roar of a tiger from far away.I was terrified!I rub sticks together to make a fire every night to keep myse
21、lf warm and safe.Its really a difficult technique to master,and it takes me several frustrating and worrying attempts every evening.I have to remind myself to be calm and optimistic at every moment.Post-writing:Reference Text Food also worries me a lot.Ive been eating berries to appease my hunger,bu
22、t I have to be very careful to avoid anything poisonous.Today I have some luck when I find a stream which I can follow.It gives me great hope.Im confident that I can find my way out!This will have been the most memorable adventure of my life!Post-writing:Reference Text What an Adventure!Its been thr
23、ee days since I got separated from the other team members.We went hiking together on Monday,but became separated due to a heavy rainstorm.Without a compass,I lost direction,and now I am lost in dense jungle.There are no roads at all,so I have to make my own way step by step.I have hurt both my hands
24、 quite badly from all the thorns they are everywhere.To make things浓密的分离，分开刺 Post-writing:Reference Textworse,I stumbled and sprained my ankle.The pain is killing me!Snakes,monkeys,insects and other animals appear from time to time.Yesterday,I heard the roar of a tiger from far away.I was terrified!
25、I rub sticks together to make a fire every night to keep myself warm and safe.Its really a difficult technique to master,and it takes me several frustrating and worrying attempts every evening.I have to remind myself to be calm and optimistic at every moment.绊倒扭伤吼叫恐惧的摩擦令人沮丧的 Post-writing:Reference T
26、ext Food also worries me a lot.Ive been eating berries to appease my hunger,but I have to be very careful to avoid anything poisonous.Today I have some luck when I find a stream which I can follow.It gives me great hope.Im confident that I can find my way out!This will have been the most memorable a
27、dventure of my life!安抚有毒的难忘的Language points get separated from _ due to _ lose direction _ make ones way _ to make things worse _Language points 与分离Find the following expressions and work out their meanings.由于迷路 一路向前更糟糕的是 Language pointsFind the following expressions and work out their meanings.from time to time _ remind sb to do sth _ step by step _ 不时 提醒某人去做某事 一步步地Homework HomeworkPolish your survival story and hand it in.
